I Know That It's Love. (poem)

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I want to come over but I don’t know what to say,
You look like your nineteen and I feel like I’m eight.

No one else sees you cause they think that you’re a hick,
But I never knew I could feel love like this.

I’m not the nicest guy when it comes down to being true,
But it makes me wish I was when I just look at you.

I’m afraid to come over cause I’m hating who I am,
I’m killing myself for love cause I just ain’t your man.

I see you standing in the rain with shoulders shaking,
And I want to cry cause I know your heart is breaking.

I’m moving towards you without a word to say,
But I see you need someone so I’m coming anyway.

You look up with tears in your eyes mingling in the rain,
My heart snaps in two and I whisper ‘its okay’.

You’re vulnerable right now as your buried in my arms,
And I promise myself I won’t cause you any harm.

Give you a hug then pull away before I mess up,
I’m not the kind of guy to give you true love.

Blocking the rain with my head I wipe at your tears,
All I want in the all world is just to have you near.

‘Do you love me?’ you ask and I don’t know what to say,
The truth is that you just blow my breath away.

For the first time in my life I say those words for real,
Not just saying it but knowing that its what I feel.

‘But I’m a jerk,’ I add ‘I’m not the guy for you’,
You whisper ‘you did what no one else would do’.

I make a promise in my heart that I’ll never break your trust,
Standing in the rain we don’t kiss; and I know that its love.
 
Thankies. *High fives, secret handshake from Parent Trap, belly-bump*
okay, mayboe omit the belly-bump.
Glad you liked my poem. :o It just...came to me.
 
hahahaha. wow....not going there. 0.o...*cough*

Yeah, it's awesome. It's like an honest kind of love that doesn't need kisses to be true. Just being there for a person you love when they need it most. It's just special. yeah.. You did good, kid. ;) hehe
 
That was really neat, LD. I loved the fact that it was from a guy's perspective. Doesn't seem like you see many guys writing poems these days, especially not love poems. It was very, very sweet. I love it.
 
Kalakali said:
That was really neat, LD. I loved the fact that it was from a guy's perspective. Doesn't seem like you see many guys writing poems these days, especially not love poems. It was very, very sweet. I love it.
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Yeah, poetic guys seem to be a rare breed.:rolleyes: I only know 2 other guys who write poems - my cousin and a friend on MySpace. :)
 
Thanks all. For anyone who watches NCIS, i kinda got the idea from Dinoso.
I kept thinking of this prototype 'relationships' these days where people go through boyfriends/girlfriends like thier a pair of socks. Then i thought how awesome it would be for someone to realize, 'hey, i don't need or want to do this anymore'.
And a poem was born.
 
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