Honor and Glory

By the way, if you've read the new chapters of Epic in Everdant and Eternal Darkness, what do you think of them?

Oh, and also, what about your map?
Yar, I've been so busy doing research for classes that I haven't been able to read much of Epic in Everdant lately, just a half a post here or there. Hopefully soon I can catch up a bit.

I don't have a scanner so I think I'm just going to make a rough map in paint on Microsoft so there's one attached to the story.
 
Ooh. OK.

I still have the ones in my notebook, and also, I've been changing and improving them, you know, reviewing the whole book, the descriptions of the landscapes... they don't have to contradict the map and viceversa.

Gosh, such a hard work!

And, for how many years have you been working on all these stories of yours?

Though I've actually finished Epic in Everdant (I started 6 years ago), I'm still rewriting some parts (with help from Copperfox and suggestion of Tim=supermeulen at Tim's Book Club). And also, translating it into Spanish.

The next year's end I will have 7 seven years in the making of this book. Even so, I've had some part-time to continue the next stories and prequels... with tales, poems, and of course, the mythology for almost every race and culture of Everdant.
 
And, for how many years have you been working on all these stories of yours?

Well the first idea came to my mind about six almost seven years ago next month, when the first LOTR movie came to theaters. I have been a fan of Tolkien for a long time and have been inspired to write because of him, but when it came to seeing Middle-Earth in theaters did I decide to go into fantasy (up until then I had, and to some decree still am, been working on a vampire series, that follows a vampire from her origins in during the Roman Empire to present day).

The first draft of Honor and Glory was just a silly little fantasy story I threw together in about three months time. It used a Hobbit-like race of which the hero was from and in place of the deity Kitanna was the Angel Courage in human form. It was just a fun little trip into fantasy with Otanna and Mutar and the Realm (all of which that come out in Honor and Glory). But I laid that story aside and began planning for Death Dealer.

As I said earlier on the thread it wasn't until I met Kitanna a few years ago that Honor and Glory reemerged with the use of her names and references to the Sun Kingdom. And so Courage became Kitanna (though Courage appears in later chapters here) and moved into the background as a sort of guiding light instead of a main character. And I've been working for about three years on the version of Honor and Glory that is now before you.
 
You know what... as someone told me here:

Great minds think alike.

It was the same inspiration for me... after seeing LOTR: Fellowship of the Ring.

But, not only I became a Tolkiendili since that day... I was becoming a Glaerendil (a sindarin word I used for Epic Lover or Friend of the Epic). Since then, I rapidly remember the epics I've already read, and began to research more about the word, its origins, the epic in movies... the other genres in literature... the epic poetry...

Phew!! A lot of things I've learnt through 6 years, and there will be more to come for sure.

I think my story had hinted at you what I've told here, right, Nikia?
 
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(here's a very little bit)

The wolf led Rogue a few miles from the cabin. She knew well Heset would not bother to give chance of her, but there was no telling what the other two would do to get the spell book back. The wolf had brought Rogue to the banks of the White River. A day’s trek north would bring them into Artemis’s forest and that was where Rogue needed to go.

Heset had already taken control of Lucan’s body, convincing the king of Mutar that his son was now a demon would be near impossible. Even if Rogue was capable of such a feat, Heset and his loyal followers would only imprison her once more. No, Rogue and the spell book would be safer in Hazqu under Artemis’s care.

“They will hunt us down,” Rogue panted and fell to her knees. “No peace will we find in this world.”

No peace will be found in these lands ere long. Rogue could not explain it, but she seemed to comprehend fully the wolf’s thoughts. Heset the Fallen is abroad and he has but one goal. To the Realm he will march with those he manipulates and scares into his service. To Hazqu you must flee. The Watcher in the Wood will keep you safe.

“And what of you, fleet footed wolf guardian?”

My road leads me into Mutar. I will try to slow Heset’s conquest. Go now, hide that spell book within Hazqu.
 
I guess I will read this story first, and then I'll proceed with Death Dealer, since this prequel has not been completed, I feel I can read it more easily, and that will leave me more eager to start and finish Death Dealer.
 
I think I'm almost like you, Fell Deicide! But I will go for Death Dealer. And ooww... I think the sequel's thread has been erased. Oh well, but as long as the others are still on the run, it's fine.
 
The wolf bowed her head to Rogue and jumped forward. As though a great fire threatened the noble beast, the wolf flew south toward the Mutarian capital. The shade, finding new energy and strength after being freed from Geoffrey’s spell, ran for the sacred woods of Artemis. The legendary stronghold of the shape shifter First Born would keep her safe from Heset and his reincarnation.

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Chapter Six

The Realm remained, as it had in King York’s day, the last stronghold of beauty and purity in the four nations. It lay in northwestern Otanna, past the Koyak Fields, on the very borders of the blessed forest King York’s sword stayed, imbedded in rock. Within the forest, the lesser Immortals dwelled. The Angels who cared and watch over man in the absence of the High Kings and Queens and the Fairies who ensured the preservation of the trees and mountains. In recent centuries their roles had diminished in the world of man and the forest in the north of Otanna was simply a mystical and cursed place no mortal had any right to enter.

Artemis had once dwelt in the Realm, but her home in the forest of Hazqu on the banks of the White River is where she belonged. Her last visit to the Realm had been when York, Lothen, and Sonya left the mortal world to join Pim in the House of Father Sky. It was not in her fashion to leave Hazqu, the concerns of men were not her own. However, the situation with the animals, her beloved children, was different and it was cause for alarm.

The first Angel in the Realm, Faith, had called the Angels and Fairies who dwelt abroad back to the Realm. As the highest Immortal still among Man, Artemis had been called and was awarded a special honor at the Realm’s Council. Or she would be if the council ever took place.

Ten days had passed since her arrival in the sacred wood. In that time not one Immortal had seen Faith emerge from her chambers. The Angel seemingly had forgotten about the council. But how could she? King York had beset Faith with the charge of watching the mortal world most steadfastly in his absence.

Artemis took the days to reacquaint herself with the Realm. Though little had changed in her long absence. The trees still glistened like gold in the sunrise and as the moon rose they seemed to sparkle like silver. To the casual onlookers they seemed but a bright green, like any other tree, but brighter. And in the very heart of the forest was the great dwelling York and Lothen had built. The whitest of marble created York’s palace and vines grew up the walls, vines the Fairies had added. The great arched entry way was just as magnificent as it had been when York still lived within.

A scene of York and Lothen’s coronation was carved into the arch. Inside the palace was a world of color. Each Angel and Fairy added there own touch. Yet each unique vision blended together and harmony was achieved. One room stood out from the rest, the shadowed and ominous room reserved for the Angel Death.

Death had long been absent from the Realm. She kept her chief dwelling in the mountains of Northern Sera. A black flame burned eternally in Death’s room. Artemis walked in and felt a chill come over her. Her life was among the living, among her beasts, in Hazqu. Death’s dwelling in the shadows was enough to overcome anyone with fear. Artemis did not fear death, but as she stood in Death’s room she shuttered. A dark cloud had descended on the White River and somewhere in this room was the solution, only one end was likely possible.

“The council, Faith has emerged.” Artemis turned to see the Angel Courage standing in the doorway.

Her red hair was pulled into a tight bun and her rusted wings fluttered slightly as she spoke. “Faith has come out of her room and she is distraught with worry. The council must begin now.”

“Now?” Faith was not a hasty being. “Surely you have misheard.”

“She says she had grave news and we must hasten to a council. The longer we delay, the more deadly our situation will become, or so she says.”

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dun dun dun dun...

Nikia--you can't leave us hanging. It's unconstitutional.

Well the internet is down at my house and though I am now at my parents' for a few days all my work is at my house. I have some more to add and hopefully when I get home the internet will have been repaired. I'll have sixteen days to work on Honor and Glory, so hopefully I can get some nice long additions out for you all (and by all I mean chiefly Rhyanidd and Kit)
 
I'm still working (slowly) on Honor and Glory, but due to the recent writing contest on TDL I've shifted my main focus to The Pirate War. It's a story that features a 16 year old Princess Peony. So because of that there will be slow going here, though I'll still update from time to time.
 
Faith had been immobile for ten days. Her energy went into tying her mind to her daughter. Kitanna had been tracking the witch Sage and the Stranger they called Geoffrey. Faith had linked her mind to see what her daughter saw.

She knelt before an altar in her room. The altar held four small pillars and on top of each was some symbol of the four High Immortals. The soothing water, the eternal flame, the good earth, and the strong wind all were set in stone upon the pillars. And Faith knelt before them, eyes closed, drawing on their strength to keep the link with Kitanna going for ten days.

Through her daughter’s eyes, Faith saw the cottage near the river. Clouds formed above it as though a great storm would break any second. As Kitanna had guessed something foul was happening within. She dug her way into the kitchen and followed her nose to the cellar door.

Faith did not realize it, but as Kitanna took the stairs carefully, her heart raced. She had not felt intense fear since the Demon War that Pim declared centuries ago. Whatever was transpiring in the cellar would never bode well for Man.

As Kitanna looked in the cellar, Faith recognized Prince Lucan, head down body beaten, chained to the wall. Geoffrey and Sage stood around, waiting expectedly for something. Lucan looked up and in his eyes Faith saw the end of all things. The destruction of the Immortals’ work, Lucan was no more; in his place was Heset, the first Demon.

With a scream of terror Faith forced herself from the link. To break it off so quickly was painful, but necessary. Heset had seen Kitanna and precious seconds remained before he realized Faith was looking through the wolf’s eyes. Her body burned and her wings beat furiously. Whatever pain Faith felt at breaking her connection would be nothing compared to what Kitanna would feel. It was needed though. Heset had been raised and there was no telling how much he gleamed from Kitanna in those terrifying moments.

As the lead angel, Faith had delayed her council to deal with the problems near the White River. The fairies had warned her of a change with the trees and the very earth itself cried out in agony. She had ignored it, taking it as a sign that those locked away were restless once more. It was not uncommon. But when Artemis came forth citing similar problems with the animals, Faith could ignore no more. In her hesitancy, Faith had allowed for the reincarnation of Heset. It was a grace mistake and one she would no doubt pay for in the end.

She could not destroy the demon. Maim him, beat him, but her power was not strong enough to stand against his. In turning from light Heset had learned darker, stronger powers that the angels could not fight. Only York and he other three high immortals could bind and imprison Heset now. And to call York back was in the hands of mortals.

She had delayed too long. The council was needed and it was needed now.
 
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