The Tale of Mozart the Meerkitten

What do you think of my books? (Mozart, Fire Kitten, Catlition and Greatest Battle)

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Shadow_Kitty said:
Dorthy and Mozart are tied for my fave charie. Dorthy may be wining ;) Love em both.
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Dorthy and Mozart are cool. I made Dorthy an archer because I too am one... and if you know me really well you can see part of me in each of the main kittens.:D

And just don't get Dorthy and Dora mixed up if I nickname one "Dor" which I sometimes call Dora in real life.:p
 
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Most everyone in Reandalawo was asleep. Shawnti crept forward in the grass at the edge of the clearing.
“Surround the fortress. Block all but the main entrance, we want them to be trapped.” She hissed. Cogg’s army hurried to do as she said. Cogg had put her in charge of about one third of his massive army…. about five thousand strong. A fourth of her given force surrounded each wall, with she herself keeping one of the fourths facing the main gate of Reandalawo.
‘I won’t fail this time master.” She thought knowingly.
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For Tigerclaw though, the siege provided the perfect excuse to go back into power over the rest of Cogg’s army. Of all the generals and leaders of Cogg’s army, Tigerclaw was always the most respected…. Who knows what he did if you didn’t? Discipline and cruelty were two of Tigerclaw’s mottos.
Now Tigerclaw set up in his mind a trap for Shawnti if and when she came back. Victorious or no Tigerclaw was sure he could make an end to her.
‘I will show her I do not take kindly to upspurs.’ He thought to himself.
 
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Mozart was restless. She got up in the middle of the night and decided to go up on the wall.
'Can't sleep, so I'll go see whats about.' she thought.

Mozart yawned and walked outside. The night was very quiet, too quiet and peaceful as any full fledged warrior could tell. Mozart though was not yet a full fledged warrior, but she still sensed something amiss.
The tiny cat climbed up to the battlements. There she saw Shawnti's only mistake.

The she-cat had kept herself and her regiment of troops in plain sight of the front wall, so anyone from the top could see her.
Mozart lingered only a moment to take stock of the troops before scurrying off to check the other walls.
'If I was her and had sufficient troops... I bet she'll surround us.' thought the kitten, correctly. Each part of Shawnti's army had completely surrounded Reandalawo.
'I've got to tell the others.' she thinks.
 
Ok, last minute post so iffin its short sorry.:eek:

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Mozart ran accross the lawn in crazy formation, screaming as she did.
"WE'RE BEING ATTACKED SEIGE! SEIGE! WAKE UP! ALERT! CODE, um, green? No, yellow? No red, CODE RED!!!"

Soon all of Reandalawo was roused. Mozart was panting but managed to tell what she had seen.

"Hundreds o' thousands of troops I'd say. Leastways a good part of Cogg's army."
"Who lead them, youngster?"
"That cat, what was the name..."
"Tigerclaw? Was that it?"
"No it was a she-cat. Shani, no Shawnti. Thats it Shawnti!"
"So Cogg wasn't with em?"
"No Cogg is prob'ly hiding like the coward he is in his fortress like always."

The speaker of the last comment was from Tori.
"Always hid he did. Durin' slave battles 'e never came out to face us. He hid like the big ole cowardly bully 'e is. I ain't seen him fight since he conquered Meandrao, long ago....." she trailed off with a distant look in her eyes.

"Then he won't 'ave Reandalawo to be the sister fortress. Seige or no seige we'll show that wolf we ain't cowards... No matter how big his army."

Ribbony nodded to Mozart.
"Well said youngster. Well said."
 
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Ok my readers here is more:

Chapter 18
The Siege of Reandalawo​

It was two hours before dawn. Shawnti decided it was the perfect time to strike.
‘They’ll be asleep and not prepared for us.’ she thought.
The she-cat nodded and one of the soldiers flashed torchlight on a sheild. It reflected off three other shields. They charged silently, only to be assailed by dozens of arrows from the wall, one of which was Dorthy's.

"Take that you scum!" cried down the kitten.
"Hold your tounge youngster." cautioned Ribbony "The time for insults will come, but it is not now."
Dorthy sighed, and fitted another arrow on her bow (which by the way I have neglected to tell that it was the bow Myrrh gave her... Jako and Misty had found it as well as Toto's weapons as they rescued Mozart and of course gave them back to the respected owners.) and mumbled "A war without insults is a dull war indeed my brothers used to say."
Brightheart chuckled and muttered back, "Then they were as defiant as you, friend."

When Shawnti and her forces were out of range, the arrows stopped. The Reanlawoins were no fools, they were not about to run out of arrows either.

Now Toto and Caspian were horrible with bows. Mozart was a fine shot, and Dorthy was excelent, but the boys possesed no talent with a bow or arrow. So their brothers- thinking it important for them to have some long-range skill- taught them about slings and stones. So Toto and Caspian had orginized anyone who volulentered to teach them about slings.

"Hold the sling like this when ya wanna fire. No not that way Frodo, its upside down now!"
"Jak don't fit a stone in your sling yet, we ain't firing now."
"Hey gimme them stones ye holigans! Now I say, you too Jak, Misty, bad 'zamples for the little ones you are."

"Proper little dictators those two are, eh Mist?"
"Quite Jak, but once we were the same way."
"Did you just call me little Jaklikeo? 'Cause iffin you did, prepare to be injured by a loaded sling!"
"No, ah, sir Caspian, I said, er, brittle, yes brittle!"
"Alright then, but never call me the L word again!"
"Yes Sir!" they all choursed.
 
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“If we try to get close to the walls they fire at us! Besides we can’t scale them, fools, they’ve covered the walls with slippery stuff, arrows bounce right off even!” Shawnti was in a bad mood. She had been trying to explain that attacking Reandalawo in most ways was crazy, but the troops and captains didn’t seem to get it.
“But ma’m Cogg said we ‘ave to siege them, so we…”
“Exactly, siege, not fight… not yet anyway. Leave the planning and thinking to me, you just carry out my orders, got it?”
Mumbled answers came, but Shawnti was not content with it.

Tossing her dagger into a tree not a whisker from a coyote in the midst of them, she spoke again,
“I said, is that clear?”
“Yes ma’m!” came the hurried replies.
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Neither side made a move that night, good or bad. In the morning they would all get a better understanding of the opposing side....
Then go to war.

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Summer had gone by too quickly for most. Fall was now seen by the changing of the leaves. Mozart and her sibblings were almost three months old by the seige, so it was near a month since they left home.

"I miss mama."
Jak turned and looked at little Mozart, who stood on the ramparts, peering through an archer hole to see.
"I miss my mama too, Mozart." came the reply.
"Must be hard for you, that your mama died when you were so little."
Jak shrugged, "Really never knew her so I don't miss her too much. Rita was pretty much my mum when I was a kit. Though I do miss Rita an awful lot, I know Jako and Misty do too."
"Then you miss Rita, because she was your mama?"
"Yeah, my.... pretend mama, I guess y'could say."
"I have a pretend mama too. Never knew my real mama. So I miss both my mamas." said the tiny she-kitten. It was then Jak was suddenly jolted away from the image of the warrior who he always saw when he looked at Mozart, to the tiny baby kitten, forced to leave home and everything she knew.

"I bet you'll see your mama's again, Mozart, and maybe I will too."
 
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The next morning, about two hours after dawn, Reandalawo was assailed by a horrible new foe. Arrows and slingstones flew over the walls, a rude awakening to the wall sentries.
Most of Reandalawo had slept in the main building and rushed out. Mozart was glad she and her friends were not in the front line that ran out, for a hail of rocks hit down some front runners.
Cayous ensued; Reanlawoins ran hither and yon, trying desperately to avoid the deadly arrows and the unconsciousness-forcing slingstones.
The trained warriors- Catlition, Jako, Jak, Misty and Dora, plus most of the LFF Catlition- called a more orderly retreat. Creatures ran from the deadly missiles, taking the wounded with them.
“Order, order I say!” yowled Dora, over the frightened babbling of many creatures.
“This’ll get em ma’m.” said Ribbony

“CATLITIOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!” came the earsplitting battle cry, calling order to the frantic creatures.
“Thank you.” Dora told the Catlitions, “Now, I’ve never known Reanlawoins to be so, so, terrified of a threat they could not even see! To run hither and dither about in such a crazy manner that we’ve been picked off like fruit from a tree when young ones find it!” she cried, “Such loss of composure I will not tolerate. Since you act as naughty babes, I will treat you as them. To bed, all of you, they cannot keep at us forever; get some rest while you can. Catlitions, come with me. We will board up the windows so missiles cannot penetrate them.”

The dazed creatures did as they were told, looking more than anything like beasts out of a nightmare, who had just awoken.
 
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