One love: James & Priya

your banner intrigued me... when I finally realized that the heading Priya and James was attached to the banner, I thought... ok, hey why not?
I'm very glad I did.

I really enjoyed this, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I have to say, I hope that there is some conflict between them at some point- it seemed too easy, them becoming friends, unless there is conflict more along the lines of Romeo and Juliet in the long run. I'm intrigued and hope you can get something posted soon, although, being that I too write several things at once, I appreciate priorities in writing- I wish I were better at them!
 
shadowchild25 said:
your banner intrigued me... when I finally realized that the heading Priya and James was attached to the banner, I thought... ok, hey why not?
I'm very glad I did.

I really enjoyed this, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I have to say, I hope that there is some conflict between them at some point- it seemed too easy, them becoming friends, unless there is conflict more along the lines of Romeo and Juliet in the long run. I'm intrigued and hope you can get something posted soon, although, being that I too write several things at once, I appreciate priorities in writing- I wish I were better at them!
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don't worry.
a story without a conflict is like a pbj sandwich without pb and J - thus not a sandwich!
this is just your exposition!:cool:
 
But it is NOT necessary for any major conflict to exist between the two sweethearts. It can just as well be a matter of them as a unit against some outside force.
 
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