Town murder mystery

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tottyfruitty said:
She motioned forward slightly still unsure of what to do. She had heard the gun shot but didnt know who the bullet had hit. "Are....you...okay?" she stammered out asking the boy, moving closer but keeping her distance.
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occ: :p

Yoh did not expect someone else, he noticed it was a girl's voice...he turned slowly..and looked at her.."Ms...Baker.." he began, stammering..."She was..." it was hard for him to continue, his hands were all sweat, and in his eyes she could see he was shocked..."Shot..." he turned back to the door, and gulped. He tryed to open again..."Its locked.."

2nd Murder​

Mr. Norito, Kaisi's grandfather, was as usually at home. Today was a little break from work, and he decided he would just stay and relax a bit.
"That Kaisi...he could have taken his car, instead of walking...he really does care a little too much about what his friends think about him" He told himself. Suddenly he jumped slightly...'clash!' He heard like a sound like someone broke a window.."Oh..those kids, guess they broke another window with some ball.." he began as he walked where he heard the noise...he got there, but stopped dead in his tracks..."Wait!.." he raised both hands..."please dont....dont...shoot.." he told the man...he semmed to laugh...from chuckling, to then truly laughing...he loaded the gun...and started pulling the trigger slowly..."no....please!! why?.." he tryed to make him throw the gun, but after the fight between them...The gun shot was heard...nothing else could be done.
 
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Jewel09 said:
"Oh, of course. I'm sorry I bumped into you, I was just so intrested in my book."

What was she doing? She knew she was probably the only one who actually read mysteries. Ivy smiled at Kaisi, stuck her bookmark in the page she was reading and closed the book.

"Do we have any other classes together, I think I've seen you around."
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Not knowing the dreadful fate of his Grandfather, Kaisiyata Norito listened to Ivy Crane's reply.

"Oh, of course. I'm sorry I bumped into you, I was just so intrested in my book," she had stated.

"It's okay. I sometimes get lost in things too," responded Kaisi casually.

He watched as Ivy shut her book after putting a bookmark upon the pages so as to not to lose her place.

"Do we have any other classes together, I think I've seen you around," Ivy had said was a hint of questioning in her voice.

Kaisiyata did not mind hanging around to chat, nor did he mind the questioning tone in Ivy's voice. He was used to his classmates asking him stuff.
"Not really, only a few. Science and History. Other then that, you might have seen me on the baseball field," he replied to Ivy Crane.
 
SimonW said:
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Not knowing the dreadful fate of his Grandfather, Kaisiyata Norito listened to Ivy Crane's reply.

"Oh, of course. I'm sorry I bumped into you, I was just so intrested in my book," she had stated.

"It's okay. I sometimes get lost in things too," responded Kaisi casually.

He watched as Ivy shut her book after putting a bookmark upon the pages so as to not to lose her place.

"Do we have any other classes together, I think I've seen you around," Ivy had said was a hint of questioning in her voice.

Kaisiyata did not mind hanging around to chat, nor did he mind the questioning tone in Ivy's voice. He was used to his classmates asking him stuff.
"Not really, only a few. Science and History. Other then that, you might have seen me on the baseball field," he replied to Ivy Crane.
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Ivy's phone buzzed in her pocket. She smiled apologetically and answered it, listening to the woman's voice on the phone. Her smile disappeared as she hung up.

"Kaisi," She said, her eyes tearing up. "I don't know how to tell you this. As you may or may not know, I live next to your house. My mom was home from work today and she heard a gunshot. She went next door to check and...." Ivy's throat felt like it was closing. "She found your grandfather."
 
She swallowed hard. "By.....by.....why? Umm are you sure?" she asked rubbing her hands together awkwardly. She could feel her heart beat increase and getting louder. It felt like her chest was going to bust open from the explosion of her heart. She quickly rummaged through her bag looking anxiously for her cell phone.
 
tottyfruitty said:
She swallowed hard. "By.....by.....why? Umm are you sure?" she asked rubbing her hands together awkwardly. She could feel her heart beat increase and getting louder. It felt like her chest was going to bust open from the explosion of her heart. She quickly rummaged through her bag looking anxiously for her cell phone.
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"Darn it!!.." Yoh yelled bringing his hands to his head, and giving some steps back.."I'll have to kick it.." he kicked the door twice but it was useless.."We cant enter by the back." he tryed to breathe and think better.."That man...went away through there.."

The Never Land Girl said:
Jan walk around the school wonder what going on.
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Suddenly a man pulled Jan by her arm, to a little street that had a dead end. "Dont move, or u will regret it.." The man that had his face hidden by a black mask whispered at her..., Also, he out a knife on her throat, not very close, but not hesistating.
 
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The Never Land Girl said:
Jan put her hands up.
" Wh-what's going on?," She ask,
She close her eyes parying that she was only dreaming.
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'shhhhh' the man commanded holding her tighter..."He...he.." the man began laughing..."Tell me...whats ur name?.." he asked still chuckling madly, she could feel his sick breath on her neck..."I guess, u must know, who I am.." he told her.
 
She nodded.
" That well help," She said still having her hands in the air,
She took a big breath or two then close her eyes.
" My name is Jan," She told him.
 
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She took out her phone and dialed 999. "Come on.." she muttered as she waited for an answer.
"Are you hurt, injured?" she asked watching him. "Maybe we could go in through the window" she suggested picking up a brick.
 
The Never Land Girl said:
She nodded.
" That well help," She said still having her hands in the air,
She took a big breath or two then close her eyes.
" My name is Jan," She told him.
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"Ok...Jan..." Her pulled the knife closer...he laughed again.."Its the end.."

tottyfruitty said:
She took out her phone and dialed 999. "Come on.." she muttered as she waited for an answer.
"Are you hurt, injured?" she asked watching him. "Maybe we could go in through the window" she suggested picking up a brick.
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He glanced at her hand in the minute she said it. "Right.." he grabbed the brick from her hand..."No, im not hurt.." he replied. "Ok, this will be noisy.." he threw the brick and covered his face slightly, all the cristal flew and the hole was big enough for them to enter.
 
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She hesistated before following him. Curiosty got the better of her. She coughed as she enetered. It was very dusty and dark.
 
occ: Dusty? its a shop... XD it only has broken things around.

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Yoh... gulped, and stepped in, being carefull with the cut glasses in the floor and the broken window. He searched for the lights, to turn them on. 'click' the sound of the interruptor revealed what Yoh was affraid of..."m...m...ms...Bak..ker" He slowly stammered...She was laying there.."God....no..." he kneeled at her side..."Why?." He asked not really expecting an answer...and holded her as he still couldnt believe it. He watched her as moments flashed in his mind...Tears came to his eyes..."Darn..it.." he made one of his hands a fist..."She had done nothing!.." he yelled.."Why..her..." Yoh has always felt as her as the sister he never had...he couldnt let things go on like this.

occ: :D

"Because I want to..Well, thinking it better this its not quite my style.." he laughed...hitting her in the back of her neck and knocking her down. He watched her for some secs.."Girl, dont forget u'll be next.."
 
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ooc:LMFO! :p

ic: Yuki stood near Yoh not knowing what to do. She looked around the shop and could see Ms Bakers sturggle. She quietly walked through the back door which would have been where the killer had ecaped.
 
"Did u call...someone..?" He asked, refering to 999...His voice was low and his eyes were full of sorrow...

occ: Yes, the second thing was for u TNLG.
 
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