A New Challenge

(( i missed you to! How was it? UG, I have to go after this post...will you be on really late tonight?))

((they are in the middle of a mysterious wood...after Susan was rescued from the evil aunt Amythest of Jadis. Right now Jadis and Ed are in a fight...but skip that because you can play ed while Skandar is gone...and Loretta is trying to break it up. So this is the one where Ed and Loretta are in love!))

Lets just get out of the woods...
~Loretta

*dark voice* You won't do that until I have his blood! *arm grabs Edmond*

NO! *she bites hand** a young man...Gemini steps out (Jadis' bro)* I need his blood to save my wife. and no one shall stop me *strikes Loretta**Loretta leaps on to him and digs her teeth into his arm once more but he strikes her sending her to the ground*
 
I am Gemini...Jadis' brother *his hand still around Ed's neck* she injured my wife with an unhealing wound...so i am going to take your blood. *he pulled out a knife and was going to slit Ed's throat*
~gemini

*loretta lept at gemine knocking the knife out of the way, but in return she was stabbed in the leg**she fell to the ground and winced in pain*
~loretta

You can't take him! *peter charged at Gemini with his sword only to have Gemini grab Lucy*
~Peter

Come any closer or your sister dies. *he hissed**his hand was as big as Lucy's neck**he was choking her*
~Gemini

*loretta then bounded around (though it hurt her) and lept upon his neck digging her teeth into his flesh*
~loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
(( i missed you to! How was it? UG, I have to go after this post...will you be on really late tonight?))

((they are in the middle of a mysterious wood...after Susan was rescued from the evil aunt Amythest of Jadis. Right now Jadis and Ed are in a fight...but skip that because you can play ed while Skandar is gone...and Loretta is trying to break it up. So this is the one where Ed and Loretta are in love!))

Lets just get out of the woods...
~Loretta

*dark voice* You won't do that until I have his blood! *arm grabs Edmond*

NO! *she bites hand** a young man...Gemini steps out (Jadis' bro)* I need his blood to save my wife. and no one shall stop me *strikes Loretta**Loretta leaps on to him and digs her teeth into his arm once more but he strikes her sending her to the ground*
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((it was amazing!!! a lot of things happen at camp that were just todally amazing! it was a Christain camp and most of us got a lot closer to God then we've ever been :) ))
((thanks so much for the info...oh and umm...is appleworld pring Ed now?))

Susan screamed, witnessing the horrible sight before her she couldn't believe what she was seeing...her brother and his future wife were getting attacked bye the White Witches brother and she felt as if she was powerless...she turned quickly to her oldest brother and the ones who were following him, shere panic danceing within her eyes, "Peter! Aslan! Jadis! everyone! Ed and Loretta and in getting attacked! we have to help them!!!" she cried, trying desperately to help her younger brother and his girlfriend.
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
I am Gemini...Jadis' brother *his hand still around Ed's neck* she injured my wife with an unhealing wound...so i am going to take your blood. *he pulled out a knife and was going to slit Ed's throat*
~gemini

*loretta lept at gemine knocking the knife out of the way, but in return she was stabbed in the leg**she fell to the ground and winced in pain*
~loretta

You can't take him! *peter charged at Gemini with his sword only to have Gemini grab Lucy*
~Peter

Come any closer or your sister dies. *he hissed**his hand was as big as Lucy's neck**he was choking her*
~Gemini

*loretta then bounded around (though it hurt her) and lept upon his neck digging her teeth into his flesh*
~loretta
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Susan screamed in horror watching the scene before her, "LUCY!!!"
tears were freely running down Lucy's cheeks as she struggled helplessly to riggle away from the creatures cruel grip around her neck.
 
*loretta grasped his neck in her tiny jaws**gemini dropped Lucy and Edmond to get her**as they scrambled to their feet Gemini had gotten Loretta and thrown her to the ground leaving her unconsious**then he picked her up agian and threw her to the ground as if she were a ball**she slowly struggled to her feet* Just leave my family alone! *she shouted* Just leave them alone**then she dove once more at Gemini biting his leg straight to the bone**he screamed in pain as he shook her off**she hit a tree as Gemini ran away*

((appleworld is really Skandar just diff. username...so yeah he's ed...but he's not logged on and on here if someone isn't logged on you can play their char. til they get back. I get to go to a Wyldlife camp this summer...I can't wait))
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*loretta grasped his neck in her tiny jaws**gemini dropped Lucy and Edmond to get her**as they scrambled to their feet Gemini had gotten Loretta and thrown her to the ground leaving her unconsious**then he picked her up agian and threw her to the ground as if she were a ball**she slowly struggled to her feet* Just leave my family alone! *she shouted* Just leave them alone**then she dove once more at Gemini biting his leg straight to the bone**he screamed in pain as he shook her off**she hit a tree as Gemini ran away*

((appleworld is really Skandar just diff. username...so yeah he's ed...but he's not logged on and on here if someone isn't logged on you can play their char. til they get back. I get to go to a Wyldlife camp this summer...I can't wait))
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everything happend so fast, before Edmund and Lucy had time to contemtplate what had just happend Edmund was scrambleing to his feet after he had just seen Loretta hit a tree and a glimsp of the monsterouse creature Gemini running away screaming in pain our of the corner of his eye. "LORETTA!" he cried, ignoring his own pain and running to the tree Loretta had hit, "Loretta are you alright!?" he gently picked her up his arms, holding her close to his chest.
"P-P-Peter!" Lucy gasped trying to find her breath from nearly being choked to death by Jadis's brother.

((oh ok thanks for explaining! ^.^ I think thats todally awesome you get to go to wildlife camp this summer!!! :D I hope you have a wonderful time there whatever it is you guys will be doing! ))
 
*she saw nothing, felt nothing**she did hear Ed's voice**inside she said 'I promised I promised I promised'**her mouth moved to the words...'I promise I promise I promise' **she felt something inside herself**she opened her eyes**she struggled out of ed's arms* are you ok? *she looked at Edmond and Lucy* are you two ok? *she tried to stand but failed**her head hurt horribly as did the rest of her body**she whispered* hang on...i promised...i promised *she looked at Ed* I'll be fine...i promised you I would not leave...i promised *she said no more, but her heart kept on beating for she forced herself to live because she promised*
~Loretta

Ed, Lucy are you OK? *he ran to them and hugged them* Oh, are you ok?
~Peter
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*she saw nothing, felt nothing**she did hear Ed's voice**inside she said 'I promised I promised I promised'**her mouth moved to the words...'I promise I promise I promise' **she felt something inside herself**she opened her eyes**she struggled out of ed's arms* are you ok? *she looked at Edmond and Lucy* are you two ok? *she tried to stand but failed**her head hurt horribly as did the rest of her body**she whispered* hang on...i promised...i promised *she looked at Ed* I'll be fine...i promised you I would not leave...i promised *she said no more, but her heart kept on beating for she forced herself to live because she promised*
~Loretta

Ed, Lucy are you OK? *he ran to them and hugged them* Oh, are you ok?
~Peter
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Edmund suddenly maoned in pain for he could feel his enjuries burning in pain, falling to his knees he clutched his waist forceing himself to look up at Loretta, "I-I'll be fine...its you I'm worried about Lori..." he said in a strained vioce for pain seemed to be throbbing through his whole body though he forced himself to press on for Loretta....for they both had promised eachother they would never leave eachother.
Lucy looked up at Loretta with tears of pain in her eyes, she tried to speak but found she couldn't as she felt a sharp pain throbbing through her neck, she took once glance at Peter and Susan before falling to the ground and before she new everything wen't black.
Susan gasped in horror, her heart tore three diffrent ways she wanted to be there for each and every one of her family members but how could she when they all needed her and Peter at the same time. she looked over and her heart seemed to stop the moment she caught a glance of her younger sister falling to the ground, uncontious, "LUCY!!!" she screamed feeling her heart tear into a million pieaces, "LUCY!!!" she continued to scream as she grabed Peters arm and ran to her sisters side as fast as possible, "Lucy...please hang on.." she whispered her grave tears falling onto her younger sisters buetiful silky brown hair.
 
*he bounded over to Edmond* Ed are you alright? speak to me! *he held his brother* Su get the cordial for them!
~peter

*loretta struggled to her feet* Wait, don't waste the cordial...I know some remedys! *she struggled through the forest and brought back herbs and mixed them together* Give this to them. It will stop the pain and bring them back to contiousness. *she sighed* we need to wrap the wounds...Lucy just needs her neck to recover from the pain...Edmond was stabbed in the stomach...we'll need some bandages.
~Loretta

*he ripped his shirt and wrapped it around Ed's stomach**he gave the remedys to both Ed and Lu* R U okay? Ed, Lu speak to Me!
~peter

*loretta propped herself agianst a tree**she had used all her strength to gather the plants**she sat off a ways and fell into a deep unconcious sleep*
~loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*he bounded over to Edmond* Ed are you alright? speak to me! *he held his brother* Su get the cordial for them!
~peter

*loretta struggled to her feet* Wait, don't waste the cordial...I know some remedys! *she struggled through the forest and brought back herbs and mixed them together* Give this to them. It will stop the pain and bring them back to contiousness. *she sighed* we need to wrap the wounds...Lucy just needs her neck to recover from the pain...Edmond was stabbed in the stomach...we'll need some bandages.
~Loretta

*he ripped his shirt and wrapped it around Ed's stomach**he gave the remedys to both Ed and Lu* R U okay? Ed, Lu speak to Me!
~peter

*loretta propped herself agianst a tree**she had used all her strength to gather the plants**she sat off a ways and fell into a deep unconcious sleep*
~loretta
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Susan raced over to her sibleing anxtiously awaiting Lucy and Edmunds responce. Lucy caughed for a bit before she looked up at her older sibleings, "I-I thank so" she said her vioce sounding qiut hoarse from the bight she had gotten on the neck.
Edmund gasped for a moment before also bringing his gaze to meet Peter and Susan's, "w-wheres Loretta!?" he said, having some diffuculty standing to his feet.
 
*he motioned to the tree where she lay* she's resting...i think. She was strong enough to help with the remedy. *worry etched into his voice* don't get up ed your wounded!
~peter

*she lay feeling nothing, seeing nothing, but hearing strange buzzing noises**she kept thinking 'i promised i promised i promised'
~loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*he motioned to the tree where she lay* she's resting...i think. She was strong enough to help with the remedy. *worry etched into his voice* don't get up ed your wounded!
~peter

*she lay feeling nothing, seeing nothing, but hearing strange buzzing noises**she kept thinking 'i promised i promised i promised'
~loretta
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"Ed lay back down this instent!" cried Susan sounding for a moment as if she were a worried mother, Edmund tried ignoring his sibleings protest but when he tried standing he felt a sharp pain in his stomach which caused him to lay back down again on the soft grass beneath. "but Loretta! she doesn't look like she just resting! theres something terrbly wrong with her I can feel it!" the young enjured King protested, gently propping his head up agasit a soft cloth which Susan had maid into a small pillow.
"look Ed I'll go check on Lori you and Lu stay here with Peter your both going to need your rest becuase your both enjured" with that Susan got up and wuickly walked over to where Loretta was propped up agaist the tree...approaching the young sqiurrel Susan could tell that Edmund was right...something was terribly wrong with her for as soon as Susan gently sat down beside her it was clear for her to see that Loretta looked as if she was barely hanging onto like.."Loretta?" Susan said softly, gently taking Loretta into her arms, "Loretta please hang on...my brother needs you" she took a glance towards Edmund and a single tear managed to make its way off her cheek and onto Lorettas forehead.
 
*she felt the tear, the only thing she felt**she whispered* tell him i'm fine...i'll be fine, every last beat of my heart is for the promise I made. Tell him I'm fine and he needen't worry. *her voice droaned out at the end and she lay back**she breathed in raspy breaths and her heart still beat, but as she said only for him*
~loretta

Is she okay?
~peter
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*she felt the tear, the only thing she felt**she whispered* tell him i'm fine...i'll be fine, every last beat of my heart is for the promise I made. Tell him I'm fine and he needen't worry. *her voice droaned out at the end and she lay back**she breathed in raspy breaths and her heart still beat, but as she said only for him*
~loretta

Is she okay?
~peter
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"but Loretta you don't sound fine....are you were we needn't use the cordinal?" Susan asked, tears now slowly beginning to make there way down her white cheeks, she looked over in Peters direction, "no Peter....shes not"
 
*he sighed* well don't tell Ed. should we use the cordial...looking at her condition I don't think the cordial will even heal her all up! *he gave her some of the herbs*
~peter

*she woke but could not move* Susan, could you move me closer to YOUR family please. *she sighed* just so I can tell Ed i'm ok.
~Loretta
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
*he sighed* well don't tell Ed. should we use the cordial...looking at her condition I don't think the cordial will even heal her all up! *he gave her some of the herbs*
~peter

*she woke but could not move* Susan, could you move me closer to YOUR family please. *she sighed* just so I can tell Ed i'm ok.
~Loretta
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Susan took the erbs and began placeing them on Lorettas wounds but she hardly had any faith that they were doing her much if any good by the looks of her condition, "but I'm not sure if the cordinal would heal her completely or not...but it might atleast give her enough strange to hold onto life long enough for her to eventually get healed"
with that, with Loretta gently in her arms Susan got up and began walking over to her sibleings, "they're your family too Lori and you know that.." she said qiutly, "Lori...are you sure you want to tell Ed that your ok? becuase the logical truth is your nowhere near alright!"
 
I...tell him the truth...but don't let him worry...by tomorrow we will be able to get out of here...I'll be well enough. *she struggled to sit up as they gave her a drop**then she could feel the pain* that's much better! *it had healed her headache and she could move, but her leg was still broken*
~loretta

Ed, you ok?
~peter
 
slpnarniaqueen said:
I...tell him the truth...but don't let him worry...by tomorrow we will be able to get out of here...I'll be well enough. *she struggled to sit up as they gave her a drop**then she could feel the pain* that's much better! *it had healed her headache and she could move, but her leg was still broken*
~loretta

Ed, you ok?
~peter
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"alright" Susan said giving a gentle smile while she watched Lorettas pain begin to degreese, she looked toward Peter in conern for she noticed when he asked if Edmund was alright there was no ansher..."Ed....are you alright?" she asked, but one glance at her younger brother told her otherwise for Edmund was laying on the ground, his breathing seeming to become heavy eneough to wear he couldn't speak.
 
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