Writing a historical fiction series

jasmine tarkheena

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I’m thinking of writing a Christian 10 book historical fiction series set 1773-1815, drawing inspiration from Liberty’s Kids, Turn: Washington’s Spies, and the Anne of Green Gables series, calling the series The Voices of Liberty. As most of you know, writers actually do get inspiration from other sources, and there’s a fine line between inspiration and plagiarism.

Here are characters ideas I have planned out so far:

Main Character: Lucy Stiles, born March 3, 1765 in Philadelphia, a peasant orphan with strawberry blond hair, aqua eyes, porcelain skin, and a fair complexion, is soft spoken, sweet and innocent as well as imaginative, yet headstrong and has a slight temper. Her parents Major Matthew who was a guerrilla during the French and Indian War and Priscilla Stiles both died of smallpox when she was only 5 years old, and has stayed with a neighbor when her parents first came down with smallpox. Lucy has been in and out of homes, many of which were abusive and treat her more like a slave, the last consisting of a married couple where the husband was a drunkard who threw her out into the streets. Lucy lived out in the streets before she was taken in at the Pennsylvania Gazette (the Franklin Court, that is) November 1773. There, she learns how to read and write, as well how to sew, stitch, and sew with which she later becomes a seamstress. Lucy posses a rag doll named Penelope gifted to her by her father for Christmas when she was 3. She starts out as neutral then later becomes a patriot.

Caleb (pronounced in Spanish) Gracíos, a young Anglo-Spanish nobleman born February 16, 1761, in Madrid to a Welsh-Scots-Spanish father and an English-Irish mother, and moved to London when he was about 7, with deep brunette hair, a light olive complexion, and rich brown eyes, has lived a sheltered and privileged life, has a talent for playing piano and singing, and he and his parents are close friends with Dr. Benjamin Franklin. His father Seńor Colonel Jonatan Gracíos who served in the Seven Years War, retired from the service and received honor from both King George III and King Carlos III, and went to scout out new lands in the Ohio River Valley for both kings in 1770. Dr. Franklin arranges for Caleb to stay at the Gazette while awaiting for his father to return from the west and his mother Seńora Rachel Gracíos remains in London, and once Colonel Gracíos returns, Rachel would join them in the colonies. Caleb tries to make passage on a ship to Philadelphia, but couldn’t, so boarded the Eleanor to Boston December 1773. Caleb’s father has sent him only two or so letters, as there’s no mail service in the Ohio River Valley. He exudes warmth, intelligence, and maturity, is fluent in both English and Spanish, and conveys his thoughts through a very expansive vocabulary, which she uses to eloquently describe and transmit his perspective on the rapidly changing world around him. He is confronted by many complex, tragic, and troubling circumstances once arriving in America, and abhors every form of human suffering including slavery. With the possibility of a war between the American colonists and England, he decides to become a correspondent for Dr. Franklin's newspaper to offer a more balanced perspective to the press. He posses an heirloom engraved silver watch given to him by his father before he left for his exploration. Despite his privileged upbringing, he is very kind and thoughtful, and cares deeply for his friends. He starts out as a loyalist then later has a change of heart and turns to patriot. He later uses his wealth and nobility to become a diplomat for America, settling in Fairfax (Culperer), Virginia and correspond for various newspapers from a diplomatic perspective

Nolan Costner, born January 7, 1761 in Baltimore to upper-middle class family with 1 sister Anne, with blond hair and gray eyes. Nolan is a correspondent for the Pennsylvania Gazette, and is committed to getting the facts, impulsive, steadfast in his beliefs, not afraid to risk his life for a cause he is passionate about, speak his mind, volunteer for a dangerous mission, or to help someone in need. His father who is also a retired colonel from The French and Indian War, is a merchant who squandered on the family fortune and fell into debt. Nolan goes to Philadelphia to work at the Gazette to help pay off his father’s debt while his mother and Anne remain in Baltimore. He is a patriot from the very start, and although a bit overzealous, he’s kind and thoughtful, and cares deeply about his family and friends. He later pursues medicine to become a physician and sets up his practice in Fairfax (Culperer), Virginia and correspond for various newspapers from a medical perspective

Felix Haller, born April 10, 1767, in Connecticut and is Native American, with black-brown hair, copper skin, and hazel eyes, and his father has been a captain during the French and Indian War. When Felix’s family move to Philadelphia in 1773, he goes to live at the Gazette as his parents permit him, where he helps sell newspapers. Felix is commonly found getting into trouble, no matter how often he is told to stay out of it; he quite enjoys the fun, excitement, and attention it brings. He also had quite an appetite as he was always hungry, even when he had just eaten, then eventually grows out of it. Felix serves as comic relief who eventually becomes a patriot. He later pursues law to become an attorney, sets up practice in Fairfax (Culperer), Virginia and corresponds for various newspapers from legal perspective.

Maurice Dutoit, a tall and muscular French Romani in his 30’s and 40’s, with dark olive skin, deep brunette-black hair and brown eyes, Maurice was brought in chains to North America as a slave, and sold on the block in Charleston, South Carolina as a boy. Because of his ingenuity, Maurice learned to read and write in both French and English, learned smithing and craftsmanship, and buy his freedom, thus freeing himself from the slavery of the American south. He eventually moved to Philadelphia and found work at Dr. Franklin's Print Shop as a printer and serves as his majordomo, as Dr. Franklin is a man who hates slavery as much as Maurice. He values his freedom more than anything, and will never allow anyone to strip him of his dignity, despite his or her feelings on race. He has a sister named Brielle from who he was separated from as she was taken to North Carolina. On his way to Philadelphia, Maurice went to North Carolina and successfully bought Brielle freedom, and they went to the Franklin Court together, where she manages with housekeeping. Maurice also posses a letter from Dr. Franklin that states he’s a free man for protection. As Dr. Franklin is away overseas most of the time, Maurice and Brielle look after the Franklin court as well as the four children who live and work there. Maurice later starts a school for French Romani children (boys and girls) from immigrating families where they could learn English as a second language as well as read and write in both French and English, and other essentials like arithmetic, grammar, and science.

Safira Liete, born February 1765 in Portugal to a middle class family, with an older sister and a younger brother and sister, with brown hair and blue eyes. Safira and her family move from Portugal to Philadelphia in 1775, and becomes Lucy’s best friend. She develops a gentle nature, and often speaks up for Lucy. She even shares with Lucy that the custom of tea time actually originated in her home country, Portugal, giving her a reason to be a patriot because she sympathizes with the colonists over unfair taxation over tea.

Charity Mavis, born May 1767, is a native of Philadelphia like Lucy with platinum blond hair and green gray eyes who moves temporarily to York 1777-1778 during the British winter occupation, and befriends Lucy and Safira while there.

I plan to include the most essential historical events of the Revolution and beyond (The Boston Tea Party, The Intolerable Acts, the First Contentinental Congress, the Liberty of Death Speech, the Midnight Ride, Lexington and Concord, the Green Mountain Boys and Fort Ticonderoga, the Second Contentinental Congress, Bunker Hill, the Siege of Boston, the Declaration of Independence, Nathan Hale’s famous last words and execution, the Crossing of the Delaware and Battle of Trenton, the Battle of Saratoga, Valley Forge, the Treaty of Alliance, Battle of Monmouth, the Battle of Flamborough Head, the French arrival, Benedict Arnold’s treachery, the Southern Campaign, the Siege of Yorktown, the Treaty of Paris, Shay’s Rebellion, the Constitutional Convention, etc), as well as other events that don’t get studied often, (the Burning of the Peggy Stewart (a cargo ship), the Minutewomen at Jewett Bridge, the Turtle (the first submarine), Sybil Ludington’s midnight ride (who did it twice as much as Paul Revere), Spain’s involvement (for creative license, Spain becoming an alliance along with France of the US), the Brom and Bett vs Ashley case, the Newburgh conspiracy, etc).

If you have any suggestions how I should approach this, please feel to free to share them. Note: *I don’t intend to turn this into a sermon or get into the political aspect of it, so refraining from any discussion about religion or politics would be appreciated.
 
I would heartily recommend that you google slang from the 18th century colonies. It would also be very useful for you to become familiar with the local news of the area your stories are written for.

I'll give you an example. 1910's America. "This new sky sure gon'na turn heads. This remake with glad rags was duck soup, baby!" Move up to the 1940s and "This keen lid sure is killer diller! The new threads are ab-so-lutely on the beam, pal!"
 
I would heartily recommend that you google slang from the 18th century colonies. It would also be very useful for you to become familiar with the local news of the area your stories are written for.
I’ll keep that mind. 18th century sure had different terms than 21st century. For instance, the term “lunch” wasn’t used then but meals consisted of breakfast, dinner, and supper. Another would be that if my main character Lucy Stiles were to meet a handsome soldier, she wouldn’t say “He’s hot!” because it wouldn’t fit within an 18th century setting.
 
The very fact that you use numerous characters does you credit. Lots of novelists imagine they're streamlining the plotline by describing only six or seven characters, but no real-world situations are confined within such a narrow handful of people.

Overall, you're doing very well. Where Evening Star cautions against aggressive religious rhetoric, he certainly doesn't mean you must avoid even MENTIONING a character's convictions. (Our own Specter is an unashamed Roman Catholic, but has never treated non-Catholics as "the enemy.")

One suggestion: since you're bringing historical figures on stage, use Daniel Boone!!!
 
The very fact that you use numerous characters does you credit. Lots of novelists imagine they're streamlining the plotline by describing only six or seven characters, but no real-world situations are confined within such a narrow handful of people.

Overall, you're doing very well. Where Evening Star cautions against aggressive religious rhetoric, he certainly doesn't mean you must avoid even MENTIONING a character's convictions. (Our own Specter is an unashamed Roman Catholic, but has never treated non-Catholics as "the enemy.")

One suggestion: since you're bringing historical figures on stage, use Daniel Boone!!!
I will consider that as there will be lots to cover, including the Western frontier.

Here’s a timeline I have for book 1: Whispers of the Revolution-

1773:

1. Introduction to the main characters; Lucy Stiles is taken in to the Pennsylvania Gazette by Maurice and Brielle Dutoit, Nolan Costner, and Felix Haller, where Brielle braids Lucy’s hair in two

2. Caleb Gracíos makes his journey on the Eleanor from London to Boston; Maurice Dutoit, Nolan Costner, Lucy Stiles, and Felix Haller journey from Philadelphia to Boston

3. *The Boston Tea Party, led by associates of Samuel “Sam” Adams

4. Maurice and the children are taken in by Phillis Wheatley

1774:

5. *The Privy Council in London

6. *Parliament closes Boston Harbor; *The Intolerable Acts

7. **The four meet Major John Pitcairn and his two sons William and Thomas, who help them and Maurice escape Boston, and they return to Philadelphia, where Caleb meets Brielle Dutoit

8. Maurice Dutoit introduces the four to Sam Adams and John Adams

9. Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos attend *The First Contentinental Congress at Carpenter’s Hall to assist with the scribes; Lucy Stiles and Felix Haller travel to Braintree to deliver pamphlets from John Adams to Abigail Adams, and they meet the children Abigail “Nabby” Adams, John Quincy Adams, **Susanna “Suky” Adams, Charles Adams, and Thomas Adams

10. Lucy Stiles and Felix Haller journey back to Philadelphia

11. Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos journey to Baltimore after Nolan receives a letter from Anne that their father has been released from debtor’s prison and his fortune recovered by a mysterious man, and Nolan reunites with his parents and Anne and his wealthy great uncle Edward who actually recovered Nolan’s father’s fortune and release him from prison; Lucy Stiles and Felix Haller journey to Kingston, New Hampshire, sent by John Adams to deliver supplies and letters to Dr. Josiah Bartlett and his family

12. Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos journey to Annapolis, where they witness *the burning of the Peggy Stewart, and Caleb corresponds a story for the Gazette for the first time; Lucy Stiles and Felix Haller meet Dr. Josiah Bartlett who Lucy strikes up a kinship with and his family: his wife Mary who Lucy looks up to as a role model, and children Rhoda, Levi, Josiah Jr, Ezra, and Sarah

13. The four children journey back to Philadelphia

14. Deborah Franklin dies surrounded by her **two children William Franklin and Sarah Franklin Bache, and grandchildren

1775:

15. Lucy Stiles meets Safira Liete, whose family have just moved from Portugal with an older sister, and a younger brother and sister, at a church social gathering and becomes best friends with her

16. Maurice Dutoit and the children travel to Williamsburg, Virginia, to buy a new printing press before heading to Richmond

17. While Maurice Duitot meets with David Jameson (who later becomes lieutenant governor under Thomas Nelson), **Patrick Henry, a delegate to the Second Virginia Convention after the Virginia House of Burgesses was disbanded by the Royal Governor, delivers his "Give me Liberty or give me Death!" speech at St. John's Church in Richmond, Virginia; Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos copy down the speech for the Gazette while Lucy Stiles and Felix Haller listen

18. Maurice and the children return to Philadelphia

19. The four children hear whispers at the print shop, discovering it’s Maurice Dutoit, who reveals he’s a member of a secret committee of patriotic craftsmen the Mechanics

20. Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos accompany *Paul Revere and William Dawes, instructed by Dr. Joseph Warren, on the midnight ride, with Nolan going with Revere and Caleb going with Dawes, and they meet Dr. Samuel Prescott in Lexington; Lucy Stiles and Felix Haller are staying with Prudence Cummings Wright in Papperell

21. Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos corresponds for the *Battles of Lexington and Concord, with Nolan on the side of the minutemen and Caleb on the side of the British; Lucy Stiles mends men’s clothing for Prudence Cummings Wright and a group of the minute women, and she and Felix Haller witness the minute women at Jewett Bridge, where Lucy corresponds for her very first story for the Gazette

22. *Dr. Benjamin Franklin returns to Philadelphia

23. The four children journey to Vermont, where they encounter the Green Mountain Boys and meet Ethan Allen; Caleb Gracíos meets Colonel Benedict Arnold who he respects and looks up to as a role model; Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos accompany *the Green Mountain Boys to Fort Ticonderoga and correspond it for the Gazette while Lucy Stiles and Felix stay behind in Vermont

24. The four children return to Philadelphia, bringing home maple syrup

25. For *The Second Continental Congress, which had assembled while the children were away in Vermont, Dr. Benjamin Franklin give each an assignment: Maurice Dutoit, Nolan Costner, and Caleb Gracíos are to meet and greet Colonel George Washington, Lucy Stiles is to be sure the inkwells are filled, and Felix Haller is to keep the buckets filled with water for both the delegates and horses

26. Lucy Stiles reunites with Dr. Josiah Bartlett, who’s serving as one of the New Hampshire delegates; *The Continental Congress bans trade with Canada

27. *The Continental Congress names George Washington as commander of the Continental Army

28. Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos correspond for *the Battle of Bunker Hill, with Nolan on the American side and Caleb on the British side, where they both learn the reality of the horrors of war with the deaths of Dr. Joseph Warren and Major John Pitcairn; Lucy Stiles and Felix Haller are staying with Abigail Adams and the children where *Abigail and John Quincy watch the battle through spyglasses

29. *George Washington takes command of the 17,000-man Continental Army at Cambridge; Caleb Gracíos receives a second letter from his father two months old, and says that though he writes to his mother every day, the letters haven’t been getting through; Nolan Costner admits that they haven’t heard anything from their other correspondents for weeks; after learning from Captain Joseph Hodges that the postal service was under British control, Nolan Costner and Lucy Stiles discover that the Tories have been intercepting and publishing private letters in the newspapers and pamphlets for everybody to read

30. *The Second Continental Congress appoints Benjamin Franklin to be the first Postmaster General of what later becomes the United States Post Office Department; Maurice Dutoit and Caleb Gracíos travel to Newport, Rhode Island, to buy inks and papers, and meet Moses Michael Hayes, who *signs the declaration of loyalty.

31. The four children journey to Massachusetts to see the army; Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos accompany Colonel Henry Knox on the journey to Fort Ticonderoga with the captured canons and back to Cambridge

1776:

32. The four children journey back to Philadelphia; Nolan Costner and Caleb Gracíos receive a correspondence later on *the burning of Norfolk

33. The Dutoit siblings and the children meet Thomas Paine, who *published Common Sense

34. The four children journey to Boston; Threatened by Patriot cannons on Dorchester Heights, the British evacuate Boston, ending the 11‐month Siege of Boston.

35. *The Declaration of Independence

36. *The Liberty Bell rings for the first public reading of the Declaration of Independence at the Pennsylvania State House in Philadelphia.

Creative license notes:
William Franklin and Sarah Franklin Bache are depicted as biological siblings, children of Benjamin and Deborah Franklin, and despite their different views, they love each other and keep in contact in this historical fiction; in actual history, they were half siblings, and although their different views remain the same, nothing’s recorded about their relationship.

Susanna “Suky” Adams survives in this historical fiction; in actual history, she tragically dies in 1770 when she was only 1-2 years old.
 
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