DaughterofGondor
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Okay, here's the backstory.
War between Isuele and BArisoyn.
King of Isuele is Prophet, who has three younger brothers, Talon, Ryder, and ASh Seron, who used to be Erstanon.
Ash Seron is MArked. He has the insignia on the sid eof his neck, and his brother is afraid of him. So, he accused him of treason. And now the 14 year old boy, who is greedy and angry and porobaly desevres this, is being used as entertainment before they kill him.
A girl he was fallnig in love with Atlanta, has just betrayed him.
Ash Seron it trying to get to teh MArked Camp.
Here we go. *wince*
Erstanon was tied to a poll in teh middle of a sunken sqare. Commoners were watching, and wating to see what beast would tear the treasoning prince to bits.
He tried to call out to any MArked that might care about him. Help your brother! he called. But no Marked came flying in.
He looked one last time into the stands. He saw Atlanta. HE was filled with rage. Then he saw his brother. King Prophet .
He had to get out.
The square door opened. The creature was of a name that Erstanon didn't know. It had a horse's body, a long neck, and a horned tail. Erstanon needed to be mobile. He reached out to his powers. Finally, he started burning through the rope.
The creature didn't notice Erstanon right away. Then, after 30 seconds, the creature saw him. It charged. Now! thought Erstanon as he jumped away from the pole. The crowd booed. The creature crashed into the pole. He saw his brother talking to two guards. He needed to escape. He called to the MArked again. Nothing.
He noticed the beast was looking at him with anger. It snorted, and fire blew out of it's nostrils. Erstanon's heart sunk. It could blow fire. But he was ready for it. The creature blew, and at that moment Erstanon yelled, " Frazza"
He built a wall of ice against the fire from the creature. The best stopped blwoing, and Erstanon fell to the ground. He lef this Mark prickling. It was as though someone was telling him jump. The creature charged. Erstanon jumped clear over the beast's head, floated a little, then landed. His leg's shook. He wasn't used to jumping.
He turned around, searching for a weapn, or any Marked.
He reached out again. Save your brother he called.
THe beast charged again, and Erstanon held out his right arm and let power built up at his fingertips. Bieda ! He yelled slaying the creature. The crowd became restless. Erstanon strained his brain calling out. He started to become dizzy, but continued to call. He saw an uproar in the crowd, then everything went fuzzy. His last sight was a red=haired woman he had never seen before.
** well there's my start YES IT SOUNDS LIKE ERAGON WITH THE WHOLE BRAIN THINGY BUT THE MARKED CAN ONLY SEND FEELINGS. okay im done.
War between Isuele and BArisoyn.
King of Isuele is Prophet, who has three younger brothers, Talon, Ryder, and ASh Seron, who used to be Erstanon.
Ash Seron is MArked. He has the insignia on the sid eof his neck, and his brother is afraid of him. So, he accused him of treason. And now the 14 year old boy, who is greedy and angry and porobaly desevres this, is being used as entertainment before they kill him.
A girl he was fallnig in love with Atlanta, has just betrayed him.
Ash Seron it trying to get to teh MArked Camp.
Here we go. *wince*
Erstanon was tied to a poll in teh middle of a sunken sqare. Commoners were watching, and wating to see what beast would tear the treasoning prince to bits.
He tried to call out to any MArked that might care about him. Help your brother! he called. But no Marked came flying in.
He looked one last time into the stands. He saw Atlanta. HE was filled with rage. Then he saw his brother. King Prophet .
He had to get out.
The square door opened. The creature was of a name that Erstanon didn't know. It had a horse's body, a long neck, and a horned tail. Erstanon needed to be mobile. He reached out to his powers. Finally, he started burning through the rope.
The creature didn't notice Erstanon right away. Then, after 30 seconds, the creature saw him. It charged. Now! thought Erstanon as he jumped away from the pole. The crowd booed. The creature crashed into the pole. He saw his brother talking to two guards. He needed to escape. He called to the MArked again. Nothing.
He noticed the beast was looking at him with anger. It snorted, and fire blew out of it's nostrils. Erstanon's heart sunk. It could blow fire. But he was ready for it. The creature blew, and at that moment Erstanon yelled, " Frazza"
He built a wall of ice against the fire from the creature. The best stopped blwoing, and Erstanon fell to the ground. He lef this Mark prickling. It was as though someone was telling him jump. The creature charged. Erstanon jumped clear over the beast's head, floated a little, then landed. His leg's shook. He wasn't used to jumping.
He turned around, searching for a weapn, or any Marked.
He reached out again. Save your brother he called.
THe beast charged again, and Erstanon held out his right arm and let power built up at his fingertips. Bieda ! He yelled slaying the creature. The crowd became restless. Erstanon strained his brain calling out. He started to become dizzy, but continued to call. He saw an uproar in the crowd, then everything went fuzzy. His last sight was a red=haired woman he had never seen before.
** well there's my start YES IT SOUNDS LIKE ERAGON WITH THE WHOLE BRAIN THINGY BUT THE MARKED CAN ONLY SEND FEELINGS. okay im done.
