When I catch up to you[poem]

Samwise Gamgee

Samwise Gamgee

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When I catch up to you, we'll talk alot. We will sit down and have lunch, when I catch up to you, we'll go to Germany and all the places we have been talking about. Exsplore a cave, slide down a hill, go to the mountains and see the ocean. When I catch up to you, we'll have no time because we'll take the days slow. We'll go to that dance that we've seen before and watch t.v.

When I catch up to you....you won't have that uniform on
When I catch up to you....when I do...we'll have time again and life will be normal again. Like it was before.

When I catch up to you.....I won't have to cry any more. You'll be here...

When I catch up to you....when I do....
 
Aslan13 said:
When I catch up to you, we'll talk alot. We will sit down and have lunch, when I catch up to you, we'll go to Germany and all the places we have been talking about. Exsplore a cave, slide down a hill, go to the mountains and see the ocean. When I catch up to you, we'll have no time because we'll take the days slow. We'll go to that dance that we've seen before and watch t.v.

When I catch up to you....you won't have that uniform on
When I catch up to you....when I do...we'll have time again and life will be normal again. Like it was before.

When I catch up to you.....I won't have to cry any more. You'll be here...

When I catch up to you....when I do....
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What makes this poem work is the specific imagery ("explore a cave" "Go to Germany". You've taken a free verse form and made the shape of the poem and the punctuation you use divide it where you want.
 
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