Zella's Poetry

I also enjoyed "Circle of Firsts." I had to wonder how much cause-and-effect was represented there. For instance, by saying "First apartment. First fight," did you mean that the CAUSE of the first fight was connected with having the apartment?
 
MissReepicheep said:
Ooh, I really like that! I rarely like poetry that doesn't rhyme, but that one flows well enough that it doesn't matter. :D Good job!
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But it does rhyme! At least, mostly. GPA/day. New/do. Celebrate/anticipate. I will admit that bike/night is a stretch, though.

Gondorgirl said:
With your permission I might stealeth it to make a moving graphic. ;)
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You are welcome to do so.:D

Copperfox said:
I also enjoyed "Circle of Firsts." I had to wonder how much cause-and-effect was represented there. For instance, by saying "First apartment. First fight," did you mean that the CAUSE of the first fight was connected with having the apartment?
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I hadn't intended it that way, but I suppose it could be interpreted like that.

Narnialove said:
I began reading your poetry and It's lovely :)
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Thank you.
 
I was rather surprised when I realized today (actually, I guess it's yesterday now) that I hadn't written any poetry for almost six months. Since my creativity has finally healed from NaNoWriMo, that obviously needed to be remedied. (And just so you know, I am aware that novellers and novelling aren't words. I don't care.)

NaNoWriMo

November was a hectic month for me
And many other crazy novellers
Who took up pen and keyboard - for no fee! -
And set to dueling plots and characters.

A plethora of sugar was consumed
Across the world through thirty long, late nights
As inner editors morosely loomed
And dragons laughed and heroes wouldn't fight.

We trudged the paths of adjectives and nouns,
We let our heroes offer dragons peace,
We watched our word counts grow by steps or bounds,
Ignored our pillows, and refused to cease.

We learned to set our cautions to the wing
And thus completely mastered novelling.
 
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