Haiku's,Poems and anything that rhymes!

Narniamoondust said:
I still feel sorry
but then I forget
but then it comes back
and I have regret
so please,all forgive me
but I had to go
but I'll always come back
to the lawn that I know​
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1) It is no crime to experience changing interests.

2) But your returns are always welcome, especially when you keep using non-cliche rhymes in poems.

3) Speaking of poems, my recent sonnets reveal my finding a new sweetheart!
 
Copperfox said:
1) It is no crime to experience changing interests.

2) But your returns are always welcome, especially when you keep using non-cliche rhymes in poems.

3) Speaking of poems, my recent sonnets reveal my finding a new sweetheart!
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YOU DID! YAY! HAPPY DAY! COPPERFOX FOUND A LADY! Well that's why I feel bad because I only pop by to write and I never read anything. I should though...
hey you still work at the colorado renfest right? Because if we ever go someday I would love to stop by and say hi :)
 
Yes, I am scheduled to be on cast again next summer. They start on the second weekend of June, and run a total of eight weekends. If you come, look for a gray-bearded man wearing a priestly costume.
 
For my dear friend Copperfox


I see you found a sweetieheart
to be your wife,your other part
you hope that God will make it so
for all these years you've been alone
I sit here with my white laptop
my smile grows,and cannot stop
I know you're happy and I await
the good things that will be your fate​
 
Bless you, Reagan!!! Carol and I aren't engaged yet, but it is a strong possibility. I'm going to save this poem of yours; then, if and when Carol and I do get engaged, I'll show her how you anticipated it! :D
 
Snow falling in front of your face
Hair flowing in the breeze
Hoodie covering your lovely face
So you won't freeze

I see you there
Looking lovely as ever
That your near me
Makes me happy

Dark hair,crimson lips
They look ever so soft
Those are the lips
That I want to kiss.
 
I feel like you don't love me
although I'm sure you do
I feel like I am stupid
is that just me or you?
Why do I feel you've cast me off?
Thrown me away?
set me aloft?
Is it this labrynth head of mine?
That makes you seem just so unkind?
I want to sit and cry in here
in a forest I made up my dear
there's only deers and owls to hear
while I weep my many tears
I'm in this dark and lonely trap
its full of hate and other crap
I fall in every other day
and get out each time a different way
I don't think I could do it
without Adam,my babe
who's music wraps me in its arms
and makes me feel so safe
So why can't I ever feel accepted?
loved? simply at home?
Why is it I feel rejected?
Alien and alone?​
 
And now another poem about boys,which are becoming increasingly awkward for me:


I used to think of boys as dweebs
nothing but nerds,idiots geeks
but now I've grown up
they want my hand
they say they'll date me
oh ain't that GRAND?
Charlie,you say you've got a girl
Johnathon please go away
Oh hi Kasey! yeah you with the curl!
Logan with your ideals,you make me laugh all day
8 boys I've talked to
two of them grown men
but 6 of them are now you see,the other 2 was then
My papa tells me to be careful
so I sit and troll them all
but they keep coming and coming
they ask me to the ball
If my dad could see them now(for he hates them you see)
he'd laugh when he see's who attracted to me​
 
the last two.....wow. The first one is very good, I would love to hear it in a song. The second one sums up about every teenage girls life, it's really well done!:D
 
amdd97 said:
the last two.....wow. The first one is very good, I would love to hear it in a song. The second one sums up about every teenage girls life, it's really well done!:D
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the first one is supposed to be a song eventually. I just hate writing those problems out as songs and recording them because my mom wants to listen and asks me who they're about and I'm always like...uhhhhh
 
I thought you were on my side
but I guess you've turned against me
You were there when I cried
And when did I forsake thee?
I listen when you're solemn
I hear your petty tales
but when I tell you something
you just hammer me with nails
just like "I don't care,you're stupid"
It hurts and its not fair
I'd think that my own sister
would for me always be there​
 
Narniamoondust said:
I thought you were on my side
but I guess you've turned against me
You were there when I cried
And when did I forsake thee?
I listen when you're solemn
I hear your petty tales
but when I tell you something
you just hammer me with nails
just like "I don't care,you're stupid"
It hurts and its not fair
I'd think that my own sister
would for me always be there​
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oh sister troubles. believe me I've have been there. actually, I am still there. But she will ALWAYS be there for you.
 
Its been just such a horrible week
I've been thinking things to terrible to speak
My brain feels saddened
I need my meds
Where's that music?
is it under the beds?
I'm pinned down here
when I'm in doubt and fear
Stuck in this pen when I need to run
Refusing parties even when they're fun
I just need a giant space
a place where I can dance
I don't want to see your face
Let me lose myself in trance
I need to stand and scream my problems
I need to cry them out to God
but I need the forest to hear them
Because trees won't think I'm odd
so let me hear the heavy drum
the golden harp,my darling strum
play it free and to the top
until my fretful screaming stops​
 
amdd97 said:
oh sister troubles. believe me I've have been there. actually, I am still there. But she will ALWAYS be there for you.
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I know,we've been through times together. Its just,right now when I need her most she's being insensitive to me. Of course I can't expect to understand my problems,she's younger.
 
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