Choke It Down

Rache_san

Rache_san

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Song I wrote a few minutes ago about my eldest brother, Jason... thoughts welcome...



So you used to not believe
And now you say things are
Different
Yet you still have problems
Still have problems
With it all

(used to not believe
Things are different
Still have problems
With God)

Why don't you just make up your mind
Make up your mind
And choose

Don't just say - it's all okay, all okay
Give it all away
Or stay the same
Just choke down the fear
Choke it down
Or *drawn out*
Stay the same

You're so dear to me
I wish you'd change
It's not too hard
Not so hard
That you can't live anymore
The truth about it is
You'd feel alive (for the first time)

Why don't you just make up your mind
Make up your mind
And choose

Don't just say - it's all okay, all okay
Give it all away
Or stay the same
Just choke down the fear
Choke it down
Or *drawn out*
Stay the same

Don't just think - it's all okay, all okay
You gotta give it all away
Or stay the same
Just choke it down
Or stay the same
 
Thanks so much! Yes, I do. Most of my friends and family love my voice... I was planning on writing a piano piece for this song soon, and I have the tune down in my head for when my brother gets me his guitar. <3
 
Awesome! You should really become a singer then! You could do what some people do and start by putting videos/recordings of yourself singing on myspace and go from there.
 
Aw man, thanks so much. It's always been my dream to be a musician, but I was starting to give up on myself.... so, thanks. You've made me feel like it's possible again xD
 
I really like it and I agree with Liz! Don't give up! I really like writing and I was giving up on myself when my 6th grade teacher made me enter a contest. At first I wasn't going to enter but on the day the entries were due, I came up with something and won! I was able to read my story on the radio and our principal made me read it at an assembly at our school. :D:rolleyes:
 
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