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I didnt realise how much i had done lol :D

Enjoy!!

I enjoyed it alot!

I liked the bit before it also.
How there sorta faking there happines.
I do that alot sometimes, and when that happens it almost kills me inside, well not kill but get really, idk.

Lol anyway very good!
You have a good technique, a good way of putting things.
I'm not always so fluent when I write, it sounds kinda bad at times.
 
Ahh see i read alot and write alot and it really helps to understand how a story flows well and what to put in that will grip the reader.

And thanks, i wwill try to get more down sometime soon!! :D:D
 
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