new song

Mar

Mar

New member
"Fallen Winters"
Against the Current

Cluching behind open bars
Abandoned in your broken arms
Do you still believe in me?
Do you still believe?

Chorus:
Drowning in the stream of life
Do I still flow through your mind
Hope just stares with open eyes
Do you still belive that I can fight


Walking up the stairs still blind
Dancing seas inside your mind
Hope just stares beyond my faith
In fallen winters freezing gaze

(Chorus)

Bridge:
Fall down,
We fall down deeper,
If we just hold on we can make it, make it
Falling down,
Too close to the end of the fall
We need to hold on,
Before the end of it all


Cluching behind open bars
(walking up the stairs still blind)
Abandoned in your broken arms
(dancing seas inside your mind)
Do you still believe in me?
(hope just stares beyond my faith)
Do you still believe?
(in fallen winters frezzing gaze)

(Chorus)
 
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Mar said:
hey guys! telll me what you think of this new song my band and I wrote by the way it's copywrited so dont think about stealing it! haha..oh yes and ignore all spelling errors!! :confused:

"Fallen Winters"
Pure Intention

cluching behind open bars
abanded in your broken arms
do you still believe in me?
do you still believe?

chorus:
drowning in the stream of life
do I still flow through your mind
hope just stares with open eyes
do you still belive that I can fight


walking up the stairs still blind
dancing seas inside your mind
hope just stares beyond my faith
in fallen winters frezzing gaze

(chorus)

bridge
talks:
sometimes you feel like everythings going wrong
you want to give up
but you have to hold on
theres days when life puts you down
but when you give in your only lying to yourself


cluching behind open bars
(walking up the staris still blind)
abanded in your broken arms
(dancing seas inside your mind)
do you still believe in me?
(hope just stares beyond my faith)
do you still believe?
(in fallen winters frezzing gaze)

(chorus)
Click to expand...


Hi, i loved it. Could you write a song for me and my band?
 
hello

Mar said:
hey guys! telll me what you think of this new song my band and I wrote by the way it's copywrited so dont think about stealing it! haha..oh yes and ignore all spelling errors!! :confused:

"Fallen Winters"
Pure Intention

cluching behind open bars
abanded in your broken arms
do you still believe in me?
do you still believe?

chorus:
drowning in the stream of life
do I still flow through your mind
hope just stares with open eyes
do you still belive that I can fight


walking up the stairs still blind
dancing seas inside your mind
hope just stares beyond my faith
in fallen winters frezzing gaze

(chorus)

bridge
talks:
sometimes you feel like everythings going wrong
you want to give up
but you have to hold on
theres days when life puts you down
but when you give in your only lying to yourself


cluching behind open bars
(walking up the staris still blind)
abanded in your broken arms
(dancing seas inside your mind)
do you still believe in me?
(hope just stares beyond my faith)
do you still believe?
(in fallen winters frezzing gaze)

(chorus)
Click to expand...


Hi, i loved it. Could you write a song for me and my band?
 
okay, i edited the bridge and our band name lol...since we kinda changed some things about FWs
 
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