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hey, i was searching toy story stuff, and look what i found.
someone wrote this sotry, but he's not quite sure if he should send it to disney and pixar, he doesn't sound very confident at all. this is a shorter version of the story, it will be extended to be made into a movie if he decides yes. It's written as a short story.
someone wrote this sotry, but he's not quite sure if he should send it to disney and pixar, he doesn't sound very confident at all. this is a shorter version of the story, it will be extended to be made into a movie if he decides yes. It's written as a short story.
I would say to him "go for it" it's an awesome story in my opinion. he wants to do it for himself, for fun.“97, 98, 99, 100! Ready or not! Here I come!” Turquoise straightened up, opened his eyes and looked around. He could hear the sounds of silent chuckles and whispers from around the room. The wind was billowing through the window and Turquoise could smell the sweet scent of breeze-and a hint of crayons! He bounced making his way up to the windowsill, jumping from scattered books, to chair, to desk. “Mm! Is it just me, or does the air today smell extraordinarily sweet.” He mused. He took a great leap from the lamp on the desk top to the windowsill and slid behind the curtains just above. “Found you!” He exclaimed. “Aww! And I thought this would be the perfect place to hide!” Whined Bree in her breezy voice. “ No breeze can ever smell as sweet as you my icing sugar,” Said Turquoise, nudging her, “ Come on, Let’s go sneak out the others.”
So together they went and searched out the others. After they were done the game, some decided to play another and others just played around like they always did: talking, joking around. Shockey was standing next to the bowl of Jell-O on the night table saying :” Hey guys! Dude! I match with the Jell-O! Isn’t that totally awesome or what?! Hey, Tangerine, do you know what my favorite color that starts with the letter “A” is? “Apple?” Guessed Tangerine in a confused and somewhat frightened voice. “No! Arange! Haha! Get it…’cause…you know,” He said noticing the look of disdain and confusion on his companion’s face, “You’re orange and…and…yeah, so you’re my favorite color, see?” “Oh.” Said Tangerine. After a moment or so, though it could have been an era, She decided to save him from anymore awkwardness and said “You know, I find you quite electrifying.” “Woah! Jee Tang thanks!” And then he added so quickly that the words seem to stumble upon each other, “I love you.” And then they went back to awkwardness.
The mood all around was joyous and fun. All the crayons were laughing and playing, joking and teasing. “Charcoal! Charcoal! Hey has anyone seen Charcoal?” Said Lilac aloud. “I’m right here!” came a young innocent voice. Charcoal was pushing his way out of the crowd. He was a sweet, happy kid. Always in a cheery mood, making his surroundings glow with chuckles wherever he went. “Quick child! You’ve got to hide!” “Why?” questioned Charcoal. The was grave anxiety and desperation in Lilac’s face. Everyone fell silent and was gathered around curiously to see what the commotion was about. “It’s Calvin. He needs you Charcoal, the whole of you. He’s going to finish you off. You’re too young!” “now, now, Lilac,” said Wood, “tell us what he said exactly. That’s it. Breathe.” After a moment, Lilac proceeded. “Calvin-He has this HUGE- I saw it- huge bat which he needs to color. And you all know what color they are.” Sudden realization hit everyone, and by this time everyone was paying dear attention to Lilac. The mood in the vicinity went from joyous, to confuse, to sadness and worrisome. “That can’t be. No!” Said M’Hogany, and she rushed to Charcoal’s side and. “But, but…I don’t want to leave now! I mean, not this fast, I want to keep a steady pace with my family!”
Indigo said “Wait a minute guys. Let’s make some sense here. Calvin’s always treasured us. He wouldn’t do this!” Lilac broke in “I was there! I heard him say so! Now if we don’t move quickly it’ll be too late!” Lilac was a senior: Meaning she was from an older box and half her family and friends were done. This was to be expected. The rest of her box was the same age as her. Crayons usually had a life span of about 2-8 months, but Lilac’s family hadn’t been used for over two years, neglected, you could say. They were given down to Calvin, who treasured them and kept them safe, not using them. This was a problem, in the case of Grey, a box member of Lilac’s, because half of them were gone and this meant that since Calvin scarcely used them, they would never go, at least not anytime soon. And Grey’s lover, Noir, also a black crayon, was one of the ones that left early.
“What does it mater? Eh?” sneered Grey to poor Charcoal, “You’re going to be gone, Gone to the great big box up there, while we’re going to be stuck down here for Crayon knows how long!” “But I don’t want to go!” Charcoal cried, moist appearing on his surface. “I want to stay with my family!”
“Back off Grey.” Indigo growled. “Yeah, Grey! Why are you always so mean to everyone?!” Said Bree. A while passed like that, with pacing up and down the room and panic. Soon, all came to the conclusion that the only thing to do was send Charcoal away. They couldn’t hide Charcoal anywhere in this house. It was way too neat and tidy Charcoal noted. “and besides,” he said “I’d have to spend a long time bouncing from corner to corner every time Calvin would come too close to my hiding place.” And he did not want anyone to always be on the edge for him, thinking whether he got caught or not, and helping him, always in panic. He did not want to ruin the joyous mood that was there everyday, though he didn’t tell these factors to the others. Even though it was an potion, it was a risky one, and very unsettling.
“You selfish little twit,” glowered Grey to Charcoal. “Do you have any idea what Calvin will do once he’s come to conclusion you’re missing? He going to go out and fetch himself another pack. He doesn’t care. It’s like buying shoes for him! And then the chances that my box has ever had of leaving will be done!” “Oh, look who’s being selfish now.” Sneered Turquoise. Grey ignored this and went on “And then that family’s “Charcoal” Will be gone instead of you! What about him? Eh? You’re a total waste Charcoal.” The sense of it all hit Charcoal like a brick and he said “I’m not going to let that happen. Nothing like that will happen because of me.” After much arguing, and attempts at fights from Indigo to Grey, the all absorbed the colors of the truth.
That was it. It was goodbyes. Everyone was silent, sniffing barely able to say goodbye. They heard a noise from behind, assuming that Calvin was on his way up the stairs, and Charcoal was ready, this was it. They all fell to the ground, but the voice that spoke was speaking to them. They all opened their eyes and got up again. There standing before them was another Charcoal. He wasn’t a new one , he was an older one, this could be seen by his state: wrapper torn from the top, and rounded head. “I have watched, for many years. How beautiful it all is, when you’re with your box. I’ve always been afraid to leave, but I have nothing left here, everyone I ever had has left up there to a color wonder world. And eternal world. I’ve watched for long enough, and I’ve realized, how achingly I wish to leave. Dear boy,” He gestured to Charcoal, “I will take up your place today, for this place is not yours to start off with. It is mine.” “But who are you?” as ked Tangerine. “I am Raven Ash. The last of my fellows left me about three years ago. “ “And that’s where we cam in” said Grey. “Yes, indeed.” “I’ve seen you before, once I think just once, when I was looking out of the widow, I saw your reflection. “ Said Lilac. “I made a mistake, a unforgivable mistake. If I had shown up the last time this was happening, you fellows,” he gestured to Lilac, Indigo, grey and the others of that box, “would still have your Noir with you. My apologies to you Grey.” Grey could only give one hostile look towards Raven Ash, when they heard Calvin running up the stairs pretending to be an airplane.
Charcoal was out of site by now. Calvin ran back down the stairs with Raven Ash yelling “Mom! I found it!!” “Wow.” Said Beige, another oldie member, the only one up till now who ever could get along with Grey. “I’m so sorry, Grey.” “Hmm.” Was all Grey could manage. “He’s gone to the Great Big Box up there, or maybe the Sharpener, but hey, we’re here for you.” Said Lilac. “Yeah” Said Charcoal. Grey smiled, what a beautiful smile, something none of them had ever seen. Grey nudged Charcoal. “you’re alright kid.” They were all gathered there together in peace of sympathy and affection.
“97, 98, 99, 100! Ready or not! Here I come!” yelled Turquoise the next morning. He turned around and Bree was standing right behind him. “Haha! Found you!” Turquoise, this is the 19th game you’re playing today-alone.” Oh ok. They felt a breeze behind them form the windowsill and the sweet smell that emitted from Bree was extraordinary as always. “Hey! Tang! Over here!” Said Shockey. “Hello Shocks. How’s it going?” “It’s going tange-riffically! You?” “haha! I’m feeling electrically great.” Replied Tangerine. “You know, If I were a million colors, I would paint a color wonder world for you.” Said Shockey. “You are my color wonder world, Shocks. You are my color wonder world.”
Tell him to go for it.
