Theocrites the Archer

Copperfox

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The following is a sort of one-shot story, no pun intended. It owes its existence to concepts developed by Sir Godfrey, when Godfrey was helping SusanII to create the Knights and Ladies social group. Think of this story, or should I say this episode, as being background history for my social-group identity as King Theocrites Whitebeard.


On one of the two ridges flanking a long ravine stood a broad-shouldered man in his forties, armed with a longbow. He was watching the southern end of the ravine, where it faded into the Gnarled Forest. Beyond that grim forest, in turn, rose the mountains which were the center of this very large island or very small subcontinent. The veteran archer knew this territory well, since it was the inland frontier of the kingdom which he ruled.

"Your Majesty," said a falconer at his side, while pointing into a part of the sky over the woods, "my hawks all appear to have sighted our expected guest."

King Theocrites of Christinople, son of King Nestor the Contemplative, nodded. "You trained them well. Pass the word down the line, and to the men on the other side." Theocrites had fifteen bowmen with him, plus ten good pikemen; a similar force, positioned on the opposite ridge, was led by Priest Anskar of the Orthopraxic Church, the King's chaplain and also an archer in his own right. Anskar was fond of quoting Bible verses that referred to archery; he could do this because, when human beings had first come to this world through a mysterious portal, some of them had brought the Bible with them.

Christinople having more hill country than the other three kingdoms on this broad island, its army paid more attention to developing good infantry than the others did--though this did not mean that there was no Christinoplite cavalry. Horses were sometimes panicked by the really large reptiles, so King Theocrites favored using well-equipped footsoldiers to slug it out with the monsters. The bowmen accompanying the King today were alert and ready; their morale was high, with the pride of knowing that their monarch stood in the ranks as one of them. They would all wait for the order to loose arrows before anyone made a shot; for if they shot too soon, their reptilian enemy might simply decide to turn and go back into the forest to avoid the stings. But being on opposite sides of the ravine, they did not want to start shooting too late, either; for once the massive beast was directly between them, one of the two platoons would have to dash farther north along its ridge, to avoid the risk of the two archery groups shooting each other by mistake.

A sergeant of pikemen remarked to his King, "Really strange, how it doesn't make more noise coming. I'd think we'd be hearing trees break."

"No doubt there was a time when he would have had to break trees," replied Theocrites. "But remember, this Upright Grendel has been raiding the farmlands for months now; he will have cleared his customary route long since. Of course, it is to our advantage that he has assumed a predictable route. Now, everyone stand by." The creature they had come to slay was called a Grendel (as were others like it), because that name seemed fitting to borrow from legends of Old Earth.

Presently, the ground vibrations from the huge carnivore's footsteps became noticeable. None of the assembled warriors was dismayed; men like them had slain monsters like this repeatedly, over the ten or more generations that mankind had occupied this planet. It had been necessary, if any stable society was to exist. The fact that Christinople, Angelonia, Servantium and Beezeldur all enjoyed an organized civilization was due to men's success in combatting these fearsome beasts.
 
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(Having changed the name per Tom's recommendation...)

The Grendel came into view, its head more ten feet above the ground even though it leaned well forward with its heavy tail balancing the weight. Though its feeble brain had had cattle and sheep in mind, as soon as it noticed the humans it decided they were acceptable food also.

When he saw the beast committing to a charge, King Theocrites shouted, "As planned, shoot at will!" His own first arrow had already left the string before he finished giving that order. Four archers on each ridge, including the King himself in his platoon, aimed for the monster's eyes; the advantage of blinding their foe was obvious, and a strong enough shot might penetrate into the brain. The rest of the archers went for the throat. But this particular monster had especially prominent bone ridges over its eyes; shooting from above, none of the archers was able to make a blinding hit, though Theocrites did draw blood from a corner of the eye on his side.

Swift though the Grendel's onslaught was, the Christinoplite archers were also swift; not a man among them got fewer than three arrows off before Anskar's platoon had to pull back to prevent hitting their friends across the ravine. But it was only Anskar's bowmen who moved thus; the pikemen on that side went a little way down the outer slope of the ridge, momentarily out of the great predator's view. For they had waged similar anti-monster attacks before; they knew that the movement of their archers was likely to attract the monster's attention.

Sure enough, the reptile started up the slope on Anskar's side, trying to get at the most conspicuously moving prey. But Theocrites and his platoon volleyed arrows into the beast from their side, the pikemen on the other side being sheltered from the volley. As the Grendel turned to look toward the source of the latest stings, Anskar's pikemen rushed up and all sank their pikes into one of its massive hind legs. Every pike that plunged in well, was left there; no one was going to linger close to the monster to pull his weapon out. Anskar's archers now covered the retreat of their pikemen with arrows of their own, aimed in such a way that even one which missed would not then hit a friend; and the King's platoon also shot again once they were sure the pikemen were clear.

Most Grendels would by this time have been seriously weakened by this much damage, for the arrows of Christinople's crack bowmen went deep; but this dragonoid was a strong one indeed. Thus Anskar's archer contingent found itself obliged to scatter left and right as the Grendel decided to come after them again. But even while taking evasive action, some of them got more arrows off, as did Theocrites and the men with him; and the reptile's hurt right leg was at least slowing it down a little, helping the men to evade it.

When the Grendel followed some of Anskar's party back down into the ravine, Theocrites' pikemen acted on their own initiative--though in a type of maneuver which had been used on other occasions--scrambling down while the beast had its tail toward them. More arrows flew from the King's group, drawing the quarry's attention again; and as it looked back and left, Theocrites' pikemen came around its right flank, to thrust their long spears into the already-wounded right leg and weaken it further. When the Grendel turned toward his latest pain, the pikemen were already hurrying away as their counterparts had done; and those of Anskar's bowmen who were now down on the low ground, shot upward at one of the monster's eyes. From that angle, they were able to hit and blind that eye. Then some of Anskar's pikemen who had retained their pikes leaped down the slope and made stabs at the heretofore-intact left leg.

All through this, King Theocrites, who carried a larger quiver of arrows than any of his men, was loosing shot after shot as fast as he could nock, draw and aim--always taking care, with a master archer's eye, to make sure no friend was in the path of his arrow. At an opportune moment, he descended into the ravine himself, his platoon following suit, to shoot at closer range now that the carnivore was finally weakening; the closer range also reduced further the risk of hitting friends with a missed shot. Six of the men were bowled over by swings of the Grendel's tail, and one was gored by a swipe of a clawed forearm, but none were fatally wounded.

At last, the Grendel toppled to the stony ground. Pikes, joined now by axes, went to work on the back of its neck, to ensure that it died. The very instant that he was satisfied on this score, Theocrites checked with the falconer against the possibility of other monsters being near. There were none; so the archer-king began rendering aid to the worst of the casualties, the claw-gouged man.

When all the injured men were out of immediate danger, Theocrites drew a long breath, and thanked God for the success of the hunt. Priest Anskar knew his King's mind, and drew near to say: "Sire, it is a mercy indeed that we have lost not a man. By all accounts, in the old founding days, it was not unheard of for a party larger than ours, when facing a Grendel such as this one, to suffer eight or nine men slain, and sometimes not even succeed in dispatching their quarry."

"Experience is the mother of skill," replied Theocrites: something he was fond of saying when training new archers.

"And, sire, you have an increasing number of warriors who are well-armed with the skill of experience. You have taught them, and they have proven worthy of your instruction. If Your Majesty will forgive my saying it...perhaps, having planned and carried out this action against one of the largest Grendels in recent memory..."

"I should now stop going into battle myself?" Theocrites finished for him.

"Yes, Your Majesty. If you never lift another weapon as long as you live, you have performed enough courageous deeds in your time to make your name honored for generations to come. Though your strength has not failed you, I beseech you to allow younger men to carry on for you now."
 
Note that the roleplay picks up more than ten years later than the time I am depicting in this introductory tale. Thomas and I have already begun the first scene there; it is found in the "new roleplay" thread of Knights and Ladies. (To avoid confusion for those who join, the thread called "RPG" was a sort of trial run; many of the "facts" from it are being kept in the revised roleplay, but some things may be done differently.)

By the way, participants in Knights and Ladies are being encouraged to play as more than one character--even as both good and bad characters--so no one is devastated if we decide that ONE character dies (which will not be done lightly).
 
I didn't have anything against it being called a Teerex. It just surprised me, that's all. It got me hooked and I want to read more of this story.
 
I didn't have anything against it being called a Teerex. It just surprised me, that's all. It got me hooked and I want to read more of this story.

The reason for the name change was a historical discrepancy. The inhabits of that world came there from the 1700s or possibly earlier, and the word 'T-Rex' (or even 'dinosaur') was not invented untill after 1841. Before then, such creatures had been historically known as 'dragons,' 'Grendel,' 'Wyrm,' 'Tannyn,' 'Leviathan,' 'Behemoth,' etc.
 
The injured men from the battle with the monster did not have to be moved far. The King's hunting party had a base camp less than a mile away from the north end of the ravine, and the King's own personal physicians were on hand to treat the casualties. Priest Anskar, assisted by the royal falconer, took charge of both evacuating the wounded and processing the great reptile's carcass--for its flesh was edible, and its hide usable. This freed King Theocrites to ride to his private lodge, three hours' ride to the northwest, to give his waiting family the good news of success.

"We children of Adam and Eve," remarked Anskar to the falconer, "are given by God the ability to create weapons that can slay such monsters as this; otherwise, we could not survive in this land, or not very well. But mere beasts of the mammalian sort, who have not our advantage--I wonder sometimes, how do THEY survive being in the same land as these huge dragons?"

"By their own gift of cunning, Chaplain," replied the falconer. "Several types of the furred beasts, even fairly small ones, have the trick of sneaking to the nests of the monsters and devouring their eggs. This, apart from our own efforts, is the main reason why the various kinds of Grendels remain limited in numbers. It is also an illustration of a point you yourself have made in sermons: that the huge and mighty may be brought down by those who seem hopelessly inferior in power."

* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

On the lookout tower of the King's inland lodge, Queen Janria, a brown-haired woman who could not be called slender, but who still was pleasing to behold in her way, stood with her children: the ten-year-old Princess Hermia and the eight-year-old Prince Orestes. All were watching the land south toward the Gnarled Forest and the mountains beyond it.

Also with them was a dark-skinned guest from the friendly nation of Lozambu across the sea: Tribe-Lord Pahulamar, weathered by many years of adventures on sea and land. As the tallest, he could see the farthest; and it was he who suddenly called out: "Your Majesty! I see three horsemen approaching!"

"Is one my husband?" asked Janria.

"Did you say that he rode a dappled stallion, Your Majesty?"

"The very same."

"Then by the size and bearing of the leading rider, and the color of his horse, I judge it to be indeed your valiant husband.... Now he is holding up a longbow above his head, and tilting it from side to side."

Janria clapped her hands happily. "That is his sign of good news, his sign that all is well!"

"If all is as well as I hope, Your Majesty, I will dare to hope a further hope: that soon His Majesty will be able to spare the time for additional discussions of how our two peoples can more smoothly cooperate in extracting and putting to use the resources of some of the uninhabited southern islands." There was no edge of tension in Pahulamar's voice; negotiations of this kind between Christinople and Lozambu had always gone amicably, with agreements reached that both sides could accept. Still, old Pahulamar could not help but wonder: Will my sons and others of their generation continue to have the same good relations with Christinople when Orestes here is King?
 
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The reason for the name change was a historical discrepancy. The inhabits of that world came there from the 1700s or possibly earlier, and the word 'T-Rex' (or even 'dinosaur') was not invented untill after 1841. Before then, such creatures had been historically known as 'dragons,' 'Grendel,' 'Wyrm,' 'Tannyn,' 'Leviathan,' 'Behemoth,' etc.

Oh. That makes sense. I'll still read this fanfiction though. Sounds like the making of the next epic fantasy.
 
I'll still read this fanfiction though.

It is not strictly speaking fan fiction. This prelude story, plus what follows in the roleplay, together make up a work of _original_ fiction, in which Sir Godfrey and I, with others, are co-authors.



You know how the winters arrive and depart;
Each one leaves a bit more old age in my heart.
But rise from your bed, and we'll dance all the same;
The tree of remembrance will tell me you name.
 
When King Theocrites arrived at the lodge, he unsaddled and rubbed down his horse himself. Knowing this to be his habit, his family came to meet him at the stable, and embraces were mingled with horseman's work. After giving them all a general account of the victory over the huge reptile, the King focussed his attention on his royal heir.

"Orestes, always remember this: the battle is not only fought at the time you fight it. You are also fighting your battle in everything you do to _prepare_ for it."

"Including knowing _where_ your enemy will be, as you did with the Grendel," said the energetic boy.

Theocrites nodded. "And knowing whether your enemy _knows_ that you know."

Hermia now asked, "Is the monster's flesh being preserved, father?" The young Princess, be this ladylike or not, had developed a taste for monster meat, saying it really did taste like chicken.

"Yes, darling. We will serve it out to everyone in the region at a victory feast. That way, at least the local farmers will be able _indirectly_ to eat the cattle and pigs they lost to this Grendel."

As they emerged from the stable, Queen Janria, holding her husband's hand, remarked to him, "Tribe-Lord Pahulamar is here, Theo. He is anxious to finalize the latest agreements about the southern islands."

"Thank you, beloved. It should be no problem."

And it was no problem; merely a matter of ironing out details between two allied governments. But only when they had signed a document, Pahulamar being empowered to act for his own King, did the Lozambu emissary relax and talk about the archer-king's latest adventure. "If you would mount an expedition to the wild lands on the far side of our island, you could find plenty of Grendels, as you call them, to hunt." By "far side," he meant a separate, farther and larger landmass beyond Lozambu and its neighbor Taridbu.

"This is not sport, my friend, it is promoting the safety of my people. When all the major monsters of our subcontinent's own central wilderness are dead, or at least have learned to fear man, _then_ I may allow myself to take a more active interest in distant lands. Even an interest in lands whose existence remains unknown at this time. For there must be other lands someplace, in addition to those we know of on this planet." (For the existence of planets as objects in space was not altogether unknown to descendants of the humans who had come to this place by means far beyond the reach of their own science.)

"Well," said Pahulamar, "may the gods grant you a long enough life that you may see some such remote islands. But if you go there, always be sure you have _many_ arrows in your quiver."



PROBABLY THE END.
THIS HAS BEEN WRITTEN
IN HOPES OF GETTING
YOU INTERESTED IN
SUSANII'S SOCIAL GROUP

"KNIGHTS AND LADIES,"
ALL OF WHOSE IMAGINED
EVENTS COME AFTER THIS.
 
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Wanderer, the point is that this story ISN'T all there is about King Theocrites and his family. The whole roleplay in the "Knights and Ladies" social group is ABOUT that same family. This story is merely a prologue.
 
If we had a map of the world of this story, the known lands would be positioned, relative to each other, something like this (noting that "Four Kingdoms" is where most action is) :



_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Island of World's Entry

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _Yelnoro

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Taridbu _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Four Kingdoms

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ Lozambu


Land of Countless Beasts

_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Uninhabited islands
 


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