A poem I wrote.

[Lila]

A short poem I wrote:

It breaks my heart
To think that I can’t
Convince you of what I know is right.
It tears me apart
When I remember
You won’t believe me.
I’d do anything
To save you from
What you might not know will happen.
You have no idea.

 

[-Daughter of Eve-]

I love it.Good work!

 

[Lila]

Thank you!

 

[-Daughter of Eve-]

You're welcome Do you write poetry a lot?

 

[Lila]

You're welcome Do you write poetry a lot?

Well.... not as much as some of the other members here, but once ina while I get an inspiration and I'll post a poem.

 

[-Daughter of Eve-]

Same here.But I haven't posted many of mine here on the forum.

 

[Copperfox]

Reading your poem was like seeing footprints and wondering where the person who made them was heading. It made me wonder what situation in your life was being reflected (if it wasn't all just made up).

 

[Lila]

Reading your poem was like seeing footprints and wondering where the person who made them was heading. It made me wonder what situation in your life was being reflected (if it wasn't all just made up).

Well, it's supposed to be a person who is trying to lead a friend to Christianity, but she can't convince her friend that what she believes is true.