Rhyanidd
New member
just a few errors in the first paragraph 1). You said "Is their reason that these two should be wed in holy matrimony? Speak now or forever hold your peace." I think what you mean is "Is there reason that these two should NOT be wed in holy matrimony? Speak now or forever hold you peace." and 2). Usally that is said before the vows, you have it said afterwards....
oh well its still really good!