Aspire

daisyfrost

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OK I know I've been gone for like EVER--does anybody remember me?:confused:? Well anyways I finally wrote something that I could finish that I enjoyed and I think it's time for me to update my profile a little:rolleyes:
Here's a short story I recently wrote. It's a bit childish but I hope you like it anyway.:p

~*Aspire*~

There was a newly crowned queen, Alexia was her name; and she lived in a cloud castle which had a tendency to float above a particular land, and above most storms.
“Ah, I like this,” she told herself, settling into her throne. It was solid glass and had perfectly preserved flowers shut inside. She’d just become comfortable enough to listen to the silence in the room, when she heard urgent footsteps. A moment later, the doors burst open loudly and a flabbergasted looking servant stood staring, and panting, and clutching at his vest for comfort, in the doorway. Alexia said,
“My goodness, what in the sky has happened so early upon my encrownment that makes you look so…um, amazed, for lack of better words?” she sat up straight and grabbed her glass armrests.
“What the news is…is truly extraordinary. You’re never going to believe it.”
“Don’t waste your breath, man, tell me now!” she raised her voice, feeling excited.
“Well…” the little man-fairy said, as he stepped closer “let me catch my breath.” In a minute, he told the impatient young queen his fantastic message.
“A human being has somehow, um, invented some…device, which he’s shot up in the air and latched onto the clouds, the solid part of our floating island.” Alexia was at a loss for words. She stared openmouthed and oh, how she gripped the armrests. “And he’s here,” the servant added.
“And he’s here,” she echoed. “And nobody has had the sense to push him off?”
“Well he’s quite large, your highness, much bigger than the humans look from our view. We were too afraid. And besides, um, isn’t that murder?” Alexia ignored his question.
She said, “I must see him for myself. Bring me. Now.”
“Follow me,” he said hastily, and led her outside through the fields, to the very spot.
“Introducing Queen Alexia of the sky fairies,” the servant announced suddenly. Queen Alexia looked up, up, up, to the face of the beast intruding on her home.
“Hello,” the human spoke, smiling down at her, bowing.
“AAAAAAAH!!!” she screamed. He blinked, and his smile faded off.
“I’m sorry,” he said, “I don’t mean to scare you. My name’s Krugan.”
“Krugan,” the queen addressed him, gathering herself, who do you think you are invading my divine serenity?” she flew up so that she was about level with his face. “Hmm?”
“I am an inventor, an explorer, and an investigator,” he answered proudly, smiling again.
“Well what’s your motive for being here?” she snapped.
“I would love to make an alliance between our people,” he told her. “A treaty, signed with jewels.”
Until that moment the queen had wished only to be rid of the tall, frightening man; but when she heard the word “jewels,” her ears pricked up, her eyes lifted to meet his, and the gears in her mind began turning about in a different direction entirely.
~**~
The queen’s expression changed.
“Jewels?” she asked, blinking her large green eyes. “Of what sort?”
“Pearls,” he answered, trying to make them sound richer than they really were. Under this sky-island, where he lived on the ground, his home and village surrounded a bay where pearls were quite common. Some people didn’t even consider them real gems—they were of such small value compared to emeralds, sapphires, or amethysts.
“I have heard of pearls,” Alexia said. “That offer appeals to me. Come back tomorrow at sunset with the leader of your village and twenty pearls—and I’ll compose a written pledge for you to sign, if my answer is yes. Our gift in return for the pearls will be…well, I’m not sure what, but something good. We’ll find something valuable. Sound fair enough?”
“Yes, I’ll be honored to return here tomorrow under those conditions.” Krugan bowed low. “See you later, highness,” he said with a wink, and a beguiling smile. Then, to the fairies’ utter surprise, he stepped backward off the cloudy rim of the island and fell down. Queen Alexia gasped and all the fairies there fluttered over to see. Krugan was falling, falling—with no wings.
“What on earth is he doing?” Alexia asked. “He will be broken by the impact of the ground, surely!”
They watched. He fell, he fell, and when he was quite close to the ground a large piece of cloth came out of his backpack and made a big air bubble. He floated slowly the rest of the way, and when he landed, his air bubble deflated and fell around him.
“Miraculous,” the fairies murmured. “That man can make a cure for anything.” In their minds, creatures without wings were crippled and unfortunate. So Krugan’s air pocket looked to them like a replacement, a way to fix his disability to fly.
“Thank goodness he wants to be friends with us,” the queen said. “Who knows what he’ll pull out of his backpack next.”
~**~
Romnik was minding his own business, whistling while he harvested wild mushrooms. But then, out of nowhere, a pair of leather-clad feet landed in front of him and a parachute fell over his face.
“Hey, Krugan,” he said. “I saw you latch your gadget up to the sky earlier, so did half the village—so tell me, what were you doing up there?” a hand flew out and shoved off the fabric until a man stood there, and he said,
“Aaah, my unimaginative brother…you just met your first fairy-charmer.” Krugan grinned. “Not only am I the first human to see them face to face, but I actually spoke to their queen, and she wants to make an alliance with our village! How cool is that, right? Right?”
“Uh,” Romnik said, “Maybe—”
“I know what you’re gonna say. I should have asked Banjon first. But what a surprise it’ll be when fairies start coming back and sprucing up the landscape, eh?”
“Well. How do you know they’re gonna do that, when they’re just sky fairies, and they probably don’t trust you yet enough to move right in?”
“Bah! You always think my ideas are dumb. But you’ll see. Just look how successful my last invention was—” he pulled out the claw he’d shot up earlier. It looked like a spiky gun with fingers attached to a harness. “It’s perfectly functional. Just like this plan of mine is.”
“Hmph. Well just don’t expect me to give you any help.”
“Don’t expect me to come begging for any,” Krugan said, and they departed.
~**~
“Awe, come on, please? I seriously need a hand or two—really, it’s kinda important!”
“Rrrr, why couldn’t you have asked me earlier?” it was midnight. Romnik was looking out the window of his bedroom, down at his brother, who had indeed come begging for help. “I want to go to sleep. Everyone else in the village is asleep. Even my wife is asleep. Why can’t I be asleep?” He turned his head and stared enviously at her—flopped over and snoring like a bear.
“Right…sorry about that. But here’s the thing: I’m looking for pearls, right? But twenty pearls is a hard job, and at night too, all alone in the bay without any help! Not to mention, I’m horrible at finding things.”
“No kidding? Well you know what I’m not so good at? Saying no. I’ll help you a little, you sad little mooch. But next time, pick a more reasonable hour.”
“Thanks bro, this means a lot!”
“Just get your butt in the water.” Romnik pulled off his shirt and dove right out of his window, into the mouth of the river Krugan was bobbing in, and together they swam into the bay.


...I'll post the rest soon:eek:
 
I remember you; welcome back!

Your story awoke a childhood memory. The glass throne with flowers embedded in it reminded me of a kind of box my parents had, made of some glass-like transparent plastic, with small objects embedded in the plastic.
 
Daisyfrost, I don't have time to read your story right now, but might I suggest?

The way never to be forgotten is to be simply UNFORGETTABLE. Work hard at your craft and leave a lasting impression.

Have a blessed day!
 
I remember you! The story looks pretty interesting. I like the "fairy charmer" bit. I thought that was funny. But I particularly like the bit of Krugan coming back and begging for help. I wasn't expecting that. Also he was brother's with Remnik, something that was also unexpected. So that's like a double shock right there.
 
Daisyfrost, I don't have time to read your story right now, but might I suggest?

The way never to be forgotten is to be simply UNFORGETTABLE. Work hard at your craft and leave a lasting impression.

Have a blessed day!

thanks EveningStar, that's pretty good advice!:)

oh, goodie, the rest of you like it? I'll post the 2nd half now:D:D

Up in the sky, Alexia was in a flurry. She’d sent out spies after Krugan left to see what the humans might want or need for a gift, because frankly, she didn’t know what to use. The treasures of her kingdom were almost all plant-based! Their currency was small wood-carved charms, her throne was irreplaceable and too valuable, and their livestock were bumblebees and birds and mice and spiders. Itv
She felt hopeless, wandering through her kingdom or floating around the clouds. She called her friend Finli over to council her, close to the end of the day--that same funny little fairy man who’d told her that the humans had come in the first place, looking so flustered.
“You’ve been promoted to the Queen’s royal adviser,” She said drably, sighing and leaning her back against his shoulder. “Now tell me what to do.”
“Oh, uh…thank you for the honor, your Highness, but I believe a royal adviser does not tell the queen what to do—he, as his title reveals, advises her.”
“Yes, fine, what should I do?” Alexia asked him.
“Krugan is an inventor. Give him a rope of spider silk.” Alexia turned around and stared at him. It was the most straight-forward thing Finli had ever told her—and it was, for once, smart! What were the odds that something so simple and intelligent could tumble out of his little brain?
“That is an excellent idea! I should have promoted you earlier,” She said, and immediately yanked his arm and flew off.
“Where are we going?” he gasped, trying to keep up with her youthful speed.
“To the spiders of Stormweb,” she grinned, “To get some spider-silk rope.”
“I don’t want to go to Stormweb!” he shoved off her arm and stopped to catch his breath.
“You’re coming. I order you,” Alexia said. “And what kind of adviser are you, giving me advice that you wouldn’t use yourself? And shoving me around like that? How disgraceful! Come along, Finli.”
~**~
“This better work,” Romnik grunted. He held on to his brother’s waist, and closed his eyes. “And it better be quick!”
“Yes, both,” Krugan said cheerfully. “No wind at all. Today is perfect for it.”
“You did adjust this thing to accommodate the extra weight, didn’t you?”
“No need to. With the strength the machine has already, it could probably pull up an elephant.” Krugan aimed very carefully. He shot his claw, and waited for the rush of being yanked off the ground. As soon as Romnik heard him shoot he squeezed tighter, till Krugan yelled that he was suffocating him. The rope tightened, and in the most bizarre and abrupt fashion, they popped off the safety of the grass and flew into the sky. Romnik made all kinds of groaning noised to block out the sound of the air whooshing by, and the feeling of being totally out of control with the slight possibility of death. Soon his groan turned into a yell, then kind of a scream when he made the mistake of briefly opening one eye. Krugan was crying out, “Woohoooooo!!!!”
And then they slowed down. They stopped. Krugan said, “Whew. We made it. Now let go so I can get off and pull you up.” Romnik managed to do that, and when he was safely on the island, he crawled away from the edge and looked around. Already, some fairies had seen the commotion and were gathering around. They hid behind the leaves of a tree, and every so often, Romnik saw one of them peek out its strange impish face.
~**~
Abundant multitudes of white mist surged around the queen. She passed through the cloud only to disappear into another one; but she was almost there. She could tell by the dark island off in the distance. It was barely visible behind the webs going back and forth over every dent and corner—the webs that the spiders had made!
“Oh goodness. We’re here, aren’t we?” Finli asked.
“Yes. And thank goodness—I was getting exhausted!”
“You were getting exhausted?”
“Hush,” Alexia said. “You must act dignified now.” She pulled a mirror out of a purse hanging low on her hips. “Hold this.” She straightened up her hair and put on her crown. Then she put the mirror back and led the little fairy-man closer and closer to the island, slowly now. They approached a tall fairy who watched over the place. He hovered over one web or another, dumping insects on them.
“Sir,” Alexia said. He was startled by the sound of her voice and flipped around.
“Oh, hello, your ladyship.” He bowed to her. “It’s Queen Alexia of the Fleetwind islands, correct? Well what can I do for you?”
“Out of my share of the webs,” she said to him, “I want a ten-foot long, half-inch thick rope of spider’s silk. As soon as possible, please—and someone or something to carry it back.”
“Well…I have an African vulture for rent, but he’s awfully expensive! Not to mention the boys who’ll have to steer it along & bring it back. Are you sure you want such a large rope?” He looked at her inquisitively in the eye. She smiled back.
One Hour Later
“See, it’s not so bad!” Krugan said, spreading his arms wide. “I mean, look at this place—it’s a regular paradise. Hey, there’s the fairy-queen!”
“You sound like my six-year-old daughter,” Romnik said gruffly. He stood up, brushed himself off, and stood silently next to his brother to watch and see what would really happen. The queen did come; she was dressed in a long pink gown that trailed down beneath her and looked as light as air. A garland ‘round her head, a scroll in her hand, and a parade of fairies behind her carrying a chest—this is how she came to them.
“Welcome back, Krugan.” She handed him the scroll she was holding, and it grew in his hands until it was big enough to read easily. Aloud, he dictated:
“Let us, the sky-fairy kingdom of Fleetwind and the humans of the Pearl Bay, become allies. And if either side of this promise is broken, then the gifts which each side have exchanged will be snatched out of the kingdom and the criminal(s) must be put in chains; also, the kingdoms will again be separated. Now let us live peaceably together forevermore or until a civilized agreement to no longer stand as allies, is made. And let us assist each other in battle or whatever else trifles come our way, by the laws of love and friendship.”
“We both sign at the bottom,” Alexia said. One of her servants brought a quill pen as tall as himself, and with some difficulty, Alexia signed her name at the bottom. Then she handed it to Krugan.
“Well, here it goes,” he said.
“Oh and by the way, you tricky human, we know that’s really your brother over there and that you didn’t bring the mayor.” The young queen winked at his bewildered face, and Romnik gave him a dirty look.
“Uh…”
“It’s okay. Go on, sign it. This could be the beginning of a very interesting relationship you know, my world and yours!” Krugan looked unsure now. His hand was hesitant. Alexia shook her head, rolling her eyes and smiling at him—she flew up to his cheek and kissed it. Backing off, she said, “Your choice.”
In another moment, he signed his name on the bottom of the page. He put an extra flourish for good measure, right under Alexia’s delicate signature. The fairies cheered and applauded, even the queen, and in a minute she said, “Come! We must exchange gifts now!”
~**~
After a celebration party that lasted far past sunset, the two brothers were on their way back home. Romnik was strapped up to Krugan again, and this time, he was blindfolded. They floated safely down right in front of Krugan’s house. They took off their parachute, and before Romnik went home, they lay on the grass and stared up at the stars and the fairies’ after party.
“See, I told you,” Krugan said. He had on a satisfied smile. “The fairies dig me.”
“Uh-huh, especially the queen.”
“Oh, I dunno. I think she was just being polite.”
“She never let you out of her sight the whole evening,” Romnik said.
“Not so hard when I’m twenty times taller than her.”
“Riiiiiiiiiight. And you never let her out of your sight all evening.”
“Mmm. Gee, I’m tired. Let’s go to bed.” He hopped up and walked towards his house. “G’night, bro!”
“Goodnight, dude who crushes on a fairy!” He yelled sarcastically.
“She’s three and a half inches tall, genius,” Krugan laughed, and his door shut behind him.
~**~
Alexia flopped on her bed. It had been a long, long day, and she was tired—the mattress stretched far beyond her feet. She rolled on her back and with one command, the ceiling parted to reveal the brilliant summer night sky.
“Aaaaah,” she sighed. “What a day. And my parents thought I couldn’t handle this island!” She laughed, but her laughter was stopped short. “Oh, gosh, my parents. They’re coming to visit soon, and they don’t know anything about this!” She lay silent for a moment. “Oh, I’ll worry about that later.” She smiled and spread her legs over the bed’s soft surface. “Oh, gosh, they’ll want to meet Krugan.” Her eyes widened again. “Oh, come on, I’ll worry about that later!” She stuffed her head under a pillow.
One eye peeked out.
“He, hehehe.”
 
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