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This essay on The Red Badge of Courage is very important because it is worth at least a third of my English grade. I haven't finished it yet, but I will post the first 2 paragraphs now and the other three as a finish them. If you find errors or problems please mark them in another color and comment.
The Red Badge of Courage is a realistic book written by Stephen Crane. It gives an accurate unromantic description of war. This book gives examples of the typical kinds of soldiers that are in wars. It also doesn’t leave out death like many of the romantic novels do. The Red Bade of Courage shows how young soldiers going off to war change. Henry Fleming changes when he goes off to war. Henry goes through a fearful phase, a prideful phase, and eventually becomes a “man”.
Henry Fleming is bored of his life at home and he decides to join the Union army. He has been in the army for three months and has not gone into battle yet. He is becoming bored and afraid that if when the time comes for him to fight he might run. He asks some of his friends about running and Jim Conklin, the tall soldier, says he’s not worried about running. The loud soldier, Wilson, gets defensive about it and says he would never run. Wilson is afraid too, but he doesn’t want anyone to know. They go into battle a short while later. Wilson gives Henry a packet of letters and tells him that he thinks he will die. Henry starts off doing well, but then he sees someone run and he runs too. He realizes that he is alone. He is afraid that the others will laugh at him if he goes back so he keeps running. He finds a procession of wounded soldiers and walks with them. He is talking to the tattered soldier, who is severely injured, and the tattered soldier asks him where he is hurt. Henry runs away because he isn’t hurt and he is afraid that the soldier will be angry with him. After some running around and worrying about what everyone will think of him, Henry comes back to the procession of injured soldiers and he sees his friend Jim Conklin. Jim is mortally wounded. He falls over and dies not long after Henry comes up to him. Henry is frightened and runs away again. Henry sees some soldiers running and tries to stop one of them so he can ask what’s happening. A soldier hits him in the head with his rifle butt. A cheery soldier helps a very confused Henry back to his regiment. Wilson helps Henry because he is injured. Henry tells everyone that he was shot in the head. They believe him, but he is afraid that they might find out what really happened. Henry was very afraid that everyone might think he was a coward and laugh at him.
This essay on The Red Badge of Courage is very important because it is worth at least a third of my English grade. I haven't finished it yet, but I will post the first 2 paragraphs now and the other three as a finish them. If you find errors or problems please mark them in another color and comment.
The Red Badge of Courage is a realistic book written by Stephen Crane. It gives an accurate unromantic description of war. This book gives examples of the typical kinds of soldiers that are in wars. It also doesn’t leave out death like many of the romantic novels do. The Red Bade of Courage shows how young soldiers going off to war change. Henry Fleming changes when he goes off to war. Henry goes through a fearful phase, a prideful phase, and eventually becomes a “man”.
Henry Fleming is bored of his life at home and he decides to join the Union army. He has been in the army for three months and has not gone into battle yet. He is becoming bored and afraid that if when the time comes for him to fight he might run. He asks some of his friends about running and Jim Conklin, the tall soldier, says he’s not worried about running. The loud soldier, Wilson, gets defensive about it and says he would never run. Wilson is afraid too, but he doesn’t want anyone to know. They go into battle a short while later. Wilson gives Henry a packet of letters and tells him that he thinks he will die. Henry starts off doing well, but then he sees someone run and he runs too. He realizes that he is alone. He is afraid that the others will laugh at him if he goes back so he keeps running. He finds a procession of wounded soldiers and walks with them. He is talking to the tattered soldier, who is severely injured, and the tattered soldier asks him where he is hurt. Henry runs away because he isn’t hurt and he is afraid that the soldier will be angry with him. After some running around and worrying about what everyone will think of him, Henry comes back to the procession of injured soldiers and he sees his friend Jim Conklin. Jim is mortally wounded. He falls over and dies not long after Henry comes up to him. Henry is frightened and runs away again. Henry sees some soldiers running and tries to stop one of them so he can ask what’s happening. A soldier hits him in the head with his rifle butt. A cheery soldier helps a very confused Henry back to his regiment. Wilson helps Henry because he is injured. Henry tells everyone that he was shot in the head. They believe him, but he is afraid that they might find out what really happened. Henry was very afraid that everyone might think he was a coward and laugh at him.