song inspired by The Silver Chair

[Fair Olvin]

yeah...so i like this story...possibly my favorite (besides MN)...so i wanted to write a song about it. i'm in a band and do pretty much all the songwriting, and used the SC to help me write these lyrics...you guys think you could help me out with a title for it?
i was thinking either "sever" or just simply "the silver chair"...but there is a band called silverchair..so i dont know...anyways...

v1:
blinded by all i've known
the truth, to me, was never shown
strapped and bound to this chair
sever this evil which ensnares

chorus:
this is not who i am
this is not where i belong
free me from this evil hand
i am the heir to the throne

v2:
here i am with darkness around
in an iron casket, i'm bound
once i'm free, this i say
i'll sever this evil, by the lion's mane

ch:
this is not who i am
this is not where i belong
free me from this evil hand
i am the heir to the throne


thats all i have so far...
what do you think?

 

[lady liln]

this is not who i am
this is not where i belong
free me from this evil hand
i am the heir to the throne

i dunno...that last line there doesn't seem to fit, somehow...

here i am with darkness around
in an iron casket, i'm bound
once i'm free, this i say
i'll sever this evil, by the lion's mane

hmm...i dunno if "to an iron casket" or "in an iron casket" is better.

i like it, jimmy. super super super.