Haiku's,Poems and anything that rhymes!

Narniamoondust said:
Hidden beneath this pale and blotched skin
is some other person waiting to begin
She's already sprouted,another time,'nother place
She had to get out,she needed some space
But when you are around I bottle her up
its no easy task
for when I'm with you I'm wearing a mask

Splotted like canvas and waiting to dry
Fragile like balloons,fly away high
If you want you can see her,you just need to ask
but in the meantime I'm still wearing a mask
(in the meantime I'm still wearing a mask)

Rooted up firm,you only guess
She'll bloom what you planted,'cause you did it best
You were right,but also quite wrong
it budded a Rose,but a rose with a song
She has some deep feelings but those I hide up
its no easy task
For when I'm with you,I'm wearing a mask​
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This one is quite good. Where did it come from? (and I don't mean you didn't write it). You are getting better and better.
 
BarbarianKing said:
This one is quite good. Where did it come from? (and I don't mean you didn't write it). You are getting better and better.
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Oh it's complicated. The person you all know me on here,doesn't exist outside of TDL. I feel like I'm getting SO sensitive I'm just hiding it all beneath some mask(in this case,a forum...and also books)
The second verse that says: "rooted up firm,you only geuss,she'll bloom what you planted because you did it best"
It comes from something my mum said. Every now and then if I say something she never thought I would(an opinion for example) she kind of gives me this astonished look.
She was talking to me while doing the dishes once and she said, "You know,you used to get so obsessed about things when you were little. Dad said you know one day she's gonna do that over a boy. and I said, Reagan would NEVER do that." and then the look comes.
Which is what I'm saying. She thinks because she's homeschooled us and stuff,we'll do just what she expected. But we don't...ESPECIALLY my sister..

I dunno...I'm just depressed so I wrote a poem. Thanks for the support though!
I'm going to turn it into a song when I get the notes figured out:)
 
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Narniamoondust said:
Oh it's complicated. The person you all know me on here,doesn't exist outside of TDL. I feel like I'm getting SO sensitive I'm just hiding it all beneath some mask(in this case,a forum...and also books)
The second verse that says: "rooted up firm,you only geuss,she'll bloom what you planted because you did it best"
It comes from something my mum said. Every now and then if I say something she never thought I would(an opinion for example) she kind of gives me this astonished look.
She was talking to me while doing the dishes once and she said, "You know,you used to get so obsessed about things when you were little. Dad said you know one day she's gonna do that over a boy. and I said, Reagan would NEVER do that." and then the look comes.
Which is what I'm saying. She thinks because she's homeschooled us and stuff,we'll do just what she expected. But we don't...ESPECIALLY my sister..

I dunno...I'm just depressed so I wrote a poem. Thanks for the support though!
I'm going to turn it into a song when I get the notes figured out:)
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YOUR DEPRESSED? Whatever you do, don;t start cutting yourself or something. That would scare the heck out of me.
 
amdd97 said:
YOUR DEPRESSED? Whatever you do, don;t start cutting yourself or something. That would scare the heck out of me.
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EYAH! no,I'm not depressed like THAT! (besides,I've got too many hangnails,why would I want to keep the pain going?:confused::p)
I'm just depressed like,nothing is fun anymore. I usually get like that once a month due to hormones and teen stuff like that. I'll be my perky Hot air balloons and lemonade self again in a few weeks.
I always determine a bad week is gonna happen,when I have nightmares about Ben,I have a bad diary entry about my mum,and there's upset poems on the forum:p:p
 
That poem was intriguing, and if I hadn't seen your explanation of it, I would have remained uncertain between several other guesses, all of which would have been wrong. ;)
 
I see. Well, yes. Hormones will make you moody. It's a fact. But I am glad to see you turn those feelings into something very creative. I really loved it. And don't worry about the "mask." We all have things to hide and many people online are never what they appear. The only difference is that very few, if any, would admit it.

Making into a song... ummm. Well, find someone who is talented to collaborate with. That would be great song with the right melody.
 
Like the others said, very well written. I can connect to it. But for me, it's more like I'm wearing a mask around others, but not so much on the forum... for some reason, it's easier to talk to strangers. And then the strangers become friends. :)
 
yeah well its not online all the time.
I get my feelings hurt by little things,but then bottle them up and pretend I'm not bothered but that jar gets fuller and fuller(from me just biting my tongue and not saying anything) till I am completely wearing a mask because It seems I'm just okay with everything and nothing bothers me.
(That mask has slipped off a few times sad to say...at the most Inappropriate of time:()

BK: I did get the chorus melody down but the rest of the words haven't yet.
I have a keyboard and a really really good Grandma so we'll see what I can do.:)

I'm not really upset anymore though,moodiness is past and we just had a BIG wedding for our dolls....
 
YAY! I'm not the only weirdo! Currently, I'm planning a wedding with some friends. We're going to marry their webkinz pig to my brother's. :p
 
MissReepicheep said:
YAY! I'm not the only weirdo! Currently, I'm planning a wedding with some friends. We're going to marry their webkinz pig to my brother's. :p
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Me too! I have sisters! ahahahaha.
Hey we did that! Me and my friend Micaela had this big get together with EVERYONE's webkinz and we had a REAL cake and music and we had real vows and rings and everything!
Man it was fun....and then I changed my horse into a boy a few days later and that kind of ruined things seeing that It was originally the bride.
 
Narniamoondust said:
Me too! I have sisters! ahahahaha.
Hey we did that! Me and my friend Micaela had this big get together with EVERYONE's webkinz and we had a REAL cake and music and we had real vows and rings and everything!
Man it was fun....and then I changed my horse into a boy a few days later and that kind of ruined things seeing that It was originally the bride.
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Well, we're not having a real cake, but we're going to have music, gifts, costumes, vows, and rings. And even send the bride and groom off with bubbles. :D

I wrote out a whole script for the wedding, using a wedding planning book my mom had. :p It was a pretty creepy book though; everyone was wearing 80's clothes! :eek:
 
MissReepicheep said:
Well, we're not having a real cake, but we're going to have music, gifts, costumes, vows, and rings. And even send the bride and groom off with bubbles. :D

I wrote out a whole script for the wedding, using a wedding planning book my mom had. :p It was a pretty creepy book though; everyone was wearing 80's clothes! :eek:
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OH BUBBLES! Man,we should've thought of that. we had a receiving line.
Oh man...I have SEEN 80's clothes. I can never un-see that:cool:
 
White woolen blankets of cotton spun sugar
slide past that old tree that looks like a cougar
Your cheeks enflame and your nose runs like a river
your feet are no longer attached and you can't help but shiver
The flakes land on your hair and eyelashes
as you look up in wonder
another kid dashes
by on a sled
you
are
having
fun...​
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thank you ma-dame.

I'm still amature compared to Shakespeare.

speaking of which,I hate it when people list him as their "inspiration".
My inspiration is Adam Young and Shel Silverstein.
to quote Agatha Christie from Doctor who season 4 episode: "the wasp and the unicorn": I am nothing but a purveyor of nonsense!

oh and I rant a bit....:)
 
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