Copperfox
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Remembering another pretty early composition
For this song, I experimented with an unusual rhythm: 7/4 time. (Four beats for "Don't pay attention to the--" and three beats for "--sky, boys.") It was in a minor key, sung from the viewpoint of the centurion who supervised the crucifixion of Jesus and the two thieves. Note that the majority of rhymes here are "feminine," meaning a rhyme based on two syllables instead of one, e.g. "AT you" and "HAVE to."
"DON'T LOOK UP"
Don't pay attention to the sky, boys; don't tell me that it's getting darker.
There's nothing I can do about it; rattle the dice in the cup.
It'll get lighter, don't doubt it; meanwhile, don't look up.
You've seen a lot of people die, boys; this time we're killing off a martyr.
There's nothing terrible about it; rattle the dice in the cup.
It'll get lighter, don't doubt it; meanwhile, don't look up.
What is He saying? Don't even listen!
I think He's praying: "Father, forgive them."
"Father, forgive them"--I'm sure He said it.
"Father, forgive them"--could He have meant it?
Don't pay attention to the sky, boys; don't tell me that it's getting darker.
There's nothing I can do about it; rattle the dice in the cup.
It'll get lighter, don't doubt it; meanwhile, don't look up.
You've seen a lot of people die, boys; this time we're killing off a martyr.
There's nothing terrible about it; rattle the dice in the cup.
It'll get lighter, don't doubt it; meanwhile, don't look up.
Since there is nothing we can do for Him,
Treat Him as nothing; look down, ignore Him.
Don't look up at Him; He might look at you.
Don't look up at Him--but, God, I have to! {PAUSE}
This really was the Son of God, boys; that's why we're hearing all the thunder!
It's too late now to release Him; look at Him, He doesn't breathe.
I only hope His Father heeds Him, and forgives our deed.
This really was the Son of God, boys; we've made a beauty of a blunder!
It's too late now to release Him; look at Him, He doesn't breathe.
I only hope His Father heeds Him, and forgives our deed.
God, forgive our deed!
(c) Joseph R. Ravitts
For this song, I experimented with an unusual rhythm: 7/4 time. (Four beats for "Don't pay attention to the--" and three beats for "--sky, boys.") It was in a minor key, sung from the viewpoint of the centurion who supervised the crucifixion of Jesus and the two thieves. Note that the majority of rhymes here are "feminine," meaning a rhyme based on two syllables instead of one, e.g. "AT you" and "HAVE to."
"DON'T LOOK UP"
Don't pay attention to the sky, boys; don't tell me that it's getting darker.
There's nothing I can do about it; rattle the dice in the cup.
It'll get lighter, don't doubt it; meanwhile, don't look up.
You've seen a lot of people die, boys; this time we're killing off a martyr.
There's nothing terrible about it; rattle the dice in the cup.
It'll get lighter, don't doubt it; meanwhile, don't look up.
What is He saying? Don't even listen!
I think He's praying: "Father, forgive them."
"Father, forgive them"--I'm sure He said it.
"Father, forgive them"--could He have meant it?
Don't pay attention to the sky, boys; don't tell me that it's getting darker.
There's nothing I can do about it; rattle the dice in the cup.
It'll get lighter, don't doubt it; meanwhile, don't look up.
You've seen a lot of people die, boys; this time we're killing off a martyr.
There's nothing terrible about it; rattle the dice in the cup.
It'll get lighter, don't doubt it; meanwhile, don't look up.
Since there is nothing we can do for Him,
Treat Him as nothing; look down, ignore Him.
Don't look up at Him; He might look at you.
Don't look up at Him--but, God, I have to! {PAUSE}
This really was the Son of God, boys; that's why we're hearing all the thunder!
It's too late now to release Him; look at Him, He doesn't breathe.
I only hope His Father heeds Him, and forgives our deed.
This really was the Son of God, boys; we've made a beauty of a blunder!
It's too late now to release Him; look at Him, He doesn't breathe.
I only hope His Father heeds Him, and forgives our deed.
God, forgive our deed!
(c) Joseph R. Ravitts