A New Challenge

*Loretta came bounding out of the castle with peter at her side* Jadis *kindly* I'm sooo glad to see you! And Queen Lucy I have not seen you in what feels like weeks. Aslan told me to go to Archenland and tell King Lune of the good fortune that befell Narnia that Jadis has turned good, then meet you all here. *smiles* NO ONE believed you turned good Jadis, as if you wouldn't stay true to your word and decide to murder us in are sleep HA *anger in her voice toward those who didn't believe her, these words made jadis feel edgy* Lucy what bothers you? You seem uncomfortable?
~Loretta

Yes Lu you do, *he looked up at Jadis not trusting her one bit, everyone felt that she was lying exept Loretta who's words brought her here* Lets go inside...*he glanced warily at Jadis without inviting her in, He led Lu inside the castle*
~Peter

Jadis, I'm sorry KIng Peter is being sooo rude, he doesn't believe you either. I told him you are by your word, you vowed to kill aslan, you did, you vowed to take over Narnia, you tried. Can't they just accept, you changed! You're on the good side, you would never betray us! *anger, started yelling* doesn't everyone see that you are good! That you would never hurt us agian *touching the scar on her face from the sword* You would never ever try to hurt us agian *trying not to give in to doubt, holding back tears* I prayed for you ever since I knew of you, I prayed that in some way someone could show you the light, because I thought... you weren't evil because it was your nature you were evil because of your experiences, and I wanted you to know that givin the chance, you could become one of us! Our friend, our partner... *crying very hard, stops talking and throws her arms around Jadis embracing her* I love you like a sister now *muffled* and I don't want you to leave, I want you to stay and be family with us forever *looks into jadis' eyes with her sweet, rich brown eyes*
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*Loretta came bounding out of the castle with peter at her side* Jadis *kindly* I'm sooo glad to see you! And Queen Lucy I have not seen you in what feels like weeks. Aslan told me to go to Archenland and tell King Lune of the good fortune that befell Narnia that Jadis has turned good, then meet you all here. *smiles* NO ONE believed you turned good Jadis, as if you wouldn't stay true to your word and decide to murder us in are sleep HA *anger in her voice toward those who didn't believe her, these words made jadis feel edgy* Lucy what bothers you? You seem uncomfortable?
~Loretta

Yes Lu you do, *he looked up at Jadis not trusting her one bit, everyone felt that she was lying exept Loretta who's words brought her here* Lets go inside...*he glanced warily at Jadis without inviting her in, He led Lu inside the castle*
~Peter

Jadis, I'm sorry KIng Peter is being sooo rude, he doesn't believe you either. I told him you are by your word, you vowed to kill aslan, you did, you vowed to take over Narnia, you tried. Can't they just accept, you changed! You're on the good side, you would never betray us! *anger, started yelling* doesn't everyone see that you are good! That you would never hurt us agian *touching the scar on her face from the sword* You would never ever try to hurt us agian *trying not to give in to doubt, holding back tears* I prayed for you ever since I knew of you, I prayed that in some way someone could show you the light, because I thought... you weren't evil because it was your nature you were evil because of your experiences, and I wanted you to know that givin the chance, you could become one of us! Our friend, our partner... *crying very hard, stops talking and throws her arms around Jadis embracing her* I love you like a sister now *muffled* and I don't want you to leave, I want you to stay and be family with us forever *looks into jadis' eyes with her sweet, rich brown eyes*
~Loretta
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*she got a lil edgy from Loretta's words knowing they could be true**she then seen how Peter was acting toward her she felt very bad and lowered her head in guilt**her eyes then widen in surprise when Loretta throwed her arms around her she didn't know how to react to love cause she never felt it before she didn't know what that emotion was or like but seeing Loretta hug her and say her words to her she begin to think this was love*
 
*leads Jadis into Cair Paravel* Lets go ask their majesty's where we should room. We could share a room! *smiles, dashes down the hall toward Lucy's room*
~Loretta

*pulls loretta aside, whispering* Why did you bring her here, she's evil! *anger and nervous* She hasn't become good, every one knows that except you!
~Peter

*pulls away* Am I the only one who believes that she is true! AM I?! *anger* Well, I don't care High King what you and the others believe! I DON"T! She is good, you all just don't seem to take her feelings into thought!
Now where can WE room!
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*leads Jadis into Cair Paravel* Lets go ask their majesty's where we should room. We could share a room! *smiles, dashes down the hall toward Lucy's room*
~Loretta

*pulls loretta aside, whispering* Why did you bring her here, she's evil! *anger and nervous* She hasn't become good, every one knows that except you!
~Peter

*pulls away* Am I the only one who believes that she is true! AM I?! *anger* Well, I don't care High King what you and the others believe! I DON"T! She is good, you all just don't seem to take her feelings into thought!
Now where can WE room!
~Loretta
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*she was lead by Loretta into Cair Paravel and she spoke*"maybe we can"*she then seen Peter pull Loretta to the side and heard his words she release her grip from Loretta's hand and ran away from them sadly**while she was running she ran into a group of Leopards and stop feeling the leopards bodies and the Leopards got their footing back and all growled at Jadis and spoke angerly*"what are you doing in here witch!!"*Jadis froze in fear from the big cats growls and words and spoke*"I'm so sorry I didn't see you down there"*the leopards stoped growling when they heard Jadis apolgize to them for bumping into them they stood there in shock at Jadis's words**one Leopard spoke*"your sorry for bumping into us?"*Jadis spoke*"yes"*she then turned away from them and started running again and end up outside the castle she triped on a rock and landed in the sand*
 
*Seeing Jadis run Loretta dashed after her* Jadis, don't leave, King Peter didn't mean it! He's just being rude. *turns to peter angrily, addressing him unpolitly* Peter go catch her and tell her you didn't mean it, GO *crying* We just almost ended the war without having to kill her! YOU hurt her feelings, now she might go back to the darkside!*smacks Peter* GO! GO get her and bring her back, and get down on your knees and apoilgize, did you say that when Edmond turned good, eh?! DID YOU?! You didn't! *slams the door in his face, runs after Jadis*
~Loretta

Loretta come back *hurt in his eyes from her words* You don't know what your getting into COME BACK! *runs after Loretta*
~Peter
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*Seeing Jadis run Loretta dashed after her* Jadis, don't leave, King Peter didn't mean it! He's just being rude. *turns to peter angrily, addressing him unpolitly* Peter go catch her and tell her you didn't mean it, GO *crying* We just almost ended the war without having to kill her! YOU hurt her feelings, now she might go back to the darkside!*smacks Peter* GO! GO get her and bring her back, and get down on your knees and apoilgize, did you say that when Edmond turned good, eh?! DID YOU?! You didn't! *slams the door in his face, runs after Jadis*
~Loretta

Loretta come back *hurt in his eyes from her words* You don't know what your getting into COME BACK! *runs after Loretta*
~Peter
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*she layed in the sand crying icy tears that melted as they hit the warm sand on the beach**she spoke to herself*"no matter how hard I try to make up I always get hurt maybe I should leave and stay in my ice castle and just cut myself off from everyone"*she got up from the sand she was still crying and started walking back toward her ice castle*
 
*Seeing Jadis walk toward the ice castle she runs toward her Peter chasing her* Jadis, Peter has something to say *glares at Peter*
~Loretta

*sighs* Jadis, I'm sorry for being so rude, I shouldn't have said or thought that, I didn't when Ed came home, I guess I just still have a grudge agianst you for hurting everyone. I'm sorry, will you please...forgive me?*lowering his eyes*
~Peter

He is eternally sorry, and everyone wants you to come back, it will take time to make everyone in Narnia not resent you, but Aslan wants everyone to show love to their enemey and friend. He didn't die just for Edmond to be forgivin he died for you to, and I'd do the same! We all want you to come back, we want you to be apart of our big family! *smiling* we want you to come home!
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*Seeing Jadis walk toward the ice castle she runs toward her Peter chasing her* Jadis, Peter has something to say *glares at Peter*
~Loretta

*sighs* Jadis, I'm sorry for being so rude, I shouldn't have said or thought that, I didn't when Ed came home, I guess I just still have a grudge agianst you for hurting everyone. I'm sorry, will you please...forgive me?*lowering his eyes*
~Peter

He is eternally sorry, and everyone wants you to come back, it will take time to make everyone in Narnia not resent you, but Aslan wants everyone to show love to their enemey and friend. He didn't die just for Edmond to be forgivin he died for you to, and I'd do the same! We all want you to come back, we want you to be apart of our big family! *smiling* we want you to come home!
~Loretta
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*she turned to Peter and Loretta and stoped walking and walked back toward Peter and Loretta and spoke to Peter*"really?I forgive you Peter and its understandable"*she then looked to Loretta and spoke*"how could Aslan die for me when I was the one that killed him?"
 
You killed Aslan who was dying for Edmond, but while dying for Edmond he was dying for everyone else who needed to be forgivin, like you, you were just apart of a wonderous plan to save everyone from sin! You were just in the middle of it, you killed him because he saved Edmond by love, and he saved me, you, Susan, Lucy, Peter, and tumnus. He was your helper to kill Lucy, but Aslan showed him what he was doing wrong just as he showed you *smiles* We all will forgive you for our pain in time, you just need to keep it close to heart, that we do love you, and no matter what, we will always love you *hugs her*
~Loretta

Yeah, like she said, I guess I need to forgive you as if you were Edmond. *looks at the ground* Uh... I'm sorry...*smiles shyly*
~Peter

Come on High King hug her!!!
~Loretta

Uh...
~Peter

Don't be silly, you hug Susan right, Jadis needs brotherly love to!*shoves peter playfully*
~Loretta

*hugs her quickly* Ok...
~Peter
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
You killed Aslan who was dying for Edmond, but while dying for Edmond he was dying for everyone else who needed to be forgivin, like you, you were just apart of a wonderous plan to save everyone from sin! You were just in the middle of it, you killed him because he saved Edmond by love, and he saved me, you, Susan, Lucy, Peter, and tumnus. He was your helper to kill Lucy, but Aslan showed him what he was doing wrong just as he showed you *smiles* We all will forgive you for our pain in time, you just need to keep it close to heart, that we do love you, and no matter what, we will always love you *hugs her*
~Loretta

Yeah, like she said, I guess I need to forgive you as if you were Edmond. *looks at the ground* Uh... I'm sorry...*smiles shyly*
~Peter

Come on High King hug her!!!
~Loretta

Uh...
~Peter


Don't be silly, you hug Susan right, Jadis needs brotherly love to!*shoves peter playfully*
~Loretta

*hugs her quickly* Ok...
~Peter
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*she listen to Loretta's words closly and toook them to heart**she huged Loretta back**she then looked to Peter and spoke*"its ok I forgive you"*she then stood and let Peter hug her she huged him back**she looked back at Loretta and spoke*"but I don't see how Aslan show me I was doing wrong"
 
Through me silly. You couldn't explain why you changed to Lucy, but while I was mocking you you suddenly changed, you took my words to heart. Words start wars, but they also heal hurts, bridge gaps, and do the impossible, say what you mean and you will have no problems, I said exactally what I meant on that battlefeild and I say exactally what I mean here. You had never heard anybody put your wrongs into words, when you heard it it made you think, is that what I act like just through words? Then when I insulted you by saying you were hiding, it was true, you saw though you didn't admit it. You were offended when I said you hid behind protection while I stood in harms way. He showed you your wrongs through my words, through my thoughts, which made you think. Aslan showed you the light through me, like he showed Edmond light through you, he showed Edmond the dark side, which made him want the light side, and I showed you the light side, which made you resent the dark side, make sense?*smiles*
~Loretta

*Peter looked strangly at Loretta, she said what he had needed to know why evil became good, what made Edmond change sides, and love his family. sigh* Loretta, your a lot smarter than you act! *laughing*
~Peter

And you are a lot more lost than you act *giggling* and Jadis you are a lot more...fun than you act!*smiles*
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
Through me silly. You couldn't explain why you changed to Lucy, but while I was mocking you you suddenly changed, you took my words to heart. Words start wars, but they also heal hurts, bridge gaps, and do the impossible, say what you mean and you will have no problems, I said exactally what I meant on that battlefeild and I say exactally what I mean here. You had never heard anybody put your wrongs into words, when you heard it it made you think, is that what I act like just through words? Then when I insulted you by saying you were hiding, it was true, you saw though you didn't admit it. You were offended when I said you hid behind protection while I stood in harms way. He showed you your wrongs through my words, through my thoughts, which made you think. Aslan showed you the light through me, like he showed Edmond light through you, he showed Edmond the dark side, which made him want the light side, and I showed you the light side, which made you resent the dark side, make sense?*smiles*
~Loretta

*Peter looked strangly at Loretta, she said what he had needed to know why evil became good, what made Edmond change sides, and love his family. sigh* Loretta, your a lot smarter than you act! *laughing*
~Peter

And you are a lot more lost than you act *giggling* and Jadis you are a lot more...fun than you act!*smiles*
~Loretta
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*she listen to Loretta's words and spoke*"yes it doses I'm begining to think when I met Edmund the first time when he followed Lucy into the door from the world of men when I was acting nice to him to get him to come to me I was showing him I had some kindness and love deep within me somewhere could that be true?you think I'm fun?"
 
~JadisTheWhiteWitch~ said:
*she listen to Loretta's words and spoke*"yes it doses I'm begining to think when I met Edmund the first time when he followed Lucy into the door from the world of men when I was acting nice to him to get him to come to me I was showing him I had some kindness and love deep within me somewhere could that be true?you think I'm fun?"
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Suuuure...*laughing* of course I do, but you need to relax, no one will bite you except King Edmond *lauging*
~Loretta

Thats true *laughing too*
~Peter
 
Come on lets go back so no one worries about us. Last one in is...oh i don't know, a piece of turkish delight *laughing* being eaten (corny i know) *dashes off with Peter on her tail (literrally, heheheh)
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
Come on lets go back so no one worries about us. Last one in is...oh i don't know, a piece of turkish delight *laughing* being eaten (corny i know) *dashes off with Peter on her tail (literrally, heheheh)
~Loretta
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*she smiled slightly and followed Loretta and Peter*
 
*Peter entered Cair Paravel and went to find Lucy*

Jadis, I want to show you something. Follow me! *She led her through the stream and off toward Beavers Dam, past Lantern Waste and up to Archenland, she led her to the top of the hills that seperated Archenland and Narnia, there was a clearing and Loretta turned around* Look! *there you could see all of Narnia, Cair Paravel, Beaver's Dam, Lantern Waste, The Ice Castle, the stone table, everything* This is my favorite place! I grew up in that tree *she pointed to the tree behind her* Only Lucy and Susan and I have ever been here, I watched the battle from here, that's when I knew I wanted to fight for Aslan and for Narnia. This is my most favorite place! My most secret too. I've only shown three people, and a few of my best friends, you, Lucy, Susan, Sammy (the skunk), Mabel (the raccoon) and Marshall (the possum). We used to pretend we were warriors, I was young when the Narnia War began, and I grew up during the Golden Years. We always pretended we were the deffenders of Narnia, now look at me, I am! I just used my heart, my head, and my words, and hardly anyone was lost! *smiles, stays silent admireing the sunset* You know what, I miss my mom...* sniffles*
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*Peter entered Cair Paravel and went to find Lucy*

Jadis, I want to show you something. Follow me! *She led her through the stream and off toward Beavers Dam, past Lantern Waste and up to Archenland, she led her to the top of the hills that seperated Archenland and Narnia, there was a clearing and Loretta turned around* Look! *there you could see all of Narnia, Cair Paravel, Beaver's Dam, Lantern Waste, The Ice Castle, the stone table, everything* This is my favorite place! I grew up in that tree *she pointed to the tree behind her* Only Lucy and Susan and I have ever been here, I watched the battle from here, that's when I knew I wanted to fight for Aslan and for Narnia. This is my most favorite place! My most secret too. I've only shown three people, and a few of my best friends, you, Lucy, Susan, Sammy (the skunk), Mabel (the raccoon) and Marshall (the possum). We used to pretend we were warriors, I was young when the Narnia War began, and I grew up during the Golden Years. We always pretended we were the deffenders of Narnia, now look at me, I am! I just used my heart, my head, and my words, and hardly anyone was lost! *smiles, stays silent admireing the sunset* You know what, I miss my mom...* sniffles*
~Loretta
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*she followed Loretta and she stoped when she seen where she had taken her and her eyes widen she couldn't she seen all of Narnia from there she looked toward where her ice castle stood and guit got a hold of her she went down on the ground sadly and spoke*"I can't believe I ruined something this beautiful with my magic all because I wanted it for myself and casted it into a 100 year winter"*she lowered her head sadly and gulitly**she then listen to Loretta's words and when she heard her say mother she felt even sadder cause on Charn she put her own mother to death with so many others*
 
*swallowing* it doesn't matter though, she's dead... *sigh* You'e changed though, you wouldn't kill anyone who wasn't threatining your life agian would you? * she started remembering the winter that had starved her mother after she was born, going hungry for days on end, unable to find food, she remembered but she had forgivin' so she didn't metion it to Jadis, she also didn't metion all her sibling's except her eldest brother Leo had died during that winter too.*
~Loretta
 
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