I posted one more entry on "Hearts," one which brings two more _official_ Alice-in-Wonderland characters back into the action, and will also hurry up Alice's deadlocked magic-item search.
At some point coming up soon, it would be reasonable for your character to see some of the Heart Kingdom soldiers coming from the north, running for their lives in fear of the gunslingers. But let the current dialogue play out before that happens.
Is it that you just haven't read the actual Narnia BOOKS to get an idea of Edmund's personality? Since you are with Edmund as he would have been AFTER getting all his weaknesses behind him, perhaps it would help to think of him as being like your most-respected TaeKwonDo teacher--strong and responsible.
i like but it would be nice if we could see the words
diffrent color perhaps?
two colors?
cause it goes from dark to light...
and it's hard to read in the dark part.