DestinyLies
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I"ll try to catch up...
Lancadia
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SusanTheGentleHornblower
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hey, no! just take your time!!!! I was just curious...that's all! please, don't rush!!!
DestinyLies
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I know I just would like to read as you post so im not on page 2 when your posting on page 4...
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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haha! ok, well, I'm done for right now, so that'll give you time to catch up.
KathrynJanewayChakotay
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Nicki nice job keep it up is about time you posted more girl
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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haha! lol, thanks Captain Kate! so, what do you think? sound half-way decent so far?
KathrynJanewayChakotay
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I think its great keep it up and i updated more of mine i try to keep tabs on all my favorite authors on here But espailly ones that there stories are great and yours is very good Nicki
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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aw, thanks so much Kate! I hope you don't mind me calling you that...cause I know that everyone else calls you something else... Do you like Colin?
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KathrynJanewayChakotay
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Yeah i do i don't mine you calling me kate i would actually rather people call me that cause of safety reasons you know
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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I TOTALLY understand! that's why I've never given my real name out. ok, just checking to make sure you're good with it!
KathrynJanewayChakotay
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Colin is so cute and that is very wise Nicki that you do that Aravis would be calling me mama janeway about now
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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lol! thanks, he's one of my favs. He gets a friend later on who's got just as much spunk! I'm going to put up a little more just for you
KathrynJanewayChakotay
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YAy want some more of mine nicki
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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aw, man! i did it, and then my internet quit on me. sorry, it'll have to wait till later.
KathrynJanewayChakotay
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aw, man! i did it, and then my internet quit on me. sorry, it'll have to wait till later.
That is fine nick mine does that alot and it drive me crazy
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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I'm so stinkin bored right now...cause like almost no one's on...so I'm going to try to post this part AGAIN...
The next day dawned clear and bright. The sun rose over the sea, casting jewel-like rays of fiery reds and oranges over everything they touched. The ocean looked like melted rubies adorned with gold tipped waves. The birds sang songs of joy, begging the people to wake from their slumber and join them in watching the sun rise.
Alik had woken before the sun was up. As the sun's light began touching the castle, he was walking down a long corridor, to the room where the council had met the night before. He opened the two large doors, and found himself still alone.
"Good," he thought, "I will have time to think before the others arive."
He walked over and sat at the head of the table, with his back to the arched windows and the ever-rising sun. He rested his elbows on the table and put his head in his hands. A vividly red leaf fluttered in from the window and landed on the table. Absent-mindedly, Alik put the leaf in his pocket. He began to pray.
About ten minutes later, Briarwood, Topin, and Lord Ginavin came into the room talking. The fell silent when they saw the king. Alik looked up at them and said, "Come in! I've been praying for guidance for our journey as I waited for you. Where is Glondil?"
Ch.3
A Morning of Planning
A Morning of Planning
The next day dawned clear and bright. The sun rose over the sea, casting jewel-like rays of fiery reds and oranges over everything they touched. The ocean looked like melted rubies adorned with gold tipped waves. The birds sang songs of joy, begging the people to wake from their slumber and join them in watching the sun rise.
Alik had woken before the sun was up. As the sun's light began touching the castle, he was walking down a long corridor, to the room where the council had met the night before. He opened the two large doors, and found himself still alone.
"Good," he thought, "I will have time to think before the others arive."
He walked over and sat at the head of the table, with his back to the arched windows and the ever-rising sun. He rested his elbows on the table and put his head in his hands. A vividly red leaf fluttered in from the window and landed on the table. Absent-mindedly, Alik put the leaf in his pocket. He began to pray.
About ten minutes later, Briarwood, Topin, and Lord Ginavin came into the room talking. The fell silent when they saw the king. Alik looked up at them and said, "Come in! I've been praying for guidance for our journey as I waited for you. Where is Glondil?"
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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you guys, I just noticed 2 things...1: my spelling STINKS!!!!!!! sorry for the inconveniance. I'll try to do better.
2: I left out a part of ch 1!
so now, if you could...rewind with me and we'll fix that problem... sorry!!!!
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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Pick up from ch.1...I'll edit this in so that it makes more sense later....
EDIT: it's been done
EDIT: it's been done
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KathrynJanewayChakotay
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it okay Nicki If it was not for spell check i would be lost or somtimes you type so fast that stuff is not coming together right
That is fine nick if you need to edit i will bear with you
That is fine nick if you need to edit i will bear with you
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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wow, thanks Kate! you're the greatest. I just had figured that when I started ch 2 yesterday that ch1 had been going on for so long that it just HAD to be done!!!
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