A New Challenge

*~Aslansfriend~* said:
the three Pevensies eyes widened slightly at Jadis's words. None of them wanted to believe what she said was true but all new they must becuase it was...."surely you couldn't of done anything that bad....right?" Lucy said looking up at Jadis depiaringly still not wanting to believe that this was true...she felt her sister pull her closer. Susan sighed looking down at her younger sister with a look that told her it was true.....Lucy's eyes filled with tears letting realization hit her full on...."well can't you do something!? you know to reverse the spell or something!?" Edmund cried as notcieing varies scenes that were going on around them of horrible past things that had happened to innocent Narnians....Susan screamed in terror as a particulay hurtful memerie began to play out as a scene around them....
*Jadis lowered her head sadly and spoke*"its true Lucy dear I done all this I was the one that sent my minons to kill Aslan's followers seeing all this I can't believe that I was so cruel at once I can try to reverse this spell"
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*all of a sudden two minotaurs were dragging an old, sad looking squirrel and started beating him with clubs**looking in horror**squealing* DADDY! *tears rolling down her face**the minotaurs come her way* this is when I was five, here I am almost beaten to death like my dad! *the minotaurs come closer with clubs raised**crying out* close your eyes, we can't aviod the past...everything already happened!
~Loretta

*grabs loretta* Lorei, *stammering holding back tears* we are not going to let you...
~Peter

*relization* wait it has to happen when you were that age *watching, a small squirrel comes out and starts fighting the two minotarus* we're invisable...theres me! *seeing the minotaurs start smacking her with the clubs, her fighting her hardes**tears streaming down both Loretta's faces*
~Loretta

*hugs loretta*
~Peter

Each day is a year, everyday we see all of Narnia's history! Everyday we wake up to THIS!
~Loretta

all three of the Pevensies eyes widened in horrror hearing Lorettas last words each of them letting the horrifying truth sink deep into thier hearts, "oh. Loretta!" Lucy cried tears streaming down her own cheeks at the deep sympathy she felt for Loretta as the group endured watching the horrible scene going on around them. the youngest Pevensie ran to Loretta and Peter and swung her arms around them both as far as they would reach. Susan and Edmund stared on in horror and shock at what they were seeing, "why is this happening!?" Susan cried tears now beginning to stream down her own cheeks, Edmund could only stare at his sister unsure of how to ansher her feeling greif and sorrow begin to overwealm him.
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis lowered her head sadly and spoke*"its true Lucy dear I done all this I was the one that sent my minons to kill Aslan's followers seeing all this I can't believe that I was so cruel at once I can try to reverse this spell"

sorrowful tears rolled down Lucy's cheeks as she listened to the horrifying truth of Jadis's words.
"yes do PLEASE try and reverse it!" Susan cried feeling a panicky feeling begin to overwealm her.
 
*wincing everytime her younger self was struck**crying***runs over to dad's body**fell to knees* Daddy I'm sorry, I really am! I'm stronger now, but invisible...OH daddy! *sobbing into hands*
~Loretta

*uneasyness seeing Edmond being stabbed during the battle on the hill across from them* Loretta are you sure that nothing will happen to us?
~Peter

*still sobbing* only if we're not in the way...*minotaur smacks her with a club not knowing it...((they are invisible but still vunerable))
~Loretta

*shock* Loretta get away, you are going to be killed if you sit there! *grabs her hand*
~Peter

*crying* I have to save Daddy, I can't leave him!
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*wincing everytime her younger self was struck**crying***runs over to dad's body**fell to knees* Daddy I'm sorry, I really am! I'm stronger now, but invisible...OH daddy! *sobbing into hands*
~Loretta

*uneasyness seeing Edmond being stabbed during the battle on the hill across from them* Loretta are you sure that nothing will happen to us?
~Peter

*still sobbing* only if we're not in the way...*minotaur smacks her with a club not knowing it...((they are invisible but still vunerable))
~Loretta

*shock* Loretta get away, you are going to be killed if you sit there! *grabs her hand*
~Peter

*crying* I have to save Daddy, I can't leave him!
~Loretta


Susan and Lucy screamed in horror seeing the night of the Stone Table begin playing out a small distnace from them, "ASLAN!!!" they both cried sounding more like a depaired scream, without thinking Lucy rushed into the croud of evil creatures in an effort to reach Aslan who was presently just beginning to walk up the stone stairs.
"LUCY!!!!" Susan screamed watching in terror as her sister dissapeared into the crous of evil creatures.
Edmund winced seeing himself being stabbed by the witch he then turned quickly apon heaing Susans depairing scream seeing Aslan walking up to the Stone Table, "whats going on?" he asked tears brimming his eyes, "why is Aslan walking up to the Stone Table?" he turned to Peter with confustion and heartach written across his face.
 
uh...Ed, he's...well dying for you. We should have told u, but we didn't want to hurt you! *hugs his brother close*
~Peter

*wincing as she was struck agian* Daddy, wake up, please don't be dead! Daddy! *almost knocked out from the next blow*
~Loretta

Loretta! *grabs her and drags her back to camp**still comforting Ed*
~Peter

*sobbing horribly as she watches two wolves gobble up her sister and brother*
~Loretta
 
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*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Susan and Lucy screamed in horror seeing the night of the Stone Table begin playing out a small distnace from them, "ASLAN!!!" they both cried sounding more like a depaired scream, without thinking Lucy rushed into the croud of evil creatures in an effort to reach Aslan who was presently just beginning to walk up the stone stairs.
"LUCY!!!!" Susan screamed watching in terror as her sister dissapeared into the crous of evil creatures.
Edmund winced seeing himself being stabbed by the witch he then turned quickly apon heaing Susans depairing scream seeing Aslan walking up to the Stone Table, "whats going on?" he asked tears brimming his eyes, "why is Aslan walking up to the Stone Table?" he turned to Peter with confustion and heartach written across his face.
*Jadis seen all that was happening around her it was overwelming her cause her cruel memories were appearing around her she seen Charn and what she did when she was the evil white witch in Narnia**she had to find streagth in herself to end this spell but couldn't seem to find it just yet*
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
uh...Ed, he's...well dying for you. We should have told u, but we didn't want to hurt you! *hugs his brother close*
~Peter

*wincing as she was struck agian* Daddy, wake up, please don't be dead! Daddy! *almost knocked out from the next blow*
~Loretta

Loretta! *grabs her and drags her back to camp**still comforting Ed*
~Peter

*sobbing horribly as she watches two wolves gobble up her sister and brother*
~Loretta

Edmunds eyes widened, tears of a deep sorrow and greif beginning to flood his eyes, "but I didn't deserve to be saved! why didn't anyone try to stop him!" he cried unable to stop the tears from freely rolling down his cheeks. "ASLAN NO!!!!" he cried in horror witnessing Jadis bring the knife down on the Great lion, "NO!!!!!!" Edmunds face turned white as he got the feeling he had just been puched in the stomack..."no...." he whispered falling to his knees and sobbing miserable. "why....did....he....die....for s-someone l-like me!?" he asked through heavy sobs.

Susan watched in horror this being her second time witnessing Aslans horrible death, seeing her younger sister race up to Aslan and cry miserably over his lifeless body, "oh, Lucy..." she whispered tears of deep sorrow flowing freely down her own cheeks.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Edmunds eyes widened, tears of a deep sorrow and greif beginning to flood his eyes, "but I didn't deserve to be saved! why didn't anyone try to stop him!" he cried unable to stop the tears from freely rolling down his cheeks. "ASLAN NO!!!!" he cried in horror witnessing Jadis bring the knife down on the Great lion, "NO!!!!!!" Edmunds face turned white as he got the feeling he had just been puched in the stomack..."no...." he whispered falling to his knees and sobbing miserable. "why....did....he....die....for s-someone l-like me!?" he asked through heavy sobs.

Susan watched in horror this being her second time witnessing Aslans horrible death, seeing her younger sister race up to Aslan and cry miserably over his lifeless body, "oh, Lucy..." she whispered tears of deep sorrow flowing freely down her own cheeks.
*Jadis looked up and seen Susan and Lucy's memory of the stone table and she seen herself bring the knife down on her now made friend she stood up and yelled*"THIS SPELL ENDS NOW"*for some odd reason seeing herself do that brought a streagth to her**she closed her eyes and put her hands together remebering the words she used to put the spell here and started saying them backwards and the last words she said she swung her hands out like she did at the stone table as a icy blue light exploded from around her raising her hair and dress slightly as a wind blew around her**the icy blue light flowed over the entrier landscape making the images shatter into a million pieaces as it hit them and when all the images were gone the icy blue light faded and disappeared breaking the spell and she open her eyes and hands as the wind died down she fell to the ground knee first breathing hard*
 
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~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis looked up and seen Susan and Lucy's memory of the stone table and she seen herself bring the knife down on her now made friend she stood up and yelled*"THIS SPELL ENDS NOW"*for some odd reason seeing herself do that brought a streagth to her**she closed her eyes and put her hands together remebering the words she used to put the spell here and started saying them backwards and the last words she said she swung her hands out like she did at the stone table as a icy blue light exploded from around her raising her hair and dress slightly as a wind blew around her**the icy blue light flowed over the entrier landscape making the images shatter into a million pieaces as it hit them and when all the images were gone the icy blue light faded and disappeared breaking the spell and she open her eyes and hands as the wind died down she fell to the ground knee first breathing hard*

Susan watched in horror as her little sister ran up to Aslan flinging herself apon his lifeless body and crying miserable as if her heart would never be meneded again. after a moment Susan shook herself out of shock and began running over to her sister just as she seen the witch and her mintions begin to leave the scene hurting Lucy on their way past her.
Edmund was on his knees sobbing horrible feeling guilt and grief overwealm him at that he saw happen at the Lucy and Susans memerie of the Stone Table. in the mist of all this the children hardly dared to look up as they heard Jadis said the words that were breaking the spell sending a strong wind to blow around all who was their witnessing and even entering some of the scenes that were going on around them. every one of the children were forcefully thrown to the ground as the emages shatter into a million pieaces every one of them disapearing every where they looked. when it was all over Lucy was laying on the soft grass where she had up until this point, been lieing over Aslans body sobbing her heart out. Susan looked up finding herself laying on the grass not to far away from where Lucy was. and Edmund was laying on the ground beside Peter and Loretta still sobbing his heart out.
"what happend?" Susan asked looking toward Jadis in confustion as she lifted herself up into sitting position.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Susan watched in horror as her little sister ran up to Aslan flinging herself apon his lifeless body and crying miserable as if her heart would never be meneded again. after a moment Susan shook herself out of shock and began running over to her sister just as she seen the witch and her mintions begin to leave the scene hurting Lucy on their way past her.
Edmund was on his knees sobbing horrible feeling guilt and grief overwealm him at that he saw happen at the Lucy and Susans memerie of the Stone Table. in the mist of all this the children hardly dared to look up as they heard Jadis said the words that were breaking the spell sending a strong wind to blow around all who was their witnessing and even entering some of the scenes that were going on around them. every one of the children were forcefully thrown to the ground as the emages shatter into a million pieaces every one of them disapearing every where they looked. when it was all over Lucy was laying on the soft grass where she had up until this point, been lieing over Aslans body sobbing her heart out. Susan looked up finding herself laying on the grass not to far away from where Lucy was. and Edmund was laying on the ground beside Peter and Loretta still sobbing his heart out.
"what happend?" Susan asked looking toward Jadis in confustion as she lifted herself up into sitting position.
*Jadis got her breath back and stood up slowly and spoke*"I have broke the spell my dears"*she started to sway a lil**the Satry and Faun caught Jadis as she fell back into their arms*
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis got her breath back and stood up slowly and spoke*"I have broke the spell my dears"*she started to sway a lil**the Satry and Faun caught Jadis as she fell back into their arms*

Susan looked up at Jadis about to say something but stopped, letting her gaze wander off to her younger sister Lucy....she had noticed no movement had come from the younger girls body even after the spell had been broken...only one thought crossed the gentle Queens mind, 'oh, Aslan...please please let Lucy be alright....'
quickly standing to her feet Susan took one depairing glance towards Jadis before taking off towards her sister as fast as her legs would carry her, "Lucy!!!" she called after her though thier was no reply or movement from Lucy fragile body. "Lucy it's alright you saw what happaned after Aslans death he didn't stay dead he's alive today right at this vary moment!" she fell to her knees apon reaching her younger sister and carefully took her up in her arms holding her close to her, "Lucy please...say something..." she said tears now welling up in the older girls eyes. taking a deep breath Susan gently put her head up to Lucy's chest listening for her heartbeat....a wave of relief ran through her body apon realizing that Lucy's heart was still beating though her breathing sounded shallow and she maid no effort to even open her eyes. Susan heart sank as she lifted her heart turning her gaze apon Jadis and the others with a depeairing look as if she were pleading for help on what to do.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Susan looked up at Jadis about to say something but stopped, letting her gaze wander off to her younger sister Lucy....she had noticed no movement had come from the younger girls body even after the spell had been broken...only one thought crossed the gentle Queens mind, 'oh, Aslan...please please let Lucy be alright....'
quickly standing to her feet Susan took one depairing glance towards Jadis before taking off towards her sister as fast as her legs would carry her, "Lucy!!!" she called after her though thier was no reply or movement from Lucy fragile body. "Lucy it's alright you saw what happaned after Aslans death he didn't stay dead he's alive today right at this vary moment!" she fell to her knees apon reaching her younger sister and carefully took her up in her arms holding her close to her, "Lucy please...say something..." she said tears now welling up in the older girls eyes. taking a deep breath Susan gently put her head up to Lucy's chest listening for her heartbeat....a wave of relief ran through her body apon realizing that Lucy's heart was still beating though her breathing sounded shallow and she maid no effort to even open her eyes. Susan heart sank as she lifted her heart turning her gaze apon Jadis and the others with a depeairing look as if she were pleading for help on what to do.
*Jadis came out of her swaying mode and ran to Lucy and hit her knees beside the girl and lifted one of her hands and it glowed an icy blue and she place her glowing hand on Lucy's body and said some words to a healing spell and her hand glowed brighter and silver snowflakes were seen flowing from Jadis's glowing hand and flowing over all over Lucy's body*
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis came out of her swaying mode and ran to Lucy and hit her knees beside the girl and lifted one of her hands and it glowed an icy blue and she place her glowing hand on Lucy's body and said some words to a healing spell and her hand glowed brighter and silver snowflakes were seen flowing from Jadis's glowing hand and flowing over all over Lucy's body*

Lucy moved slightly feeling the healing Snowflakes begin healing her fragile body, Susan looked up at Jadis in confustion, "is she going to be alright?" she asked despiaration showing in her tone.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Lucy moved slightly feeling the healing Snowflakes begin healing her fragile body, Susan looked up at Jadis in confustion, "is she going to be alright?" she asked despiaration showing in her tone.
*Jadis continue her healing spell and spoke to Susan*"yes she will be alright my healing spell is working my dear"*the Faun and Starty watched Jadis work and they had amazment spread all over their faces they admire Jadis's power and magic*
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis continue her healing spell and spoke to Susan*"yes she will be alright my healing spell is working my dear"*the Faun and Starty watched Jadis work and they had amazment spread all over their faces they admire Jadis's power and magic*

Susan's eyes flickered with anger at the memeie of what the evil creatures were doing to Lucy as they were passing her and Aslan in the stone Table, "I can't believe those horrible creatures did that to Lucy..just like I couldn't believe how any of them could do what they did to Aslan..." for a moment tears welled within Susans angered eyes but a moment later the anger vanished from the older girls eyes and tears of a new joy began rolling dowm her cheeks as she watched Lucy begin to stir in her arms, the color returning to her young face.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Susan's eyes flickered with anger at the memeie of what the evil creatures were doing to Lucy as they were passing her and Aslan in the stone Table, "I can't believe those horrible creatures did that to Lucy..just like I couldn't believe how any of them could do what they did to Aslan..." for a moment tears welled within Susans angered eyes but a moment later the anger vanished from the older girls eyes and tears of a new joy began rolling dowm her cheeks as she watched Lucy begin to stir in her arms, the color returning to her young face.
*Jadis lowered her head and spoke*"and I can't believe what I done at the stone table"*as she seen Lucy stiring and her color returning she stoped saying her spell and lifted her hand off of Lucy as it stoped glowing*
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis lowered her head and spoke*"and I can't believe what I done at the stone table"*as she seen Lucy stiring and her color returning she stoped saying her spell and lifted her hand off of Lucy as it stoped glowing*

Lucy slolwy opened her eyes, blinking a few times letting her eyes ajust to the sun, "Susan? Jadis? what happend?" she asked in confustion seeing their relieved expressions.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Lucy slolwy opened her eyes, blinking a few times letting her eyes ajust to the sun, "Susan? Jadis? what happend?" she asked in confustion seeing their relieved expressions.
*Jadis looked down at Lucy and spoke*"I broke the spell on this place"
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis looked down at Lucy and spoke*"I broke the spell on this place"

Lucy's face suddenly fell as she remembered something..."but what about Aslan? is he alright?" she asked tears brimming her eyes, Susan couldn't help but let out a slight chukle though the same tears were brimming her eyes as well, "he's fine Lu don't you remember? the emages we seen were only memeries Aslan rose from the dead and he's alive even today..why we just saw him yesterday in fact"
 
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