Lancadia

I am writing a book that's part of a 7 book series that I hope to publish someday. I shall attempt to write my ideas down here. Hope you enjoy!

He opened the tall, stone doors. The table ahead of him was surrounded by straight-back chairs, and at the end of the table was the tallest chair. His chair. He stood in the doorway, neither moving nor speaking. This room was full of so much memory, both good and bad. Now he was summoned once again, to deal with more pain. And this was only the beginning...



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She looked out the window as the sun was rising steadily over the sea. The wind blew all around her through the open window, brining in the freshly fallen leaves that the start of the autumn had begun to drop. The leaves swirled around in the room like a dancer swaying to music, and then, as suddenly as the leaves had come, they took their leave out the other window, back into the open air. Except one. It rested on the sill of the window, teetering on the edge. She walked over to that window and picked up the leaf. It was still soft, and as red as fire. She turned it over slowly in her hands, admiring its perfection. Impulse took her over to the table in the middle of the room, where she picked up a pen and started to write on the leaf.

Finishing her writing, she got up and went back over to the window where she threw the leaf out the window, where the wind picked it up once again. Smiling, she watched as it floated south and out of site.

THE KING'S COUNCIL

Once, there was a young king whose name was Alik. He was a good king, fair and just in all he did. He never thought of himself first, but of his people. He was both wise and discerning, so that he was called King Alik the Understanding. Lancadia was the expansive and diverse land that he ruled. There were deep forests filled with game, and tall mountains with little streams running down their sides till they all came together and formed the swift Abana River. Troubles seemed scarce and joy abounded in this land, and all lived in peace.

Or so it had been. For over the looming mountains int eh West there was an enemy rising, and he was calling to himself every kind of horrid creatures to form his army. Alik knew of this, and for this very reason he had called his council in the castle at the mouth of the Abana, by the sea.

"I have called you here to discuss the pressing issue that is at hand. Before I speak anymore, I would like Rivenwell to give us an account of his latest journey."

The eagle lighted atop a chair to the right of the king. "I have just come from over the mountains, past Shammuth Point, where I have seen what the king, as well as the rest of us, fears. A mighty enemy is coming into power, and all the creatures of the mountains are joining his amassing army. He calls himself Kardack, and claims to be from the lineage of the cruel wizard Krant, who held our land in darkness so long ago. He is forging weapons in the deep places, and it will only be a matter of time befor he attacks, sire. if we do not do something quickly, we will certainly be destroyed.

"But we are not ready to fight!" declared Briarwood, the centaur. "We have no weapons, no armour, and most importantly no soldiers!"

"He is unfortunately right. Ever since you took the throne after your good father died, the army has fallen by the wayside. Do not answer so quickly! I know what you would say! It is not completely your fault, as there has been no need the past two years for any fighting," said Glondil, the elf, as he held up his hand for the king to wait. "But we cannot win a war with our bare hands."

"What would you have me do? There only seems to be two choices. Go into hiding, or train an army to meet that of Kardack's, which does not look to be very promising," stated the king.

"Your majesty is right in what our choices are, but it would not be wise at all to go into hiding. Once we are in hiding, Kardack would come in and either root us out, or else leave us to starve undercover. I advise that we call the people together, and train men to fight while the women make provisions for them," said Glondil.
 
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continuing Ch. 1

"Pah! The women cannot make swords and chain mail! What you need are good strong dwarves for that job. They know what they're doing, and are skilled at it too," said Topin, the chief gnome, as he smacked his fist into his hand. "They are the ones to call on."

"You seem to forget, Sir Topin, that the dwarves no longer reside in these parts. They live far north in the caves, past the miles of bogs that have come up over time," Briarwood pointed out. "It would take a long time to travel there, and who can be sure they haven't already joined Kardack by now? They never were pleased to have a man as king."

"Besides," the king quickly put in, "who would go? And what if there is a trap waiting for the travelers when we get there? And even if there isn't, they are sure not to believe anything the messenger says, since they haven't heard fomr the kingdom for a very long time."

"Here Glondil leaned foward, looked the king straight in the eyes, and said quietly, "What other choices do we have, your majesty? Will you be our blacksmith and make our armour for us?"

At this, Alik leaned back, took off his thin circlet crown, and ran his fingers through his hair. "I know, I know, it just seems so uncertain! But it must be done. What else is there to do?"

Glondil straightened in his chair and said, "I will call on my people the elves, who live in the Southern Woods. They will come to your side, Sire, for they are brave. We are excellent archers, but only for hunting game. They could become suitable for you army."

Briarwood, not wanting to be outdone, stamped his hooves and declared, "I will gather all able centaurs, and train them to use swords and spears. That is what our ancesters always did, and though it has been a long time, we do not easily forget what is in our blood."

"Good," said the king, feeling slightly more relieved, when suddenly his head snapped up, as if he had just remembered something very important. Turning to his left , he gestured to the aging man sitting there. "Lord Ginavin," he implored, "you have not said a word since this meeting was called to order. I very much wish to know what you think of this matter."

that's all I have time for now. thanks for reading!
 
Ch1 cont'

You're so sweet; I know you read even when no one else does.:)

"What do I thingk? I think that you have forgotten our most emportant ally yet! Who has always been the one to deliver us from our most dangerous perils? Who has saves us from the hands of our enemies again and again? He has been here time out of mind, and yet not one of you has even mentioned His name. Have you forgotten? Do you wish to forget? Please, great sires, do not be ignorant to the one who has created our whole world, and is the one who is really the King of everything. Call on the great son of the only high God! For who can save anyman from himself, let alone anyone else, but Him? That is how Kardack will attack the people. He will promise them their heart's desires, and bribe them to his side. Pray that our plea will be heard by Him, that he might come and save us. You asked for my advice, and there it is," and with that Ginavin sat back, and sighed.

"Well even if the rest of you aren't shamed by his words, I am. That is the very thing we should have done first, and I have neglected it. I ask for your forgiveness, my dear friends, as well as forgiveness from the only one who truly can forgive all," said the king, as he lowered his head in shame.

The others, feeling very foolish inded, forgave him and begged for thier forgiveness as well.

"How shall we send this plea, now that we are back on the right course?" inquired Glondil.

"Shall I take it to His throne in the sky?" croaked Rivenwell, as he flapped his wings in earnest.

"No, no, no!" exclaimed Ginavin, "His kingdom is not tangible, as you and I are! He is immortal, and His throne is unreachable by mortal means. The only thing we can do is pray for His will, whether that is for Hims to come, or not. He will not come at our bidding, but at His Father's. We must wait for that."

"But in the meantime, we should prepare ourselves!" declared Topin.

"Of course! But we must do it in His name, and with His intentions, not our own. Now, what about the southern giants? Do they not look to you as well, Sire, for leadership? I should think they would prove most useful if it came to open battle," stated Ginavin.

"Yes, I hadn't thought of that. Ahh... Rivenwell! Send one of you messengers out immediately to the Nephilin Giants, requesting their presence as soon as possible at Haven's Field, with whatever weapons they posses. They are sure to be crudely made, but we will take whatever we can get," ordered the king.

"Consider it done, Sire!" and with that, he flew out the window.

"Birds," grumbled Topin," never have enough sense to even say goobye!"

"Your majesty, we sitll have not answer the main question. Who is to go to the dwarves?" asked Glondil.

"Oh yes, that," said Alik, with a frown.

"If you please, Sir. I'm a wanderer, I am. And I know the Northern part pretty well, that is, as far up to the bogs, and the coast a little. I'm willing to go if you wish," offered Topin.

"Thank you, Topin. I would be very please to have you go. But who else? Certainly one person should not go alone!" said the king.

"I should think not! I think, Sir, that you should go," said Ginavin.

At this, Glondil, Briarwood, and Topin started forward.

"The king!"

"Most certainly not!"

"You must be joking, my lord!"

All of this came rushing out at once. Did Lord Ginavin want to send the king, of all people, to possible death?

Glondil stood up and declared, "I will not stand for the king to be destroyed by those scheming dwarves!"

"Sit down, Glondil! I appreciate your concern, but I want to hear why Ginavin thinks I should go," said Alik as he motioned for Glondil to take his seat.

As Glondil reluctantly sat down, Ginavin continued, " As the king said earlier, it is very possible that the dwarves will not listen to the one who sends this message, especially if it is someone of no importance to them. But, if the king should go, they might, and I do say might, accept our proposal. You would have a few others go with you to keep your party safe. This appears to be you best choice."

Silence filled the room for a moment before Briarwood ventured to say, " I have to agree with Lord Ginavin. The king is our only hope. And also, if someone here posed as his majesty, you could possibly be more protected from Kardack's spies."

more latter. thanks!
 
End of Ch. 1
"Oh! I hadn't thought of that. This is sounding much better," said the much encouraged king.

"I wish I could think of things like that," muttered Topin as he plopped his head in his hands.

"Sire, I know a fellow elf who has traveled far and often. He is wise in his council and would make an excellent companion for your journey. His name is Schaune, and he lives in Whent, not far from here," offered Glondil.

"Send for him at once with the offer to join our small band, and, if he accepts, have him bring anything he thinks would be useful for our travels," said the king.

"Three is better than one, but four would do even better. Who else did youhave in mind, your Majesty?" asked Lord Ginavin.

"That's just it. I haven't thought of anyone else who would be suitable for this trip. I will think it over tonight and decide on it before we leave tomorrow. If anyone of you comes across a worthy person, please let me know," said the king as he rose from his seat. "Good night, gentlemen."

"Good night, your Majesty," the rest said, and they departed from each other to retire for the night.


Ok, I'm going to post the second chapter sometime today. just reviving my thread for now!:)
 
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here goes chapter No.2! Alexandra Pevensie's story inspired me to keep posting. Thanks ALEXANDRA!!!!!!!

Ch 2
An Unexpected Desicion​
As Alik walked down the long hallways to his bed-chamber, he tried to think of things he would need to take care of before leaving the next day. He was so deep in thought that he didn't notice the pattering feet that were coming steadily closer, until all at once, he felt someone throw their arms around his neck from behind.

"Oh, Uncle Alik! Isn't it excitint! There's going to be a battle, and we are going on an adventure!" shouted the voice of the thing that had a choke-hold on Alik's neck, and was unfortunately very close to Alik's ear.

"Colin, please get off me. And you needn't shout; I'm right here," said Alik with a sigh.

"But I'm so excited, I can't stay still! When will we be leaving? How long will we be gone for? Will I..."

But here Alik cut him off, "you are not going with me, Colin. You will be staying here, where you will hopefully not get into too much trouble, and where you will be safe."

"But, Uncle Alik, you need me! I have better sight thatn any other human in the castle! And I'm good at catching fish, too! Please don't leave me here! It would be so boring without you," pleaded Colin.

"Colin, you are only nine years old, and would not be able to keep up with the rest of the party. There will be many dangers on this trip, and I don't want anything to happen to you."

"Oh, I'm not afraid! Just last week, when that ogre came throug, I offered to fight him off myself! And anyway, I'm already taller thatn the stable boy, and he's thirteen!" protested Colin.

"Colin, I do not doubt your bravery, or you courage, but I fear you will do something rash. I won't have much time to look after you, and what about school?"

"Oh, who cares about school? I've had quite enough of that already! And anyway, I want to go with you," said the young boy as they came to Alik's room.

The both stepped inside, and even though they were very used to the luxury, I will tell you how very splendid it was. The carpet was soft, plush forest green color, so it felt as though you were walking through very soft grass when you didn't have your shoes on. Straight ahead were large glass doors that lead out to a blacony. On the left wall by those doors, was a large oak desk with lots of little drawers and secret compartments. Directly to your right when you walked in was a door that opened to Alik's clothes closet, and just past that, cut right into the wall, was a bed. It caw covered with the thickest comforter you have ever seen, and it made you wish it was raining so that you could curl up in it with a good book. The comforter was a navy blue wiht leaves and vines emboidered on it in dazzling silver thread. Silver curtains that were normally hanging down were now drawn so you sould see the bed. On the walls surrounding the bed were the same designs that were on the desk and the comforter. Just before the desk on the left hand wall was a door leading into a marble-decked wash-room that Alik shared with Colin, whose room conveniantly joined with Alik's.

As Alik went to close the doors and draw the curtains, Colin ran to the to bed and threw himself on it, planting his face in the comforter and upsetting all of the pillows.
 
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"Uncle Alik, may I pleas stay in your room tonight? Oh, do way yes! You are leaving tomorrow, and since you're not taking me with you, this will be my last chance to see you," came Colin's muffled voice, since his face was still plastered to the bed.

"Oh...I supose. But you must go to sleep when I tell you to. Run and get your things."

"YIPPEE!" shouted Colin as he dashed to his room.

Alik chuckled and shook his head as he though about how much he would miss the boy when he was gone.

Colin made several trips from his room to Alik's, and the whole time he was going full speed. At last Alik said, "Whoa, Colin! Slow down! We are getting ready for bed, not for a hurricane! And you're only spending one night in here, not the whole month, so you needn't bring your whole room into mine. After all, it's just next door."

Colin grinned sheepishly and said, "All right."

While Colin situated his things and undressed, Alik started to gather items for his trip. An extra set of clothes, his warmest cape, and extra blanket, most definately his sword...

"Hold on just a minute, Colin. How exactly did you know that I was leaving?" asked Alik with a raised eyebrow as he crossed his arms.

Colin's eyes grew large and he started to figet. "I, um, well...that is to say...I...I...a little bird told me?" he finallyu said in a hopeful voice. But he could already see that Alik was not buying into his story at all.

"Colin, how many times have I told you that the council is not something that YOU paritcipate in? You know you are not supposed to eavesdrop," said a very exasperated Alik.

"I wasn't going to, but when I walked by I heard loud voices saying things about you leaving. And, and I just couldn't bear it! Colin was very distressed by now. "I had to know why you where going, and if you were taking me with you. I'm sorry, Uncle! But please don't go!" At this moment tears began to roll down the boy's cheeks.

Alik felt horrible. What was he to do? He knelt down in front of Colin and put his hands on the boy's shoulders. Looking him in the eye he said quietly, "Oh, Colin. This is going to be just as hard for me as it is for you. I can't bear going a day without being with you, but what I am about to do must be done. You don't want Lancadia to be destroyed, do you?

"No," sniffed Colin.

"Then we must both gather our courage, and hope that the day for my return will be soon. Come on now, let's finish getting ready for be, and then I will tell you a story."

Colin rubbed his eyes with his fists and smiled shakily. "All right."

Alik smiled, and there was a mischevious look in his eyes. "Bet I can get done sooner than you can."

"No way!" said Colin as they both dashed for the wash-room.
 
Hey Nicki I've only read a little bit and..it rocks!! LOL I wrote a 'fanfic' onthe PINK ANGELS Series but no one really reviewed. Maybe I should write something else......what do you think??
 
I am writing a book that's part of a 7 book series that I hope to publish someday. I shall attempt to write my ideas down here. Hope you enjoy!

He opened the tall, stone doors. The table ahead of him was surrounded by straight-back chairs, and at the end of the table was the tallest chair. His chair. He stood in the doorway, neither moving nor speaking. This room was full of so much memory, both good and bad. Now he was summoned once again, to deal with more pain. And this was only the beginning...

THE KING'S COUNCIL

Once, there was a young king whose name was Alik. He was a good king, fair and just in all he did. He never thought of himself first, but of his people. He was both wise and discerning, so that he was called King Alik the Understanding. Lancadia was the expansive and diverse land that he ruled. There were deep forests filled with game, and tall mountains with little streams running down their sides till they all came together and formed the swift Abana River. Troubles seemed scarce and joy abounded in this land, and all lived in peace.

Or so it had been. For over the looming mountains int eh West there was an enemy rising, and he was calling to himself every kind of horrid creatures to form his army. Alik knew of this, and for this very reason he had called his council in the castle at the mouth of the Abana, by the sea.

"I have called you here to discuss the pressing issue that is at hand. Before I speak anymore, I would like Rivenwell to give us an account of his latest journey."

The eagle lighted atop a chair to the right of the king. "I have just come from over the mountains, past Shammuth Point, where I have seen what the king, as well as the rest of us, fears. A mighty enemy is coming into power, and all the creatures of the mountains are joining his amassing army. He calls himself Kardack, and claims to be from the lineage of the cruel wizard Krant, who held our land in darkness so long ago. He is forging weapons in the deep places, and it will only be a matter of time befor he attacks, sire. if we do not do something quickly, we will certainly be destroyed.

"But we are not ready to fight!" declared Briarwood, the centaur. "We have no weapons, no armour, and most importantly no soldiers!"

"He is unfortunately right. Ever since you took the throne after your good father died, the army has fallen by the wayside. Do not answer so quickly! I know what you would say! It is not completely your fault, as there has been no need the past two years for any fighting," said Glondil, the elf, as he held up his hand for the king to wait. "But we cannot win a war with our bare hands."

"What would you have me do? There only seems to be two choices. Go into hiding, or train an army to meet that of Kardack's, which does not look to be very promising," stated the king.

"Your majesty is right in what our choices are, but it would not be wise at all to go into hiding. Once we are in hiding, Kardack would come in and either root us out, or else leave us to starve undercover. I advise that we call the people together, and train men to fight while the women make provisions for them," said Glondil.
It's kindof a miz of Narnia and Eragon.♥♥♥♥ it!!!!!!!! :heart: I have a question for you...I'll PM YOu!
 
ok, just wondered!!!! he's one of my fav characters...as well as some who haven't appeared yet.
Rest of Ch.2

~*~(this means a break in time...)​
"I won, I won!" declared Colin as he bounced up and down on the bed.

"Oh..." groaned Alik, pretending to be in pain, "It's just not fair putting a young boy with the energy of a storm up against an old man like me!"

"You're not old, Uncle Alik! You're only eight years older than me. Now, what is my story about?"

"Well..." grunted Alik as he shoved Colin over to make room for himself on the bed, "I'm going to tell you about the time your mother and I snuch a colt up to our sick stabel boy in order to cheer him up a little."

"How old was Mother?" asked Colin, while he suffocated his stuffed dog, Scruff.

Now, Scruff, you see, was a very suitable name for this particular toy, for that is exactly what he was. His once sort fur was all matted and dirty from years of love and play. Scruff was very special to Colin, because his parents had given it to him on his fifth birthday, right before they died. No one know that Colin still had Scruff, except for Alik. Receiving this dog was the only memory Colin still had of his parents, so even when Colin deemed himself, 'too old for toys', Scruff was held on to. Scruff, Colin declared, was not a toy, but a friend, and was therefore not thrown out. Alik never talked about Scruff, even to Colin, for the pain was too great for the young boy.

"My sister was fifteen years old, and I was just five when it happened. It all took place on a warm day in May. Our stable boy slept in the tow of the tower of the Garden House, and he had become very ill a few weeks before. He was still unable to get out of bed. Your mother knew how much he loved and missed the horses, so she came up with the idea to sneak his favorite colt up to his room. Now, I didn't fully understand what we were doing at the time, but I knew that it involved creeeping around, so of course I was game!"

"Did you get in trouble?" asked Colin with a yawn as he leaned into Alik.

"Did we ever! Charlotte's chess set was taken away for two whole weeks, and so was my whole army of toy soldiers! Even my general's horses! Now can you believe that, Colin? Colin?"

But the boy was already fast asleep. Alik eased himself away from Colin and walked over to blow ou the lamp on the desk. On returning to the bed, Colin instinctevly huddled closer to Alik. Alik gently rubbed the boy's sandy hair and thought about how much the two of them were alike. Not only did they share the same color hair, but bright blue eyes and the same nose with a smattering of light freckles. Colin was also just as smart and evergetic as Alik had been when he was that age. They both loved playing games, horse-back riding, swimming, and playing jokes on one another whenever they had the chance. If someone was meeting them for the first time, the would have mistaken the pair as brothers rather thatn an uncle and his nephew.

How he would get along without Colin, Alik was not sure. Colin was his only family left, and Alik would surely lay awade every night of his trip worried sick about the boy. Not being able to keep watch over his nephew would worry him more than any dwarves.

Alik lay awake for several hours pondering who his last companion should be for his journey. Finally, he made up his mind. He then rollled over, and promptly fell asleep.

and that is the end of Ch. 2!!!!!! more soon....I hope...:p
 
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