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Thanks Danny! :D
Acwellen said:
But Danny you don't know the full story! If you did, Cleo would be the one blushing! It was soooooooooooooo funny....
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*bonks Grace over the head with a frying pan* HUMPH!!! :mad: I'll PM the poem to everyone you know... and I'll... I'll... tell them you're in L-O-V-E!!! Who's laughing now, eh??? :D :p
 
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:eek: Whaaaa....??? Girls, I smell something fun here.... :D

Gracie, I dunno the whole story but something that I could get so far...both of you're a best mates :) (two great writers are bestmates...wheeew....this world is beautiful ):D



Keep writing, Cleo!!!
 
Hehe! You're smart Danny! :D It is fun and I actually threw a bucket of water on for Grace for that ummm... Prank. :D We've been mates for about 4 years now and are pretty close... We do tease each other a lot though, as you could probably tell from the previous posts!!! :p

Good advice... I'd better go and finish that poem for ya! ;)
 
That's sweet! I hope both of you could be as great as Mr. Lewis and Mr. Tolkien :) (They are bestmates and they also great writer as we know)

Can't wait for your new write
 
W. Cleopia said:
Hehe! You're smart Danny! It is fun and I actually threw a bucket of water on for Grace for that ummm... Prank. :D We've been mates for about 4 years now and are pretty close... We do tease each other a lot though, as you could probably tell from the previous posts!!!

Good advice... I'd better go and finish that poem for ya! ;)
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And who got soaked with water balloons? :rolleyes:


*looks dreamy* Ah Christian....:p
 
Thanks a lot guys for the encouragments and er.. gentle hints! *hugs* It really means a lot to me!!! And I'm so sorry it took me so long to FINALLY finish this, but well... it's done at last!!! YAY!!! :D Hope you guys like it! It's my first 'proper' poem and hopefully it'll make you laugh!!! :D

Oh yeah, and I got the idea from Sir Ben's 'Cooking with me'.
 
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Morning Mayhem

This tale of mine starts at two in the morning
The whole house was quiet, besides someone snoring
It was a hot, humid night and I couldn’t sleep
So I set off for the kitchen to have something to eat

Once there, I heaved open the door of our fridge
And off its shelf, a jug of water slid
I made a dive to catch it, but was too late
There was a room quickly turned into a lake

I tried to drink the water up off the floor
And found it still dirty from the day before
I sunk my teeth in a pudding to get rid of the taste
But then dropped it on the floor in my great haste

I looked around for either a mop or a broom
Found a brush and dustpan and thought they would do
Grabbed them off the bench and quickly swung ‘round
And in turn, knocking the biscuit jar onto the ground

I’m telling you, I wasn’t trying to make such a mess!
But I even had stains on the front of my nightdress
Well, at least, after all this, I really felt beat
And decided it was time to go get some sleep

So I went off to bed and started snoring
To be started awake later that morning
I think someone had found the mess I’d made
And intended to scream it to the entire State

I went to the kitchen and found it in an uproar
There was food everywhere and water on the floor
Mum’s screams could’ve woken up the whole town
She’s an opera singer and can make quite a sound!

Dad had heard the screams and came rushing in
He had to holler to be heard above all the din
“What’s happening here? Who’s been murdered?”
“Oh, John!” Mum exclaimed, “We’ve been burgled!”

Running into the room, then came old Uncle ‘Dumb’
Looking bedraggled and waving his World War I gun
“I’ll Save You!” He roared, letting loose a round
As the bullets went flying, we all dove to the ground

Hearing the shots, my sister called the police
Two arrived within minutes, armed down to the teeth
With experienced eyes they summed up the room
Which looked like the remains of a whooping typhoon

They called for backup then came cautiously in
But one slipped on my pudding and smashed into the bin!
Rubbish and dinner scraps spilled out onto the poor cop
His partner laughed at her, then received a face full of slop

The constable looked surprised and then rather cross
And revengefully grabbed some jelly and gave it a toss
But he missed his target and the jelly bounced on the floor
Flew in the air and splattered on Grumpy Gram’s jaw.

Later, just as there came the first streaks of daylight
The police backup arrived to find a full fledged food fight.
They watched as food and curses got thrown everywhere
Then grinned and added pillows feathers to the already thick air

Smoke started to stream in from somewhere
And was soon very thick in the cold morning air
Standing out of the way, I couldn’t watch anymore.
Knowing who was to blame, I crept out the door…
 
Okay...maybe a tad mushy, but here goes! :]




Please know...you do
(a song)

When you feel like all around you
Your walls are falling down
The weights are too heavy
Your feet drag on the ground

You’re lying here, in the dust
The tears stream from eyes
Your heart can’t take another day
With all the hurt it holds inside

But know, when you feel down
And you don’t know others are around
Who would take your hand, if only they knew
And when the world comes to an end
And you can’t find a single friend
You’re just holding, hiding all that pain inside of you…

That came from where, I wish I knew

I know that you’re trying
You’re gonna hold your head up high
You’re holding out your wings
But you just can’t seem to fly

Sometimes you feel you’ve taken flight
And the wounds and sorrows heal
But it comes again for a deeper bite
And back, ground wards you wheel

But know, when you feel down
And you don’t know others are around
Who would take your hand, if only they knew
And when the world comes to an end
And you can’t find a single friend
You’re just holding, hiding all that pain inside of you…

That came from where, I wish I knew

But, please, whatever you do
Don’t give up your hope
And whatever they say
I’m always here with my rope

To pull you back up whenever you’re down
I’ll never let you fall, I’ll always be around
I’ll tug you up to safety whenever you’re lost
I’ll be your hope when the seas have you tossed

And know, when you feel down
You really do have friends around
Who would be with you, if only they knew
And when the world comes to an end
And you can’t see a single friend
You’re just holding, hiding all that pain inside of you…

And it’s hurting me too

But I’m always there for you.
 
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That song is wonderful!! I love the lyric so much!!! So inspiring!! Great job, Cleo!! *clapping until my hand get numb*

make more, sweetie!! Let people know how talented you are!!! XD
 
W. Cleopia said:
Okay...maybe a tad mushy, but here goes! :]




Please know...you do
(a song)

When you feel like all around you
Your walls are falling down
The weights are too heavy
Your feet drag on the ground

You’re lying here, in the dust
The tears stream from eyes
Your heart can’t take another day
With all the hurt it holds inside

But know, when you feel down
And you don’t know others are around
Who would take your hand, if only they knew
And when the world comes to an end
And you can’t find a single friend
You’re just holding, hiding all that pain inside of you…

That came from where, I wish I knew

I know that you’re trying
You’re gonna hold your head up high
You’re holding out your wings
But you just can’t seem to fly

Sometimes you feel you’ve taken flight
And the wounds and sorrows heal
But it comes again for a deeper bite
And back, ground wards you wheel

But know, when you feel down
And you don’t know others are around
Who would take your hand, if only they knew
And when the world comes to an end
And you can’t find a single friend
You’re just holding, hiding all that pain inside of you…

That came from where, I wish I knew

But, please, whatever you do
Don’t give up your hope
And whatever they say
I’m always here with my rope

To pull you back up whenever you’re down
I’ll never let you fall, I’ll always be around
I’ll tug you up to safety whenever you’re lost
I’ll be your hope when the seas have you tossed

And know, when you feel down
You really do have friends around
Who would be with you, if only they knew
And when the world comes to an end
And you can’t see a single friend
You’re just holding, hiding all that pain inside of you…

And it’s hurting me too

But I’m always there for you.
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Me did never see that! :eek::eek:
 
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