Clearshot RPG

SimonW said:
As she was waiting, Maddy thought she heard a creaking noise.
She glanced at the dummies in the window, but just shivered and looked away.
'Impossible,' she thought.
Suddenly, Maddy heard the handle of the door turn and the door slowly creaked open.
"Enter!" Maddy heard a voice shout out from inside, it was a woman's voice that sounded commanding yet beautiful.
(Well, will Maddy enter?)
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Maddy looked at the dummies and timidly entered. "Hello?" she called quietly.
 
SaffronRose said:
Maddy looked at the dummies and timidly entered. "Hello?" she called quietly.
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"Don't be shy, girl," stated the voice again.
This time, when Maddy glanced to where the voice was, Maddy was able to see whom the voice belonged to.
A rather very thin and pouty-looking 30-year-old woman was standing by a mirror.
She held an elongated cigarette holder in her upturned left hand, a lit cigarette burning on the end.
She had paleish skin, but her skin tone was well applied with a slight bleamish of tan.
Her shiny auburn hair was done up into a business-like bun.
She wore blood red lipstick and slight eyeshadow. An idyllic face, amost to a point, determined chin, her black and purple outfit looked skin tight, despite a draped short cape that was done up onto her leotard-like top.
She was tall, even despite of the high heeled expensive shoes she wore.
"What is it you want, darling?" the woman asked Maddy, giving her the "once over" look with her hazel eyes.

(What now?)
 
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Maddy gripped the box in her hands. "I found this box in my closet and it had your card in it.. I was wondering if you could tell me about the dress.." she said, opening the box for the woman to see.
 
SaffronRose said:
Maddy gripped the box in her hands. "I found this box in my closet and it had your card in it.. I was wondering if you could tell me about the dress.." she said, opening the box for the woman to see.
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The woman took a breath off the end of her cigarette holder and blew out the smoke.
"That...." stated the woman with uninterest "is not one of ours."
The woman dipped her cigarette ash and flicked it into the box, the ash leaving a slight stain upon the front of the dress.
"If it were, I would know nothing," stated the woman, with mild care.
She turned to leave.

(Stop her, Maddy! lol)
 
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SimonW said:
The woman took a breath off the end of her cigarette holder and blew out the smoke.
"That...." stated the woman with uninterest "is not one of ours."
The woman dipped her cigarette ash and flicked it into the box, the ash leaving a slight stain upon the front of the dress.
"If it were, I would know nothing," stated the woman, with mild care.
She turned to leave.

(Stop her, Maddy! lol)
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(lol, okay!)

"Wait! do you know where I could find that out?"
 
SaffronRose said:
(lol, okay!)

"Wait! do you know where I could find that out?"
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"NO!" screamed the woman and turned to face Maddy.
Maddy stared in shock, the woman had become faceless! She was a mannequin!
"Leave, leave before it is too late," hissed the woman/mannequin. "Whatever you do, don't look."
Maddy left the store, screaming, still holding the dress in the box in her hands.
She did not notice the woman/mannequin was now completely still, the cigarette still burning in the holder.
Maddy hardly cared as she ran into the spiderwebs outside, she continued screaming until she ran home and slammed her door shut!
Maddy collapsed upon her bed, still very frightened.
The day passed until it was evening.
"Honey, I am worried about you," stated her mother as they had dinner. " You have hardly had anything to eat."
"I'm fine, mum," replied Maddy, stirring her food on the plate.
Maddy's mum knew not to pressure her daughter and they resumed eating silently.
Afterwards, in her pajamas and in her room, Maddy was wondering about what the mannequin/woman had said.
"Don't look!"
Maddy wondered if she meant the dress.
Sighing, Maddy went to sleep, still excited about her date with Billy tomorrow.
(State what Maddy will do tomorrow to ensure she goes on the date....Stop at 7:00 pm, that is when Billy will come and I will write the aftermath.)
 
When Maddy woke up the next morning, she was still unsure what to do. She put the box on her bed (still closed) and searched through her closet agan. She knew it was probably silly to do, considering she had looked a few days ago. She didn't find another dress and she didn't have money to buy another. She did have shoes that would match the dress. And she would look great in it... And this was supposed to be a ball and she wanted to look her best. She thought it over and resolutely opened the box. There was the small stain from the cigarette ashes, but, it was in a corner, easily hidden. It seemed that...lady.. was overreacting. She pulled it out of the box and set it on the bed. It was slightly wrinkled, but nothing too bad.
At three o'clock, she began to get ready, showering, then putting her hair back into a small bun. Unfortunately, there was nothing she could do about her glasses, because she needed them badly.
At six thirty, she went downstairs, dressed and ready for Billy. She kissed her mother goodbye and waited for him to arrive.

(I think I already know what's gonna happen... I have to start thinking up a new char? don't i?)
 
SaffronRose said:
When Maddy woke up the next morning, she was still unsure what to do. She put the box on her bed (still closed) and searched through her closet agan. She knew it was probably silly to do, considering she had looked a few days ago. She didn't find another dress and she didn't have money to buy another. She did have shoes that would match the dress. And she would look great in it... And this was supposed to be a ball and she wanted to look her best. She thought it over and resolutely opened the box. There was the small stain from the cigarette ashes, but, it was in a corner, easily hidden. It seemed that...lady.. was overreacting. She pulled it out of the box and set it on the bed. It was slightly wrinkled, but nothing too bad.
At three o'clock, she began to get ready, showering, then putting her hair back into a small bun. Unfortunately, there was nothing she could do about her glasses, because she needed them badly.
At six thirty, she went downstairs, dressed and ready for Billy. She kissed her mother goodbye and waited for him to arrive.

(I think I already know what's gonna happen... I have to start thinking up a new char? don't i?)
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(lol, never assume...It may be your downfall. But, yes, new character.)

Billy soon arrived within his car and he walked up and knocked on the door.
Maddy answered it and she gaped in wonder at Billy! She never thought he would look greater then he already did!
But, apparently, it was so. He was wearing a tux, it was very nice because Billy was in it.
Billy and Maddy waved goodbye to Maddy's mum as they left in Billy's car.
Maddy smiled. Everything was so perfect.
They reached the school and Billy helped Maddy out.
He could not stop staring at her, as if he was mesmerized at how beautiful she was in the dress, which, let's face it, Maddy knew she was.
"Um, what is that stain?" asked Billy as Maddy got out of the car.
"Oh, it's nothing," stated Maddy. "Just some old ash."
"Okay. Shall we?"
"We shall," smiled Maddy and they entered the school.
Maddy and Billy passed by a mirror and Maddy glanced at herself in it, she could not help it, she really looked beautiful, despite her height.
Suddenly, the mirror cracked and Maddy screamed.
As she stopped screaming, she stared at Billy. He was puzzled, looking around as if dazed.
"Billy!" she screamed, but Billy did not seem to hear her. "Billy, I'm here! Billy!"
Billy began walking away to the dance.
"No, wait! Billy! Billy!"
But, Billy could not hear Maddy or see her. All he saw was a slightly cracked reflection of himself in the mirror.....

The End.
 
SaffronRose said:
*sigh* as always... I told you i stink at the choose your own ending books!:D
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lol, at least you survived to actually go out....The original ending is the same except you disappear into the mirror in your room. It depends what you do near the end, I guess. lol.
 
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SimonW said:
lol, at least you survived to actually go out....The original ending is the same except you disappear into the mirror in your room. It depends what you do near the end, I guess. lol.
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lol.. that's nice to know...
ugh... I lasted three pages.. not my best... but, not my worst... after all, i think I had a char in Veritistix that lasted about 5 posts... she was just stupid...:D
 
Character Name:Marcus Talbot
Character Age:17
Short Bio:Marcus is an only child, so he knows no privacy. He has no problem talking, at times he has problems stopping. Doesn't show much emotion. A tad conceited.
Personality: conceited, like i said, but hides it well. is cocky and believes he can do anything.
Looks: short curly brown hair, green eyes, medium height, slightly muscled, nice smile
Fears:heights
Item: walkman:D
 
SaffronRose said:
Character Name:Marcus Talbot
Character Age:17
Short Bio:Marcus is an only child, so he knows no privacy. He has no problem talking, at times he has problems stopping. Doesn't show much emotion. A tad conceited.
Personality: conceited, like i said, but hides it well. is cocky and believes he can do anything.
Looks: short curly brown hair, green eyes, medium height, slightly muscled, nice smile
Fears:heights
Item: walkman:D
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OOC: Is that...me? lol.

Story: Dark Creepers

Marcus Talbot was listening to his walkman in his room.
He enjoyed just laying around on his bed, listening to music.
Suddenly, he felt his bed start to shake, not just shake, it was more of a thump.
Marcus turned off hi walkman.
"Huh?" he exclaimed, his bed was still.
He bounced on it slightly, it remained still after he bounced on the mattress.
"Weird," he stated and turned his music back on, thinking nothing more of the strange occurance.
The next day, Sunday, Marcus's dad asked Marcus to go to the store down the street.
(Shall Marcus do as his Dad instructs or just laze in his room?)
 
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