Swept Away - A Narnian Swashbuckler

Chapter 23: THE FACE OF ASLAN

On the dusty road back from Willoughby, the friends walked in silence for the longest time, Joseph not feeling like talking, and Trundle and Orlando not knowing what to say. Finally they stopped and the hare got a few things out to eat. “We don’t have to ration now. There’s enough for all.”

“Why didn’t you tell him the truth about Fiona?” Orlando asked.

“Someday you’ll understand. I could not spoil what he had with her. No, it is better this way.” Joseph sighed. “At leastnow he has some gold to buy Fiona’s son that house he promised him. I gave our friend Copperfox enough to buy passage on the Queen of the Sea and have just enough left to get us home. All is as it should be. It might have been better had I trusted Aslan and not felt sorry for myself such a long time. At least Aslan always trusted me.”

“But he promised you’d find your wife…”

“He kept his promise. I needed to know that she was alright and she is. The uncertainty is gone and I can grieve for her.”

“I’m so glad you’re taking it this way,” Trundle said. “You must not let this destroy your faith.”

“It hasn’t, my friend. I have seen Aslan’s face.”

“You have?” The badger scratched his head. “I was with you the whole time…”

“I’ve seen him three times. Once he was a carpenter, then he was a cabin boy and then he was a farmer that sold all he had to do one great, beautiful deed.” Joseph lost his composure and tears began to stream down his face. “Aslan does not spare us every grief, but he doesn’t make us face them alone. I know that now. I have him, and now I have you.”

Orlando hugged the hare, kissing away his tears. “I’m glad I met you, Sir Joseph. Not because you set me free, but because I thought there was no Aslan till I saw him in you.”

“I love you, Orlando. So very much.” Joseph rested his face against the brown cheeked boy and stroked his hair with a paw. “I came looking for my family and I found it. That is, if you’ll let me adopt you.”

“Oh yes!” the boy said, clinging to him tightly. “I’d rather be your son than a knight, anyhow.”

Trundle cleared his throat. “Where are we going next?”

“Tashbaan and then Cair Paravel.”

“No, after that.”

“After that?”

The badger smiled shyly and glanced about. “Now that you have a son, you’ll need a brother too so the boy can have an uncle.”

The hare brightened and nodded, wiping his eyes. “He needs an aunt too. Good thing for him I know this lovely badger lass who wants to meet a fine fellow.”

Trundle looked away, his ears laid back. “Garn, Sir Joseph…”

“And she’s a great cook too. Her simmer and sing stew is to die for.”

“She makes simmer and sing?”

“Yes, to die for.” The hare embraced him firmly. “You will come to live with me and you shall make only what you want to make in the finest workshop in Cair Paravel.”

“Oh Sir Joseph! Do you mean it??”

“Joe…please.” The hare gave his shoulder a pat. “Of course I mean it. I wrote those notes in a bottle looking for a small miracle, and instead I found great miracles—and great faith. All in all, I am the luckiest fellow in the world.”

[THE END: SWEPT AWAY - A NARNIAN SWASHBUCKLER by John H. Burkitt and Joseph A. Ravitts, 2009. With grateful acknowledgment to the wonderous creativity of C. S. Lewis and the Chronicles of Narnia in whose tradition this work was written.]

See the official site with special features at http://byrononwells.org/sweptaway.
 
As we say at the Renaissance Festival:

H U Z Z A H !!


Not, you understand, meaning that we're glad it's over, but that we're glad the ending is a noble one. Also glad that the REAL star of the story finally turned up:

>> I gave our friend Copperfox enough to buy passage on the Queen of the Sea...

Now, John, I will ask you to make a break with your usual policy. If a sequel is attempted (and even Dumas saw nothing wrong with sequels to "The Three Musketeers"), please let it be written on THIS thread, for continuity.
 
*Sniffle* That was so good. And sad.*

It's not a happy ending in your typical sense, only in what I'm told comedy originally ment. But I'm glad it ended, well....as copperfox said nobly. It was good ending. Hurrah for your amazing writing ability.
 
PLEASE, if you read and enjoyed the story, do comment. And tell your friends. If you haven't guessed it, the story was a lot of work and your feedback is my only reward outside the joy of writing.

That being said....

SWEPT AWAY Website is officially open for business though all the features are not complete at this time.

Worth a look are the Calormen map, the photo tour and the full text of the story in a more conventional PDF format that resembles a printed copy.

See it at http://byrononwells.org/sweptaway/
 
*****CONTAINS SPOILERS*****

ES, that story was amazing!!! Haha, some parts were cutely predictable (Like Joseph adopting Orlando), but I must admit that I was nearing the bawling stage towards the end, starting with Joseph discovering that Fiona had remarried, and then I just totally lost it when he came upon her grave... But still, I couldn't have wished for a better ending...:) God is good, and while His promises may be fulfilled in the way least expected, it is wonderful to know that He will _always_ fulfill them... :)
 
Well... what can I say? It was a wonderful story. A great ending in true Chronicles of Narnia style. I will definitely check out the website and print the pdf version. Awesome!!
 
Here is a thumbnail of the map of Calormen there. I think you'll agree that I put a lot of work into this....

calormen.jpg


And here is Sir Joseph. The large version on the site actually prints a decent 8 x 10.

smallsirjoseph.jpg
 
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Why is he holding his sword, yet still has one it the scabbard? Is that his backup sword? Is Sir Joseph an active proponent of failover redundancy?
 
That's a Scottish two-sword rig. It replaces the buckler with a second blade and if you know how to work it right, it's a devastating one-two blow.
 
Indeed I am, Bramblewood. By the way, I sent you something by email and it bounced. Is that address still working?
 
He did, in fact, name himself after Bramblewood from Byron on Wells. As did Bramble Fox. A matter of some personal pride. ;)
 
Aww! That was amazing, EveningStar! I read it from begining to end in one sitting and don't regret my choice to spend all morning reading =D. The ending, though ever so sad(!) was great! I'll have to admit, though, I was expecting a Beverly Lewis type of perfectly happy ending. I am so sad it's over!! This was amazing and thank you for writing it! This story is cute and amazing! =D.
 
Righto. I hope everyone is aware there have been many great story ideas by their favourite authors that went unwritten because feedback was not received on an earlier work. I came about that close ---> . <---- to not doing any more long works for TDL after my 200 page effort garnered five whole letters over five whole days. Others came even closer...and they didn't. Not griping, just leveling with you. I could have written a book to sell for actual money over that time period. Sobering thought, that.
 
I really think that if you write books in the style of this story (Not Narnia ones, but originals) you will definitely sell them.
 
PLEASE, if you read and enjoyed the story, do comment. And tell your friends. If you haven't guessed it, the story was a lot of work and your feedback is my only reward outside the joy of writing.

That being said....

I shall! For I did very much like it!

I do agree with BarbarianKing on the stories part.
 
People are coming to read it. Maybe you should put that in the first post. That you want people to comment. I see it has lots a views already.
 
I have commented before, but not recently because I missed a few installments, got very behind and had to do some catching up lol I've been steadily reading my way through and I've just finished today!

I loved this story, it was wonderful. I think that the ending was perfect. It would have been a little too simple if Fiona had been waiting for Sir Joseph with open arms.
 
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