DestinyLies
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OH I want to show ya'll a poem I wrote for a story I am writing I'll show youtomorrow....
Just writing...
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Nightcrawler_Fan
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Can't wait. :}
Lord of Light
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Oh wow...this should be interesting...Poem for a story! I can't wait.
I can't wait.
DestinyLies
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Ugh I forgot it at home!!!! GRRR Sorry I'll get it to you tomorrow hopefuly!!!!!!!!!!!!
SusanTheGentleHornblower
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das ok, twinnie *pats shoulder* we be patient.
DestinyLies
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Thanks Nikki!! I really miss you!!!!!! Honestly! IT's easier for me to talk to you through email or something! I haven't talked to you in forever!!!! *tears* I need my twinnie!!!
*tears* I need my twinnie!!!
DestinyLies
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Here's the Poem:
My Girl
I miss the hand
That I heald in the cold,
The dimples that appeared
When she smiled.
I miss hearing her laughter
As I chased her through the woods.
The look in her eyes
When she told me 'I love you'.
I miss the way
She fit perfectly in my arms,
The care she showed
When she knew something was wrong,
And the way my heart melted
The second I saw her.
I'll be home soon,
You won't have to worry,
Pleaes just tell me
You're still my girl,
Katherine.
This is a poem written for a series of stories I write. THe guy is in the Army and is writing this to his girlfriend/fience'e.
How do you like it?
DestinyLies
My Girl
I miss the hand
That I heald in the cold,
The dimples that appeared
When she smiled.
I miss hearing her laughter
As I chased her through the woods.
The look in her eyes
When she told me 'I love you'.
I miss the way
She fit perfectly in my arms,
The care she showed
When she knew something was wrong,
And the way my heart melted
The second I saw her.
I'll be home soon,
You won't have to worry,
Pleaes just tell me
You're still my girl,
Katherine.
This is a poem written for a series of stories I write. THe guy is in the Army and is writing this to his girlfriend/fience'e.
How do you like it?
DestinyLies
Nightcrawler_Fan
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That's really good. I like it. :}
DestinyLies
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Thanks you guys! I'm glad ya'll like it.
DestinyLies
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RANDOMNESS!!!
Joe unlocked his car door for me, let me slide in before going around and slidng in behind the steering wheel. He started the engine and pulled out of the parking space, drove through the parking lot, and out onto the road.
"Have I told you how beautiful you look?" Joe asked as he slipped his fingers through mine.
"Yes, you did this morning. "I replied. "But thankyou."
"You are very welcome/" Joe rolled down the two windows in the car.
I pushed back the lose strand of hair that was blowing in my face. I noticed as Joe looked over at me everyonce in a while. "Stop it!" I blushed.
"What?" Joe asked with a laugh.
"Quit looking at me." I looked out the window.
"Why not?" Joe turned into the daycare centers' parking lot where Jan stayed.
"Because." I told him.
"Will you go in with me? The girl who watches Jan flirts with me." Joe cringed.
I laughed. "Yes I'll go with you." I unbucked my seatbelt,waited for him to come around and open my door for me, and stepped out of the car. "You must hate being liked by so many girls." I said sarcastically.
"I do,honestly." Joe threaded his fingers through mine. "You are who I love and who I want. No one else." He opened the door into the daycare, let me go in then followed.
"I love you too" I squeezed his hand. Joe smiled down at me making my heart melt. I followed him to the room Jan was in.
Joe knocked on the open door. "Hey, Samantha." He greeted the blond teenage girl standing at the front of the room.
"Hey, Joe." The girl turned and smiled at him, but when she saw me, and our interlocked hands, she turned back around. "Jan, Joe's here go get your stuff."
Jan waved at us before running to go get her backpack.
"How was she today,Samantha?" Joe asked.
"Good, as always." Samantha replied she still stood where she had been when we entered the room.
"Did she obey?" Joe squeezed my hand.
"Of course." Samantha nodded.
"Joe, guess what!" Jan said running up to her brother.
"What?" Joe asked surprisingly.
"I colored a picture for you." Jan looked up at him.
"You did?" Joe smiled at the child.
"Uhuh, it's in my backpack." Jan turned around showing the tinkerbell backpack she carried.
"You can show it to me when we get home ok? Say goodbye to Miss. Samantha." Joe said.
"Bye, Miss. Samantha." Jan waved at the girl.
"Goodbye, Jan. I'll see you tomorrow." Samantha waved back. "Ya'll have a good day."
"Thanks, you too." Joe took his sister by the hand and lead us out to his car.
After we were all in, Joe started the car and drove out onto the road and headed towards home.
"OK,Jan, what do you want to listen to?" Joe looked back in the rearview mirror at his siter.
"Ugh,______." Jan shouted.
Joe smiled and slid the CD into the console on the dashboard of the car. A few seconds later the music filled the car, Jan started to sing along.
I smiled over at my boyfriend as his head moved up and down in time with the music.
"Jan." Joe called back to her.
"Yes?" Jan broke from her song to answer him.
"Whose my girl?" Joe glanced over at me.
"Kandie." Jan pointed at me.
"And whose my little buddy?" Joe asked.
"Um, Jonah?" Jan giggle at her joke.
"January." Joe glanced back at his sister.
"I am." Jan squeeked then continued to giggle.
"Good girl." Joe stopped the car ar a stoplight. "You ok?" he asked me.
I nodded." Yeah." I smiled at him to show him I was.
"Alright." Joe leaned over and kissed my cheek.
"Ew." Jan said......
Well???? YAY IT'S LONG!!!!
DesitnyLies
Joe unlocked his car door for me, let me slide in before going around and slidng in behind the steering wheel. He started the engine and pulled out of the parking space, drove through the parking lot, and out onto the road.
"Have I told you how beautiful you look?" Joe asked as he slipped his fingers through mine.
"Yes, you did this morning. "I replied. "But thankyou."
"You are very welcome/" Joe rolled down the two windows in the car.
I pushed back the lose strand of hair that was blowing in my face. I noticed as Joe looked over at me everyonce in a while. "Stop it!" I blushed.
"What?" Joe asked with a laugh.
"Quit looking at me." I looked out the window.
"Why not?" Joe turned into the daycare centers' parking lot where Jan stayed.
"Because." I told him.
"Will you go in with me? The girl who watches Jan flirts with me." Joe cringed.
I laughed. "Yes I'll go with you." I unbucked my seatbelt,waited for him to come around and open my door for me, and stepped out of the car. "You must hate being liked by so many girls." I said sarcastically.
"I do,honestly." Joe threaded his fingers through mine. "You are who I love and who I want. No one else." He opened the door into the daycare, let me go in then followed.
"I love you too" I squeezed his hand. Joe smiled down at me making my heart melt. I followed him to the room Jan was in.
Joe knocked on the open door. "Hey, Samantha." He greeted the blond teenage girl standing at the front of the room.
"Hey, Joe." The girl turned and smiled at him, but when she saw me, and our interlocked hands, she turned back around. "Jan, Joe's here go get your stuff."
Jan waved at us before running to go get her backpack.
"How was she today,Samantha?" Joe asked.
"Good, as always." Samantha replied she still stood where she had been when we entered the room.
"Did she obey?" Joe squeezed my hand.
"Of course." Samantha nodded.
"Joe, guess what!" Jan said running up to her brother.
"What?" Joe asked surprisingly.
"I colored a picture for you." Jan looked up at him.
"You did?" Joe smiled at the child.
"Uhuh, it's in my backpack." Jan turned around showing the tinkerbell backpack she carried.
"You can show it to me when we get home ok? Say goodbye to Miss. Samantha." Joe said.
"Bye, Miss. Samantha." Jan waved at the girl.
"Goodbye, Jan. I'll see you tomorrow." Samantha waved back. "Ya'll have a good day."
"Thanks, you too." Joe took his sister by the hand and lead us out to his car.
After we were all in, Joe started the car and drove out onto the road and headed towards home.
"OK,Jan, what do you want to listen to?" Joe looked back in the rearview mirror at his siter.
"Ugh,______." Jan shouted.
Joe smiled and slid the CD into the console on the dashboard of the car. A few seconds later the music filled the car, Jan started to sing along.
I smiled over at my boyfriend as his head moved up and down in time with the music.
"Jan." Joe called back to her.
"Yes?" Jan broke from her song to answer him.
"Whose my girl?" Joe glanced over at me.
"Kandie." Jan pointed at me.
"And whose my little buddy?" Joe asked.
"Um, Jonah?" Jan giggle at her joke.
"January." Joe glanced back at his sister.
"I am." Jan squeeked then continued to giggle.
"Good girl." Joe stopped the car ar a stoplight. "You ok?" he asked me.
I nodded." Yeah." I smiled at him to show him I was.
"Alright." Joe leaned over and kissed my cheek.
"Ew." Jan said......
Well???? YAY IT'S LONG!!!!
DesitnyLies
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Nightcrawler_Fan
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I like it. :} Jan is cute. :}
DestinyLies
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Yeah she is actually um a little girl in my church. She's my horseback rideing trainers 3rd daughter. ANd she's so cute. I'll see if Ic an get a picture to show ya'll.
Nightcrawler_Fan
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Ok. :} If you can't that's fine. :}
DestinyLies
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Heehee! OK!!!
"Joe." I spoke my boyfriend's name as we stood in the lunch line.
Joe didn't hear me though, he was taking to Lucas.
"Joe." I said again. When he didn't answer that time I pulled on his shirt and spoke his name again. "Joseph!."
"What?" Joe turned to me.
"Can you get those cookies for me?" I asked quietly pointing at the pack of two chocolate chip cookies on the rack.
Joe reached up and got the cookies and handed them to me.
"Thank you."I then followed him to a table and sat down beside of him. I ate the two cookies in silence, while listening to Joe and Lucas talking.
Joe looked over at me after a few minutes. "What's wrong?" he asked.
I shook my head. "Nothing." I looked up at him.
"Kandie,what's wrong?" Joe turned towards me.
"You ignored me." I ran my finger over the edge of the table.
"I'm sorry,honey, I didn't hear you." Joe explained. "I didn't mean to ignore you."
"You yelled at me."
"I didn't mean to."
HUH??
DestinyLies
"Joe." I spoke my boyfriend's name as we stood in the lunch line.
Joe didn't hear me though, he was taking to Lucas.
"Joe." I said again. When he didn't answer that time I pulled on his shirt and spoke his name again. "Joseph!."
"What?" Joe turned to me.
"Can you get those cookies for me?" I asked quietly pointing at the pack of two chocolate chip cookies on the rack.
Joe reached up and got the cookies and handed them to me.
"Thank you."I then followed him to a table and sat down beside of him. I ate the two cookies in silence, while listening to Joe and Lucas talking.
Joe looked over at me after a few minutes. "What's wrong?" he asked.
I shook my head. "Nothing." I looked up at him.
"Kandie,what's wrong?" Joe turned towards me.
"You ignored me." I ran my finger over the edge of the table.
"I'm sorry,honey, I didn't hear you." Joe explained. "I didn't mean to ignore you."
"You yelled at me."
"I didn't mean to."
HUH??
DestinyLies
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Nightcrawler_Fan
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Good. Very cute. :} I like it.
DestinyLies
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OK How about this?
They are married in this one
Joe came up behind me I stood infront of the oven. "Hey." He spoke into my ear.
"Hey." I whispered back. "What?" I looked back at him.
Joe shook his head. "Nothing." He kissed my lips. "I love you."
I smiled."I love you too." I looked away from him.
Joe wrapped his arms around me and pressed his cheek to the side of my head. "What's for supper?" He asked.
"______________." I replied. "That's what you wanted isn't it?" I teased him.
"Yes." Joe nodded his head.
"OK." I turned around in his arms and looked up at him. "How was your day?"
Joe shrugged. "It just got better."
"Be quiet." I told him.
"OK." Joe kissed me lightly a few times.
"Stop." I pushed away from him........
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Nightcrawler_Fan
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Very good, :} I'm running out of things to say I've posted so much in this thread. :}
DestinyLies
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HAHA That's ok.
I'm glad you like my writings.
I'm glad you like my writings.