I need your advice on this title

The White Stag

The White Stag

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Ok guys I really need your advice do you think Alluvia the name of this story I'am writing sounds good. It's got dragons and knights and battles in it and a horrid twist at the end. I will try and get the first chapter ready for everyone to read. But I just want to know if it sound interesting and would you be interested reading it. :confused:
 
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Sorry guys I didn't make it clear it's the name of the name on which three children accidently come across. It's a magical land filled with magical creatures.
 
WHat i do for titles is I find a very important line in the story...so like for the story Stop Running I wrote, Aslan and Susan's husband told her to stop running from the truth. It was in one sentence, but when people read the sentence they be likd 'oooooh, that's why its called that'. Like C.S lewis called the 1st book The Magicians nephew, now its about the Magicians nephew, but only one or two lines in the book actuallly say that. So I don't know what your story is about, but don't put basically what the book is about. So like in Stop Running...it was first called Susan's Return. But that wasn't catchy enough and practically told you what happens in two words! :eek:

Hope that helps!
 
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