Mara Jade: Emperor's Hand

skyla sue said:
Yeah Go For it Mara is my fave expanded universe charcter she is a very intriuging Charecter good so far Keep it up
Click to expand...


thanks, I'm making this up as I go along, I you have any sugestions you can PM them to me, they would be greatly apricated
 
The shorter man walked up to her," you will learn to respect me or there will be consecenses." Mara looked strate at him, she wasn't afrade any more, she was mad. "Where are my parents," Mara asked. "They are safe, and will stay that way as long as you are good." Mara looked back at the black man, "why am I here." "Because, my dear, you are going to help me," he said evaly. "If I help you will I see my family again," Mara asked. "Ovcores," he lied," you will see them again. But know you need to go get some rest and change." "Whats wrong with my clothes," Mara asked. "Every thing," he turned to the man in black," Lord Vader, show her to her room, and watch her every move, I dont trust her," he said quietly. "Yes my lord, this way." He walked out of the room, his cape flowing behind him. Mara slowly walked after in. When he got to the evlivator he stopped and waited for her. Mara stepped in, the door slid shut behind her. Mara looked at him, trying to figure out why she thought she knew him.
 
Mara noticed for the first time that he was wereing a mask, and breathing though it. Mara saw some thing hanging at he's belt, it was short and it looked like metal. Mara was still staring at it when that elivator stoped. The man walked out, she followed. They were in a small room, it looked like her room back home. "This is your room," with that he turned and walked out of the room. Mara staired at her new room, she couldn't beleve that only a few hours ago she was at home with her famliy.
 
Last edited:
Mara walked over to her bead and sat down. She missed her family so much, she dowted that she would ever see them again. Mara stood up and walked over to what she thought was a closet. Mara pulled the door open, it was full of close. Mara pulled a black and red outfit out and put it on. Mara was still stairing at the clothes when her door opened. She turned around and saw the man who was called lord Vader standing there. "You have to come with me." Mara gullped and walked over to him. She followed him to the elivator and walked in after him. "Where are you going," Mara asked him. "The chansaler said that you need to get something to eat before your traning starts." Mara looked up at him, "what training," she asked curiusly. He looked down at her, "you will see soon."
 
Mara followed Vader out of the elivator when it stopped. They walked into a small room, everyone was eating. When Mara walked in they stopped, and staired at her. Mara tugged on Vaders cape, he looked down at her. "I'm not hungry," Vader nodded. They walked out of the room and down the hall. When they got to the end of the hall Vader opened the door and walked in, Mara followed. The chansular was waiting for them. He grimmed evaly at Mara, in that instant Mara knew she would never see her famliy again. She tryed not to tremmble.
 
Aravis of Archenland said:
*cries* I feel so sorry for Mara! And her parents.
Click to expand...


I know, I do to, I was thinking and do you think it would be cool if Vader had a soft side because of Mara, like he will rase her know
 
I know..but, but. *cries more* Just kidding. Could someone post in my thread? I want someone else's posts in between mine so I don't always have to double post.
 
"Ah, you are scared," the chansular laughed, "but not nerlly scared enough." He took his hood of. Mara screamed, Vader felt something pull on his cape, Mara was hidding behind him. The chansaler looked at Vader, "take her back to her room."
 
Back
Top