A New Narnia

~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis's listen to Lucy's words and spoke*"I'm trying to fight this evil but its trying to win me over oh Aslan help me beat this I don't want to be evil again help Aslan"
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"thats it just cry out to Aslan I promise he won't let you down" Lucy said in a soothing tone. nothing happend for qiut a while it seemed but finally a bright golden light seemed to inter the room, it walked strait up to Jadis and Lucy and as the light faded somewhat all who was standing around could see that the Great golden light was none other then the Great Lion Aslan, who was smileing warmly down at Jadis and Lucy, "I have heard your prayers for help my Dear Jadis" he said his vioce great and powerful yet soft and kind. "and I have come to help you fight this for you cannot fight this on your own"
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
"thats it just cry out to Aslan I promise he won't let you down" Lucy said in a soothing tone. nothing happend for qiut a while it seemed but finally a bright golden light seemed to inter the room, it walked strait up to Jadis and Lucy and as the light faded somewhat all who was standing around could see that the Great golden light was none other then the Great Lion Aslan, who was smileing warmly down at Jadis and Lucy, "I have heard your prayers for help my Dear Jadis" he said his vioce great and powerful yet soft and kind. "and I have come to help you fight this for you cannot fight this on your own"
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*Jadis heard Aslan's voice and felt stronger and braver then spoke*"thank you Aslan for the help I need it"
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis heard Aslan's voice and felt stronger and braver then spoke*"thank you Aslan for the help I need it"
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"I know Dear one" Aslan smiled down at her lovingly, "and that is why I am here to give you the help you need. Hold onto my mane and then try fighting the evil once more" he said stepping closer to the two so Jadis could hold onto his mane for whoever held onto his mane a wonderful power and strenth would shoot into them giving them the strench they need to win great even some of the greatest battles.
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
"I know Dear one" Aslan smiled down at her lovingly, "and that is why I am here to give you the help you need. Hold onto my mane and then try fighting the evil once more" he said stepping closer to the two so Jadis could hold onto his mane for whoever held onto his mane a wonderful power and strenth would shoot into them giving them the strench they need to win great even some of the greatest battles.
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*Jadis listen to Aslan's words and spoke*"ok"*she reached one of her white hands out to Aslan and held his mane in her hand**she felt power and streagth enter her body**she started to fight the evil she felt the evil losing to her now and she took a deep breath and let it out as she felt the evil and the poison leaving her body*

****meanwhile*****
*Emerald was hiding in the bushs outside the window and growled and spoke to herself*"grrrr that blasted lion messes everything up I'm almost had my sister back but she has to close of a bond with that blasted lion and she beats everything I do to her that lion needs to die so I can get my sister Jadis back"*with that she transformed into her Serpent form and siltered away*
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis listen to Aslan's words and spoke*"ok"*she reached one of her white hands out to Aslan and held his mane in her hand**she felt power and streagth enter her body**she started to fight the evil she felt the evil losing to her now and she took a deep breath and let it out as she felt the evil and the poison leaving her body*

****meanwhile*****
*Emerald was hiding in the bushs outside the window and growled and spoke to herself*"grrrr that blasted lion messes everything up I'm almost had my sister back but she has to close of a bond with that blasted lion and she beats everything I do to her that lion needs to die so I can get my sister Jadis back"*with that she transformed into her Serpent form and siltered away*
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Aslan purred slightly while Jadis held onto his mane to calm Lucy who was standing close to both Jadis and Aslan. he gave a nod to Jadis and a certain look that meant she was winning the fight agaist the evil through the strencth he was giving her.
Susan and Edmund looked on in amazment at the wonderful sight, "I know she'll be ok now" Edmund said glanceing towards Stalker for a moment before turning his eyes back on the scene before them.

((aww, I'm really sorry Igtg...:( but I hope to seeya sometime tomorrow!!))
 
*~Aslansfriend~* said:
Aslan purred slightly while Jadis held onto his mane to calm Lucy who was standing close to both Jadis and Aslan. he gave a nod to Jadis and a certain look that meant she was winning the fight agaist the evil through the strencth he was giving her.
Susan and Edmund looked on in amazment at the wonderful sight, "I know she'll be ok now" Edmund said glanceing towards Stalker for a moment before turning his eyes back on the scene before them.

((aww, I'm really sorry Igtg...:( but I hope to seeya sometime tomorrow!!))
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((awww ok :( hope to seeya tomorrow)))

*Jadis let out another breath and the evil that the poison had placed into her body left from her and she felt like herself again and she released Aslan's mane*
 
WHere did Loretta run off to? I remember she ran outside...OH outside...she could be killed!
~Peter

*dashing through the woods**looked frantically around**roar from behind**looks back into the evil eyes of five wolves**scrambles up the hill inbetween Archenland and Narnai* Get back dumb beasts *smacked them down with a stick**ran fast**ran to her old home**ran into then trunk* AH...I'm safe here...now where is that stuff *grabs a bag**starts stuffing it with medicienes and the red fire bird powder**grabs more medicines which her mother had made for she was a great medicine woman**climbs up the tree onto a branch**sighs* I'm going home!*smiles**grabs all sorts of treasures from her home, finds a note** reads Dear Lorei, I have left for Archenland since TLITGK has taken over Narnia. I am head advisor to King Bor and am very happy, please come see me when it is safe enough to leave Narnia. I miss you alot and hope you and I will live to see eachother agian.Your loving brother,Lionel*sighs* Lionel is ALIVE! *smiles**picks up a necklace he left for her it said "hope"* I'll come Lionel, I'll come! Now to get to the palace with all this stuff...*balences on the branch and hopps from tree to tree the wolves can't tell where the noise came from**whispering* just get home...just get home*she really wanted to turn around and kill the wolves who ate her brother and sister* Greaaat...there are no trees anymore down there...I'll have to dash for it *leaps off the brach and plunges to the ground**runs very fast *howl**heavy breath**wolves on her heals**turns around just outside the palace*
~Loretta

There she is...What is she doing, she's turned around to face the wolves! *grabs sword**runs to the door**shouts* Loretta get back in here...
~Peter

Peter, here is stuff to save Jadis if she ever gets stung agian...and some of my treasures from my home...but this is my battle...and I need to fight it. *looks to wolves* Which one of you little puppies is going first!

*growl* you!

*scratch*bite*howl*whine**deep gash in leaders neck**killed all of the wolves except one who grabbed her by the neck**blood gushing out of Loretta's old wound**peter watches in horror**Loretta swings her paw into the wolves eye**wolf falls back...Loretta can't run away...too wounded**starts pulling herself home**speaks to peter* King Peter...*gasp* in that bag is a letter from my only living brother...*gasp* tell him I love him and I wanted to see him agian but I...*gasp* didn't make it...*gasp* and everyone else too Lucy, Susan, Edmond, Staker, jadis, you I love you all too...*drags herself to the front door...makes it inside.*
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
WHere did Loretta run off to? I remember she ran outside...OH outside...she could be killed!
~Peter

*dashing through the woods**looked frantically around**roar from behind**looks back into the evil eyes of five wolves**scrambles up the hill inbetween Archenland and Narnai* Get back dumb beasts *smacked them down with a stick**ran fast**ran to her old home**ran into then trunk* AH...I'm safe here...now where is that stuff *grabs a bag**starts stuffing it with medicienes and the red fire bird powder**grabs more medicines which her mother had made for she was a great medicine woman**climbs up the tree onto a branch**sighs* I'm going home!*smiles**grabs all sorts of treasures from her home, finds a note** reads Dear Lorei, I have left for Archenland since TLITGK has taken over Narnia. I am head advisor to King Bor and am very happy, please come see me when it is safe enough to leave Narnia. I miss you alot and hope you and I will live to see eachother agian.Your loving brother,Lionel*sighs* Lionel is ALIVE! *smiles**picks up a necklace he left for her it said "hope"* I'll come Lionel, I'll come! Now to get to the palace with all this stuff...*balences on the branch and hopps from tree to tree the wolves can't tell where the noise came from**whispering* just get home...just get home*she really wanted to turn around and kill the wolves who ate her brother and sister* Greaaat...there are no trees anymore down there...I'll have to dash for it *leaps off the brach and plunges to the ground**runs very fast *howl**heavy breath**wolves on her heals**turns around just outside the palace*
~Loretta

There she is...What is she doing, she's turned around to face the wolves! *grabs sword**runs to the door**shouts* Loretta get back in here...
~Peter

Peter, here is stuff to save Jadis if she ever gets stung agian...and some of my treasures from my home...but this is my battle...and I need to fight it. *looks to wolves* Which one of you little puppies is going first!

*growl* you!

*scratch*bite*howl*whine**deep gash in leaders neck**killed all of the wolves except one who grabbed her by the neck**blood gushing out of Loretta's old wound**peter watches in horror**Loretta swings her paw into the wolves eye**wolf falls back...Loretta can't run away...too wounded**starts pulling herself home**speaks to peter* King Peter...*gasp* in that bag is a letter from my only living brother...*gasp* tell him I love him and I wanted to see him agian but I...*gasp* didn't make it...*gasp* and everyone else too Lucy, Susan, Edmond, Staker, jadis, you I love you all too...*drags herself to the front door...makes it inside.*
~Loretta
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Susan, Lucy and Edmund gasped in horror at the state Loretta was in as they seen her drag herself inside the ice castle....feeling Jadis release his mane Aslan walked over to Loretta with Susan, Edmund and Lucy all following not to far behind him. he stopped over Loretta breathing on her gently, "my Dearest Loretta you have faught well but please understand that it is not your time to enter into my country yet for you are still greatly needed by your family who lives down here they love you Loretta as do I more then you could ever know" he gently placed his soft velted paw on Lorettas wounds and emmiditely they began to heal. Susan, Edmund and Lucy stood close to Aslan over Loretta watching the Great Lion heal her wounds.
 
* she breathed gently, tears rolling down her cheeks**clasps her arms around Aslans neck* I'm sorry, I was angrey at those wolves for what they did to my family, but I should have held my temper, I'm sorry everyone. *tears flowing freely* i'm really sorry, I didn't want to hurt anyone, thank you for healing me Aslan, *trying to smile through the hurt**sinks to her knees**still crying trying to stop for the sake of not looking weak**gasping*
~Loretta

*looking uncomfortable, not used to seeing Loretta cry**walks over* I would have done the same thing...*kinda hugging Loretta*
~Peter

*still crying, trying to stop* but don't you see, if you came out you might have been killed...*unable to talk any longer through the tears* I just end up hurting everyone...wether emotionally or phsyically!
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
* she breathed gently, tears rolling down her cheeks**clasps her arms around Aslans neck* I'm sorry, I was angrey at those wolves for what they did to my family, but I should have held my temper, I'm sorry everyone. *tears flowing freely* i'm really sorry, I didn't want to hurt anyone, thank you for healing me Aslan, *trying to smile through the hurt**sinks to her knees**still crying trying to stop for the sake of not looking weak**gasping*
~Loretta

*looking uncomfortable, not used to seeing Loretta cry**walks over* I would have done the same thing...*kinda hugging Loretta*
~Peter

*still crying, trying to stop* but don't you see, if you came out you might have been killed...*unable to talk any longer through the tears* I just end up hurting everyone...wether emotionally or phsyically!
~Loretta
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Aslan gently kissed the crying Loretta on the cheek, purring slightly bringing her comfort, "you are more then welcome my Dear" he said a deep sympathy showing in his megestic golden eyes as he watched Peter try comforting Loretta, he slowly walked over to her and sat down, taking her up in his paws and holding her close, "do not feel bad Loretta for you did what you did to save your family members you meant no harm in what you were doing do not beat yourself up about this for you have been forgiven long before you have evn asked for forgiveness" he breathed on her gently bringing a most delicious smell into the atmosphere as his shineing mane seemed to cover Loretta like a warm blanket of comfort.
Susan, Lucy and Edmund watched on with sympathy and concern written across thier faces Susan walked over to Peter, putting a hand on his shoulder, "everyone hurts Peter" she said qiuetly seeing his uncomfortable look in reponce to seeing Loretta cry.
 
I...I know, its just...why didn't she tell us. I feel bad because maybe I did something to make her feel akward in talking to us, she could have told us, we would understand...its just she...she looks so...well helpless right now, but she's the feirsest fighter...you saw how she tore those wolves apart...but she's so much smaller and helpless but so much better than us...and I feel I should have been there for her feelings...*sad face*
~PEter

*calming down* High King, I led you to beleive I wasn't emotional, because to show emotion makes you weak, so I was trying to not be emotional, usually i'm not just my past is my weakness, and whenever i see something from my past, such as those wolves who ate my brohter and sister, emotion comes out wether it is anger or sadness. *looking now to Edmond* and King Edmond *then looking to the ground* I know i haven't been at my best and I apoligize if I...I made you uncomfortable in knowing I'm apart of your family by being this way...and I will leave after the war is over if nessissary for your comfort.
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
I...I know, its just...why didn't she tell us. I feel bad because maybe I did something to make her feel akward in talking to us, she could have told us, we would understand...its just she...she looks so...well helpless right now, but she's the feirsest fighter...you saw how she tore those wolves apart...but she's so much smaller and helpless but so much better than us...and I feel I should have been there for her feelings...*sad face*
~PEter

*calming down* High King, I led you to beleive I wasn't emotional, because to show emotion makes you weak, so I was trying to not be emotional, usually i'm not just my past is my weakness, and whenever i see something from my past, such as those wolves who ate my brohter and sister, emotion comes out wether it is anger or sadness. *looking now to Edmond* and King Edmond *then looking to the ground* I know i haven't been at my best and I apoligize if I...I made you uncomfortable in knowing I'm apart of your family by being this way...and I will leave after the war is over if nessissary for your comfort.
~Loretta
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Susan only smiled sopportingly at her oldest brother listening to what Loretta had told him.
Edmund looked at Loretta sympathy playing all over his face, "no no not at all" he said with a light chuckle, "atfirst I was a bit shy around you...but I certainly don't want you to leave even after the war is over" he smiled reassuringly walking to Loretta and putting a gentle sopporting hand on her small shoulder,"I am glad your apart of our family...I guess it just took some getting used to is all you see don't blame yourself blame me if you want to blame anyone for me being a tad uncomfortable around you but I do want you to know that I don't feel that way now...I know how it feels to think showing your emotions makes you weak..but it really doesn't trust me I know" he gave another smile taking his hand of Lorettas shoulder as Aslan gentle set her down the castles floor.
 
*looks up at Edmond**smiles* thanks, truthfully I didn't want to leave, but I'd do anything for my family. So does that mean we're family now, King Edmond? *looks up questionally*
~Loretta

*smiles at Ed**whispers to him* thanks for supporting her Ed, she really needed that. *places a strong hand on Ed's sholder** looking toward Loretta* you don't need to address us as kings or queens anymore Loretta, you're our family now, no one is superiour to one another!
~Peter

Oh, and Aslan...*looks in his great big eyes* thank you. *hugs him*
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*looks up at Edmond**smiles* thanks, truthfully I didn't want to leave, but I'd do anything for my family. So does that mean we're family now, King Edmond? *looks up questionally*
~Loretta

*smiles at Ed**whispers to him* thanks for supporting her Ed, she really needed that. *places a strong hand on Ed's sholder** looking toward Loretta* you don't need to address us as kings or queens anymore Loretta, you're our family now, no one is superiour to one another!
~Peter

Oh, and Aslan...*looks in his great big eyes* thank you. *hugs him*
~Loretta
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*Jadis came back to her senses and walked over to where the group was gather and kneeled down beside Loretta and spoke*"don't be afraid to cry its only natural it don't show your weak you remind me of myself in the days when I was the White Witch I always thought love was a weakness and it made you weak and all but sents I been good I found out love is not a weakness but its a streagth and it makes you stronger not weak"
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*looks up at Edmond**smiles* thanks, truthfully I didn't want to leave, but I'd do anything for my family. So does that mean we're family now, King Edmond? *looks up questionally*
~Loretta

*smiles at Ed**whispers to him* thanks for supporting her Ed, she really needed that. *places a strong hand on Ed's sholder** looking toward Loretta* you don't need to address us as kings or queens anymore Loretta, you're our family now, no one is superiour to one another!
~Peter

Oh, and Aslan...*looks in his great big eyes* thank you. *hugs him*
~Loretta
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Edmund smiled down at Loretta, "of course" he said, he looked at Peter giving a greatful smile for his brothers encouragement had always been something the young King treasured. he then turned his gaze back on Loretta, "Peters right Loretta your our family now no need to address us as Kings and Queens"

feeling Loretta rap her arms around his neck Aslan chuckled slightly, "your more then welcome my Dear Loretta and that goes for welcoming you into our family as well" he said smileing down at her lovingly giving her a small kiss on the cheek.
 
*beaming with happiness* Oh, I wanted to show everyone some things. *picked up the bag and emptied it out* all of these glass bottles are medicienes, and here is what to use for what*pulls out a peice of paper* these were made by the wisest cenaurs wife and my mom made them from her recipeice *on the paper said remedys for love, hope, courage, strength etc* I thought these might come in handy! *pulls up the book and a few other items she did not show them* I'm going to take these to my room *starts toward the hallway*
~Loretta

wow, this will come in handy Loretta. *smiles*
~Peter
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*beaming with happiness* Oh, I wanted to show everyone some things. *picked up the bag and emptied it out* all of these glass bottles are medicienes, and here is what to use for what*pulls out a peice of paper* these were made by the wisest cenaurs wife and my mom made them from her recipeice *on the paper said remedys for love, hope, courage, strength etc* I thought these might come in handy! *pulls up the book and a few other items she did not show them* I'm going to take these to my room *starts toward the hallway*
~Loretta

wow, this will come in handy Loretta. *smiles*
~Peter
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*Jadis seen what Loretta had all took out of her bag and spoke*"oh yes these will come in handy dear"
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*Jadis seen what Loretta had all took out of her bag and spoke*"oh yes these will come in handy dear"
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Susan, Lucy and Udmunds eyes widened slightly seeing all the wonderful things Loretta had brought back with her..."thank you so much Dear Loretta it was awfully nice of you to bring all of this back to us" Susan called after Loretta with a sweet smile.
 
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I'll be back, I'm just going to my room for a minute *carrying various objects**walks to her room** opens up the book**looks at the pictures of her family* hi mom, hi dad, and maggie, lilly, lila, george, marsh, greg, suzie, sahala, carla...*sighs**picks up a few other objects**stares out the window*
~Loretta

These will come in handy, is she coming back or is she staying in her room...Lu or Ed you want to go check on her...I don't think she'd tell me or Susan right now.
~Peter
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
I'll be back, I'm just going to my room for a minute *carrying various objects**walks to her room** opens up the book**looks at the pictures of her family* hi mom, hi dad, and maggie, lilly, lila, george, marsh, greg, suzie, sahala, carla...*sighs**picks up a few other objects**stares out the window*
~Loretta

These will come in handy, is she coming back or is she staying in her room...Lu or Ed you want to go check on her...I don't think she'd tell me or Susan right now.
~Peter
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*Jadis looked to Peter and spoke*"she may come back out or she'll stay in there I can go check on her if you like"
 
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