My first (short) story EVER! In celebration of Narnia Day.

The brave mouse's name should be...

  • Rhendelmir

    Votes: 12 63.2%

  • Rainart

    Votes: 2 10.5%

  • Chiblik

    Votes: 2 10.5%

  • Arion

    Votes: 5 26.3%

  • Tybalt

    Votes: 3 15.8%

  • Whisperpaw

    Votes: 4 21.1%

  • Pinbeeblin

    Votes: 1 5.3%

  • Kentral

    Votes: 1 5.3%

  • Glewcydio

    Votes: 1 5.3%

  • Kenway

    Votes: 5 26.3%
  • Total voters
    19
  • Poll closed .
You can suggest as many names as you can. Copperfox already suggested like six, but I only picked one from his list. I think I'll add a poll once I have a few more suggestions I like. Top vote getter will win.
 
Alright but I have quite a few names, and I just looked all up with meanings and everything for you.

Arion-Braver
Gallagher-Brave
Emery-Bravery
Emory-Bravery
Maynard-Mighty and Brave
Reynard-Brave Counsel
Tybalt-Brave
Gillespie-Servant of the bishop
Bevis-Dear Son
Duranjaya-Son who is a hero
Oral-Golden Son
Reuben/Ruben-Behold, a son
Amato-Beloved
 
uniquemonke said:
Alright but I have quite a few names, and I just looked all up with meanings and everything for you.

Arion-Braver
Gallagher-Brave
Emery-Bravery
Emory-Bravery
Maynard-Mighty and Brave
Reynard-Brave Counsel
Tybalt-Brave
Gillespie-Servant of the bishop
Bevis-Dear Son
Duranjaya-Son who is a hero
Oral-Golden Son
Reuben/Ruben-Behold, a son
Amato-Beloved
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Wow! Nice names? Have any of these been used somewhere else? in movies or anything? I like the first one, Arion, because it sounds like Orion, and you know I just love stars and constellations names.
I like Emory too for Emory Upton, a Civil War Union General who led a magnificent charge against a heavily defended position. Very brave as his name implied, but it might sound too human and less Narnian.
I like Tybalt too. it sounds Narnian. Maybe if it can be combined with some other name.... uhmmmm....

Thanks. Let me think.
 
brave+bite

Thank you so much BK for the wonderful Narnia Day gift you wrote for us all to enjoy. I really like the way you used conversation with Aslan to develop your tale, and the way you tied the threads of the Stone Table and Reepicheep's prophecy together.

These name suggestions are rather weird sounding but they are both based on the words "brave" + "bite":
Glewcydio (Welsh)
Crogagreim (Irish Gaelic)
 
Thanks for suggesting I read this, BK! It is beautiful. Nice and simple but meaningful, good for a first story. And for the name...well...right now "Whisperpaw" keeps popping into my head. Not very original, I guess.

I like Gillespie...it sounds mousey enough. :)
 
Lol, Arion... I have already used that name in my stories for one of the Four Mighty in my last fan fic. Arion, Onell, Wincatt and Lucian, remember? Lol, i thought I had made it up cuz I dind't know that it was actually a name :p really, heehee. But I have written an original story with a character named like that...
anyways, lol.
 
Benisse said:
Thank you so much BK for the wonderful Narnia Day gift you wrote for us all to enjoy. I really like the way you used conversation with Aslan to develop your tale, and the way you tied the threads of the Stone Table and Reepicheep's prophecy together.

These name suggestions are rather weird sounding but they are both based on the words "brave" + "bite":
Glewcydio (Welsh)
Crogagreim (Irish Gaelic)
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I like Welsh and Gaelic names, but I'm afraid people won't know how to pronounce them. But thank you so much for your compliment.

SweetWaters said:
Thanks for suggesting I read this, BK! It is beautiful. Nice and simple but meaningful, good for a first story. And for the name...well...right now "Whisperpaw" keeps popping into my head. Not very original, I guess.

I like Gillespie...it sounds mousey enough. :)
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Whisperpaw is a good name but yes, it will probably be too common. We are talking about the patriarch of the talking mice.

Protagonist said:
That wasn't masterful storytelling but I felt some emotion reading it. Decent work.
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I know you don't dish out compliments that easy so I am thankful for it and glad you liked it.

Ginny_JillPole said:
Lol, Arion... I have already used that name in my stories for one of the Four Mighty in my last fan fic. Arion, Onell, Wincatt and Lucian, remember? Lol, i thought I had made it up cuz I dind't know that it was actually a name :p really, heehee. But I have written an original story with a character named like that...
anyways, lol.
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Yes! That's where I heard the name Arion. This is why I asked her if any of those names had been used before because I remembered reading it somewhere, I just could not place it where.
 
Well, yeah, squeaky names are good. But can we get a good meaningful squeaky name? I am making a list of the names and I will probably put 10 on a poll.
 
BarbarianKing said:
Rhendelmir it is Ginny. I made a mistake I guess. I am waiting to see what other names are suggested then we can have a vote. Thanks!

Mozart: Braveheart is a good name, but I'm afraid it's already taken by a somewhat popular movie and may not work out here in an original story. But thanks anyway. I am still open for new suggestions. I want the mouse to have a name.

Candi: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I am sure you'll come up with a cool name for the mouse.
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HEEHEE! Right like I NEVER write Goose. LOL UHUH! hmmmmm names


I love the name Emery/Emory but it's not very..."mousy"..."Squeeky"...


Rinian
Michal
Millard
Aval
Averall
Court
Kenway
Rainart
 
Heehee

Rinian sounds good but it reminds me of Rilian or Tirian.... too cliche, but it's not bad. :)

Go Rhendelmir :p lol jk jk

I like the names that professor Joe (Copperfox) suggested.
 
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