Dare The Person Below You To Make A Poem

Clara Pendragon the Just

Clara Pendragon the Just

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It goes like this. you'll make a poem, then say its theme and the title then the person below you should rate it and also make a poem of any theme.

1-poorest
10-highest
Here's an example:
Theme: Friendship Title: Another Day

Another day again my friend, Another time for us to spend
How delighted of me to see you again, I hope that I can vanish all your pain
This wonderful day I cherish and I'm thankful you're not snobbish
I will still love you my friend until another day ends

Another day again my love, be thankful to the dove
I would like to thank God, He never makes me sad
Oh, I have to say goodbye now I hope you'll not broke our vow
Until another day again my friend,Until another time for us to spend

-Queen of the Just aka Cris

That's it. Rate the poem.Then make yours.:D
 
I see myself alone and afraid, but You're at my side,
I can't see You, but it was to save my life You died,
How many years ago, but it still is true,
You said; 'I'm not gonna live without giving My life for you'

How many times I've told myself, You are right here,
Though often times I see nothing, my trust won't dissapear.
I have faith in You, that is all You asked to be,
But when I killed You, You drank the cup of God's vengence for me.
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I rate yours an 8! :)
 
Nice. 8 ;)

Theme: humor/food
Title: Dear beloved Pot Roast

My dear beloved pot roast,
I've been waiting for you all day
I sniffed your succulent aroma
as you cooked away

My stomach, how it rumbles
My mouth it waters so
My dear, beloved pot roast,
Why must you roast so slow?

The oven door clangs open and
I hear a shrill scream
I scurry down the stairs
to see what it could mean

My mother lies in a faint
upon the kitchen floor,
and smoke comes billowing
out of the oven door

In haste I throw on mittens
And yank your poor flesh out
You've been burnt to blackened crisp
RIP: my dear beloved pot roast


Lol...can anyone guess what i'm eating right now?
 
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