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  • The Hermit of Archenland could appear AT THE VERY START, announcing to a still-living King Lune that he (the Hermit) has SEEN the time of confusion approaching.
    You also need to consider whether you want to commit yourself to a speculation of what Galma and Terebinthia were like; for whoever lived there would certainly be worried about the destabilizing effects of Narnia losing its leadership. Maybe some prince or lord from one of those places could appear onstage lamenting that he had been SURE he was getting CLOSE to persuading Queen Lucy to marry him.
    Say, my "Ask a Telmarine" Thread is getting quite long; almost 1,000 posts. Do you think that it would be prudent to lock the thread and have me create a new one?
    One suggestion: change "By day" to "All day," so as not to double the word "by" in a single line.
    Back when I used to have cable TV, I think I heard "Pines of Rome" played on Classic Arts Showcase. I look forward to what you will now write. Only, please PLEASE do not post EVERYTHING in one stroke; BUILD your audience!!!!
    My daughter is getting involved in American Heritage Girls (kind of a Christian Girl Scouts) so I want to get a tent that will sleep up to 3 when my husband and I join their retreats. What should I look for in a tent? Any recs for features to look for or other camping necessities to be sure and buy? I'm a total camping greenhorn...
    Is this too long? too wordy? for a story opening? "It was a clear, crisp day that morning in Autumn, when the trees seemed to be dressed in their finest, drapped with ruby, emerald and gold leaves like lords and ladies of a great king. The sun shone pleasantly down bathing everything in amber light as Edmund walked out on to the school yard, his lunch in hand."
    Well... I can only go by what the posts said...and they said they'd been posted yesterday:o:o (or so I thought.) Hope you don't mind an early one then?
    Seems yesterday was perhaps EveningStar's Birthday? Will you accept a belated birthday wish? I hope alls well.
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