~Mr.Tumnus~
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This is for anyone who joined the planning If there is a character you would like to be that's not been taken, check out the link above and let me know there. Okay then, let's begin. Obviously it will not be word for word but the story line will be as close to right on as you can get.
Edmund stared out his living room window with a slight smirk on his face. He watched in awe as fire burned throughout the town. Suddenly he was grabbed and thrusted away from the window. "Edmund! What are you doing? Get away from there. Peter! Peter!" Peter, eldest of the Pevensie children, ran into the room. "Take Edmund and go get the girls. Hurry!"
Both boys ran through the shaking house and up the stairs. They ran into Susan's room first and told her to hurry, then they ran across the hall to get their younger sister, Lucy. "AH!" She screamed, her hands covering her ears.
Susan threw off her blankets and grabbed her sister's hand. "Lucy! Come on!" They all ran down to the kitchen, avoiding the bits of falling ceiling. Mrs. Pevensie ran out of the house ahead, opening a door to an underground shelter. She ushered all children in, bringing up the rear.
Early the following morning, the Pevensie children had said good bye to their mother, and had traveled far from the war to stay with some professor in his big house. They were now awaiting the arrival of their host, and became excited when they heard a horse drawn carriage come around the corner.
Sorry if it's a choppy beginning...
Edmund stared out his living room window with a slight smirk on his face. He watched in awe as fire burned throughout the town. Suddenly he was grabbed and thrusted away from the window. "Edmund! What are you doing? Get away from there. Peter! Peter!" Peter, eldest of the Pevensie children, ran into the room. "Take Edmund and go get the girls. Hurry!"
Both boys ran through the shaking house and up the stairs. They ran into Susan's room first and told her to hurry, then they ran across the hall to get their younger sister, Lucy. "AH!" She screamed, her hands covering her ears.
Susan threw off her blankets and grabbed her sister's hand. "Lucy! Come on!" They all ran down to the kitchen, avoiding the bits of falling ceiling. Mrs. Pevensie ran out of the house ahead, opening a door to an underground shelter. She ushered all children in, bringing up the rear.
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Early the following morning, the Pevensie children had said good bye to their mother, and had traveled far from the war to stay with some professor in his big house. They were now awaiting the arrival of their host, and became excited when they heard a horse drawn carriage come around the corner.
Sorry if it's a choppy beginning...
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