Lost Story: DEATH: A Story of Mortality

EveningStar

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This is one of a few lost stories from over a decade ago that no longer exist on the forum. Yes, it is a Narnia story, and yes for you busy folks it is rather short.

Please read and comment/like if you enjoyed this classic.
 
Charlie remembered how his marine uniform made him feel like a real man, but he had never felt so much like a child in a man’s body as he did at that moment. As his landing craft approached the beach, he reached up with a trembling hand to feel of the crucifix that hung about his neck on his khaki shirt next to his dog tags.

“Our Father who art in Heaven, hallowed be thy name…”

A shell exploded in the water, nearly tipping the craft. The smell of the explosion reminded him briefly of hunting in the Maine woods with his father. Only now he was the prey.

He checked his rifle nervously. It was armed and ready. He only wished that he were equally ready.

“..thy kingdom come, thy will be done, on earth as it is in heaven…”

He felt a slap on the back. It was Nick. Good old Nicholas…

“Give us this day our daily bread…”

***​

Out of the corner of his eye, Aslan saw the shreds of his mane in the flickering torchlight as yard by painful yard he was dragged over the stony ground toward the Stone Table. He thought about Susan and Lucy, filling his mind with love of them to drown out the hatred and malice that surrounded him. He knew they saw everything; even if the would give Jadis the satisfaction of hearing his shrieks, he would never let the girls know how badly they were hurting him.

The edge of the Stone Table brutally raked him as he was yanked the last few feet. Many ugly things went through his mind as the evil could no longer be distanced.

He had urinated before he came so he would not be a source of laughter when he wet himself at the end. Still, it never occurred to him that they would feel such glee at clipping him bald.

“Muzzle him!” Jadis yelled.

Aslan sighed. No one brings shears to a battle. No one brings a muzzle. She had planned that carefully.

***​

The landing craft bottomed out a few feet from the shore. Its front end was a ramp, and when it dropped with a splash, the sergeant’s cry of “Go! Go!” was hardly necessary. Charlie’s heart pounded in his chest. He felt the cold, briny water as he plunged into the surf. He felt the sand beneath his boots as he waded forward. He felt the warm wind in his face.

On the shore, the advancing troops were being picked off by Japanese fire. Charlie tried very hard not to think about it. He concentrated on the barbed wire. He fell to the ground and shuffled forward beneath the cruel strands of steel just as he had been trained, moving forward on his belly, pushing his gun ahead of him.

One thing at a time. That’s all he could afford to think about…

***​

Aslan breathed heavily, his heart pounding in his chest. The rapid pulses only made the ropes about his limbs throb all the worse. “Edmund,” he thought, “at least you are safe. At least you are safe…”

Jadis’ voice punctuated his thoughts again.

“Your death will appease the deep magic, but after you’re dead, what’s to stop me from killing him?? You have given me Narnia forever! You have lost your life and you have not saved his!”

She held the obsidian knife high. He knew this even though he could not look around to see her trembling hands.

“In that knowledge, despair…and DIE!”

***​

Charlie had just cleared the barbed wire. He stood, raised his rifle, and then looked into the face of death. He caught a glint of light on a rifle barrel.

“Jesus, Mary and Joseph!”

There was nowhere to run. Nowhere to hide…

The slug felt just like that, being slugged in the abdomen by a boxer. Warm blood poured down his legs. The rifle slipped from his grasp. The ground was falling toward him. He could not catch himself.

“That’s it,” he thought.

***​
 
Aslan felt the click when the knife, wielded with such force, pierced his heart and hit a rib on the opposite side. Even in his final agony, he noticed how cold the stone felt against his warm body. Then the pain resurged as she rudely wrenched the knife from the wound.

His legs stiffened for a moment, then fell limp. It was to him as if all the torches went out at once and a night with no moon or stars swallowed up everything in its deadly darkness.

***​

The marine walked forward. The tunnel through which he travelled was couched in shadows, but at the end beckoned a brilliant white light. He ambled along serenely, noting that he felt no more pain and, despite the surreality of what he saw, he felt no more fear. That’s not to say he felt no more regrets. There would be the usual telegram from the War Department coming for Dad. His name would be added to the Pro Patria Mori list hanging in the church. Janice would have to put her dreams on hold until another love came into her life. His brother Todd would get his hunting rifle—his letters home made that quite clear.

The passage seemed to go on for hours or it could have been days. He passed the shadows of people he had once known. They seemed to regard him with friendly recognition but no surprise. He waived at his Grandmother Tuttle and she nodded her head in reply.

Finally, he emerged into the light. He stood at the edge of a bottomless canyon. Crossing it was a large ornate stone bridge that looked wide enough to drive a Jeep across easily. And beyond it on the other side were green meadows with flowers and trees, and on past that distant misty mountains reaching into a cloudless pure sky. As he approached the bridge he heard something behind him and looked around.

What he saw startled him, or the closest feeling to being startled that he could manage. It was a lion, a very large lion. His face was surrounded by a rough stubble of mane and in his side was a terrible gaping wound.

The serenity of the moment was shattered. Charlie went to the lion without fear; somehow in his heart of hearts he knew it was alright.

“Hey there fellow, what happened to you?”

“The same thing that happened to you. I died for my country.”

For some reason, Charlie was not shocked that the lion answered him. What disturbed him the most was the suffering that the lion had no doubt endured.

Though Charlie was a hunter, he had never bagged anything bigger than a squirrel or groundhog, and the large sad noble face of the lion broke his heart. Besides, it was clear this was no clean kill; that cat had been tortured and desecrated.

“Who did this to you??”

“In a way it was a good friend.”

“Are you saying it was an accident?”

“More like poor judgment.”

Charlie put his arms around the lion’s neck and gave him a pat. “Kind of like my running down to enlist, hmm? We old soldiers ought to stick together. Stay with me, friend, and I’ll look after you.”

The lion looked up at him. “Would you look after me, Charlie?” Aslan smiled. “I will look after you. While I must go on alone, your time has not yet come. Go home, get well, and go squirrel hunting with your father. I’ll come back when you’re ready. Remember me.”

***​

Charlie awoke. The pain was bad, but it felt different somehow. He couldn’t move much, but he glanced about at the bottles, the doctors, the bright lights.

“He’s coming around,” the orderly said.

“My my, you’re quite lucky,” the Navy doctor said. “One of your buddies pulled you to safety.”

“Two of them,” Charlie whispered.

“Well Charles, we can save this arm if infection doesn’t set in. This is a ticket home, you lucky stiff!”

“My arm??” Charlie asked. “I was shot in the arm??”

His eyes closed and as he slipped back into unconsciousness, he muttered, “Remember me…”

THE END
 
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