My poetry

[Miss Tumnus]

I had one about Narnia, but i can't find it anymore...

I wrote this one when I was eleven years old and it won the poem contest on my school.

Child soldier
I see
a boy,
not older than me,
with a gun,
way to big.

In his eyes,
a line of people.
Maybe his brothers,
sisters,
his parents,
his best friend.

He hears
an order.
What else
can he do?

He seems
adult,
hard as a rock.
But deep inside
there's a little kid,
begging
for a childhood.

 

[Janino_Narniafan]

aww thats is a good poem ^.^

 

[Miss Tumnus]

Thank you! I've got lots of other poems, once i've translated some, i'll post them here.

 

[Miss Tumnus]

I've got one. It's name poetry:
A brave
Sacrifice
Leads to
A free
Narnia.

 

[Lost Dreamer]

Liked the first one. Reminds me of some really old poem i saw somewhere...

 

[Miss Tumnus]

I don't know that. But I DID write it myself!!

 

[Tsukiko]

I love both of them! the Aslan one is neat how you did it.

 

[Miss Tumnus]

We had that in Dutch lessons. I was bored and i tryed something out.
Here's the poem that used to be in my sig. It just expresses how i feel about boys and stuff. While other girls just go to them and talk, i'm very shy and never take the first step...
_______
If i'd ever
get the chance,
I would do it.

If i'd ever
have the courage,
I would do it.

If you'd ever
look at me,
I would wink.