Back to the Future how they met

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Mrs Gil-Galad Took

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I am addicted to back to the Future and I love the main characters Marty McFly and Doc Emmett Brown. I am going to write a fanfiction about the story. I will make a kinda prologue how they met :D I hope you will enjoy it!
Because the story played in the 80's I will add more 80 things in it.


CHAPTER 1
Marty mcFly was just a boy like all other boys or wasn't he? It was clear he always was a kinda daredevil and especially on his rollerskates.
Marty came back walking in: "Mom! Dad! I have seen something cool! This is so cool dad! I want it so badly.And I will work for it! I will wash your car!" George mcFly: "What is it you want Marty?" Marty his head turned a bit red. "Well on tv I saw those cool pair of rollerskates and....' But he was interrupted by his mom Lorraine. "Rollerskates?! You mean those aweful shoes with wheels on it? I don't want you to have it Marty. You can break your neck!"
Marty:"But mom..." Lorraine turned her head towards her son and shouted:"I want to hear NO MORE. You won't get them". Marty said: 'Alright mom and then he walked to his dad. "They are so cool Dad! I promise I will be careful with it". George sighed "Marty...the last time you wanted to have a Darth Vader mask and you said you would be careful with it too." "I was, Dad! Marty said. I was careful with it". Lorraine from the other side of the room: "Till you took your bicycle and was cycling around with that thing on your head. Old Miss turner felt of her bicycle when she saw you. The poor lady thought you were an alien coming from mars". "But that was not my fault mom, Marty said. I didn't know the old Miss Turner was afraid since she saw Invaders from mars!" George got tired of his son and gave up. "Alright Marty, here you go. Buy those things! He got his wallet. How much do you wanna have?" He handled over 50 dollars.
"50 Dollars Dad". George and Lorraine both were shocked. "50 Dollars?!" But Marty was quick and grabbed the money out of his father's hand. "Thanks dad! I promise I will be careful with them!" Marty ran out ofn the Door and almost bumped intop Linda, his sister. "Hey dude! Linda shouted. Don't you have eyes?" "Sorry Lin, no I don't have eyes, that's why I have to put on that darth vader mask". Marty ran to the street. Linda watched her brother running.
 
Chapter 2:
Marty walked to the local Toy store: Kids Paradise which he entered and looked around. It was 1980 and he was already 12 years old but still Marty looked around like he was a little kid. When he saw a cowboyhead he took it and putted it on his head. Marty also grabbed some toy guns and walked to the mirror. "Now I am Clint Eastwood and I will kill you" Since he had seen the movie A fistful of dollars, Marty was a fan of Clint Eastwood. Marty didn't know how long he played Clint Eastwood in front of the mirror but then he heard a voice behind him: "Are you continuing to play here or are you going to buy something serious?" The seller of the store didn't look too friendly. But when Marty bought the rollerskates, it changed. Marty immidiatly putted them on and he slowly tried them out but when he discovered how to go more quick he went faster and faster. Of course it went wrong. He didn't know how to stop speeding and he yelled at the people: "watch out! Out of the way!!" Marty crashed into the garden of Mister Strickland. And Marty knew who Mr Strickland was, so before he would get after him, marty stood up and tried to ride again on those rollerskates. "Okay Marty mcFly....you can do it! Show them you can do it!" "Marty continued when he suddenly was cut off by Douglas Needles who was also standing on Rollerskates. "What do I see? Do you have rollerskates too mcFly? Where did you get those? Marty snapped: "It is none of your business how I go them, Needles. And yes, they are mine". Doug started to laugh sarcastically. "Do you wanna race against me McFly? Or are you a coward? "
Marty flipped. "Nobody calls me a coward" he said. The two were standing before the traffic light waiting till the light turned green. Doug was faster than Marty and Marty tried to catch up with him. It worked in the beginning and Marty passed Needles. "Bye bye Needles!!! You and your big mouth, you idiot!" But then Marty saw the old lady too late and crashed into her. They felt on the ground and the ol Lady screamed at him and was very angry. Marty got up and helped the old lady but she didn't appreciate his help. Suddenly he was grabbed by his arm by Mr Strickland who already knew he was the one destroying his garden before. "McFly.....you -you-you fool!!! Look what you've done! Your wreckless behavior will get you into trouble one day and if I will get you.....you better watched out!! Now, go home before I call those stupid parents of yours!"
 
Hey, this is cool Ness! (mind if I call you that?) You have to be really smart to write a story about time! I made a recording where people had a time machine and they were playing with time...it got pretty complicated, but I pulled it off.
 
Of course you can call me Ness :D No objections :D Awww.....I would have loved to hear it. I like the BTTF movies so much and I thouht it would be great to have a kinda prequel.
 
Mrs Gil-Galad Took said:
Chapter 2:
Marty walked to the local Toy store: Kids Paradise which he entered and looked around. It was 1980 and he was already 12 years old but still Marty looked around like he was a little kid. When he saw a cowboyhead he took it and putted it on his head. Marty also grabbed some toy guns and walked to the mirror. "Now I am Clint Eastwood and I will kill you" Since he had seen the movie A fistful of dollars, Marty was a fan of Clint Eastwood. Marty didn't know how long he played Clint Eastwood in front of the mirror but then he heard a voice behind him: "Are you continuing to play here or are you going to buy something serious?" The seller of the store didn't look too friendly. But when Marty bought the rollerskates, it changed. Marty immidiatly putted them on and he slowly tried them out but when he discovered how to go more quick he went faster and faster. Of course it went wrong. He didn't know how to stop speeding and he yelled at the people: "watch out! Out of the way!!" Marty crashed into the garden of Mister Strickland. And Marty knew who Mr Strickland was, so before he would get after him, marty stood up and tried to ride again on those rollerskates. "Okay Marty mcFly....you can do it! Show them you can do it!" "Marty continued when he suddenly was cut off by Douglas Needles who was also standing on Rollerskates. "What do I see? Do you have rollerskates too mcFly? Where did you get those? Marty snapped: "It is none of your business how I go them, Needles. And yes, they are mine". Doug started to laugh sarcastically. "Do you wanna race against me McFly? Or are you a coward? "
Marty flipped. "Nobody calls me a coward" he said. The two were standing before the traffic light waiting till the light turned green. Doug was faster than Marty and Marty tried to catch up with him. It worked in the beginning and Marty passed Needles. "Bye bye Needles!!! You and your big mouth, you idiot!" But then Marty saw the old lady too late and crashed into her. They felt on the ground and the ol Lady screamed at him and was very angry. Marty got up and helped the old lady but she didn't appreciate his help. Suddenly he was grabbed by his arm by Mr Strickland who already knew he was the one destroying his garden before. "McFly.....you -you-you fool!!! Look what you've done! Your wreckless behavior will get you into trouble one day and if I will get you.....you better watched out!! Now, go home before I call those stupid parents of yours!"
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Lol i love it vanessa love how you bought needles and strickland in ther I was waiting for one of marty's wisecracks and waiting on him to clal Marty a slacker Love it Vanessa great job
 
Thanks both :D I never knew it was so much fun to write about BTTF ;)

CHAPTER 3

Marty went home. Not straight home, because he was irritated by Doug. "One day I will get this Needles guy and then he won't ever call me a slacker again" From his early years, marty always flipped when someone called 'Slacker" or "Coward". Marty his granddad from his mother's side always called him a reckless daredevil because Marty wanted to do everything. From crossing with his bike, till joyriding with his dad's car without permission. "I don't know why you are so soft to that Kid Lorraine, his granddad often said. He needs to be treatened way harder than you are doing now". Lorraine looked at her dad and said: "Dad, whatever I do, Marty is always doing whatever he wants. You can't stop him. It must be a part of our family, because I can''t imagine George ever doing things like that". Her dad nodded his head. "There you have a great point. George is more ehm, more like...ehm..well like George". They watched at George mcFly who was writing papers. "What is he doing?" Granddad asked. Lorraine replied: "Writing papers for Biff". "Biff Tannen?! George must be crazy.............my goodness Lorraine! What kinda family do you have?!" And Granddad grabbed his coat and left. Lorraine knew how her father was. He wanted people more straight and not like George or Marty. And when Lorraine saw her daughter Linda and her son Dave studying and arguying about the science of Newton, she flipped. "What a family I have! Oh boy.....look at him! george is doing Biff's work! He did back then and he still does today and my children are always way too serious except for Marty, he is NEVER serious!" She got almost a heartattack when she saw Marty his stuff laying in the hall. "My god...MARTY!!!!!! Get your dirty clothes off my floor and don't make this hall look like a library where the books are allowed to be thrown at the floor!!" George looked up. "Marty is not here Lorraine, he is buying rollerskates, remember?" Dave and Linda held their hands on their ears when they heard there mother yell : "MARTYYYYYY!!! If you don't get home in a minute.....you will regret it!" "Sure, Dave said. Marty will listen...as usual".
Marty was riding on his rollerskates. But more slow this time. He was pissed off because of Doug. "Tannen, Needles...whatelse can I expect? Oh man....what a day! And that jerk of a Strickland...he always thinks he is in charge everywhere. Me a slacker? HA! Not me".
 
Thanks Mary ;) More is to come about them all :D
CHAPTER 4

In a meantime a bit further away, a very excentric looking figure was walking to the supermarket to do his errands. The man was in his late 50's and he was having a hairstyle which would remind people of Albert Einstein. "Come on Einstein, we must get home in time". He said to his dog. Some people greeted him by nodding their heads and some where laughing at him. The man didn't care about it. He was too busy with so many other things. Why should he care about what people thought about him? His name was Emmett Brown. A scientist who spent his life about making timemachines. Doc brown went inside his home and closed the door. "Now you must eat, Doc Brown said. I think I must make a machine to feed you. Because this is the thirth time you don't get your dinner in time, einstein". Doc brown was called excentric and weird. Many people thought he was the world's most strangest person. Doc Brown was obsessed with time. He wanted to make a machine which would bring him back in time. How many years he had spent about making the timemachine, nobody in his neighbourhood knew and most people didn't even know he was working on it. Books, machines, tools, videotapes, papers and articles, everything he could find he would use and the home of Doc Brown was a mess. As a scientist Doc was never married. He didn't have kids either. He talked with nobody and he was trying to get people out of the way. "Because Einstein, if we will ever create the Timemachine, we don't want it to fall in the wrong hands, don't we?" Doc laughed and feeded his dog.
Then he headed off to his garage where he would continue working on his Timemachine. "Now I must try to make this thing work and try it, he said while pulling off a blanket of a machine. Come on sweetheart, make it work for me!" Doc putted fuel in a large container aside a giant Tank and he was looking at a kinda time generator. Then he pressed a large button and the tank began to make noise. More noise....steam was coming. More steam. then a large sound and the lid was thrown up in the air. The steam looked more and more like a large clou. "Einstein!!! It works! It works!" He yelled, but then a large noise and a huge blow! Doc was thrown a few feet backward and Einstein had already escaped from the garage.Danggggg!! "That bloody thing didn't work! Why can't I get it done? What am I doing wrong???????" Hopelessly the Doc grabbed the remains of his Tank. He was lucky not to be hurt or killed at the huge blow. "This is not going to get me! I will not let this getting me! I will succeed and one day I will be the inventor of the timemachine!!! Travel with the speed of light and then you can go back in time. Now....I have the fuel, but this thing is working against me".
Marty was outside on his rollerskates when he heard the blow. he looked up and saw a giant cloud of steam in the air. "What happened? He asked a guy who also watched the same cloud. Did the Russians drop a bomb?" The guy shook his head. "never mind, it is just that crazy old man. Working on his timemachine. " Marty asked: "Timemachine?" the guy laughed sarcastically. "Yeah, I wonder why they haven't locked up that stupid scientist". The guy walked on. Marty looked at the cloud again and whispered: "Timemachine? Scientist? And I thought we were the weird ones here". Then he went faster on his rollerskates and went home.
 
Okay...I give some spoilers here:
The original BTTF ytrilogy is about a boy marty and a Doc (Emmett Brown) Doc invent a timemachine by usin a car. A Delorean. When Doc shows Marty the timemachine, he got attacked by libians. marty had to escape and jumped in the car. Doc had accidentally put the timegenerator back to november 1955 when he first got the idea of building a timemachine. Marty his parents would meet the same year. When you ride faster than 90 m/ph, the Delorean goes back to the selected time. So Marty landed in 1955 and by accident disturb the meeting of his parents. His future mom falls in love with him instead of his dad. Marty must make sure to put this straight otherwise he and his siblings wouldn't even be born. He asked the help of the 1955 Doc emmett brown who is 35 during that time. The movies are so hilarious :D
And now I am writing a prequel how Marty and Doc Brown met.
 
Mrs Gil-Galad Took said:
Thanks Mary ;) More is to come about them all :D
CHAPTER 4

In a meantime a bit further away, a very excentric looking figure was walking to the supermarket to do his errands. The man was in his late 50's and he was having a hairstyle which would remind people of Albert Einstein. "Come on Einstein, we must get home in time". He said to his dog. Some people greeted him by nodding their heads and some where laughing at him. The man didn't care about it. He was too busy with so many other things. Why should he care about what people thought about him? His name was Emmett Brown. A scientist who spent his life about making timemachines. Doc brown went inside his home and closed the door. "Now you must eat, Doc Brown said. I think I must make a machine to feed you. Because this is the thirth time you don't get your dinner in time, einstein". Doc brown was called excentric and weird. Many people thought he was the world's most strangest person. Doc Brown was obsessed with time. He wanted to make a machine which would bring him back in time. How many years he had spent about making the timemachine, nobody in his neighbourhood knew and most people didn't even know he was working on it. Books, machines, tools, videotapes, papers and articles, everything he could find he would use and the home of Doc Brown was a mess. As a scientist Doc was never married. He didn't have kids either. He talked with nobody and he was trying to get people out of the way. "Because Einstein, if we will ever create the Timemachine, we don't want it to fall in the wrong hands, don't we?" Doc laughed and feeded his dog.
Then he headed off to his garage where he would continue working on his Timemachine. "Now I must try to make this thing work and try it, he said while pulling off a blanket of a machine. Come on sweetheart, make it work for me!" Doc putted fuel in a large container aside a giant Tank and he was looking at a kinda time generator. Then he pressed a large button and the tank began to make noise. More noise....steam was coming. More steam. then a large sound and the lid was thrown up in the air. The steam looked more and more like a large clou. "Einstein!!! It works! It works!" He yelled, but then a large noise and a huge blow! Doc was thrown a few feet backward and Einstein had already escaped from the garage.Danggggg!! "That bloody thing didn't work! Why can't I get it done? What am I doing wrong???????" Hopelessly the Doc grabbed the remains of his Tank. He was lucky not to be hurt or killed at the huge blow. "This is not going to get me! I will not let this getting me! I will succeed and one day I will be the inventor of the timemachine!!! Travel with the speed of light and then you can go back in time. Now....I have the fuel, but this thing is working against me".
Marty was outside on his rollerskates when he heard the blow. he looked up and saw a giant cloud of steam in the air. "What happened? He asked a guy who also watched the same cloud. Did the Russians drop a bomb?" The guy shook his head. "never mind, it is just that crazy old man. Working on his timemachine. " Marty asked: "Timemachine?" the guy laughed sarcastically. "Yeah, I wonder why they haven't locked up that stupid scientist". The guy walked on. Marty looked at the cloud again and whispered: "Timemachine? Scientist? And I thought we were the weird ones here". Then he went faster on his rollerskates and went home.
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Yout captured doc well here Vanessa I Love it when it blew up and thru him backwards did the russions drop a bomb lol love it
 
Chapter 5:

Marty went inside his house. His parents were sitting at the Table and Marty saw another figure standing next to his father. "Oh no.........not that Biff Tannen again", Marty thought and he wanted to turn around and go outside again. "McFly, I need those papers now. Can you get it done for me? If I don't get them tonight, I will get in trouble. And when I am in trouble, I get real angry and you don't want that to happen, don't you George?" Biff said in such way Marty wanted to yell at him. "N-n-no Biff, George replied. I have them almost done. Just one moment". "I am going home and will be back later to pick them up McFly. You better be done with it....BUTTHEAD!" Biff said and he walked away. He passed Marty in the hall and he looked at him. "What are you looking, you idiot?" Then he walked on. Marty went in the livingroom and said: "Dad, I can't understand why you let this ...this Jerk still get on you. If I were you, I would have kicked him at his butt." Lorraine looked at her son : "Marty, wash your mouth and don't make your father nervous. AND PUT THOSE ROLLERSKATES OFF YOUR FEET WHEN YOU COME INSIDE!" Mart looked at his rollerskates and the nice blue/white/reddish colors were more brown/black and green because of the dirt. "Owww Marty.....Lorraine said again. I thought your dad gave you permission to buy them, but are those new ones?" Marty said: "yes they are mom". Lorraine said: "Really? Theyu look so old. What have you done with it? You bought old ones and used the money your dad gave you?" "No mom, Marty said. I bought new ones at Kids Paradise and I put them on and they were so cool but then this Needles guy was coming after me and made me angry". Marty didn't say he felt in the yard of Mister Strickland before he met Doug Needles. Lorraine flipped again. "Why do you always have to fight with this Needles jerk?! Can't you behave normal for one time?! For goodness sake, it looks like my whole family is completely insane! Look at your dad, he is doing nothing than writing papers for this Biff Tannen, your brother and sister are talking about nothing than Newton whoever he was..." Marty interrupted. "He was a scientist mom. He discovered the law of .but then Lorraine interrupted him. "I don't care who he was! I just want to have a normal family! Not a couple of idiots! And why do you always want to follow the latest designs? Why do you need hose rollerskates?" marty replied: "They are faster, and they are cool and it is very good for your health too mom. I think you should buy a pair too". Marty looked at his mom and she looked at him. Marty's mother was not thin and she felt what her son was going to say: "So you think I should have a pair too?" "Yes mom, Marty said. You could use them. It will improve your health a lot when you would go outside a couple of hours a day. You would loose some weight". But then Marty saw the look on his mother's face. He knew he had to leave within a few seconds. He turned around and went outside as fast as he could. When he was outside the frontyard his mother opened the door and yelled: " I will get you Marty! If you are not home before 9 pm you wish you were never born!" Marty left on his rollerskates and he smiled a bit forced to other people who passed by. "My mom makes jokes a lot". "Yeah sure, an older man said. "It was a big joke when you were born mcFly. The whole city of High Valley changed that day".
Maryty recognized him. It was Mister Sunny. An old man who once runned a Grocery store. Lorraine once had to watch on the store while it was closed for a few minutes. During that time, Marty joined his mother and they never knew how he did it, but when he went to the kitchen to drink something, he managed to get the whole place under water. It was only one glass of water he took, but the waterpipe broke. "Oh boy, Marty whispered. The guy still hates me for that".
 
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