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This is a HP fanfic about the four marauders - James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew - and Lily Evans, and what happened before Voldemort's attack on Godric's Hallow.
There are four parts in this story.
Part One - 1976-77: Their final year at Hogwarts.
Part Two - 1978: James and Lily marry.
Part Three - 1979-80: The Potters settle into their home at Godric's Hallow; Harry is born.
Part Four - 31 October 1981: The attack on Godric's Hallow.
...and so it begins...
PART ONE 1976-1977
*
Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs
Sun was shining down on the back of Peter Pettigrew, who was bending down in his mother's garden, poking at a sleeping gnome.
"Peter!" cried his mother's voice. "Peter, come on! We're going to Diagon Alley!"
The gnome opened one sleepy eye and, seeing Peter's finger, bit down on it - hard.
"Aaagh!" yelled Peter, jumping up and swinging the gnome off his finger. He looked down at his finger: it was bleeding slightly.
"Peter?" came Mrs. Pettigrew's voice. She came out of the house. She was a plump woman with short brown cropped hair, stubby legs, and a hard face. "What's the matter, darling?"
"Gnome," muttered Peter, wiping the blood quickly off his finger on his pants.
"Well, if you're ready, dear," replied Mrs. Pettigrew, gesturing to the house. "Come inside and get your cloak on."
"But mum," whined Peter. "It's so warm out."
"I don't care, I don't want you getting soot all over your new robes!" snapped Mrs. Pettigrew, stomping back inside the house. Peter sighed and followed.
He entered the main room of the house. A large kitchen was on one side and a table with two chairs on the other. Next to the table was an empty fireplace, the hearth rug tattered and soot-covered. On the mantel was a small canvas bag. Mrs. Pettigrew reached for the bag. She pulled it down and took a pinch of the powder inside and threw it into the grate. There, a fire roared into life, and crackled merrily. It was not an ordinary fire, however. It was emerald green and was larger than most.
"After you," said Mrs. Pettigrew. Peter stepped into the fire.
"Diagon Alley!" he said loudly. In a whoosh, he was gone.
A second later he toppled out of the grate and onto the hard, cold stone floor of the Leaky Cauldron.
"Ouch!" he said as he hit the ground. He pushed himself upward.
"Hello, Wormtail ol' boy!" said a voice. He looked up.
A handsome boy with messy black hair and brown eyes stood before him. He was smiling down at the sight of Peter.
"James!" gasped Peter. 'Wormtail' was his nickname. James made it up.
James Potter was smart, good-looking, great at Quidditch, funny, a mischievous kid, and was everything girls liked.
"And Padfoot!" it was Sirius Black - a general description of him would make you think he looked like James. Black hair, brown eyes. No, he didn't look like James at all. But he was still just as good-looking, funny, smart, and what a prankster! He and James together had been in more detentions than the rest of the year combined.
"And you cannot forget Moody," said James fairly. Now Peter was standing upright. Another boy was standing next to James. He wasn't as tall as Sirius, but not a short as Peter.
"No," said the boy. He was Remus Lupin, who James and Sirius nicknamed Moony, because he had a terrible curse. A curse that everyone - Muggles included - fear and dread. He was a were-wolf, and therefore at the full-moon took on another form. "No I daresay you can't." He smiled, his hazel eyes crinkling at the edges under his black-brown hair.
"Hey," whispered Sirius suddenly to James. "Prongs, I think Darlene Davis is looking at you." He pointed at a tall, thin girl with curly brown hair. She was indeed looking at James, and she was pretty.
"Whatever," said Prongs - James - simply shrugging. "I've got my eye on Evans."
Remus and Sirius rolled their eyes, and Peter looked anxiously at the ground.
"Come on, Prongs," said Sirius.
"You know she won't go out with you," said Remus.
"That was last year," replied James.
"And the year before," put in Remus.
"And the year before that," added Sirius.
"And - "
"Alright, alright!" said James loudly. "I get the point. But I know this year'll be different."
"Peter!" it was Mrs. Pettigrew. She had been looking for him for five minutes. "There you are, darling! Oh!" she spotted James, Sirius, and Remus. "Hello, boys, how are you? Alright, Peter, dear, you can go around Diagon Alley with them just as long as you go get your money and meet me back here at five o'clock!"
She hurried off to the bar and ordered a sherry. James snickered.
"Shut up," muttered Peter coolly. Sirius raised an eyebrow at him. Peter's gaze met Sirius' eyes and he faltered. He'd always been a little afraid of tall, muscular Sirius.
The four boys wandered out into the small lot behind the Leaky Cauldron. Sirius whipped out his wand and tapped a few bricks with it. They wiggled, then scooted and re-formed, creating an archway large enough for Hagrid, the massive Hogwarts Game Keeper. The twisting lanes of Diagon Alley went out of sight here and there, reappearing in odd places. The shoppers talked happily as they purchased items.
James and Sirius began to walk down the lane, Remus right behind them. Peter wandered a few feet behind, slouching and sulking.
Here and there, they passed and greeted school mates. It wasn't until they saw a gang of giggling girls that Sirius bounded forward and immediately began talking to a blonde haired girl, Nina Santos. The girls stopped giggling and watched Sirius and her talk for a moment or two, then spotted James. A few blushed. One girl, a gorgeous redhead, stepped forward and said, "Stalk much, Potter?"
"Didn't even see you there, Evans!" replied James.
"Oh, yeah right," snapped Lily Evans.
"It's true!" said James, offended. He knew Lily knew he hadn't, but was just trying to mess with him. "I didn't!"
Lily rolled her eyes.
"Let's go," she said to her friends. The blonde tore herself away from Sirius and waved goodbye to him, following Lily and the other girls.
"Tough luck," said Sirius, clapping James on the shoulder. James was a magnet to girls. All girls, but Lily Evans. She seemed to hate James so much.
And she didn't know why.
Quality Quidditch Supplies
Sirius had spotted the blonde again, and pulled his friends into the store she was in. Quality Quidditch Supplies.
"Not like James wouldn’t have made a beeline right here anyways," muttered Remus, grinning. James was a fabulous Chaser for the Gryffindor team. Quality Quidditch Supplies was, of course, his favorite store.
"Oh, shut up, Moony," yawned James, already roaming around the English robes section. He fingered a set, jingled the coins in his pocket, as though counting them with his fingers. He shook his head.
"I’d rather spend it on a decent team," he shrugged at Remus’s quizzical look. Remus also shrugged and went to find Sirius. Peter, who was standing next to James, elbowed Prongs. He cocked his head to the side, gesturing at a girl standing by the window: she was attractive, and her eyes never left Remus' back. James grinned, then bit his lip. He felt his stomach flip. Lily stood a few feet away, back to him, looking at France’s robes. Her red hair was sprayed over her back as she looked up at the blue robes.
"Hey, Evans."
"Ahh!" Lily jumped, screaming slightly. "James – I mean, Potter, don’t do that! What’re you doing here?"
James grinned and leaned against the wall, running his hand through his messy black hair. Lily felt faint.
"Free world, Evans…or, almost," he said. He gestured to a poster outside, that read:
"- you, Elisabeth Evans, have decided that Quality Quidditch Supplies is your favorite store, as well as mine," smiled James.
"It’s not my favorite – listen, Potter, Nina and Black agreed to meet here, I was dragged along!" snarled Lily. "And don’t call me Elisabeth. It’s not even my name!"
"Ah, well. Pity. I would have loved the chance to say we’re more alike than you thought."
"James Potter, I hate you!" cried Lily. "I hate you more than anyone!" She stomped out of the store. Her friends Nina and Ginger glanced from the closed door to James, then followed her. (Nina, though, not without kissing Sirius goodbye.) Sirius, Remus, and Peter caught up with James as he angrily left the shop without another word.
"James!" called Remus as the four began running. "James!"
"James!" cried Peter, stumbling and panting to keep up with the athletic likes of James, Sirius, and Remus.
"Oi, PRONGS!" shouted Sirius, finally catching up with his best friend. He grabbed his shoulder and roughly turned him around, glaring angrily into his face. "Prongs – what in the name of Merlin was that about?"
"Nothing," snarled James, twisting angrily around and hurrying back up the road. "Just, shut up, Sirius, don’t talk – "
"Don’t tell me to shut up, James!" said Sirius shoving James to the ground from behind. "I know something’s wrong. You’re angry, Evan’s was angry…what’s wrong?"
"Sirius, just…don’t talk to me right now, OK?"
"James – " Remus was at his other side, panting. "James, what’s wrong?"
"I said – don’t TALK TO ME!" James whipped out his wand and angrily roared "Expelliarmus!" Red light flashed out, sending Remus and Sirius flying into carts. People screamed and owl feed went everywhere. James glared at his two friends as Peter stared open-mouthed at everything around him. Sirius and Remus struggled to their feet.
"James – Potter!" snarled Sirius, shaking him. "We’re – going – home." Peter hurried to catch up as James, Sirius, and Remus stalked off.
There are four parts in this story.
Part One - 1976-77: Their final year at Hogwarts.
Part Two - 1978: James and Lily marry.
Part Three - 1979-80: The Potters settle into their home at Godric's Hallow; Harry is born.
Part Four - 31 October 1981: The attack on Godric's Hallow.
...and so it begins...
PART ONE 1976-1977
*
Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs
Sun was shining down on the back of Peter Pettigrew, who was bending down in his mother's garden, poking at a sleeping gnome.
"Peter!" cried his mother's voice. "Peter, come on! We're going to Diagon Alley!"
The gnome opened one sleepy eye and, seeing Peter's finger, bit down on it - hard.
"Aaagh!" yelled Peter, jumping up and swinging the gnome off his finger. He looked down at his finger: it was bleeding slightly.
"Peter?" came Mrs. Pettigrew's voice. She came out of the house. She was a plump woman with short brown cropped hair, stubby legs, and a hard face. "What's the matter, darling?"
"Gnome," muttered Peter, wiping the blood quickly off his finger on his pants.
"Well, if you're ready, dear," replied Mrs. Pettigrew, gesturing to the house. "Come inside and get your cloak on."
"But mum," whined Peter. "It's so warm out."
"I don't care, I don't want you getting soot all over your new robes!" snapped Mrs. Pettigrew, stomping back inside the house. Peter sighed and followed.
He entered the main room of the house. A large kitchen was on one side and a table with two chairs on the other. Next to the table was an empty fireplace, the hearth rug tattered and soot-covered. On the mantel was a small canvas bag. Mrs. Pettigrew reached for the bag. She pulled it down and took a pinch of the powder inside and threw it into the grate. There, a fire roared into life, and crackled merrily. It was not an ordinary fire, however. It was emerald green and was larger than most.
"After you," said Mrs. Pettigrew. Peter stepped into the fire.
"Diagon Alley!" he said loudly. In a whoosh, he was gone.
A second later he toppled out of the grate and onto the hard, cold stone floor of the Leaky Cauldron.
"Ouch!" he said as he hit the ground. He pushed himself upward.
"Hello, Wormtail ol' boy!" said a voice. He looked up.
A handsome boy with messy black hair and brown eyes stood before him. He was smiling down at the sight of Peter.
"James!" gasped Peter. 'Wormtail' was his nickname. James made it up.
James Potter was smart, good-looking, great at Quidditch, funny, a mischievous kid, and was everything girls liked.
"And Padfoot!" it was Sirius Black - a general description of him would make you think he looked like James. Black hair, brown eyes. No, he didn't look like James at all. But he was still just as good-looking, funny, smart, and what a prankster! He and James together had been in more detentions than the rest of the year combined.
"And you cannot forget Moody," said James fairly. Now Peter was standing upright. Another boy was standing next to James. He wasn't as tall as Sirius, but not a short as Peter.
"No," said the boy. He was Remus Lupin, who James and Sirius nicknamed Moony, because he had a terrible curse. A curse that everyone - Muggles included - fear and dread. He was a were-wolf, and therefore at the full-moon took on another form. "No I daresay you can't." He smiled, his hazel eyes crinkling at the edges under his black-brown hair.
"Hey," whispered Sirius suddenly to James. "Prongs, I think Darlene Davis is looking at you." He pointed at a tall, thin girl with curly brown hair. She was indeed looking at James, and she was pretty.
"Whatever," said Prongs - James - simply shrugging. "I've got my eye on Evans."
Remus and Sirius rolled their eyes, and Peter looked anxiously at the ground.
"Come on, Prongs," said Sirius.
"You know she won't go out with you," said Remus.
"That was last year," replied James.
"And the year before," put in Remus.
"And the year before that," added Sirius.
"And - "
"Alright, alright!" said James loudly. "I get the point. But I know this year'll be different."
"Peter!" it was Mrs. Pettigrew. She had been looking for him for five minutes. "There you are, darling! Oh!" she spotted James, Sirius, and Remus. "Hello, boys, how are you? Alright, Peter, dear, you can go around Diagon Alley with them just as long as you go get your money and meet me back here at five o'clock!"
She hurried off to the bar and ordered a sherry. James snickered.
"Shut up," muttered Peter coolly. Sirius raised an eyebrow at him. Peter's gaze met Sirius' eyes and he faltered. He'd always been a little afraid of tall, muscular Sirius.
The four boys wandered out into the small lot behind the Leaky Cauldron. Sirius whipped out his wand and tapped a few bricks with it. They wiggled, then scooted and re-formed, creating an archway large enough for Hagrid, the massive Hogwarts Game Keeper. The twisting lanes of Diagon Alley went out of sight here and there, reappearing in odd places. The shoppers talked happily as they purchased items.
James and Sirius began to walk down the lane, Remus right behind them. Peter wandered a few feet behind, slouching and sulking.
Here and there, they passed and greeted school mates. It wasn't until they saw a gang of giggling girls that Sirius bounded forward and immediately began talking to a blonde haired girl, Nina Santos. The girls stopped giggling and watched Sirius and her talk for a moment or two, then spotted James. A few blushed. One girl, a gorgeous redhead, stepped forward and said, "Stalk much, Potter?"
"Didn't even see you there, Evans!" replied James.
"Oh, yeah right," snapped Lily Evans.
"It's true!" said James, offended. He knew Lily knew he hadn't, but was just trying to mess with him. "I didn't!"
Lily rolled her eyes.
"Let's go," she said to her friends. The blonde tore herself away from Sirius and waved goodbye to him, following Lily and the other girls.
"Tough luck," said Sirius, clapping James on the shoulder. James was a magnet to girls. All girls, but Lily Evans. She seemed to hate James so much.
And she didn't know why.
Quality Quidditch Supplies
Sirius had spotted the blonde again, and pulled his friends into the store she was in. Quality Quidditch Supplies.
"Not like James wouldn’t have made a beeline right here anyways," muttered Remus, grinning. James was a fabulous Chaser for the Gryffindor team. Quality Quidditch Supplies was, of course, his favorite store.
"Oh, shut up, Moony," yawned James, already roaming around the English robes section. He fingered a set, jingled the coins in his pocket, as though counting them with his fingers. He shook his head.
"I’d rather spend it on a decent team," he shrugged at Remus’s quizzical look. Remus also shrugged and went to find Sirius. Peter, who was standing next to James, elbowed Prongs. He cocked his head to the side, gesturing at a girl standing by the window: she was attractive, and her eyes never left Remus' back. James grinned, then bit his lip. He felt his stomach flip. Lily stood a few feet away, back to him, looking at France’s robes. Her red hair was sprayed over her back as she looked up at the blue robes.
"Hey, Evans."
"Ahh!" Lily jumped, screaming slightly. "James – I mean, Potter, don’t do that! What’re you doing here?"
James grinned and leaned against the wall, running his hand through his messy black hair. Lily felt faint.
"Free world, Evans…or, almost," he said. He gestured to a poster outside, that read:
You-Know-Who:
Beware the Death Eaters!
Beware the Dark Lord!
"So?" snapped Lily. "You don’t have to follow me everywhere, Potter. There’s plenty of other places here in Diagon Alley, but – "Beware the Death Eaters!
Beware the Dark Lord!
"- you, Elisabeth Evans, have decided that Quality Quidditch Supplies is your favorite store, as well as mine," smiled James.
"It’s not my favorite – listen, Potter, Nina and Black agreed to meet here, I was dragged along!" snarled Lily. "And don’t call me Elisabeth. It’s not even my name!"
"Ah, well. Pity. I would have loved the chance to say we’re more alike than you thought."
"James Potter, I hate you!" cried Lily. "I hate you more than anyone!" She stomped out of the store. Her friends Nina and Ginger glanced from the closed door to James, then followed her. (Nina, though, not without kissing Sirius goodbye.) Sirius, Remus, and Peter caught up with James as he angrily left the shop without another word.
"James!" called Remus as the four began running. "James!"
"James!" cried Peter, stumbling and panting to keep up with the athletic likes of James, Sirius, and Remus.
"Oi, PRONGS!" shouted Sirius, finally catching up with his best friend. He grabbed his shoulder and roughly turned him around, glaring angrily into his face. "Prongs – what in the name of Merlin was that about?"
"Nothing," snarled James, twisting angrily around and hurrying back up the road. "Just, shut up, Sirius, don’t talk – "
"Don’t tell me to shut up, James!" said Sirius shoving James to the ground from behind. "I know something’s wrong. You’re angry, Evan’s was angry…what’s wrong?"
"Sirius, just…don’t talk to me right now, OK?"
"James – " Remus was at his other side, panting. "James, what’s wrong?"
"I said – don’t TALK TO ME!" James whipped out his wand and angrily roared "Expelliarmus!" Red light flashed out, sending Remus and Sirius flying into carts. People screamed and owl feed went everywhere. James glared at his two friends as Peter stared open-mouthed at everything around him. Sirius and Remus struggled to their feet.
"James – Potter!" snarled Sirius, shaking him. "We’re – going – home." Peter hurried to catch up as James, Sirius, and Remus stalked off.