The House On The Lane

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The House On The Lane


Chapter 1: One Hundred and Thirty-First Somerset Drive

There was nothing particularly unusual about the house upon the corner between Somerset Drive and Montane Street, a small cozy suburban house that had one floor above the ground floor that was insulated with brick and mortar foundations and walls during the Winter seasons. The ramshackle tiled roof was stable enough that it could possibly survive another twenty years before needing a replacement fixture.
Two corners of the house was at an angle to the concrete street, displaying two windows upon each siding of the house, dependent on which side of the house you would be facing.
The front corner that curved around the streets was protected by a well maintained lawn that acted as a front yard to the quaint property, a cornerstone cobbled pathway leading from the surrounding mesh wire fence gate that led up to the house, snaking up to the patio steps that had a polished wooden small stairway of wood leading up onto the property’s front doorway.
One would say it wasn’t a normal looking house by any means. But it was hardly the fault of anyone that a house like this was built the way it looked, as opposed to the other houses in the neighbourhood that were situated in proper alignment to society’s standards.

As the sun was at it’s zenith in the midday glare of luncheon, the society ladies of known repute sat awkwardly around the living room’s oaken table that was being hosted at this house of lesser known reputation. Their hostess, a Miss Mary Pritchard, seemed unaware to the awkwardness as she struggled mentally to keep up with their way of doing things, having been surprised to be unannounced as hostess to this gathering of slightly older busybody women in the neighbourhood. It was not a surprise, Mary admitted to herself, that she preferred to remain alone at her home that her parents had recently bequeathed to her after they passed away three years ago and she had to give up her city life for a more subdued one in a Suburban town called Richmond.
But, Mary was slightly curious as to why she was finally drawn into this circle of gossip that, on occasion, was a bother to the neighbourhood in question. The matriarch of this gaggle of hens was a Mrs. Audrey Gresto, a forty year old burly woman whom prided dressing above her station and had all the eloquence of a pit bull terrier in heat. But, Mary Pritchard did admire that behind the gruff exterior, there was a deep rooted kindness within those dark brown eyes that was forthright and blunt in the statements Mrs. Gresto blatantly announced as facts.
“There is no good from number two-oh-nine, let me tell you. My husband had learnt they proposed another loan from the bank he works at,” declared Mrs. Audrey Gresto with gusto, her point being pronounced by her sipping her tea from the tea cup and clattering it back down upon the matching saucer with reckless abandon.
The other four ladies seated around the table murmured with nods of agreement at this slight tidbit of information. Only Mary seemed to frown in scrutiny towards this idle gossip.
“But, the Marcels seemed so put together. Financially I mean,” she muttered in distressed thought, which only swayed the attention of Mrs. Gresto to tut in mild annoyance.
“Yes, well appearance isn’t everything, my dear,” Audrey Gresto said in mild annoyance, knowing full well she was being hypocritical on purpose.
“Not that they are in our jurisdiction, Audrey,” stated matter of factly Mrs. Heather Hudson, indicating the implications that the local gossip only spread so far as the block within their lived in streets.
Mrs. Audrey Gresto seemed slightly affronted by the implication that Mrs. Hudson was hinting towards, but just huffed slightly in response without wanting to waste her fury amongst her friends.
“That may as well be, but it does make one worry about the neighbourhood and what it is coming to,” Mrs. Irene Fletcher said with vindication, her sixty year old hands lightly trembling until she grasped her purple purse bag straps in her palms to calm her nerves.
The last one seated at the table said nothing as she reflected thoughtfully whilst sipping her tea. Mrs. Teresa Brooks thought calmly to herself, the thirty six year old the youngest at the table was processing her thoughts until they were interrupted by a sudden outburst of speech from Mrs. Gresto.
“Well, whatever the case, there is no doubt that trouble is brewing upon the horizon. Mark my words,” ominously foretold Mrs. Audrey Gresto with a definitive nod of her head and an air of confidence that made the other four women seated around the table nod in unison.


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The still sceptical looking Miss Mary Pritchard beheld a slight smirk upon her twenty-six year old face of bemusement as she delicately took the empty cups of three of the five guests within her home.
The ladies seated around the table seemed not interested in her, waggling their tongues upon the next juicy gossip. This allowed Miss Mary Pritchard a moment of slipping out without threat of acknowledgement, at least for now.
Ducking quickly into her kitchenette, Mary graced herself by wistfully starting the washing up of her china teacups. The chattering in the other room was faded in her mind as she set to her task at hand, turning off the water faucet to stop the warm water from filling the kitchen sink tub. Mary removed a dish towel from her floral apron that she had haphazardly put on a half hour ago when she received her impromptu guests.
“Need a hand?” came a quivering voice that made Mary Pritchard jump slightly out of her thoughtful stupor.
“Oh! Yes, if you like,” Mary responded as she glanced behind her shoulder, seeing the frail form of Mrs. Irene Fletcher, whom graced the small doorway of Mary’s kitchenette.
Emboldened by the acceptance, Mrs. Fletcher slowly walked over to stand beside Mary to help with the cleaning of the washed up teacups.
“Don’t let them intimidate you, dear,” muttered Mrs. Fletcher with a serious tone in her wisened voice.
“Oh, I would never,” lightly stated Mary towards the kind old lady with a tinge of mirth in her voice until she looked at the serious face of the sixty year old woman beside her that made her smile falter and glance back down to her task at hand.
“You are still too young, my dear. Ahh, the innocence of youth,” Mary heard Mrs. Irene Fletcher say beside her but did not dare interrupt or look up from what she was doing.

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It suddenly occurs to me to wonder: since you have multiple real-world stories in progress, do you consider them to share a common story-world? Could characters from one of your stories MEET characters in another one?
 
It suddenly occurs to me to wonder: since you have multiple real-world stories in progress, do you consider them to share a common story-world? Could characters from one of your stories MEET characters in another one?
Interesting idea, but nope. I have multiple stories of real world constructs, it is true, but to answer your question, they are all seperate within their own real-world bubble.
Though one could conceive it to be possible that characters could meet if there was an inter-dimensional way in a fantasy or science fiction story in a backdrop of a real-world setting. But, ultimately, they are seperate.


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The two women had finished cleaning the crockery and made their way back towards the living room of Miss Pritchard.
The other women were still seated, now hushed as they had their attention drawn towards Mary and Irene coming back.
Mrs. Irene Fletcher excused herself from beside Mary and sat back down within her seat demurely, picking up her purple bag that she had left behind when she had went to help Mary in the kitchen.
Mrs. Audrey Gresto seemed to be the only one uninterested in the return of the two absent women, her mouth still yammering away from where she left off mid-sentence of local gossip.
“As I was just saying, number one-oh-seven had delivered the paper to one-oh-twelve. Now, that is strange as number one-oh-seven is a bachelor,” tittered Mrs. Gresto with implied sarcasm as Mary Pritchard sat within one of the empty chairs around her living room coffee table.
Mrs. Teresa Brooks seemed to tense slightly as she heard the words leave Mrs. Gresto’s lips with ease, which made Audrey Gresto take notice and glance towards her.
“Oh, sorry, Teresa. One-oh-twelve, isn’t that your house, dear?” Mrs. Gresto asked in a matter of fact manner.
“It is,” the reserved woman answered quietly but the rest of the gathering around the table knew the implied signs as Mrs. Brooks just shied herself away more in her seat as Audrey continued on.
“Well, I am sure it is nothing. Anyway, there was this peculiar matter of one-oh-nine,” carried on Mrs. Gresto, ignoring the sudden shift of atmosphere around the coffee table.
Mrs. Teresa Brooks just remained timidly quiet within her chair, evidently relieved the topic of discussion had deterred away from her and what alluded to her bachelor visitor. But, she could not take the pitying yet judging stares that made her feel embarrassed.
“Excuse me,” Teresa murmured in a bold demeanour as she rose from her seat, interrupting the tiresome flow of words coming out of Mrs. Gresto’s mouth.
This did not hinder the mother hen, who just gave Mrs. Brooks a dismissive nod of blunt understanding as Mrs. Brooks took her leave from the living room and made a hasty exit to the front porch of the house.
Miss Mary Pritchard followed after her embarrassed guest, having felt the need to check upon her as hostess of this gathering and possibly offer solace in Mrs. Brooks time of need.
She found the timid woman out on her front porch, having lit a cigarette in a motion to steady her shaking hands and held the lit crutch as a safety net between two well maintained fingers. Raising the cigarette to her pursed lips, Mrs. Brooks glanced over sharply but seemed to relax slightly as she saw it was merely Mary Pritchard.
The housewife of house number one hundred and twelve let out a sigh as she beheld her cigarette within her hands once more, letting the smoke emit out with her released exhale of breath.
“Thanks for the tea,” half-heartedly muttered Teresa Brooks in a false dry humoured tone as she tried to put a bold face on for Mary Pritchard.
“Does it really matter?” Mary asked incredulously, her face a stone wall of being done with false niceties that made Mrs. Brooks raise an eyebrow in genuine surprise.
“Not really,” she replied in mutual understanding towards Mary, the answer lost within the double meaning of the question that had been put forth. “But that is how it is.”



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A nearby bird of summer twittered a singsong melody in the background to the left of Mary Pritchard and Teresa Brooks, possibly from the nearby shrubbery tree that was in the neighbouring yard of house one hundred and twenty-nine.
The two women did not acknowledge it as they stood awkwardly nearby each other, unsure of what to say as the world of their neighbourhood kept on spinning around them.
Mrs. Brooks just let her cigarette keep burning in between the fingers of her right hand, the lingering ash and smoke a beacon of morbid addiction that was soon evaporated as she kept having puffs at irregular intervals. It seemed an eternity in what was but minutes before Teresa snapped herself out of whimsy melancholy.
“We’d better head back,” she declared to Miss Mary Pritchard, making the unmarried woman look surprised and slightly shocked at her decision.
“Are you sure?” Mary questioned, her face a mix of worried concern.
“Not really, but gossip like that has not stopped me yet,” the thirty six year old married woman stated as she put out her cigarette underfoot with her heeled shoe before bypassing Mary Pritchard to step back inside.
Mrs. Teresa Brooks stopped for a momentary second of pause in the entranceway of the house and muttered quietly to herself, “Even if those rumours are true,” before heading in with her determined head held high.
Mary stayed outside to safely dispose of the demolished cigarette butt that was upon her front patio before going back inside to follow the now confident Mrs. Teresa Brooks back to the living room. With a disdainful look at the piece of trash within her hands, Mary bypassed the living room to go back into her kitchenette to wash her hands and the cigarette butt before throwing it into her small disposable trash bag. Mary was starting to regret allowing these women into her home, but felt it was the neighbourly thing to do.

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Putting on a superficial appearance, Miss Mary Pritchard walked back towards her living room with the air that nothing was the matter in the slightest, putting her best foot forward and squashing these inner feelings of detestation as best as she could allow. On the outside appearance, she practically fooled even herself in being the charming hostess after sitting down and she was assaulted by another wave of Mrs. Audrey Gresto’s idle gossip of the surrounding neighbourhood.
“Number one-oh-three, they have got to get control of that boy of theirs. The little brat was climbing the tree of that war veteran again. Honestly, children should respect the property of their elders nowadays,” announced out Mrs. Gresto with a glum face that beheld her pit bull appearance more profoundly as she frowned in irritation.
“But Major Palmgrave seems to not mind, Audrey. I think he allows it for care of the boy. Also, the Wilson lad is just nine,” interjected Mrs. Irene Fletcher, her voice one of tact and factual intuition on her part.
“Yes, well, it just does not seem right for the boy to be climbing trees like a hooligan. Would not want the Major to get into trouble if the boy hurt himself,” muttered back Mrs. Gresto grudgingly, making up an excuse for her earlier comment.
Suddenly, there was a slight pause in the conversation and that gave Mary the chance she needed to suddenly speak out as she stood up from her living room chair.
“Well, thank you ladies for stopping by. I have to get myself together for a later meeting. Do you mind seeing yourselves out?”
Mrs. Gresto and the others glanced for a split second at their hostess of this tea ceremony before Mrs. Gresto suddenly spoke up as the three others rose from their seats.
“Not at all. I am so sorry we were taking up your time, dear. We should stay in touch, though. You know where to reach me, I take it?” Mrs. Gresto inquired, though to Mary Pritchard she knew this was not a friendly gesture but one to get her attention to be at Audrey Gresto’s beck and call should there be any gossip to be had.
“Of course. Number one hundred and ten, extension 4568,” Mary replied with calmness as the shrewd Mrs. Gresto got up out of her seat and looked narrowly at Mary with calculating eyes.
“Y..yes, and you can reach my husband at-“ started Mrs. Audrey Gresto but was interrupted as Mary Pritchard chimed in without a change in her calm voice.
“At Richmond Banking, Dennis Gresto, Executive with ten years experience and extension line 4599.”
It was a small victory in Mary’s mind as she watched the flabbergasted look in Mrs. Gresto’s eyes at the seemingly extensive knowledge Mary seemed to have despite having just moved into Richmond a few months ago. But the moment passed as Mrs. Gresto seemed to regain her composure at the awkwardness that was but a few moments with her friends presently awaiting her.
“That is correct, dear. You know, I have a feeling I shall get in touch with you sooner than later,” Mrs. Gresto said with a slight twinkle within her brown eyes that seemed more pleasantly surprised after the initial shock was over and the procession that was led by herself was by the front door.
“I look forward to it,” falsely stated Miss Mary Pritchard with a sickeningly sweet tone before Mrs. Audrey Gresto gave an elaborate gruff nod of her head.
The procession of four women exited the house of one hundred and thirty-first upon Somerset Drive, being led out by their now intrigued but careful leader.
Watching them go as she stood in her doorway, Miss Mary Pritchard gave a reluctant wave as she sighed warily, grateful that for the moment, she could get back to her life in peace.


End of Chapter 1.


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Chapter 2: The Peculiar Happening

It was barely past one thirty as the noonday sun was still shining brightly in the sky with little to no cloud coverage.
A strange noise of construction penetrated the usually quiet neighbourhood of Somerset Drive. The origins of this cacophony of noise came from number one hundred and nine, making whomever was outside upon the sidewalk streets take momentary pause to glance in surprised irritation at the house. It was a completely average suburban house with the white picketed front fenced yard and immaculate garden that beheld the usual garden flowers neatly planted in season. If not for the construction noises, it would raise no suspicion upon the street.
After a few minutes, the noise from this house stopped and caused the casual bystanders to continue on their way, letting the strange noises be but a passing thought of oddity within their minds that they would eventually forget in a day or so.
After a half hour had passed, the noise began again in persistantance, like a deep rooted dentist drill struggling to shave off an infected tooth.
One neighbour, Mr. Harris from house one hundred and eleven, had enough of the noise as the man in his mid forties had stormed by from his lawn over to his neighbours on the right side of his house.

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