A True Story...
- Thread starter Red Roses
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yea the best way to do work is during free time..in school ;]
that was a sad story..:[ i feel srry for the little girl.
and it was well written cause you made it from the point of view from the girl and it read as if the girl was telling it [the words etc.]
good job sara..thought its sad..
that was a sad story..:[ i feel srry for the little girl.
and it was well written cause you made it from the point of view from the girl and it read as if the girl was telling it [the words etc.]
good job sara..thought its sad..
Red Roses
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Ah, excellent!!! *Slaps cheezy grin on* Kid, do this right, and we can go places!
*is revolted at the expression on Levi's face* Hm, I was thinking of sending some of my work to a publisher. Am I ready for that stage yet?
It wasn't free time... I didn't have my art stuff with me. Besides I'm not an artist. XD
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Silvanus
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Err . . . we'll have to go over your paper first. Line by line. This may take awhile.*is revolted at the expression on Levi's face* Hm, I was thinking of sending some of my work to a publisher. Am I ready for that stage yet?
It wasn't free time... I didn't have my art stuff with me. Besides I'm not an artist. XD
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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I'm coming out of my self-induced shell to say, "Great job!" I already critiqued it.
Mine too??!?!?
Err . . . we'll have to go over your paper first. Line by line. This may take awhile.
Mine too??!?!?
Red Roses
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*gasps* I look forward to it. <_<
I'm coming out of my self-induced shell to say, "Great job!" I already critiqued it.
Yes you did.
*glares* I'll help too! If you want.
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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You already have. You listened!!! YEA!!! lol, I turn it in for workshop next week... *bites nails*
You listened!!! YEA!!! lol, I turn it in for workshop next week... *bites nails*
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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Yeah! Well, I mean, you read it anyway, but I would expect you to say something if it stuck out to you.
Silvanus
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Err . . . I usually don't do this, but considering your seniority of x months, I'll see what I can do. Beam your work over. It may take a month, though.
Don't. It's a horrible, horrible process that's full of pain.
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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Err . . . I usually don't do this, but considering your seniority of x months, I'll see what I can do. Beam your work over. It may take a month, though.
Don't. It's a horrible, horrible process that's full of pain.
Lol, yes, but it's YOUR turn to pm me.
And I can take the pain. *is tough*
Red Roses
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Err . . . I usually don't do this, but considering your seniority of x months, I'll see what I can do. Beam your work over. It may take a month, though.
Don't. It's a horrible, horrible process that's full of pain.
Yes, I know. Especially when you edit it.
jk,
Silvanus
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Oh ho! We'll see about that! And I'll try to beam a PM to you tonight, but can't promise anything.
Seriously. I'm like Javere with Valjean. I'm stubborn. Ish. Kinda. Not.
Red Roses
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Oh ho! We'll see about that! And I'll try to beam a PM to you tonight, but can't promise anything.
Seriously. I'm like Javere with Valjean. I'm stubborn. Ish. Kinda. Not.
Ya, Nicki. My son is a very busy boy. *ruffles Levi's hair* he took off after his mom. *sniffs* I'm so proud of him.
Take out the "ish". And the "kinda". And the "not".
Silvanus
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*Squirms* Awww! Shucks, Mummy! Do you have to do that in front of everybody?Ya, Nicki. My son is a very busy boy. *ruffles Levi's hair* he took off after his mom. *sniffs* I'm so proud of him.
Take out the "ish". And the "kinda". And the "not".
<_< Actually, I'm such a push over. This is not good. >_>
Silvanus
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0_o What's . . . cheek . . . walk . . . <_<Alright, I won't do it in front of everybody. *pinches Levi's cheek, sniffs, and walks away*
I'm gonna start working on Chapter 2 for THE Short Story in a minute.
Oh! Geeze, I didn't realize that you were waiting for me! I appear to have been drongo'ed!
Red Roses
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0_o What's . . . cheek . . . walk . . . <_<
Oh! Geeze, I didn't realize that you were waiting for me! I appear to have been drongo'ed!
Yes, I pinched your cheek. *nods*
Hurry up, I'm getting impatient. -_- Oh, and when you're done, I have something else for you to edit.