THE VISITOR: a Story From the Author of Byron on Wells

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1 - THE AWAKENING

The simple cottage was silent and still as Maureen the rabbit and her two younglings held vigil by an empty bed. “Children, get ready,” Maureen said with barely suppressed excitement. “The miracle should happen any moment now.”

The young rabbits believed in miracles the way they believed in love, for both were a part of their daily lives.

The center of the mattress dipped under an invisible weight. And as they watched in wonder, the cause of the dent slowly revealed itself; a youngling like them lying in peaceful sleep.

“Isn’t he handsome!” said the young doe.

The young buck asked, “Shall we wake him now?”

Maureen shook her head gently. “That’s no way to treat a guest who has been through so much. We’ll step outside and let him rest.” She did allow herself one light kiss on his cheek.

***​

Later, perhaps an hour later, the young visitor stepped out of the bedroom, rubbing his eyes with his paws. “Where am I?”

“You’re in Farthingdale,” answered Maureen’s son.

“I’ll handle this,” Mother Rabbit said gently, coming to the visitor and kneeling by him to meet his glance eye to eye. “David, we’re here to help you. I’m Maureen.”

“Help me?” he said, disoriented. “Is this a hospital?”

A warm smile lit her face. “I will answer all your questions, dear. Before I do, what is the last thing you remember?”

The young bunny half closed his eyes and concentrated. “I was riding my new bike. I heard tires skidding and honking. A white car! Pain! I was flying, and I landed on my head…” His paws reached up and felt his head, then he suddenly gasped. “What are those?”

“They’re called ears,” Maureen said gently. Her children had to laugh a little, despite the gravity of the moment.

“Am I dead?”

“No, dear. But you were badly hurt.”

“I don’t feel hurt. I don’t hurt at all.”

“That’s because visitors here get another body to use. You look very different now, quite handsome, but this may be something of a shock, and you will need to get used to it.” Maureen held up a small looking glass. “Think of this as your home away from home. A vacation, perhaps a great adventure.”

David stared at the face in the glass. He expected to see a human face, but it was not. Then he tried to make a couple of funny faces and laughed nervously. The giggle turned into a puzzled expression. “But that’s a rabbit. It’s not me…is it? I must have really hit my head!”

“You’re quite yourself, dear. All the things you know, and all the feelings you feel are here in this new body. Right now the little human boy everyone calls David is asleep and he can’t wake up.”

David drew in a deep breath and let it out slowly, his paws rising to his face and feeling its unfamiliar contours. “So, is this all just a dream?”

Maureen put an arm around David and held him gently, giving his shoulder a little pat. “No, David, it’s real.”

David glanced in the mirror once more. “Will I ever be a boy again? Will I ever go back?”

“You might go back to your old home if they can heal that little boy. And you might move on to the Havens if they can’t. For now, this is your home, and we will make your life as comfortable and happy as possible. Which reminds me; I baked you something special. Sit tight and I’ll be back in a wink.”

***​

Maureen left for the kitchen, and while she was gone the two younglings came nearer to check out the new arrival. “I’m Tipper,” said the young buck. “This is my sister Dewdrop. We’re going to be your family.”

“Tipper,” David said slowly. “Dewdrop.” As a part of his transformation, David felt as normal talking to his new roommates as he would to new classmates. “Have you always been able to talk?”

Dewdrop wrinkled her nose with amusement. “Not on the day I was born. Have you always been able to talk?”

“I’ve always been able to cry,” David said with a chuckle. He looked at his paws, turning them palm up to see the pads and nails. He took the looking glass and opened his mouth, as if he could see all the changes inside. His nose twitched, and he giggled.

“Move your ears,” Tipper said. And without realizing it, David’s ears turned to the sound of his voice.

A smile spread across David’s face. “Now this is what I call an adventure!”

***​

Maureen came in with a generous slice of fresh apple cake and a glass of cold milk.

David looked at the food, but mainly he inhaled it with his enhanced sense of smell. He had never perceived anything so fully, realizing how many layers of shadow and substance things had. He took the cake in his paw and bit into it, savoring the fullness of its wonderful aroma. Then he took a draft of cold milk. There had to be another word for that experience besides, “eating”.

“This is awesome!” he said with a full mouth. “Can I…may I…see the place? It looks like a good day for it.”

Maureen smiled. “It’s always a good day in Farthingdale. The weather is never ugly, and folk don’t get sick or, and I hate to even say it, pass away.” Maureen rubbed David between the ears. “Folk do appear out of nowhere, and they vanish after a while. You appeared today, and someday you’ll vanish too. Maybe you’ll go home, and maybe you’ll move on to the Havens to wait for your family. Either way, we’ll miss you, but it’s alright. It’s the way of things here. We’ll value every moment you’re with us. You’ll live in our house, eat at our table, sleep in our beds, and help us with our chores.”

“Chores?”

“Being good at something and using that skill to make the world better is one of life’s great joys. Before you take your walk, would you take a broom to the kitchen? I don’t mind tidying up, but if you sweep it for me, I’ll feel good inside. Someday it will make you feel good too, but the door to that happiness is one you must find yourself.”

***​

David had always gotten an allowance, and he didn’t have to earn it. He was not a spoiled child, but he had never been raised to think of a family as a team. His first clumsy attempts to use a broom proved it as he whaled away at the dust with a few quick smacks.

“That shan’t do,” Maureen said gently. “Here, try this.”

Rather than taking the broom, the old doe reached around his shoulders and put her paws over his, gently guiding the bristles into the corners and making long, leisurely sweeps that moved the dirt rather than stirring it up. Never had chores felt so much like love.

“Don’t fight the broom, dance with it. See how nice that is?”

“Oh yes,” David said, his heart rising into his throat.

He turned to face Maureen. Her large, deep eyes practically radiated kindness, and the hint of a smile crossed her gentle face. He smiled too as the broom slipped from his paws and clattered to the floor unnoticed. “Chores aren’t so bad…”

“You’ve found the door to happiness. Now open it with the key of giving.”

David swallowed hard. “I’ll be glad to sweep the den too. Anywhere you want, Ma’am…”

“Just the kitchen,” she said, tenderly folding her arms around him.

“The kitchen,” he sighed, resting his face against her soft fur.
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2 - FORGING AHEAD

It was chilly autumn in Terra Haute, but Farthingdale basked in the richness of eternal spring. As David ambled down the avenue that passed for Main Street, he met some of the villagers Maureen told him about. There were beavers and otters and even a stately family of deer who passed him with a solemn nod hello. It was magical.

David was delighted to see a German shepherd puppy out for a stroll. He approached the dog gingerly and held out his paw. “Good boy! Here, boy! I’m not gonna hurt you. Wanna say hi?”

The dog looked at him with a wry grin. “You’re new here, aren’t you?”

“You can tell?” David said with a self-conscious laugh.

“Go ahead. You know you want to.” The puppy came over and bowed his head slightly. “Just don’t let anyone see you, ok?”

David patted the dog and scratched behind his ears. “Oh yeah,” the young dog said. “I’m not supposed to say I like it, but ooh, ooh, oh yeah… A little lower…”

“Are you becoming more doglike?”

“I think so. Do you have a tennis ball?”

“No, sorry.”

“How about a frisbee?”

“Fresh out.”

“That’s too bad. I’d like to see if I would chase it.”

“How about a stick?”

“What stick? Look around, kid. There are no leaves on the ground, much less sticks. It’s like they dust and vacuum this place every night. No rot, no rust, no mildew. And with my nose, if I don’t smell it, it’s not there.” The puppy tilted his head. “Side of the neck, please?”

David obliged him, seeing his long pink tongue hang out in a very doggy expression of bliss.

Just then, a young otter walked up. “Hey Carl, how ‘bout a nice tummy rub?”

The dog looked about, teeth gritted. “Fred, not a word about this to anyone. Not. One. Word.”

“Oh, I was just funning! Who’s ‘ears’ here?”

Carl sat and scratched himself. “I…I don’t know.”

Fred smiled puckishly. “Getting pets before you’ve been properly introduced?” The otter turned his attention to David. “What’s your handle?”

“Handle?” asked the rabbit.

“Your tag. You’re…name.”

“Oh. I’m David. From Terra Haute, Indiana.”

“Isn’t that in America?” The otter looked puzzled. “You speak good German for a foreigner.”

“Foreigner?” David scratched his cheek ruffs. He never thought of himself as living in a foreign country before. “I thought you spoke English!”

“I do, but it was never like this!” the otter said with a jolly otter laugh. “Friederich Jensen from Hamburg.”

***​

On his wanderings, David passed a number of shops with their wares and workshops where folk were plying their trade. A hare was turning homespun into a new vest, and next door a lady raccoon was operating a loom, deftly passing the shuttlecock from side to side like it was performance art.

David stopped where an elderly beaver was deftly caning a chair. He had several finished examples hanging from the rafters of his shop. All of them were well made, and all of them had a large round opening at the lower back.

“Pardon me,” David asked. “What do you call that style?”

The beaver looked up. “Style?” He laughed, a deep, wonderful laugh like a happy child who hasn’t learned how to round off the corners of his feelings and tuck in his loose remarks. “That’s not a style, it’s a tail hole! Lord love you, coney! If I had an apple for every visitor that asked me that, I’d stop caning and open me a fruit stand!”

“You really do good work. I bet you’ve been doing it a long time.”

“You can say that again,” he said, his deft paws resuming their useful trade in a way that made it look easy.

“How long, sir? If you don’t mind telling me.”

Mr. Beaver’s hazel eyes looked up. His expression was not unfriendly, but the smile was gone. “Who’s your innkeeper, young buck?” After a moment, he said, “Who are you visiting?”

“Maureen.”

He nodded. “She’s responsible for answering questions like that. Or not answering them. I could have a chinwag with you all day, telling you things that will fill your young mind with wonder. But there are certain things you should hear from her.”

***​

Next David stopped by a smithy where a badger was working the forge and his young assistant was working the bellows. David could smell the tart smell of brimstone and iron, and he watched the shower of sparks with rapt interest.

The old badger was making hand forged nails. The badger kit pulled the rope on the bellows, but he watched the smithy closely as if he wanted to memorize every stroke of the hammer. And it was well he did, for someday he would get to make his own nails from scratch.

“Alrighty now,” the old badger said. “This is an auspicious moment, Charlie. You’ve graduated from journeyman bellows to apprentice forger. I’ll heat the coals, and you take the tongs and fetch out a workpiece.”

“You mean it’s time??” Excitedly, young badger took the tongs and reached into the hot coals. He brought out a glowing bit of metal which was a precise shade of orange yellow—that color was very important because it told them when it was just the right temperature to shape. Sitting it on the anvil, Charlie smiled as he paused to contemplate this great moment.

“Hurry!” the old smithy urged him. “Charlie, you must strike while it’s at the right temperature, and it’s cooling by the second!”

The badger kit lifted the hammer, then he paused, an odd look crossing his face. “I can’t move! Help me!”

“Charlie? What’s wrong??” Mister Badger gasped, hurrying around the table. He tried to embrace the child, but his arms passed through him.

The badger kit faded quickly, a look of astonishment still on his face. His hammer, cap and vest fell to the floor.

David shrieked. “He’s gone!! What happened??”

“The Lord giveth, and the Lord taketh away. Blessed be the name of the Lord.” The old badger knelt to the ground with more of a look of weary regret than fresh grief. Picking up the hammer, he held it to his chest in a frustrated embrace. “His visit is over. We will miss him.”

David’s initial horror gave way to a wave of tenderness. He put a paw on the old blacksmith’s shoulder. “Is there anything I can do?”

The badger took that paw and held it, heaving a deep sigh of resignation. “I’m sorry you had to see that.” He looked into the rabbit’s face. “You’re new here. Who are you visiting?”

“Maureen. Do you know her?”

“Aye. We’re good friends. Maureen always gets the nicest visitors.” He gave David’s paw a gentle squeeze, then released it.

David pondered this for a moment. “There were others?”

“Aye. Charlie…was not my first, and you aren’t hers. Not by a long walk.”

“Who else? Anyone special?”

The question seemed to pain him. “Her name was Janice. Maureen had her for a long time, and they were very close. I wouldn’t mention that name around the house if I were you. Not unless you want to break her old heart.”

“What was she like?”

“Sweet and friendly. She liked this thing she called ‘knock-knock jokes’. Some of them were even funny.” He wiped his eyes again. “Sometimes Maureen would bring her to the house when we played Whist. I miss those card games, but most of all I miss the old Maureen. Maybe you’re just what she needs to come back. Maureen loved to sing. She always sang when she was happy, but she hasn’t sung a note since Janice left. Maybe you can give her back her music.”

It’s always a good day in Farthingdale…except when it is not.

***​

David trudged home, head bowed. Clutched in his paws was a toy sailboat.

Maureen met him at the door. “Where did you get that new toy?”

“Mr. Badger gave it to me.”

“That’s nice. I hope you thanked him.”

“Yes ma’am,” David said with a sigh. “Charlie doesn’t need it anymore.”
 
3 - BROTHER MINE

One thing David never had was a brother. Now he had Tipper who bore a strong resemblance to him—besides the fact they were both rabbits—and he was about the same height. He was fascinated by his new brother and watched everything he did. This did not go unnoticed.

“Why are you following me?” Tipper asked at last.

“I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to.”

“And why you are staring at me?”

“Am I?” David realized it was true. “You’re good at being a rabbit. Have you always been one?”

“What kind of question is that?” Suddenly an amused smile dawned on his face. “Oh! You’re new to all this!”

The ice had been broken. David nodded shyly. “What’s it like being a rabbit? Tell me everything.”

Tipper scratched his cheek. “I never thought about it. What’s it like being human?”

“Well, it’s…”

“See what I mean?”

David scratched his cheek ruff thoughtfully. “Well, we get haircuts.”

“Haircuts?”

“My…fur…was only on top of my head, and it keeps growing all the time. Every month or so I would get it cut. And you could get it cut in different shapes called hairdos. And it came in different colors. My hair was black, but some folks had blond hair or brown. And it could be straight or wavy or curly. It was one of the ways we told each other apart.”

“It sounds complicated, but if you’re hard of smelling, it must be useful.”

David knew the phrase ‘hard of hearing,’ but it never occurred to him that humans were nearly nose blind.

“Where I come from there are four seasons; winter, spring, summer, and fall. In winter it’s so cold that rain falls like snow.”

“I see,” Tipper said. “So, what’s rain?”

“It’s water that falls out of the sky. If you don’t have rain, how do the plants grow?”

“I don’t know. They can’t tell me.”

“Yeah,” David said with a wry grin. “Who ever heard of talking plants?” He struggled for an explanation. “Snow is made of ice. Ground up ice like sawdust, only white and cold. It falls from the sky and covers everything. And you can make things from it before the sun comes out and melts it away. Dad and I used to build snow forts in the back yard.”

Tipper’s ear twitched. “You remember your dad?”

‘Yes. Don’t you?”

“No. He retired when I was very young.”

David was puzzled. “Retired?”

“It’s something folks do here when they get old and world weary. They disappear like Charlie, but they get to know a day ahead so they can get ready.”

“Does it hurt?”

“No, I don’t think so. You just turn back to stardust.”

“Is there anything left?”

“Your soul, of course. That goes to the Havens. And Mom still has daddy’s vest. It still smells like him…”

David looked Tipper in the eye. “When I’m gone, keep my vest.”

“If it makes you happy. Why?”

“As long as you keep my vest, we’ll still be brothers and you can remember what I smelled like.” David’s face fell. “But how am I going to remember what you were like?”

“If you go back to your old body, you won’t remember any of this. That’s what Mr. Otter says.”

“Not remember??” David’s ears slumped and he trembled. “No! He’s wrong! He must be!” David’s paws went to his face. His mind reeled with all the things he stood to lose; the warmth of Maureen’s arms around him, the wonderful aroma of apple cake, and the shy way Dewdrop smiled at him when she thought he wasn’t looking. Forget the tender joys of a soft bristled brush that ventured from the head, down the arms, and over the ruff of his chest? Forget Tipper, the brother he never had, slapping him on the back while laughing at his own jokes? Even the grieving have memories to cling to! Surely to goodness, he must remember Maureen??

David began looking around wildly, gasping for air. His new rabbit body was having a full-fledged panic attack. “I don’t want to forget! But what if he’s right? What if he’s right, Tipper?” His paws went to his throat. “Can’t breathe! I… I…”

Tipper grasped David by the shoulders and shook him. “Get a grip! Do you want Momma to see you like this?”

Maureen called out, “Is everything alright in there??”

“Everything’s fine, Momma!” Tipper said. “We were just playing.” Then he looked intently at David. “IS everything fine?”

David nodded mutely, gasping.

“You sure?” Tipper let go of David and straightened his rumpled vest. “I’ve been really sad, but I’ve never had a panic attack. Only visitors have those.”

“I feel like an idiot,” David panted.

“No brother of mine is an idiot.”

David looked away. “If I can’t remember you, remember for both of us. Promise me!”

“I promise.” Tipper sighed. “Mom’s right--you’re different. I’ll never forget you…ever. You’re not like the others.”

“In a good way?”

“I think so. Momma likes you a lot, and she’s a good judge of folks. And don’t tell anyone I said this, but I think Sis has a crush on you. She says you’re cute.”

David’s paws rose to his face. “Am I?”

“Rule one of being a rabbit. Don’t ask a brother if you’re cute.” Tipper smiled coyly. “So Dreamboat, have you ever flown a kite before?”

“No.”

“Rule two: you must fly a kite at least once. I’ll get it and meet you behind the house.”

“Tipper, before you go?”

“Yeah?”

“I… I just want to say…”

“Yeah?”

“I just want to say…” David looked into his brother’s hazel eyes, then down at the ground. He wrung his paws awkwardly and sighed. “I feel…”

“I know,” Tipper said with a coy smile. “You feel you’ll need lessons.”

“That too.”


4 – MORNING

David stared at the ominous sentence on the whiteboard. “The District Attorney, despite his misgivings, pressed forward with his somewhat dubious case.”

“Alright, class,” the teacher said, “this sentence won’t be easy to diagram, but it can be done by remembering the four rules we covered.”

David looked over at Calvin and whispered, “I’d rather face the District Attorney than Miss Ravitts.”

The teacher shot David an icy stare. “Looks like we have a volunteer,” she said, as some of the students snickered. “Come on up, David Ferguson.”

“Me, ma’am?”

“No, some other David Ferguson... Yes, you!”

Timidly, David approached the whiteboard and took the marker of doom in his hand. He looked up at the sentence.

It had changed!

“The District Attorney pressed onward with his case despite the eloquent allegations of his lawyer, notwithstanding, and therefore, seven in total.”

As he stared at the meaningless sentence, Miss Ravitts glared at him. “Well??”

As David stood there, staring blankly, suddenly he felt a hard smack from behind. He looked around, throwing back the blanket and looking right into Tipper’s smiling face. He was still holding the pillow in his paws.

“What’cha waiting for, Sleeping Beauty? Your kiss??”

It took a moment for David to realize what had happened. He grabbed his own pillow and swung it at his brother. “Take that! And that!”

Dewdrop came into their room, aghast at the two giggling bucks who were trying to destroy one another.

“Breakfast is almost done,” she said. “You’d better stop before you get in trouble!”

David looked about. It was the moment Tipper needed to land a good solid smack against his back, one hard enough to burst the pillow with a blizzard of goose down.

“Now you’ve done it!” Dewy said. “If Momma sees this…”

At that moment, Maureen did see it. She stood there fuming, arms akimbo. “That won’t do!”

Tipper and David looked down at their feet. “No, ma’am. Sorry, ma’am.”

“I’ll sew the pillowcase myself, but you will clean up this mess—every last feather of it—before you go out to play. Understand?”

“Yes, ma’am.”

Her stern look relented. “But I’m not letting the flapjacks get cold. You’ll eat first.”

“Flapjacks?” Tipper asked. “With butter and maple syrup?”

“Is there another kind?” Maureen smiled. “Get them while they’re hot!”

***​

Breakfast was around the kitchen table, not in front of a television in the den. But the food was good and the company excellent. David found that he didn’t miss his usual episode of Captain Crash and Friends. There was nothing the Brotherhood of Justice could do that was as fulfilling as his real life.

As Tipper and David put away enough flapjacks to feed a small army, Dewdrop rushed through a scant breakfast and soon asked to be excused.

“Is that all you’re going to eat?” Maureen asked. “Not to your liking?”

“Oh momma, you always make the best flapjacks,” she said. “I have something on my mind.”

“Alright, dear.”

As Dewy disappeared from view, David spoke up. “I have a game console at home. Actually it’s my dad’s but he got me Minecraft, and I’m well on my way to level…” He stopped, looking about at the blank looks his remark earned.

“Is this something you miss a lot?” Maureen asked.

“Honestly, if you had asked me last month, I would have said yes. But here, things aren’t the same.”

“I find that generally to be so,” the old doe answered. “We don’t have a lot of machines here, but we do have a lot of fun, and we’re comfortable and loved.”

“Yes ma’am,” David said earnestly. “I think those machines are for people who don’t have all this.”

She nodded. “You’re lucky to feel that way. Most visitors do after the first couple of days, but a few of them just mope around. Poor, sad children.”

“I wonder where Dewy went in such a hurry,” Tipper said.

Maureen smiled. “It wouldn’t surprise me a bit if she was in your room. And yes, you may be excused.”

The bucks got up and hurried to the back of the house. And just as Maureen predicted, they found Dewdrop with a burlap sack and a broom, cleaning up all the feathers.

“Aww, Dewy,” Tipper said, “You didn’t have to do this for me, Sis!”

Dewdrop’s eyes met David’s. “I didn’t do it for you.”

David smiled. “You hold the sack open, and I’ll sweep, alright?”

Dewy nodded shyly. “It will go faster that way.”
 
5 - COURAGE

Maureen had a certain magic about her that left everything she did, everyone she met, and everywhere she went a little better. David had fallen headlong under her potent spell.

In a world with so many new things, so much uncertainty, she was familiar, a touchstone, someone he could cling to. David drew strength from her and blossomed in the sunshine of her smile.

This adoration bound him to her. Every bit of housework she did, he helped—even when the help was none too helpful. Every skill she had, he wanted to learn. He became her shadow, and even when he tried to be discreet, Maureen’s sensitive hearing knew he was always in earshot.

Maureen took an onion from the pantry and began to dice it for pan fried potatoes. The fragrance of onions, strong enough to make human eyes water, stung her. She heard a sneeze from around the corner and, like a good mother, knew David’s sneeze from Tipper’s and Dewdrop’s.

“Come out, David. Let’s have a little chat.”

David came out, looking a bit sheepish. “I’m not catching a cold,” he said.

“I know. It’s the onions.” Her ear twitched. “People don’t get colds here.”

Something about her tone frightened him. “I’m not in trouble, am I?” David had the searching look of someone hunting for answers before he knew the questions. “If you show me how to cut them, I’ll do it and you can rest your eyes.”

“You are not in trouble,” Maureen said, the balm of her gentle voice soothing his fear. She knelt and looked him straight in the eyes. “The moment I saw your face, I loved you with all my heart and all my soul. It was all I could do to let you sleep. That love is yours, and you don’t have to earn it, and you’ll never lose it. Never.”

David’s chin began to tremble and tears welled up in his eyes, not from the onions. Maureen always radiated love like a daisy radiates joy, but that was the first time she ever named the feeling.

“At least you can keep it forever,” David said, leaning into her. “Why can’t I? Mister Otter says we don’t remember this place if we go back to our old bodies!”

Maureen knew most nights he cried himself to sleep, and now she knew why.

“Bertie Otter’s pretty smart, but he doesn’t know everything. God knows what he’s doing. If it is important that you remember, you will. Either way, I’ll remember for both of us and when I retire, I’ll find you.”

“Maybe if I’m very good, God will let me remember you? Maybe if I do something really brave?”

“You’re already a good little boy, and the only kind of courage you need in Farthingdale is here in the heart, the kind where you open yourself to love, and to being hurt.” Maureen took David’s face in her paws and tenderly smoothed his cheek ruffs. “And now that we understand each other, I want you out of my kitchen. The world is a festival, so take it all in. Now let’s put a brave face on it. I don’t want to be haunted by those tears all day.”

David managed a wan smile. “I’m sorry,” he said.

“Don’t be sorry. Just be brave. I’ll be brave too. Now run along.”

He turned and headed toward the kitchen door. He stopped and leaned against the doorpost for a moment, choking back a couple of sobs. Then he looked about. “Right now?”

“In a moment.” Maureen opened her arms, and he ran into her embrace. They were both brave, and they wept without shame.
 
6 - JOEY

The world outside was a kaleidoscope of sights and smells. David wanted to experience them all from his new perspective. He closed his eyes and took in a deep breath. “Someone’s baking bread. It rained last night. I wonder what those flowers are?”

With his eyes still tightly shut, he picked out distant conversations, the chiff of the wind, and the skittering of leaves.

He opened his eyes and spotted a distant tree. Setting his sights on a new record (for him), he ran for it full tilt. The wind in his face was like riding a bike, only there was no helmet to hamper his graceful ears from sweeping back. He saw a yawning ditch in his path, and without slowing his pace he launched himself on his powerful legs, sailing over it with ease and landing on the far side without breaking his stride. “Whoa!”

In his haste he nearly ran straight into a fox cub.

“Where’s the fire?” the fox asked.

“Sorry. I didn’t see you there. I was running…”

“Yeah, I know. You got a new set of wheels, and you want to put the hammer down.”

“I suppose…” Holding out his paw for a shake, the rabbit said, “I’m David.”

“Joey,” the fox pup said, holding up his paw for a high-five. After an awkward moment, David smacked him high, smacked him low, and smiled.

David asked him, “Were you born here, or are you a visitor?”

“Visitor,” the fox said. “Just got here last week. I think it was last week. Time here doesn’t mean much.”

“I noticed.” David had a new friend, and he wasn’t going to waste time…even if it didn’t mean much. “How did you get here?”

“I was playing soccer. Someone kicked the ball to me, and it was about to kick it, but I couldn’t make my leg move. Everything went black.”

“I bet you were scared.”

“No, I just felt weird.”

“Do you like it here?”

“Yeah, well enough.” He sighed deeply. “My team had a shot at the district championship next month. I woke up this morning and tried to count the days till the playoffs, and then I remembered.”

“Yeah. I woke up thinking I had to get dressed for school. It takes getting used to.”

“You aren’t kidding. Everything here is smelly and noisy. I can even smell tree leaves and the lightning when it rains. And I hear noises…like that blacksmith down the street banging on the anvil. And when he works late, I hear it in bed, even when I put a pillow over my head.”

“It’s not all bad,” David said. “The food is great.”

“You can say that again…but don’t!” Joey’s sense of humor was digging its way out. “I had a dog Sam, a beagle. He used to sit by the table and beg for scraps. I wondered how anyone could like food that much. Now I know. And when the neighbors are baking blueberry pie…oh man. Even when I’m not hungry, when I smell that, I could go for a piece of blueberry pie fresh from the oven.”

David felt a growing sense of danger. Joey was likeable, and in different circumstances he would have made a great friend. Fear began to tighten his gut, and his breath quickened. This was Charlie all over again. He was setting himself up for a loss.

“Hey Davy, you don’t look so good. You okay?”

Maureen’s words came back to the rabbit. He mustn’t let fear rob him of happiness. He took in a deep breath and let it out slowly, and the smile returned to his face. “I’m fine.”

“I have those moments too,” Joey said without explanation.

“Do you miss playing soccer?”

“Yeah.”

“I miss little league. Too bad we didn’t play the same thing.”

“I did Little League too. What position did you play?”

“Third base.”

“Any good?”

“I didn’t play third base, I was third base.”

Joey thought for a moment. Then he chuckled. “Hey kid, you’re all right! And I think that’s what this place needs…a sports team. I don’t care what it is…the ten meter run, anything. And we could get our families to watch. It would be like old times.”

The irony of two younglings talking about old times would seem odd anywhere else but Farthingdale. It is said that the eyes are the windows of the soul. The eyes of these villagers revealed much, and hinted at much, much more. Even after one week, Joey’s glance was a gateway into a great mystery.

Joey said, “Let’s meet here tomorrow morning and we’ll scout out a good place.”
 
7 - BEYOND HIS YEARS

The next day, David chatted so much at the breakfast table that the other younglings hardly got a word in.

“Just think, we’re going to have a race. Maybe we’ll have a prize for first place.”

“Somebody’s made a new friend,” Maureen said. “I’m glad you’re making friends your own age. Now dearie, don’t let your muffins get cold.”

As good as eating fresh blueberry muffins felt in his new body, David quickly downed them, washing the remains down with cold milk so quickly that he had to cough.

“Where’s the fire?” Tipper asked.

“Funny you should say that,” David said with a knowing nod. “Maureen, may I be excused?”

“Yes, dear.” She watched him grab his cap and vest and head for the door.”

“Aren’t we forgetting something??”

David looked about with a sheepish grin. “Sorry, Ma’am.” He came over and kissed Maureen on the cheek. “Good bye.”

***​

David rushed to the rendezvous spot. No one was there, and he wondered if he had found the wrong place or had just come too early. Then his sensitive nose detected Joey’s smell. Perhaps it would be better called his fragrance, since it was clean, familiar, and friendly.

Just then a fox came, but it was an adult. The desolate look on his face said everything before he had a chance to speak.

“He’s gone, isn’t he?”

The fox nodded, wringing his paws. “He really wanted to set up a sports team. Last night it was all he could talk about. I had him for a week and it was the only time I saw him smile.”

He drew a deep breath, let it out slowly. “Joey wanted a race, and he’ll get one. And I’d be honored if you would come and watch.”

Mr. Fox put a paw on his shoulder. “You made him smile. You’re a miracle worker, and you have a courage beyond your years.”

Though David didn’t realize it, his courage had grown beyond that of most adults.
 
8 - THE REALIZATION

David wondered where he should take his new bike first. His parents had fooled him to the last minute thinking he would be getting clothes for his birthday, and he still had to remind himself it was really his new ride. This didn’t have a coaster brake, it had real handbrakes and three gears. And it was his struggle to remember to coast forward while changing back to first gear that made him look down while he turned out into the street.

He heard the rumbling of an oncoming car. It wasn’t the slow-paced traffic he was used to in that neighborhood cul-de-sac. He looked around and saw a speeding white coupe racing down the asphalt.

“He’s going to kill someone...”

The horn blared. It braked…hard. The car spun out of control but it came closer, closer…

“No!!”

***​

David’s screams woke the family. Maureen rushed into the small bedroom, a candlestick in her paw whose drunken light revealed the youngling clutching a pillow and quaking like an aspen leaf.

“My precious baby!” She sat on the bed and gathered David into her embrace, pressing his tear-stained face into her warm fur and kissing him. “It’s just a dream! I’m here. Let it out, baby. Let me carry it.”

“I saw it!” David cried. “I saw the whole thing!” He looked up frantically. “I can’t go back to sleep! It’ll happen again! Don’t make me sleep!”

“I know, baby, I know. I’ll fetch you some milk and we’ll have a little talk.” She kissed away his tears.

Tipper whispered, “I wondered when this would happen.”

“Shh!” Dewdrop said. “Let’s leave them alone. It’s over.”

It was far from over. Even in Farthingdale, you can’t outrun the truth.

***​

Maureen had given visitors the talk many times before, but it never got easier. After sending Tipper and Dewdrop to the brambles to pick some useless blackberries, she took her seat in the padded rocking chair.

“Come on, now. Into my lap with you.”

“I’m too old for this,” David grumbled.

“Well, I’m not.”

He stalked over to the chair and gingerly climbed into Maureen’s lap. It was a bit challenging to fit in, but he was comfortable after he settled himself.

They rocked for some time, the only sound being the creak of the chair and the soft cadence of their two breaths. Even by Farthingdale standards time did not seem to pass. Finally, David lay his head on her shoulder and heaved a deep sigh. Maureen knew that sigh from long experience.

“Your friend Joey was here for a week,” she said. “Short visits are hopeful ones, and I bet he’s with is folks right now watching the game, even if he can’t play.”

“I’ve been here a week,” David said. “At least I think so.”

“Time has little meaning here,” Maureen said, stroking his face with a paw. “That changes when you’re talking about your chances of recovery. Then time becomes the most important thing in the world. Most of our visitors are here for a month or two—maybe even four.” She sighed deeply. “Then there’s the long termers…”

“The long termers?”

“They rarely go back, they just move on to the havens when their body gives way, the way Charlie did. They’re the hardest ones to lose, because you knew them the best. You loved them in your very bones.”

David placed his paw over Maureen’s and gave it a little squeeze. “Was Janice a long termer?”

David felt her embrace tighten and the wet touch of tears landing on his scalp. The chair stopped rocking.

“I’m sorry. They told me not to say her name.”

“Don’t be sorry.”

“How long do you think I have?”

Maureen began to rock slowly. “I wish I knew.”
 
9 - COUNTING UP

Time passed, and so did David’s awkwardness. He proved a quick study at the anvil, and he helped Mr. Badger with his work, even meeting his new visitor, Cody. He was busy arranging the sports team, yet he never slacked at his chores. He was determined to pack an entire lifetime into whatever time he had.

Whenever one of his teammates moved on, David went to the innkeepers and shared his favorite memories with them and prayed with them. Often Maureen would be stopped in her errands by grieving caregivers who would thank her for “that precious angel.”

David’s disposition, always full of sunshine, gradually took on a deeper beauty that comes from seeing the miraculous side of the ordinary. His goal to pack an entire lifetime into his remaining days was on track.

He had become a fixture in Farthingdale. When he walked down the street, all but the newest folk greeted him by name, asked how the team was going, and what’s being made in the blacksmith’s shop today. And those new folk who asked about him heard, “You ought to meet him.”

When someone asked when he would be back, he would always say, “Lord willing.” Not because he was uncertain, but rather he had a deep certainty that the Lord in all His mystery knew what He was doing and could be trusted. That trust only deepened as the days stretched into weeks and then into months and he grew beyond the mark Maureen made on the doorframe.

He had gone from third base to coach, not just in what he did but in who he was. Because of his attitude, folk became less conscious of the passage of time and the uncertainty of their schedule. They made promises and laid plans, adopting David’s cheerful phrase, “Lord willing.”

David started a baseball league. Maureen was always at games to cheer him on. Mr. Fox was the umpire, and Mr. Badger, when he could tear himself away from his anvil, was there to cheer on Cody in his loud baritone. Needless to say, Tipper was on the team, and his sharp reflexes made him an excellent batter.

***​

Maureen retrieved a calendar and charcoal pencil from the chest in her bedroom. No one kept track of dates in Farthingdale, but they did keep track of visits. She made a tally, then began counting the days. “Five, ten, fifteen, twenty…” As her paw passed further over the neat rows of tallies, she grew more alarmed. “Eight months? Has it really been eight months?” Tears welled up in her eyes and she bowed her head. “Lord bless Mr. and Mrs. Ferguson and give them strength to face the future. And help me too!”

There was a noise at the front door. Maureen quickly put away the calendar and pencil, shoving the chest under her bed and straightening the blanket.

David looked in. “Maureen, I…” The little buck came closer. “Are you okay?”

“Yes, dear. When a doe gets to be my age, she develops cracks in her armor.” She held David close. “Just feeling sentimental, that’s all. I’m better now that you’re home.”

“You’re thinking about Janice again.”

She touched his cheek with her paw. “My clever little boy. I can’t fool you for a minute.”

***​

Truth be told, David was a clever little boy. He waited till Maureen was busy in the kitchen, and when he was sure he was unobserved, he went to her bedroom and felt about under her bed frame till he found the chest.

Wide eyed with guilty peril, he raised the lid and scanned the contents.

There was a small rag doll rabbit, a few child drawings, a ball of yarn, and a few odd buttons. There was also a book. Perhaps it was her diary. If so, it could shed light on many things that troubled him.

The book was rather thick and looked important. David tugged at the cover and it flopped open to the large bookmark, as books often remember the last place they were read. And at the top of one page was written, “David – Son of George and Toni Ferguson.”

The space below his name was covered in neat rows of tallies. David was surprised how many of them there were.

He began to flip backward through the book. He saw Janice – Daughter of Kurt and Estelle Foster. And before Janice was Billy. Before Billy was Mario, Hans, Giuseppi and Dan. Page after page after page was dedicated to some young life, some of them covered in swaths of tallies, others bearing but a few. There were causes of death; pneumonia, car accident, hemorrhagic fever, falling down the stairs. The procession of souls seemed unending. As he flipped back through the pages, he began to see quaint old names that had fallen out of favor like Myrtle, Willum, Chastity, and Ezekial.

A lesser child would have felt insignificant, perhaps jealous, as if everything that happened to him was but a single strand in a giant haystack. Not David. He began to understand Maureen’s soul, to dip into her well of heartache and drink its bitter waters. What an ocean of tears she must have wept! What awful visions must have troubled her rest!

“Ahem!”

David looked up. He’d never seen Maureen upset before and had wondered if she even possessed that emotion. She did.

“Kindly explain yourself…”

Had David been a lesser child, he might have groped for an excuse. Instead, his glance met hers directly. “How do you bake me pies, brush my fur and read me stories like we had all the time in the world?”

Her expression softened. “I try not to think about it. And I pray a lot. But that doesn’t explain you going through my things.”

Her reproach paled next to the grief welling up inside him. He held out the book in trembling paws. “How old are you? How many times have you done this? A hundred? A thousand?? How do you stand it??”

“I don’t know! But if I don’t open my door to these dear souls, what’s going to happen to them??.” Maureen took the book in her arms, embracing it tenderly as tears silently ran down her cheeks. “I kiss away their nightmares, and if their faces haunt my dreams, so be it!” Her head bowed, her ears slumped, and for a long time she was silent.

“Are you an angel?”

“I’m a mother.” She shut the book in the chest and pushed it back under the bed. “It was easier when Shawn was alive. He was my husband, my knight in shining armor, and I was his fair damsel. Sometimes I would call him Sir Lancelot and he would call me his Guinevere. When I was weak, he was strong. When I’d cry, he’d make me smile. His love kept me going at the worst of times, and there were some awful times. And though the years and heartbreaks took their toll on me, he thought I was beautiful.”

“I think you’re beautiful,” David said, his heart rising in his throat. “And I bet Shawn was handsome.”

“Some does might not think so, but when he looked at me, oh those eyes! They say the eyes are the windows of the soul. And when I saw the beauty of his dear spirit, it made me weak in the knees!” Maureen sighed deeply. “Sometimes in the night I dream I’m holding him, and I wake up to find it’s his empty pillow.”

David blinked back tears. “I’m sorry I hurt you! I’m sorry!”

“No need to be sorry. You weren’t curious, you were desperate. I know that feeling.”

“You haven’t been the same since Janice left. I just want to help you.”

Maureen’s ear twitched. “You’ve been talking to Mister Badger. He’s a sweetheart but sometimes he says too much.”

“But it’s true. You give and give and get nothing back! I’d give you everything I have if it would help. I’d die for you!”

Maureen took him by the shoulders with trembling paws. “As I would die for you! Every time you are late coming home, or I send you away not knowing when someone will bring me your little vest, I die. And when you come back, I am reborn so that I may die again! And it tortures me that your mom and dad feel the same way! You are my child, just like Tipper and Dewdrop, and my love for you is a mother’s love.” She tenderly stroked his somber face. “There is a tree at the edge of town where an oak and elm grew together till they became one being, one life, and they can’t be rent asunder without destroying the whole. I fear that has happened to us, and that raises all kinds of problems.”

“I know.” David laid his face against her shoulder. “I try not to talk about my folks ‘cause I don’t want to hurt you. But no matter what I do, someone’s going to get hurt! I tried praying, but I don’t know what to ask for!”

“Pray for guidance,” Maureen said, kissing his sad face. “God lost a son. He understands.”
 
10 - MATTERS OF THE HEART

One afternoon a week later, David saw Dewdrop working on a vest with her needle and thread.

“Mending garments?”

“No,” the doe answered. “I’m practicing embroidery. See, I’m sewing a heart. I have to use blind stitches, so it doesn’t go all the way through.”

“Uh, yes. But shouldn’t you put it on the outside instead of the lining?”

“It’s supposed to be inside. If someone sews a heart inside your vest, it’s their heart next to yours.”

David’s nose twitched. “Hey, that’s my green vest!” A smile spread across his face. “Tipper was right, you ARE sweet on me…”

Dewdrop looked up, mortified. “Why that little snitch!” She went back to her embroidery with what could only be called fierce nonchalance. “What ELSE has he told you about me?” Suddenly she gasped and dropped the needle. “Ow!”

David was all flustered. “Did you stick yourself? Here, let me kiss it and make it better.” And before she could object, he took her hurt paw in both of his, bent down and gently kissed it, not letting it go. “Don’t be angry. Please don’t. If you stay mad, you won’t stitch my other vest, and I’ll only wear this one.”

The smile returned to her face. “I could never stay mad at you, Davy.”

“Good.” He leaned forward and kissed her cheek.

***​

It was the first rosy suggestion of evening. David sat by the well. He had felt rather proud of the way he handled that situation, until he remembered Maureen’s words. “Time has no meaning here. That changes when you’re talking about your chances of recovery.”

He sighed, remembering how Dewy’s eyes lit up when he gave her first kiss…his first kiss. Whether it was only puppy love or the first true stirrings of her heartstrings, she would be hurt. Was it right to kiss her? It was bad enough breaking Maureen’s heart without hurting Dewy as well.

David had been in every room of Maureen’s house, looking for marks on the doorframes. Some showed a lot of growth, others were but a single line. Many were still fresh, others had been painted over once, twice, a dozen times. “Will she ever paint over mine?” he asked himself. Secretly he hoped not. He had hidden away a pawprint cast in her secret chest, buried under a number of drawings. “I never did her a drawing.”

Just then an old otter came along with a bucket, disturbing his reverie. “Making big plans?” he asked. “I’ll be quick as a wink and out of your fur.”

David asked, “Is this a wishing well?”

“Anywhere else, I’d say no. But in this place, it couldn’t hurt to give it a shot.”

As the bucket thumped and bumped its way toward splashdown, the whole notion of a wishing well seemed foolish. Anyhow, David knew his problems were too large for a wish, however magical.

He clasped his paws together and closed his eyes. “Our Father which art in heaven…” Tears began to stream down his cheeks, and he choked back a sob. “Help me, God! Help me!”

The otter dropped his bucket and sat next to him, putting a strong arm around him. “There, there child. What can be so awful? Tell ol’ Bertie and we’ll pray about it together.”

Passers by, strangers with no idea of what brought the little rabbit to this dark place, saw the tearful prayers and gently laid paws on them, bowing their heads. Then one toddler raccoon piped up, “That’s David!” And at the mention of that name, there were whispers in the crowd.

“It’s him! That’s our coach!”

“He helped my son!”

“God, help that little angel!”

Word spread among the villagers. Those families on the baseball team, and even folk who just knew him as “that nice rabbit” stopped their work and bowed their heads.
 
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11 - THE CHOICE

The sun was settling down for the night, and stars began to prick the purple heavens, David approached the front door of Maureen’s home. Even before his paw touched the latchstring, he could smell the alluring summons of simmer and sing stew.

The door swung open. “Maureen, I’m home!”

He froze. In the corner of the den stood Maureen, crestfallen and tear stained. Tipper and Dewdrop were huddled against her, holding on to her paws.

“Maureen?? What’s wrong??”

“David…it’s HIM.”

David glanced around the room and finally spotted the guest. Perhaps guest isn’t the best word since he never comes invited and is never invited back.

The rabbit sniffed, but the guest had no smell. He had no appearance either, though it was impossible not to see him.

“I thought you said there was nothing in Farthingdale to be afraid of!”

At this, the guest said—or thought aloud—“I mean no one harm.” The spectral figure drew near to David who, to his credit, did not back away.

David moved between the specter and his family. “What do you want with us?”

“No, David. What do you want from me?”

“I want you to go away,” David said, his courage creeping back. “You’re scaring my family.” He had come a long way since Charlie’s hammer fell to earth.

“Your future cannot go away, but in your case, you can choose how you want to face it. The Lord was moved by all the heartfelt prayers. He offers you three choices.”

Either the room grew dark or the things within grew dim and insignificant. In the hushed twilight there was one shaft of light, and it fell like a spotlight on David in his electric wheelchair. His mother came over and ran her fingers through his hair. It was good to see her again, though the poignancy of the scene cut him to the quick. “Let’s see if you can go around the kitchen table. When you can do that, we’ll go outside in the garden, and you can see the new flowers.”

David barely had time to process this when a second image appeared next to the first one. David recognized himself, though his appearance had changed quite a bit. He was standing in a flowery meadow. An older couple came to see him and the boy ran into their arms. “Grandpa! Grandma!”

“Davy!” his grandmother said, stroking his face. “My little star sweeper! You’re out of that bed now and you can do anything your heart desires.”

“Except graduate,” his grandfather said wistfully. “No college, no wife, no children of his own. He would have made such a fine man. You had such promise.”

Time passed. David—the rabbit—waited to see what would happen next. He finally said, “You told me I would have three choices.”

At this, as if reluctantly, a shaft of light fell on Maureen and her two younglings cowering against the wall.

Maureen’s gaze locked with David’s, and she spoke barely above a whisper. “I’m praying for you, sweetie. Whatever you choose, I’ll make peace with it.”

“What should I do?”

“It’s your choice. It’s not about what I want.”

David was locked for a moment in an agony of indecision. Then he fully understood Maureen’s latest bit of wisdom. “It’s not about what I want. It’s about where I’m needed.”

The specter softly intoned, “Interesting that you should know this at such an early age.”

David said, “I’m needed here! There’s so much I have to do! I can’t leave these folks—I can’t! Please, let me be a knight in shining armor!”

The specter drew closer. “Do you know what you’re asking? Have you any idea? There can be no going back.”

“I want to be just like Shawn! I’ll work day and night! I’ll cry an ocean! I’ll do anything! Please God, let me stay!”

There was a momentary hush, so that each ragged breath of the small buck could be heard distinctly. Then softly—almost imperceptibly at first—a gentle snowfall of golden sparkles began to fall around him, collecting on his face and shoulders, and the air grew thick with the fragrance of roses and violets.

David looked up, his face full of wonder. “Stardust?”

Suddenly he was bathed in glorious light, and a wind only he could feel began to stir his vest. The little buck looked up into the light and reached up with his trembling paws.

“Is it you??”

There was a low rumbling which may have been mistaken for distant thunder, except there were no storms in Farthingdale. Joy flooded David’s soul, tears running down his cheeks as more sparkles landed on his fur. He began to glow softly from within.

“It’s really you!”

The light grew brighter. His face, already handsome and innocent, became too brilliant, too beautiful for mortal eyes to bear.

The mysteries of transfiguration must remain unsaid, though every saint will learn them in time. Warmed by the fervent kiss of God, his mortality melted away and in its place a new David was born, somehow just the same, yet utterly different. Though not a strand of fur was added or removed, and the contours of his face remained the same, he was no longer made from the dust of the earth, he was made of stardust. He was as fresh and clean as the first dew of Eden.

Blessed are the pure in heart, for they shall see God…

He slowly sank to his knees, his head bowed, and his arms dropped to his side. The light withdrew and along with it vanished the mysterious guest. In the palpable silence that followed, David lay spent and crumpled on the floor.

Cowed by the uncertain stillness, Maureen and her younglings were afraid to move, even to speak. They hardly dared to breathe. Then David raised his face from the floor and turned his eyes toward his family. “Does this mean I can stay?”

Maureen cried out as the pent-up anguish of a thousand griefs fled her body. Sobbing, she ran to him, collapsed to her knees and gathered up David in a warm, crushing hug.

Tipper came and ruffled the fur between David’s ears and Dewdrop kissed his weary face. He was truly a knight pledged to the King of Kings, whose shining armor was a simple vest sewn by Maureen’s loving paws and his armorial crest Dewdrop’s seal of adoration. Never had Sir Lancelot in all his glory looked more grand or more noble. He had climbed to the utmost pinnacle of joy.

***​

At that same moment, a world away, the Fergusons dwelt in the deepest shadow of grief. Pneumonia had ravaged David’s lungs, and it was no longer a matter of whether he would wake from his coma, but whether he would live through the night. Perhaps with a bronchoscopy and massive amounts of antibiotics, he might carry on but at the cost of destroying his liver. Most crushing of all, his EEG showed no activity. The last flicker of his love, his joy, his sense of wonder had gone. Like David, George and Toni were forced into a hard decision.

Toni held her son’s hand and gently stroked the tattered remnants of his raven black hair. George gently kissed his wife’s cheek, then bent over to kiss his son’s brow.

The doctor and nurse entered, their faces grim.

Doctor Vayjee handed Toni a clipboard and pen. “You understand what this is you’re signing, and you do so of your own volition?”

“Yes.” She signed the directive form on the yellow highlighted blank, then handed it to George.

“Me too,” George said. The pen in his trembling hand made a mark that passed for a signature below hers.

The nurse took the form and signed as witness.

“He was born in this hospital,” Toni said to the doctor, “I never thought I’d see him die here.”

“I too have a son,” the doctor said. “Would you like me to call the hospital chaplain?”

“No…thank you. He’s such a good boy. I know he’s going to a better place.”

As George and Toni hovered over their son, the doctor pressed a button on the ventilator to end its long journey. Its ever-present whispers stopped, leaving deafening silence, and a last long breath escaped David’s body. Moments later the pulse readout on his vital signs descended till it triggered a strident alarm. The doctor quickly muted the distress call, glancing at his watch and jotting a note on his clipboard. “The time is 7:34 pm.”

***​

As the Farthingdale moon sailed softly through a velvet sky, Maureen washed dishes by lantern light as David dried them. For a while nothing was said. Then the old doe began to sing. David looked up at her and smiled, touching his vest where Dewy’s embroidered heart beat next to his.



A PSALM FOR DAVID

Come trembling leaf, badly withered and worn
Your autumn came early, away you were shorn,
My heart will restore you, my small precious boy
Come dwell on my branch in the springtime of joy

I would be your safe harbor, and when you feel brave
Be a compass to guide you across the wild wave
With prayers for your happiness filling your sails
And prayers for protection to weather the gales
 
AN AFTERWORD

Those of you who know me well enough understand that I am both Maureen and David. My own little David -- Benjamin -- must have some sweet Maureen to rock him to sleep and kiss away his tears. He simply must or it wouldn't be heaven. Make him apple cake and sew a heart inside his vest for me.

I dedicate this story to you, my little star sweeper.
 
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"HAVE NO FEAR, ADVENTURERS. I AM EQUIVVALENTOR, THE DRAGON OF REASONABLENESS, ONE OF THE NINE OR TEN MIGHTIEST GOOD-ALIGNED CREATED BEINGS DWELLING OUTSIDE OF ETERNAL HEAVEN AND IN THE FOUR KNOWN GALAXIES. ACTING ON BEHALF OF THE ALMIGHTY CREATOR, WHO SPOKE TO ME IN HIS ASPECT AS THE GOD-LION ASLAN, I AM BIDDEN TO TRANSPORT YOU TO A WORLD WHICH IS UNDER HIS DIRECT ADMINISTRATION. HE WILL ISSUE HIS INSTRUCTIONS BEFORE YOU ARE EXPECTED TO SERVE."

Countless parsecs away from Farthingdale (yes, that's where the wise dragon is transporting this diverse hero-posse), developments were developing which would influence the righteous business of that righteous domain. The posse included characters whom readers of my saga have already seen, but the majority were characters known only to persons who played Dungeons And Dragons with me long ago.

Roleplay-generated or otherwise, all of these brave sapient beings either were magical, or were familiar with magic and mythology. Most of them were natives of a world with conditions like Earth, but it wasn't a version of Earth. Just one of the travelers was from the Narnian world as it had been before the great evacuation through the divine Stable. The Talking Mouse named Tweepikip, a great-great -nephew of the formidable Reepicheep, had been guided through the Wood Between the Worlds and been deposited on the Dungeons-And-Dragons world. On this planet, the virtuous king of a nation called Anglosaxophonia had been murdered with his entire family by a horde of chaotic-evil monsters.

A daring paladin, Sir Nehemiah of Dinsdale, led a campaign to punish the evildoers, and among his earliest volunteers had been a Christian cleric named Sirivis, a reckless warrior named Gene Wildest, and three others whom I believe I've mentioned elsewhere: Toshiro the Samurai, Olias the sorceror, and the winged lion called Liam Lammasu. Tweepikip was guided by the breath of Aslan to find and join those others. Under Sir Nehemiah's leadership, the villains were overthrown; and without having sought it, the pure-hearted paladin was made king, and was destined to rebuild his nation.


Their mission achieved, the assorted heroes heard Aslan calling. Sirivis had work still to do in Anglosaxophonia, teaching captured orcs to understand that even they could be saved from The Bad Place. The others, when rested, were summoned to accept relocation by way of a supernatural Wizard-of-Oz tornado.

"Before you take off to be relayed by My servant Equivvalentor," Aslan explained, "you will be joined by others who have My approval. They come from a planet which is a reflection of Adam and Eve's world. There is a long-lived demigoddess named Hiptubeeskwerra, Queen of the Yummyzons, mother of a certain Walloper Woman. Accompanying her from their Earth- variant will be a heroic mortal man called Iron Punch, whose fists can shatter stones. He asked to be included in this adventure, because friends of his (including Walloper Woman} had performed valiant exploits on still another distant world, called Redundantworld. Iron Punch is true of heart, and it pleases me to give him his chance."

When the transportation magic went to work, Sirivis threw Toshiro's sheathed katana to him. ("The sword is the soul of a Samurai.") Materializing beside the churchwoman, Aslan told her: "Your sisterly love for Toshiro, conducting your faith, has conferred upon him the status of a Paladin, without impairing his prowess as a Samurai. And his sword is now a Holy Sword, granting him the ability to slay wicked beings who could laugh at ordinary weapons."




When Hiptubeeskwerra, Iron Punch, Sir Toshiro, Gene Wildest, Tweepikip, Liam Lammasu and Olias arrived in Farthingdale, the Talking Animals there were not a bit alarmed. Understandably, those locals who knew the name of Reepicheep were happy to meet a kins-mouse of that chivalrous rodent who had sailed with Caspian on the Dawn Treader.


The Yummyzon queen and her kung-fu escort were intrigued by the variety of young sapient beings. It was Liam, the human- faced and eagle-winged quasi-lion, who first got down to business. "Most amiable creatures, all of us wish to know how we might be of service to Aslan, Whom we also know as the Lord Jesus. Toshiro and I would offer our services as healers of the sick or wounded, except that we are sure all such matters are already under control."


\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ TO ALL READERS: THIS BEING PART OF A NARRATIVE COLLABORATION, EXPECT EVENING STAR TO PICK UP IN THE NEXT POST, WRITING WHAT ASLAN MAY SAY TO THE SEVEN VOYAGERS. THE BADGER MAY CHOOSE TO HAVE ONE OR MORE OF MY JUST-SHOWN CHARACTERS REMAIN IN FARTHINGDALE. IF BADGER WANTS >ALL< OF THEM TO STAY FOR SEVERAL POSTS, NO PROBLEM; I'LL JUST HOP OVER TO "SPACEBULLIES," TO PICK UP >OTHER< CHARACTERS OF MINE WHO ALSO HAVE MISSIONS IN THE FOURTH GALAXY. MOST LIKELY ON DYSTOPIAN EARTH, WHICH IS MORE SCIENCE FICTION-ISH.
 
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Take heart, brave brother. I have _long_ been in the field, routinely telling new acquaintances about this community. By means of me, at least more _viewers_ have been induced to give those views; but I was unable to tell them how to _join_ as contributors.

Now, however, Benisse has furnished a how-to for aspiring authors & commentators, telling them a one-two-three: Enter the Wardrobe \ Welcome New Members \ Follow the link for instructions.
 
I think part of this is this is just not a widely trafficked forum anymore, and so you have to temper your expectations accordingly with regards to your audience response. I know for a fact that you're a talented writer and put a lot of effort into your work, and I understand that it feels like there's little response to it, but that's more an indicator of the traffic here and far, far less an indicator of how the people who are still here feel.
 
I think part of this is this is just not a widely trafficked forum anymore, and so you have to temper your expectations accordingly with regards to your audience response. I know for a fact that you're a talented writer and put a lot of effort into your work, and I understand that it feels like there's little response to it, but that's more an indicator of the traffic here and far, far less an indicator of how the people who are still here feel.
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I sure do like it. And EveningStar is brainstorming with me about how the setting of this story might be connected with existing concepts. Various characters already developed in my multiple "Spacebullies" plotlines could be made to visit the Badger's new story-reality. AAAAAAAND.... if my very smart friend Rob Rice (who lives near me in the Denver area) can be inducted into Dancing Lawn, EveningStar and I will facilitate letting him also contribute stuff.

Rob is an author himself, and Writing Club contributions by him could reflect HIS published works.
 
The process of turning THE VISITOR into a full audio drama is underway. And Rob has sent me a story to publish. Since he's not a member of the forum (yet) it will appear posted by me, but it will be clearly credited TO HIM.
 
To really cinch the most vocal talent for this upcoming audio drama, I not only have people doing their natural voices, I also am using some professional voice mods to give new latitude for other characters. I made my wife almost pass out when I put on "Vanessa" and purred, "Hey big spender...next time you have a nickel or a dime, come up and see me sometime!" She went "AAAUGHH!! I need a shower to wash that feeling off!!" ;-)
 
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