*Spoilers for David's film:
I did see your entire film. I think it was very good. A little shaky on the acting and dialog but good. But I'm an old guy who is always thinking ahead and I could almost see the end, especially after the incident where the protagonist had some "help." If that part hadn't been there, I probably would not have guessed it. And stopping at a fence rather than ramming it with the big truck looks very suspicious. But the film is good. I have no doubt you are capable of doing much better if you have more time and resources.
I guess I should address a couple of things here, too... (Spoilers for my film will follow, so if you haven't seen it yet, scroll up a few posts and watch it!)
I made this film for a Christian speed film making competition called the 168 project. The idea is that at the beginning of the competition you are assigned a bible verse (I got Exodus 30:16) and have 10 days to write a script and plan your film, followed by 7 days (AKA, 168 hours) to shoot and edit it. So this film was made in it's entirety (well, almost... I spend a little bit more time polishing it up in post before I released it online) in a week and with a budget of less than $800.
Originally, the script DID have the truck ramming through the gate (as well as running over one of the gate guards), but I had to change this on the day of filming for several reasons. The main reason was that the gate only opened one way, which was something I hadn't realized before. And for several reasons, it was not going to work to film from the other side, so busting through became impossible. Besides that, my film was already going to need some serious cuts to end up under the 10 minute time limit, and the rather elaborate action scene that was originally planned to bring the film to a close with the truck blocking the guards' pursuit would have added several more minutes to the run time. And finally... We were just straight up out of time to shoot any more. So I decided to end it with the truck stopping at the gate.
I actually think it makes quite a bit of sense this way. Saul knows he is dying, and that he can't keep going too much longer, so it's not like he's trying to save himself. He absolutely COULD have busted through the gate, but he chose not to because if he had, the chase could have gone on indefinitely. So instead he stopped at the fence, which allowed him to hold up the guards just long enough that the prisoners he was helping could escape.
As much as I WANTED to have a scene where he smashes through the fence and runs over a guard, this was much more feasible given the project's limitations. I can't wait until the day when I actually have a budget and the luxury of doing virtually whatever I want with a film...