Copperfox
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Before I became a Christian, I used to make up bedtime stories for my youngest sister Tammy. Add to this my diverse reading of sci-fi and fantasy: Conan the Barbarian, Poul Anderson's interstellar-spy novels, The Worm Ouroboros ("worm" here meaning a vertebrate serpent), the Lensman series, and the old Pogo comic strip (which treated me to talking animals who could hold adult conversations long before that same sister (at a later age) persuaded me to read the Narnian series.
About a year after I married my first wife (who, by now, is in Aslan's Country with my second wife), I began trying to publish heroic fantasy. I designed my story-world as one where might didn't make right; and the central hero, named "Theocrites" (start with a "hard" TH as in "thick," pronounced Thee-OCK -crit-EEZE), was an adventurous-bard sort, the kind of guy who might offer vital advice to a conventional swordsman hero. I would later plan a prequel series in the same world, happening 300 years earlier: like writing about Daniel Boone after first writing about some adventure in the present. Central to the prequels was a stocky kung-fu sort of hero named Mo'ajin (pronounced Moe-AH-jeen), who was actually a prototype for my later-invented and much-better-known character ALIPANG HAVENS.
Publishing as an unknown author back then was a road with many potholes. One was the inconvenience of having to run off paper copies of manuscripts, electronic storage of documents as data not being a thing then. Another was the hypocrisy and bias practiced by at least one editor of imaginative fiction. Stay with me here:
In the Mo'ajin-and-Theocrites universe, I affirmed that the real God existed. Mo'ajin, in fact, possessed explicitly clerical power against evil forces. This was triggering to the editor in question. Returning my manuscript, she added this insult (approximate quote): "HOW CAN YOU WRITE A FANTASY WHERE THE HERO'S MISSION IS TO DESTROY MAGIC?" If she was paying attention to the fantasy/s.f. genre, she knew all about Michael Moorcock. Mister Moorcock's anti-heroes Elric and Corum are all about-- wait for it: abolishing magic. To the greater delight of politically- correct editors, Moorcock also despised and attacked all faith in a supreme being.
The story before your eyes takes place in the Theocrites era. Before I proceed, some authorial specifics.
The planet on which this takes place is much like Earth in environment, climate, animal life and people. Now to tell you HOW this planet came to HAVE humans like us. Philip Pullman would be furious at me.
I imagine that, in the days of Noah on Actual Earth, God took note of people dwelling too far from Noah for Noah to warn them of the coming deluge. So He sent the already- ascended Enoch to convoy all these people to the unpeopled Earth-like world. On three continents and lesser landmasses, the emigres built new societies, which to some extent resembled the historic nations known to us.
The majority of my action took place on a continent called Gapsuyai or Antalia. Mo'ajin and his associated protagonists lived on Yai-Kuan, a large island nation off the northwest corner of Gapsuyai. The most notable island realm south of them (and friendly to them) was Vengol, whose culture was like pre-modern Hindu culture. Also inhabiting islands on that ocean were people resembling Native Americans, the Bzoctotls, and quasi- Polynesians called the Jiluanese. The Jiluanese were in the Vengolese sphere of influence, while the Bzoctotls were-- less cordially-- dominated by the Kuanese (who, like the Koreans, were formerly three separate kingdoms).
At the north end of Gapsuyai / Antalia are the sister nations of Trantea and Varsea. These European-like people worship the true God as Mo'ajin did; they call Him simply "God," while Mo'ajin and his co-believers called Him "The Deep Sky Father." The ancestors of Tranteans and Varseans emigrated north to escape oppression by the Zoramnites at the south end. Enroute northward by sea, they steered clear of barbarian peoples along the continent's west coast: counting south to north, Djennok Islanders, Rudsafi, Skoltoshmen and Grestigs. The last two of these nations were pseudo-Nordic, and NOT usually pals to each other.
In Mo'ajin's time, Gapsuyai's arid interior was dominated by an evil sorcerer-king called Nebmuk-Bezal. Mo'ajin himself was destined to make an end of Nebmuk. Notable in the center of the continent (albeit not relevant for "Fractured Rainbow") was a True-God -worshiping country which was of interest to Vissarion the Selfless (a knight whom I once swiped from myself to use in a Dancing Lawn roleplay back when we had those). I cannot for the life of me remember what I called that country! --but I can fudge the subject by saying that ONE name for it translates handily into English as "Bronzeland."
Prior to what I'm offering here, Theocrites and his Trantean friend Alacles (ah-LACK-leeze) the Savage have had an adventure on the not-quite- subcontinent-size island of Keerthar. Then they received some sort of divine guidance to set sail southeastward, making for a continent known to the Bzoctotls (from the far longitude). Here, again, I resort to saying "ONE OF the names for it is...." \ "One name" is Rijovalud (first syllable sounds like "Ridge," second syllable is accented with a long O, last syllable rhymes with "food").
Enroute from Keerthar, Alacles and Theocrites are accompanied and advised by The White Dolphin, totemic animal of the seafaring Tranteans and the picture on their national flag (Varseans take wolves as their symbol). This is ENOUGH to get started with what would have been Volume 3 or 4 of the Theocrites cycle.
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About a year after I married my first wife (who, by now, is in Aslan's Country with my second wife), I began trying to publish heroic fantasy. I designed my story-world as one where might didn't make right; and the central hero, named "Theocrites" (start with a "hard" TH as in "thick," pronounced Thee-OCK -crit-EEZE), was an adventurous-bard sort, the kind of guy who might offer vital advice to a conventional swordsman hero. I would later plan a prequel series in the same world, happening 300 years earlier: like writing about Daniel Boone after first writing about some adventure in the present. Central to the prequels was a stocky kung-fu sort of hero named Mo'ajin (pronounced Moe-AH-jeen), who was actually a prototype for my later-invented and much-better-known character ALIPANG HAVENS.
Publishing as an unknown author back then was a road with many potholes. One was the inconvenience of having to run off paper copies of manuscripts, electronic storage of documents as data not being a thing then. Another was the hypocrisy and bias practiced by at least one editor of imaginative fiction. Stay with me here:
In the Mo'ajin-and-Theocrites universe, I affirmed that the real God existed. Mo'ajin, in fact, possessed explicitly clerical power against evil forces. This was triggering to the editor in question. Returning my manuscript, she added this insult (approximate quote): "HOW CAN YOU WRITE A FANTASY WHERE THE HERO'S MISSION IS TO DESTROY MAGIC?" If she was paying attention to the fantasy/s.f. genre, she knew all about Michael Moorcock. Mister Moorcock's anti-heroes Elric and Corum are all about-- wait for it: abolishing magic. To the greater delight of politically- correct editors, Moorcock also despised and attacked all faith in a supreme being.
The story before your eyes takes place in the Theocrites era. Before I proceed, some authorial specifics.
The planet on which this takes place is much like Earth in environment, climate, animal life and people. Now to tell you HOW this planet came to HAVE humans like us. Philip Pullman would be furious at me.
I imagine that, in the days of Noah on Actual Earth, God took note of people dwelling too far from Noah for Noah to warn them of the coming deluge. So He sent the already- ascended Enoch to convoy all these people to the unpeopled Earth-like world. On three continents and lesser landmasses, the emigres built new societies, which to some extent resembled the historic nations known to us.
The majority of my action took place on a continent called Gapsuyai or Antalia. Mo'ajin and his associated protagonists lived on Yai-Kuan, a large island nation off the northwest corner of Gapsuyai. The most notable island realm south of them (and friendly to them) was Vengol, whose culture was like pre-modern Hindu culture. Also inhabiting islands on that ocean were people resembling Native Americans, the Bzoctotls, and quasi- Polynesians called the Jiluanese. The Jiluanese were in the Vengolese sphere of influence, while the Bzoctotls were-- less cordially-- dominated by the Kuanese (who, like the Koreans, were formerly three separate kingdoms).
At the north end of Gapsuyai / Antalia are the sister nations of Trantea and Varsea. These European-like people worship the true God as Mo'ajin did; they call Him simply "God," while Mo'ajin and his co-believers called Him "The Deep Sky Father." The ancestors of Tranteans and Varseans emigrated north to escape oppression by the Zoramnites at the south end. Enroute northward by sea, they steered clear of barbarian peoples along the continent's west coast: counting south to north, Djennok Islanders, Rudsafi, Skoltoshmen and Grestigs. The last two of these nations were pseudo-Nordic, and NOT usually pals to each other.
In Mo'ajin's time, Gapsuyai's arid interior was dominated by an evil sorcerer-king called Nebmuk-Bezal. Mo'ajin himself was destined to make an end of Nebmuk. Notable in the center of the continent (albeit not relevant for "Fractured Rainbow") was a True-God -worshiping country which was of interest to Vissarion the Selfless (a knight whom I once swiped from myself to use in a Dancing Lawn roleplay back when we had those). I cannot for the life of me remember what I called that country! --but I can fudge the subject by saying that ONE name for it translates handily into English as "Bronzeland."
Prior to what I'm offering here, Theocrites and his Trantean friend Alacles (ah-LACK-leeze) the Savage have had an adventure on the not-quite- subcontinent-size island of Keerthar. Then they received some sort of divine guidance to set sail southeastward, making for a continent known to the Bzoctotls (from the far longitude). Here, again, I resort to saying "ONE OF the names for it is...." \ "One name" is Rijovalud (first syllable sounds like "Ridge," second syllable is accented with a long O, last syllable rhymes with "food").
Enroute from Keerthar, Alacles and Theocrites are accompanied and advised by The White Dolphin, totemic animal of the seafaring Tranteans and the picture on their national flag (Varseans take wolves as their symbol). This is ENOUGH to get started with what would have been Volume 3 or 4 of the Theocrites cycle.
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