A New Narnia

[SlpNarniaQueen]

To find that an hidiouse looking hag along with many others were cutting into Lucy's arms to force her to come with her. (they better watch out...lol) though they wen't exspecting Brono and the group to come outside.
Susan followed behind Brono, fear in her eyes, she held Poof close to her.


"But Loretta it doesn't matter...I would rather you hurt me then hurt yourself.." he said, his eyes sparkled with tears, he took her hand gently in his.

That was it. [insert name of kid who controls earth] blew the hag straight into the air where Tony stabbed her. The other kids used their powers to quickly rid Lucy of the horrid beings. Tony swooped down picking her up. "Are you okay?" he asked worridly.

Loretta bit her lip, that it started bleeding too. She dug her nails into his palm, breathing heavily.

 

[♥AslansForgivenDaughter♥]

That was it. [insert name of kid who controls earth] blew the hag straight into the air where Tony stabbed her. The other kids used their powers to quickly rid Lucy of the horrid beings. Tony swooped down picking her up. "Are you okay?" he asked worridly.

Loretta bit her lip, that it started bleeding too. She dug her nails into his palm, breathing heavily.

Lucy held onto Tony tightly, breathing a breath of relief though her wrist were bleeding badly she was breathing heavily as if she loast a lot of blood, she looked up at him but couldn'y ansher.


Edmund flinced slightly, but gently stroked her hand with his fingers. "Loretta...its going to be alright..I promise somhow I'm goingto find you help..."

 

[SlpNarniaQueen]

Lucy held onto Tony tightly, breathing a breath of relief though her wrist were bleeding badly she was breathing heavily as if she loast a lot of blood, she looked up at him but couldn'y ansher.


Edmund flinced slightly, but gently stroked her hand with his fingers. "Loretta...its going to be alright..I promise somhow I'm goingto find you help..."

Tony quickly swooped her down to the cellar while he grabbed her cordial, dropping a few drops in Lucy's mouth. He looked down at her worridly.

Loretta bit her lip harder. The pain was increasing greatly. She dug her nails into his hand. She knew she was hurting him. She looked up with pain written all over her face.

 

[♥AslansForgivenDaughter♥]

Tony quickly swooped her down to the cellar while he grabbed her cordial, dropping a few drops in Lucy's mouth. He looked down at her worridly.

Loretta bit her lip harder. The pain was increasing greatly. She dug her nails into his hand. She knew she was hurting him. She looked up with pain written all over her face.

Lucy looked at him, her wounds began to heal almost intintly. "Thank you so much dear Tony" she whispered, kissing him gently on the cheek, their eyes met for a moment her bueatiful brown eyes staring into his.


Edmund winced slightly but allowed her to dig her nails into his hand, anything to try and ease the pain, even if in the slightest form. "Lori...maybe we can use Lu's cordinal...or maybe Melina can call on Aslan..." he was desperate to kill her pain.

 

[SlpNarniaQueen]

Lucy looked at him, her wounds began to heal almost intintly. "Thank you so much dear Tony" she whispered, kissing him gently on the cheek, their eyes met for a moment her bueatiful brown eyes staring into his.


Edmund winced slightly but allowed her to dig her nails into his hand, anything to try and ease the pain, even if in the slightest form. "Lori...maybe we can use Lu's cordinal...or maybe Melina can call on Aslan..." he was desperate to kill her pain.

Tony stopped himself from kissing her. "We have to get this to Loretta!" Tony exclaimed, fighting to not get lost in her eyes. "Something happened and she's not doing so well."

Loretta couldn't open her mouth in fear of screaming. She held it all inside. It stung so bad. Loretta rested her head on the dirt relaxing her neck. Her curls dashed here and there as she fought the urge to squeeze even more.

 

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Tony stopped himself from kissing her. "We have to get this to Loretta!" Tony exclaimed, fighting to not get lost in her eyes. "Something happened and she's not doing so well."

Loretta couldn't open her mouth in fear of screaming. She held it all inside. It stung so bad. Loretta rested her head on the dirt relaxing her neck. Her curls dashed here and there as she fought the urge to squeeze even more.

Lucy's face lit up with alarm. "What happend?" though when she looved over at Loretta even seeing her from a slight distance she new somthing was terribly wrong. "Oh no...your right Tony fly us down to Loretta and quick!"


Edmund sighed, he held onto her hand allowing her to sqeeze as hard as she liked, he winced in pain but looked up at the sky, he wouldn't let her see him in pain. "ASlan..please hlep us.." he whispered, his eyes pleading the lion from wherever he was......

Susan scoopwed Poof up in her arms once more and walked over to Brono. "Brono...its seems somethings wrong with Loretta" she said, their eyes met for a moment, conern and a deep hurt showing within her own before she began walking towards Where she spotted Lori and Ed on the ground....

 

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Lucy's face lit up with alarm. "What happend?" though when she looved over at Loretta even seeing her from a slight distance she new somthing was terribly wrong. "Oh no...your right Tony fly us down to Loretta and quick!"


Edmund sighed, he held onto her hand allowing her to sqeeze as hard as she liked, he winced in pain but looked up at the sky, he wouldn't let her see him in pain. "ASlan..please hlep us.." he whispered, his eyes pleading the lion from wherever he was......

Susan scoopwed Poof up in her arms once more and walked over to Brono. "Brono...its seems somethings wrong with Loretta" she said, their eyes met for a moment, conern and a deep hurt showing within her own before she began walking towards Where she spotted Lori and Ed on the ground....

"Something with the shadows..." Tony said, swooping her down n ext to Loretta.

Brono looked over. "oh dear..." he said. He walked over to Loretta, who was now laying on the ground.

Loretta lay face first in the dirt, her back stung like scalding irons. She just closed her eyes and breathed.

 

[♥AslansForgivenDaughter♥]

"Something with the shadows..." Tony said, swooping her down n ext to Loretta.

Brono looked over. "oh dear..." he said. He walked over to Loretta, who was now laying on the ground.

Loretta lay face first in the dirt, her back stung like scalding irons. She just closed her eyes and breathed.

"Loretta!" Lucy breathed, she ran over to her, tears spilling down her cheeks. Edmund gently lifted her head. "Loretta...Lucy's here..maybe the cordinal will help" he whispered softly. Once she had opened her mouth Lucy pored a few drops of the cordinal into her mouth.
Susan, standing beside Brono, held her breath, tears heating her eyes. "Please let this work.." she whispered, looking up at the sky, pure despration spread across her face.

 

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"Loretta!" Lucy breathed, she ran over to her, tears spilling down her cheeks. Edmund gently lifted her head. "Loretta...Lucy's here..maybe the cordinal will help" he whispered softly. Once she had opened her mouth Lucy pored a few drops of the cordinal into her mouth.
Susan, standing beside Brono, held her breath, tears heating her eyes. "Please let this work.." she whispered, looking up at the sky, pure despration spread across her face.

Her breathing slowed and stopped for a minute. Nothing moved...not even her heart. She then started breathing again, slowly and then quicker, not tense at all. Loretta still didn't lift her head.

Brono had placed his hand on Susan's shoulder, praying Loretta would be okay. He looked over to Poof who was still on Susan's shoulder...asleep. He sighed...tense.

 

[♥AslansForgivenDaughter♥]

Her breathing slowed and stopped for a minute. Nothing moved...not even her heart. She then started breathing again, slowly and then quicker, not tense at all. Loretta still didn't lift her head.

Brono had placed his hand on Susan's shoulder, praying Loretta would be okay. He looked over to Poof who was still on Susan's shoulder...asleep. He sighed...tense.

Edmund held his breath, tears slowly began to slip down his cheeks while he watched her breathing increase and then decrease. "Please Loretta...you can't leave me...you have to hold on..." he whispered, stroking her curls gently in his hands.

Susan glanced over at Brono giving him a greatful look, tears stung her eyes though she tried to be strong for the others. She cradled Poof on her shoulder, gently holding him close to her, only praying that Loretta would be alright..

 

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Edmund held his breath, tears slowly began to slip down his cheeks while he watched her breathing increase and then decrease. "Please Loretta...you can't leave me...you have to hold on..." he whispered, stroking her curls gently in his hands.

Susan glanced over at Brono giving him a greatful look, tears stung her eyes though she tried to be strong for the others. She cradled Poof on her shoulder, gently holding him close to her, only praying that Loretta would be alright..

She breathed deeply lifting her head. She struggled to get up into sitting position though it was obvious though the pain had decreased, it wasn't totally gone.

Brono smiled. He watched her. She was so beautiful, a perfect mother. He stepped back, not daring to go any closer, afraid he would never let go.

 

[♥AslansForgivenDaughter♥]

She breathed deeply lifting her head. She struggled to get up into sitting position though it was obvious though the pain had decreased, it wasn't totally gone.

Brono smiled. He watched her. She was so beautiful, a perfect mother. He stepped back, not daring to go any closer, afraid he would never let go.

Edmund longed to pull her into an embrace though he felt as if he couldn't due to the fear of hurting her. "Thats it Lori...just hold on.." he whispered, giving a faint smile.


Susan had noticed Brono had stepped back and for a moment she wasn't sure if he really felt the same way about her as she did about him she sighed, rocking Poof gently to keep him alseep.

 

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Edmund longed to pull her into an embrace though he felt as if he couldn't due to the fear of hurting her. "Thats it Lori...just hold on.." he whispered, giving a faint smile.


Susan had noticed Brono had stepped back and for a moment she wasn't sure if he really felt the same way about her as she did about him she sighed, rocking Poof gently to keep him alseep.

Loretta looked to Ed. She reached out toward his hand...wanting to hold it, wanting him to hold her, but she just leaned against the wall, asking for his hand.

Brono looked away. He shouldn't get so close to a queen, but then again...

 

[♥AslansForgivenDaughter♥]

Loretta looked to Ed. She reached out toward his hand...wanting to hold it, wanting him to hold her, but she just leaned against the wall, asking for his hand.

Brono looked away. He shouldn't get so close to a queen, but then again...

Somehow looking at her Edmund could tell she wanted him to hold her, he gently grasped her hand in his and pulled her ever so softly into a tender embrace. "Your going to be okay Loretta...I know you will.." he whispered, just holding her as gently as possible.


Susan turned her gaze back apun Loretta though apart of her was still thinking about the way she felt about Brono though she wanted to be there for Loretta...

 

[SlpNarniaQueen]

Somehow looking at her Edmund could tell she wanted him to hold her, he gently grasped her hand in his and pulled her ever so softly into a tender embrace. "Your going to be okay Loretta...I know you will.." he whispered, just holding her as gently as possible.


Susan turned her gaze back apun Loretta though apart of her was still thinking about the way she felt about Brono though she wanted to be there for Loretta...

She rested her head on his shoulder. Something took over her, a soothing but stinging sensation. Her eyes drooped and her body relaxed...she knew she shouldn't go to sleep or she'd never wake up, she fought it, but it kept coming........

Brono looked to the queen, wanting to hold her, but he wouldn't. They had to focus on Loretta...Brono took a deep breath and read her mind, he didn't like what he saw.

Poof stared at everyone with wide eyes, not quite knowing what was happening.

Tony looked to Lucy. "What's wrong with her?"

 

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She rested her head on his shoulder. Something took over her, a soothing but stinging sensation. Her eyes drooped and her body relaxed...she knew she shouldn't go to sleep or she'd never wake up, she fought it, but it kept coming........

Brono looked to the queen, wanting to hold her, but he wouldn't. They had to focus on Loretta...Brono took a deep breath and read her mind, he didn't like what he saw.

Poof stared at everyone with wide eyes, not quite knowing what was happening.

Tony looked to Lucy. "What's wrong with her?"

Edmund felt her body relax, for a moment he thought it might have been a positive thing but he had a feeling that if she fell alseep she would never awaken again.."Loretta..I know its hard but please...try to keep awake.." he said, barly above a soft whisper.

Susan looked at Brono, their eyes met for a moment before she looked away, back to Loretta and Ed. Though when she looked back to Brono she could tell he must be reading someones mind, for he seemed qiueter and more focused then usual. "Brono...what is it?" she asked, noticeing his face fell into deep cocnern. she held Poof close to her, knowing he was young and didn't understand much of what was going on around him.


"I...don't know Tony.." Lucy whispered, her eyes sparkleing with tears of bittergreif, though looking deep inside one could tell, in the mist of the greif was also fear...fear for the loss of Lorettas, who had now become more like her sister, life.

 

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Edmund felt her body relax, for a moment he thought it might have been a positive thing but he had a feeling that if she fell alseep she would never awaken again.."Loretta..I know its hard but please...try to keep awake.." he said, barly above a soft whisper.

Susan looked at Brono, their eyes met for a moment before she looked away, back to Loretta and Ed. Though when she looked back to Brono she could tell he must be reading someones mind, for he seemed qiueter and more focused then usual. "Brono...what is it?" she asked, noticeing his face fell into deep cocnern. she held Poof close to her, knowing he was young and didn't understand much of what was going on around him.


"I...don't know Tony.." Lucy whispered, her eyes sparkleing with tears of bittergreif, though looking deep inside one could tell, in the mist of the greif was also fear...fear for the loss of Lorettas, who had now become more like her sister, life.

Loretta fought it, but the sleepiness was taking over.

Brono shook his head. "She closes her eyes in the next ten minutes she's gone for good..." he said slowly.

Tony put his arms around Lucy. "She'll be fine..." he ressured her.

 

[♥AslansForgivenDaughter♥]

Loretta fought it, but the sleepiness was taking over.

Brono shook his head. "She closes her eyes in the next ten minutes she's gone for good..." he said slowly.

Tony put his arms around Lucy. "She'll be fine..." he ressured her.

"Lori..please..you have to hang on you can't leave us! we need you!" Edmund cried, his heart struck with terror the moment he heard what Brono had said. "Please don't go to sleep.." tears came spilling down his cheeks, wetting her curls.


"You mean...." Susan never vinsihed her sentace, instead she gasped, putting one hand over her mouth in shock and the other sopporting Poof. "Isn't thier something we can do for her?" she asked, now with both of her hands sopporting the child in her arms.


Lucy rapped her arms around Tony, falling into his embrace. "But tony if she closes her eyes she'll never come back again.." she sobbed, her heart wretched at the thought of Loretta leaveing them for what would seem like forever.

 

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"Lori..please..you have to hang on you can't leave us! we need you!" Edmund cried, his heart struck with terror the moment he heard what Brono had said. "Please don't go to sleep.." tears came spilling down his cheeks, wetting her curls.


"You mean...." Susan never vinsihed her sentace, instead she gasped, putting one hand over her mouth in shock and the other sopporting Poof. "Isn't thier something we can do for her?" she asked, now with both of her hands sopporting the child in her arms.


Lucy rapped her arms around Tony, falling into his embrace. "But tony if she closes her eyes she'll never come back again.." she sobbed, her heart wretched at the thought of Loretta leaveing them for what would seem like forever.

Loretta squeezed his hand, yawning. Her head nodded. "I'm trying..." she whisperd.

Brono nodded. He placed his hand on her cheek. "All we have to do is keep her awake..."

Tony bit his lip. "She'll make it...she has to." Tony hugged her tightly. "Don't worry."

 

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Loretta squeezed his hand, yawning. Her head nodded. "I'm trying..." she whisperd.

Brono nodded. He placed his hand on her cheek. "All we have to do is keep her awake..."

Tony bit his lip. "She'll make it...she has to." Tony hugged her tightly. "Don't worry."

"I know...I promise not to let you go to sleep Lori...I'll do everything I can.." he said, trying his best to keep his promise and keep her awake, he would never forgive if he let her fall alseep...never to wake up.


Susan breathed in, letting out a tince sigh, a few tears spilled down her cheek, wetting Bronos hand. "Okay.." she wanted to take his hand, to have him hold her, but she new this wasn't the apritpate time. "I just hope we can do that..." she glanced towards Loretta, seeing her yawn.


Lucy gave a soft wimper, trying to keep from bursting into tears. She held him close to her, just feeling his warm form agiast hers seemed to bring her hope to hang on, never giving up on Loretta.