Another, (yes, another!) fan-fic!!! except this one has a catch...

Georgie the Valient said:
...I think I better not spam or else....lets put it this way...If I spam, I'll be chased around the place by quite a few people...
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:rolleyes: That's propaganda spread by the Nazi political party back in the 1300s. Don't pay any attention to it.
SusanTheGentleHornblower said:
Since I've got midterms coming up I won't be posting any this week.
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Good luck with midterms, Nicki! And get yourself a unicycle! :p
 
Hi Nicki *waves* it's me, Michael. I changed my username from Barbarian_from_the_North (see? too long).
Sorry to spam your thread. I'm not like some people *looks up the thread*
 
BarbarianKing said:
Hi Nicki *waves* it's me, Michael. I changed my username from Barbarian_from_the_North (see? too long).
Sorry to spam your thread. I'm not like some people *looks up the thread*
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*Glares down at Michael* Bru, Georgie is a nice sheila--she was just curious and didn't think of her posts as spamming. :p
 
lol, hi Michael!!! *waves back* I figured that was you. :p Midterms will be over by Thursday, so I hope to have a good bit more after that! Levi, you need to learn not to talk so much. :rolleyes:

Just on a side note, I really appreciate you all supporting and giving me feed-back on my story! I hope that y'all've enjoyed it so far. :)
 
SusanTheGentleHornblower said:
lol, hi Michael!!! *waves back* I figured that was you. Midterms will be over by Thursday, so I hope to have a good bit more after that! Levi, you need to learn not to talk so much.

Just on a side note, I really appreciate you all supporting and giving me feed-back on my story! I hope that y'all've enjoyed it so far. :)
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Course we have :) Its great! :D

*ignores the REAL spammer...*
 
A little more...



The last room that they came to was her favorite. There were, again, many windows, except these were long, thin, spindly windows. There was a short platform at the back, and the on it was a piano. This piano would have been strange looking to us, but not to a Narnian. It was made out of oak, and there were carvings all along it, and on the lid was a circle with a giant face of a lion inside of it. She gasped as she drew closer. It was covered in pure gold. The white keys were made of ivory, and the black keys were made of gold as well. She reached out her hand, but then drew back. She didn’t dare to touch something so beautiful. She turned when she heard Alia’s voice.

“You can play on it if you want.”

“Are you sure?”

Alia nodded, “Yes, I’ve fooled around before. Lots of us have.” Here she laughed. “Most of us are no good. We don’t play at all. Do you play?”

Katriana turned back towards the piano so that Alia could no longer see her face. Dare she say anything? Was it safe yet? She hesitated for what must have been forever, then managed,

“Yes.”

“You should try the piano then! It’s beautiful!"

Katriana swallowed. She allowed her fingers to brush against the cool keys. Her heartbeat quickened. Everything inside of her screamed for her to sit and play her heart out, but her fear kept her standing there.


Listening: Neverland, Minor Piano Variation, from the movie Finding Neverland, by Jan A. P. Kaczmarek.
 
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“Katriana?”

She bit her lip. She sat down on the bench, but it was against her better judgment. She began to sweat. She felt a bead of it slip down her upper lip. She licked it away as her hands hovered, quivering, above the keys. The silence in the room pounded silently in her ears. Without even thinking her fingers made contact with the keys, and she began playing a song. If you had been there you would have sworn an angel was playing.

The song went on for several minutes, but once it ended you would have wished it to go on forever. After she was done, she sat there for a moment, trembling. Silence filled the room again. She wished Alia would say something. She heard a noise, and turned around. What she saw made her jump up so quickly that she almost knocked over the bench. King Peter was there.


Listening: Same, Neverland. and then silence. :D
 
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Georgie the Valient said:
*ignores the REAL spammer...*
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Oh, geeze. Why do I have to be the scapegoat around here? :p
SusanTheGentleHornblower said:
WOOPEE!!!!!!!!!!! Done with finals!!!

I'll get working on the story, y'all!!! *salutes and goes back to writing*
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Awesomeness! Did you do well on them?

Umm, just a little criticism here.
SusanTheGentleHornblower said:
It was made out of oak, and there were carvings all along it,
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I would change "all along it" to something else. Maybe "spanning the width", or something to that effect. The former just sounds out of place, if you catch my drift. ;)
SusanTheGentleHornblower said:
Blah blah blah blah blah . . blue bleh blah . . . King Peter was there.
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Bout time we get to the point! :D
Thanks for the new edition! ^_^
 
Silvanus said:
Oh, geeze. Why do I have to be the scapegoat around here?

Awesomeness! Did you do well on them?

Umm, just a little criticism here.


I would change "all along it" to something else. Maybe "spanning the width", or something to that effect. The former just sounds out of place, if you catch my drift.

Bout time we get to the point!
Thanks for the new edition! ^_^
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lol!! cause you make the BEST scapegoat. :D Yep!!! I did super, but my hand hurt from writing for an hour and a half straight. :rolleyes: and I was getting to a point with the whole piano thing BEFORE King Peter showed up.
Hm, thanks for that suggestion! I'll consider it. ;)
BarbarianKing said:
LOL, Silvanus is everything... literary critic, cheerleader, spammer.... ;)
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HAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed so hard when I saw this. ^^^ Good work, Michael! ^_^
 
Silvanus said:
Oh, geeze. Why do I have to be the scapegoat around here? :p

Awesomeness! Did you do well on them?

Umm, just a little criticism here.


I would change "all along it" to something else. Maybe "spanning the width", or something to that effect. The former just sounds out of place, if you catch my drift. ;)

Bout time we get to the point! :D
Thanks for the new edition! ^_^
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*quotes SusanTheGentleHornblower* u're the scapegoat coz....*looks up the defination of scapegoat* SEE! IT SAYS SILVANUS :D (j/k)
 
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